•United States •        Office of          EPA 520/1-844)11
              Environmental Protection     Radiation Programs       January 1986
              Agency           Washington, D.C. 20460
              Radiation
&EPA        Federal  Radiation  Protection
              Guidance for Occupational
              Exposure

              Response to Comments

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         RESPONSE TO COMMENTS
FEDERAL RADIATION PROTECTION GUIDANCE


       FOR OCCUPATIONAL  EXPOSURE
             January 1986
     Office of Radiation Programs
 U.S. Environmental Protection Agency
       Washington,  D.C.   20460
                                                EPA 520/1-84-011

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                               INTRODUCTION
      The U.S.  Environmental Protection Agency responds in this report to
 comments received on proposed Federal radiation protection guidance for
 occupational  exposure (46 F.R.  7836,  January 23,  1981).  This guidance
 was proposed  to replace those portions of existing Federal guidance
 (25 F.R. 4402,  May 18,  1960) that  apply to radiation protection of
 workers.  EPA Background Report No.  520/4-81-003 of January 16, 1981,
 contains detailed information to supplement the text accompanying the EPA
 proposal published as a Federal Register notice.

      The Agency appreciates the interest and effort of all those who
•submitted -comments.   They provided an essential part of the information
 and opinion that went into the  formulation of. the final guidance.

      We have  attempted  to include  all of the substantive comments
 received in. writing  and in public  hearings.  They have been grouped into
 three major sections and the topical  categories and subcategories listed
 in the Contents.  In preparing  this  report, we generally found it
 necessary to  rephrase the language in order to combine similar comments
 into single statements.  We gave care, however, to preserve the essential
 intent of each.  A letter-number code (e.g., B.a-5) is used to identify
 the type and  name of each commenter.   The letters in the code indicate
 type of commenter: the  first stands  for one of six major categories
 (e.g., B for  industry)  and the  second one for the subcategory (e.g., "a"
 for nuclear power) as shown on the Contents for Appendix A.  The complete
 code can be used to  find the individual commenter's name and address in
 that Appendix.   The  original documents are filed in EPA Docket No.
 A-79-46-  The  large  size of this file precluded our including
 reproductions  of these  documents in this report.

      The Agency's response follows each of the comments.  We have made
 every effort  to be as candid and as  objective as possible in these
 responses, which reflect the information and judgments which resulted in
 the final Federal guidance.

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                                CONTENTS


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INTRODUCTION ........	 .  .	i
SECTION'1.0.:— General, Comments	1

     1.1  Commendation, Agreement,  and Support	•'  •  1

     1.2  Terminology,  Clarity, and Accuracy 	  1

     1.3  Adequacy of Existing Guidelines and Regulations -
            Need for Change	4

     1.4  Risk	7

     1.5  Comparison of Radiation Risks with Other
            Occupational Risks ......	26

     1.6  Consistency With and Validity of ICRP-26	28

     1.7'  Consistency with NCRP  .  .  . .	 ,	32

     1.8'  .Coordination with Other U.S. Agencies  ........... 33

     1.9  Economic Costs and Cost/Benefit  	 34

     1.10 Recordkeeping	41

     1.11 Miscellaneous	-	42


SECTION 2.0 -- Specific Issues	 .  . 51

     2.1  Lower RPGs	51

     2.2  Values of RPGs and RIFs Only Allowed to Decrease ...... 54

     2.3  Transient Worker Issues and Adequacy of Occupational
            Exposure Data Base	57

     2.4  Omission of Medical and'Other
            Non-Occupational Exposures 	 61

     2.5  Omission of Underground Miners  and
            Other Occupational Categories  	 65
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                          CONTENTS  (Continued).


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     2.6  Omission .of Emergency Exposures	  66

     2.7  Impact of RPGs on Collective Dose	67

     2.8  Consideration of Worker Age	69

     2.9  Neglect of Procedures for Overexposures 	  70

     2.10 Adequacy/Accuracy of Dose Measurement Technology  	  71

     2.11 Engineering Controls/Design Limits  	  76

     2.12 Quality arid Other Modifying Factors 	  77

     2.13 Different Guides for Different Categories of Workers   ...  78

     2.14 Other Issues/Controversy  	  80


SECTION 3.0 -- Proposed Recommendations 	  85

    "3.1  Justification	85

     3.2  As Low As Reasonably Achievable (ALARA)	89

     3.3  Radiation Protection Guides (RPGs)  	  94

  .   3.3,1  Whole body, including 5(N-18) .'...•	94
     3.3.2  Gonads	99
     3.3.3  Lens of eye.	100
     3.3.4  Hands ........ 	 101
     3.3,5  Any other organ	104
     3.3.6  Weighting factors ....	 105
     3.3.7  50-year dose commitment	108
     3.3,8  Combined internal and external doses  	 109

     3.4  Minimum Radiation Protection Requirements 	 112

     3.4.1  Overall Approach  	 112
     3.4.2  Suggested Numerical Ranges  .•	 115
     3.4.3  Instruction	116
     3.4.4  Monitoring and Recordkeeping  	 118
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                            CONTENTS  (Continued)
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     3.4-. 5.  Supervision .. ... .... ..	 .  ...  •  ...  •  •  «  124
     3:4.6. Lif etime: Dose .  . ..'...''......	126

     3.5. ..Radioactivity ..Intake .Factors	129

     3.6  Limits Below the Guides	133

     3.7  Occupational Exposure of Minors  	  137

     3.8  Exposure of the Unborn	138

     3.9  Exceeding the RPGs  .  .  .	.153


REFERENCES. ^ ...........	159
                            .   .APPENDIX A
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                         COMMENTER IDENTIFICATION

     A. Public
        a. ..Individuals  ........ V	A-l
       • b.  Universities	  A-6
        c..  Public Interest Groups  ....  	  A-9
        d.  Professional/Scientific Organizations  	  A-10

     B. Industry
        a.  Nuclear Power	  .'	A-14
        b.  Medical	A-19
        c.  Others	A-20

     C. Unions	A-23

     D. State Government  ......  	  A-24

     E. Federal Government
        a.  Executive Agencies   	  A-25
        b.  National Laboratories 	  A-26

     F. International .	A-27

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                      SECTION 1.0 — GENERAL COMMENTS
1.1 ...  COMMENDATION, 'AGREEMENT, -AND SUPPORT
1.1.1.. The., proposed guidance to reduce health risks from radiation  is
reasonable and supportable (A.a-18, A.a-36, A.b-22, A.b-25, A.C-7, A.d-15,
B.c-3,'0.1, E.a-7).        •        ...

Response:  We appreciate the comment and trust that the  final guidance  is
also reasonable and supportable.


1.1.2   The intent of the guidance to reduce the health  risk associated
with exposure to ionizing radiation is a common goal (D-ll, E.a-2, E.b-3).

Response:  No response required.
1.2     TERMINOLOGY, CLARITY, AND ACCURACY
1.2.1 . ''. The 'proposed guidance contains incorrect or insufficient
definitions, particularly those for "rem", "rad", "dose",  "dose
equivalent", "occupational exposure", "radiation worker",  "collective
dose", and  "radioactivity concentration guide" .(A.a-5, A.a-12, A.a-23,
A.a-42, A.b-15, A.d-13, A.d-14, A.d-21, A.d-26, A.d-40).   .

Response:   In the proposed guidance, terms were explained  in a manner
intended to be readily understood by the lay reader.  The  Agency was not
recommending that definitions of established technical terms (such as the
units of dose) be changed, and the final guidance continues that precedent.
1.2.2   The statement, is made on page 7837 of the Federal Register  (Vol.
46) that "cancer is fatal at least half the time."  Does EPA mean that
radiation induced cancer is fatal half the time, rather than all cancers
(A.d-14, A.d-22, A.d-40, B.c-20).

Response:  The statement refers to all cancers, and infers  that the  same
is expected to be true of radiogenic cancers.  See also the responses to
comments 1.4.40 and 1.4.41.
1.2.3   Both SI units and conventional units should be used with
conversion factors given for SI units (D.I, E.a-4).

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Response:  The Agency did not use SI units because they have not been
officially adopted by the United States.  However, this does not preclude
any of the Federal agencies' (or Agreement States) from, using SI units in
their regulations implementing new Federal guidance.  The final
recommendations are expressed in conventional units with corresponding
values in .SI units .given.;iq parenthesis.     '     . .
1.2..4, .Many items, in .this guidance are nebulous.  For instance, should  a
worker be punished with job loss for a "higher-than-normal" exposure
caused by the negligence .of the' licensee (A.a-5)?

Response:  The preamble to the recommendations, the background document,
and the responses to comments all contain clarifications of the intent of
the guides.  The example cited by the commenter is outside the scope  of
Federal guidance.  However, when regulations that implement Federal
guidance are not met, the appropriate action to be taken is the responsi-
bility of the cognizant regulatory agencies.
1.2.5.   The term "justify" in recommendations 1 and 4 is unacceptably
vague (B.a-7, B.a-33, E.a-2, E.a-4, E.a-2).

Response:  The Agency tried to avoid the use of vague terms in  the  final
recommendations.  This particular term, however, is discussed in some
detail in the background report (EPA81),'and has an accepted meaning in
radiation protection, cf .• ICRP-26 (Paragraphs 12, 68 and 69).
1.2.6   Disagreement with EPA by scientists will lead to a deterioration
of EPA's "scientific credibility" if it implements the recommendations
(A.d-25, A.d-35).

Response:  There is ample evidence that scientists often disagree among
themselves, particularly on matters concerning radiation protection.
Adoption of ICRP-26 recommendations in the final recommendations is  likely
to eliminate existing disagreement with some scientists, while giving rise
to new disagreement with others.
1.2-.7   EPA should use the adopted units of becquerel (Bq) and sievert
(Sv) (B.c-11).

Response:  See the response to.comment 1.2.3.
1.2.8   Literature citations in the background report often do not provide
adequate support and justification for the guidance proposed (A.a-12,
A.a-14, A.a-23, A.d-14, A.d-22, A.d-40).

Response:  In general, literature references in the background report
(EPA81) were used to identify the source of data and information cited in

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that  report.   Such data, and  information  were  considered in making the value
judgments resulting in  the proposed guidance.   However, these  value
judgments, were not necessarily  already made in the  cited references.


-1.2.9'1. The proposed guidance is .too.vague and difficult to follow (A.a-17',
A.a-19, A.d-40),   .                     "  .'

.Response:. ..We  disagree.  ..We.note  that  this proposed guidance is much more
explicit  than  the guidance it would replace,  and  that  for 25 years
radiation protection authorities  have  generally succeeded in interpreting
that  guidance.
1.2.10 "The  background material  for  the  proposed  guidance omits several
data points,  including:   the magnitude of  worker  total  exposure (external
plus internal) and  its relationship  to the 100 rem limit; magnitude of
internal exposure-;  magnitude of  forearm  exposure;  and the impacts  of
lowering external limits  (E.b-6).

Response:  The external exposure of  workers is covered  in detail by the
report "Occupational Exposure  to Ionizing  Radiation in  the United  States:
A  Comprehensive Review for  the Year  1980 and a Summary  of Trends for the
Years 1960-1985" (EPA-520/1-84-005)  (Ku84).  However, there is  a paucity of
national or.  international .data on.  internal, exposures.   What data are
available,- however, indicate that  the magnitude of those  exposures in •
comparison to that  of external exposures is small.

        We have no  data on  external  doses  to the  forearms,  as  such.  We do
have some data, however,  on annual doses to "extremities," normally taken
to be "hands  and forearms." About half  of those  records  showed no
measurable exposure while less than  0.1% of .them  indicated exposures
greater than 30 rems.  Final recommendations specify an annual  limit of
50 rems for  extremities (i.e., hands and forearms, feet and ankles).

        Impacts of  the recommended limits  are covered in  responses to
comments 1.9.1 through 1.9.18.
1.2.11  There  is  a  clear need  to monitor  and  regulate "non-nuclear" workers
in  the medical  profession  (A.c~8).

Response:  We  would  agree  that there  are  workers  in the medical profession
whose jobs may  involve  sufficient potential for exposure that  they should
be  monitored even though they  may not be  directly involved in  the
administration  of radiation  to patients.   Federal radiation protection
guidance  for occupational  exposure  applies to all workers exposed on the
job.  Regulatory  agencies  will incorporate the new Federal guidance,  which
includes  a recommendation  on monitoring,  into their regulations.   Thus,  all
workers who may be  significantly exposed  should be monitored and  regulated
in  accordance  with  these recommendations.

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 1.2.12   EPA  should  stick  to  policy,  not  regulation (E.a-5).

 Response:  We  agree.   It  is  the  responsibility of  EPA to recommend the
 basic policies and  standards for radiation protection related to
 occupational exposure;  EPA does  not  regulate  in this area.
 1.3.- .'. . ADEQUACY-.OF .EXISTING  GUIDELINES  AND. REGULATIONS - NEED FOR CHANGE
 1.3.1    The  current  limits  are  adequate.   EPA has  not demonstrated a need
 for or  benefits  from any  changes  in  the  existing limits (A.a-6,  A.a-11,
 A.a-14,  A.a-15,  A.a-17, A.a-20, A.a-21,  A.a-23, A.a-24, A.a-25,  A.a-26,
 A.a-27,  A.a-28,  A.a-29, A.a-30, A.a-31,  A.a-32, A.a-33, A.a-34,  A.a-35,
 A.a-41,  A.a-46,  A.a-52, A.a-53, A.a-54,  A.b-4, A.b-10,  A.b-12,  A.b-15,
 A.b-16,-A.b-19,  A.d-1, A.d-5, A.d-6,  A.d-7,  A.d-10,  A.d-13,  A.d-14,
 A.d-16,  A.d-18,  A.d-19, A.d-21, A.d-22,  A.d-25, A.d-26, A.d-28,  A.d-29,
 A.d-31,  A.d-33',  A.d-35, A.d-39, A.d-40,  B.a-2, B.a-3, B,a-4,  B.a-6, B.a-9,
 B.a-11,  B.a-12,. B'.a-13,'B.a-14, B.a-15,  B.a-17, B.a-18, B.a-21,  B.a-25,
•B.a-27,  B.a-28,  B.a-29, B'.a-31, B.a-32,  B.a-34, B.a-36, B.a-37,  B.a-38,
 B.a-39,  B.a-44,  B.a-47, B.a-48, B.a-54,  B.b-6, B.b-7, B.b-22, B.c-9,
 B.c-10,-B.c-12,  B.c-13, B.c-14, B.c-16,  B.c-18. B.c-20. B.c-22,  B.c-23,
 C-2., D-6, .E.a-2, E..a-3, E.a-5,  E.b-3,  E.b-4,. E.b-8).  .

 Response::' We do not agree.   The  interagency review  of  occupational  .
 radiation protection confirmed  that  it was the unanimous opinion of
 Federal  agencies that revision  of existing Federal guidance,  which was
 promulgated  in  1960, was  long overdue.   Since that time knowledge of the
 effects  of ionizing  radiation on  humans  has  increased substantially. We
 now have a greatly improved ability.to estimate risk of harm to individual
 organs  and tissues from radiation.   As a  result, some of the  old numerical
 guides  are now  believed to  be less,  and  some more, protective than
 formerly.  Other risks, particularly those to the  unborn,  are now
 considered to be more significant, and were  not addressed by  the old
 guidance.  These disparities and  omissions are corrected by  the  new
 recommendations.  The International  Commission on  Radiological Protection
 (ICRP)  published, in 1977,  new  recommendations on  radiation  protection   .
 philosophy and  limits for occupational exposure.   These new  recommenda-
 tions are now in use, in  whole  or substantial part,  in  most other
 countries.   We  have  considered  these recommendations, among  others, and
 believe  that it  is appropriate  to adopt  the  general  features  of  the ICRP
 approach in  radiation protection  guidance to Federal agencies for
 occupational exposure.  In  two  cases,  protection of  the unborn  and the
 management of long-term exposure  to  internally deposited radioactivity,  we
 have found it advisable to  make additions.

         The  relatively large  number  of commenters  who advocate  making no
 change  perhaps  reflect the  adage  that  change is generally resisted.  We
 believe  that the new recommendations.will result in  improved  radiation
 protection for  occupationally exposed  workers.

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 1.3.2  .The guidelines and supporting data require further analysis
 (A.a-24,  A.a-25,  A.a-27,  A.a-28,  A.a-29,  A.a-30, A.a-32, A.a-33, A.a-41,
 A.a-52, A.a-53,  A.a-54, A.d-21,  A.d-25, A.d-29,  B.a-25, B.a-37,. B.a-54,
 B.b-6,  B.c-13,  B.c-18).

 Response:-  As proposed, the Agency has carefully .considered all oral and
 written-comments  in preparing its final recommendations.  Additionally,
 the'Agency'requested and-obtained' the advice of representatives of the
 principal .Federal and State.agencies concerned,  as well as of the National
 Council -on Radiation Protection  and Measurements and the Health Physics
 Society.
 1.3.3   Since EPA's proposed guidance is more stringent than that of
 recognized national and international committees, the guidance should be
 substantiated by an impartial review board (A.b-20).

 Response:   There is neither a statutory requirement nor an existing
 institutional framework for such a review.  The Agency itself serves the
.function of an impartial body,  since it has neither a regulatory role for
 occupational, exposure,  nor is it. a user of radiation'.  The proposed
'guidance was only marginally more stringent than the referenced
 international and national private advisory bodies.  In any case, the
 issue is moot since the final recommendations are effectively the same as
 those of-the ICRP, except for the recommendations addressing protection of
 the  unborn, which'incorporates  the -same overall limit as that advocated by
 the  NCRP..   .   •     . '       .                                    . -
 1.3.4   EPA should withdraw its proposed guidelines until input and
 approval has been obtained from all Federal agencies (A.d-31).

 Response: , EPA afforded opportunity for input from all affected Federal
 agencies during the formulation of the proposed guidance, during the
 public comment period,  and during formulation of its final recommenda-
 tions.  There is no statutory requirement that EPA obtain "approval" from
 Federal agencies prior  to submitting its recommendations to the
 President.   Nevertheless, the Agency has requested and obtained
 concurrence of the Federal agencies on these final recommendations.
 1.3.5   The proposed guidance  is based on the criterion that no limit
 should  be established at a value higher than experience shows is needed
 (B.a-8).

 Response:  No response required.
 1.3.6   The  existing guidelines are inadequate and should be revised (C-6)

 Response:  We  agree, and  have done so.

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 1.3.7    In some  respects,  the  present  RPGs  appear to be too restrictive.
 Operational experience would not  suggest unwarranted exposures to large
'numbers  of workers  (NUREG-0463, NUREG-0594,  DOE/EV/007271) (E.b-4).

 Response:   We  do not  agree that present guides may be too restrictive just
 because  few .workers exceed the .guides.   The  explicit Intent.of the guides
 is  that  no worker, should, exceed them.   .
 1.3.8    EPA should  immediately lower exposure limits by a factor of 10 to
 50:(A.a-7):                 .

 Response:   It  is true that  many occupational tasks can be carried out
 under  lower exposure  limits;  however,  some  cannot.  This is indicated by
 our  studies of occupational exposure in 1975 (CobSO) and 1980 (Ku84) and
 by some  comments (see the response  to  comment 2.1.9).  For this reason the
 final  guidance, provides  for such lower limits to be established as
 administrative control levels.  See also the response to comment 2.1.9.
 1.3'.9    EPA-'s  proposal  does  not. go far enough;  consideration should be
 given  to engineering  and  personnel protection,  rather than administrative
 controls (D-ll).

 Response: We  agree  that  administrative controls alone are not sufficient,
 and  that engineering  safeguards  and personnel-protective measures and
 devices  are  essential for properly protecting workers._ 'They receive
 explicit mention  in  those parts  of the guidance that concern keeping
 exposures ALARA.   Their application,  however, does not obviate the need
 for  administrative controls.
 1.3.10   The  goal  should  be  elimination of radiation- exposure (A.a-5).

 Response:  We  agree  in the  sense  that  a goal  of automobile safety is the
 elimination  of traffic deaths.  However,  the  analogous goals of
 eliminating  radiation exposure  and  traffic deaths  are realized in a way
 that  does  not  foreclose  the benefits  of using radiation and automobiles.
 In  the  same  sense that the  extremes of zero and unlimited speed limits are
 not acceptable, so also  are we  led  to  accept  some  range of risks in
 activities using  radiation  rather than forego desirable benefits.  Thus,
 we  seek the  elimination  of  unjustified and unnecessary exposure while
 providing  an upper limit on the maximum risk  to individual workers through
 radiation  protection standards.
 1.3.11   The major  thrust  of  new guidelines  should  be further education
 (A.d-19).

 Response:  We  agree that  adequate  instruction of radiation workers and
 their managers is  essential,  and such a provision  is included in the
 recommendations.

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1.3.12  If exposure limits are changed, workers' confidence in  their  level
of health protection.would erode (A.d-39, B.a-21).

Response:  We recognize the possibility of this occurring.  However,  the
converse is also true.. That is, if knowledge of risks changes  and the
limits do not reflect, this, confidence would, also erode.  -This  is one  .
reason for instructing workers and persons concerned with worker
protection on the health basis for the recommendations.
1.3.13  EPA is dragging its feet in establishing new exposure guidelines
(A.a-5).

Response:  Admittedly, it has taken a long time for the Agency  to
recommend new guidance.  However, from the very early stages (1974) of the
review of existing guidance, it was apparent that there was no  need for
any drastic, or immediate changes to existing Federal radiation protection
guidance for occupational exposure.  This permitted the Agency  to  carry
put studies.and to consult.with affected Agencies.


1.3.14  The existing limits are not being abused, yet there is  sufficient
latitudes to allow exposures up to 3 rems a quarter if the need arises.
You have assumed that there is a significant amount of unjustified
exposure, but the, small percentage of workers with exposure over 5 rems
per'year does not support that premise (B.a-21).

Response:'  EPA did not assume or imply that there was a significant amount
of unjustified exposure above 5 rems per year.  In any case, any need to
allow exposures up to 3 rems is not precluded by the new recommendation of
5 rems per year.
1.4     RISK
1.4.1   EPA risk estimates are based upon the linear dose-response model
set forth in the 1972 BEIR (BEIR-I) report, and ignore the 1980 BEIR
(BEIR-III) report which suggests that a linear-quadratic model is more
appropriate, resulting in reduced risk estimates (A.a-18, A.a-19, A.a-31,
A.a-38, A.a-40, A.b-1, A.b-3, A.b-17. A.d-9, A.d-14, A.d-16, A.d-21,
A.d-25, A.d-31, B.a-1, B.a-12, B.a-18, B.a-21, B.a-29, B.a-30, B.a-44,
B.a-24, B.c-12, B.c-20, B.c-22, E.a-7).
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Response:  The risk estimates for occupational exposure that were
published in the background report (EPA81) were prepared before the 1980
BEIR-III report, "The Effects on Populations of Exposure to Low Levels of
Ionizing Radiation: 1980" of the National Academy of Sciences (NAS), was
published (NAS80).  The Agency has now updated these estimates.  In doing
so, we have used the age-dependent risk coefficients for a linear response
given in the BEIR-III report.  Our use of the BEIR-III report for risk

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 estimates is described in the document, "Radionuclides - Background
 Information Document for Final Rules - Volume I," EPA 520/1-84-022-1
 (EPA84a), in'which the Agency's choices between the various models
 proposed by the BEIR-III Committee are examined in more detail than
 outlined in this response to comments.

         To.-allow for'an/assumed lesser response at low doses and dose
 rates, the 1980 NAS BEIR Committee based its "preferred risk estimates" on
• a' hypothetical.linear-quadratic.dose response function.  The Committee made
 this choice after examining, analytically, the cancer mortality data  (and
 particularly..the leukemia mortality data) for A-bomb survivors on  the basis
 of three dose response functions:  linear, linear-quadratic and quadratic.
  The Agency believes only the first two of these functions are compatible
 with data on human cancer.  A quadratic response function has been shown to
 be inconsistent with the observed excess risk of solid cancers at Nagasaki,
 where the estimated T65 gamma-ray doses are not seriously confounded by an
 assumed neutron dose component.  The chance that a quadratic response
 function underlies the excess observed in the Nagasaki incidence data for
 solid cancers is only one in ten thousand  (Wab83).

        • Although a quadratic response function is not incompatible with
 the observed leukemia incidence at Nagasaki, Beebe and others (Be78, E177)
 have pointed out how unrepresentative the Nagasaki Life Span Study Sample
 on leukemia is, in comparison to the observed dose response for total
 leukemia experience in that. city.  Moreover, even for the total A-bomb
 Survivor Life Span 'Sample there is no evidence that a quadratic response
 function, provides a better fit to the observed'leukemia excess than a
 simple linear model (NAS80).  The Agency does not believe a quadratic
 response can be used in a serious effort to estimate cancer risks due to
 ionizing radiation.

     ... •.Although•the majority of the members on the BEIR-III Committee
 "preferred".a linear-quadratic response in 1980, we believe the
 quantitative basis for this judgment is considerably weaker now because of
 the subsequent reassessment of the A-bomb dosimetry.  The Committee's
 analysis of dose response functions assumes that most of the observed
 excess leukemia (and solid cancer) among A-bomb survivors was due to
 neutrons (NAS80).   Current evidence, however,  is conclusive that neutrons
 were a minor component of the dose in both Hiroshima and Nagasaki (Bob82,
 RERF83, RERF84).  Therefore, it is likely that the linear response
 observed among the A-bomb survivors, which the BEIR Committee largely
 attributed to neutrons was, in fact, due to their gamma dose, not a dose
 of high LET radiation (EPA84a)..

         Although there is evidence for a nonlinear response to low-LET
 radiations in some, but not all, studies of animal radiocarcinogenesis,
 the Agency is not aware of any data on human cancers that is incompatible
 with a simple linear model.  In such a case, we believe it is preferable
 to adopt the simplest hypothesis that adequately models the observed
 radiation effect.   Occams' razor is still a viable scientific rule for
 separating necessary from ad hoc assumptions.   Moreover,  EPA believes that
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'health should be based on scientifically credible risk models that are not
 likely to understate the risk.   Given the current bias in the doses
 assigned to A-bomb survivors,  such an approach seems particularly
 reasonable,  as well as prudent.   Therefore,  the estimates of the risks of
 radiogenic cancer presented below are based  on an assumed linear response.

  -  .. :    The Agency also does not assume that only doses above some
.unspecified threshold level can start the chain of molecular events that
'•lead to. cancer-and hereditary .defects.  We note that neither the
 International Commission on Radiological Protection (ICRP) nor the
 National Council on Radiation Protection and Measurements (NCRP) have
 adopted a nonlinear dose response function or a threshold hypothesis as
 the basis for recommending limits to avoid stochastic damage due to
 occupationally-incurred exposures.  While retaining a linear response
 function, both groups have, however, either  explicitly or implicitly
 assumed that the carcinogenic effects of radiation are, like radiogenetic
 effects, reduced at low dose rates.  In particular, NCRP Committee 40 has
 suggested that the carcinogenic effects of low-dose and low-dose-rate
 exposure to .low-LET radiations  may be a factor of 2 to 10 times less than
 that  observed at.high doses (NCRP80).

         The- low-dose, low-dose-rate effectiveness factors developed by
 NCRP Committee 40 are based on  their analysis of a large body of plant and
 animal.data that showed reduced effects at low doses for a number of end-
 points,/.including . (to a lesser  extent) radiogenic cancer in animals,
 chiefly rodents.  However,"no human data confirm these findings.  A few
 human  studies contradict them.   Highly fractionated small doses to human
 breast tissue are apparently as carcinogenic as large acute doses (NAS80,
 LaaSO).   Furthermore, small acute doses (less then 10 rad) to the thyroid
 are as effective per rad as much larger doses in initiating thyroid cancer
 (UN77, NAS80).  Moreover,  the  increased breast cancer due to chronic low
 dose occupational gamma ray .exposures among  British dial painters is
•comparable to, or larger than,  that expected on the basis of acute high
 dose exposures (Ba81). .While none of .these  examples are persuasive by
 themselves,  collectively they indicate that  it may not be cautious to
 estimate cancer risks due'to low doses and low dose rates on the basis of
 an assumed reduced effectiveness of low doses compared to observations at
 large  doses.

         The Agency notes that the ICRP risk  estimates for cancer assume a
 dose rate effectiveness factor  of 2.5.  Moreover,  cancer risk estimates
 for occupational exposure based on the BEIR-III linear quadratic model are
 2.4 times smaller than those based on their  linear model.  Except for
 breast cancer, it is possible  that a linear  model does overestimate the
 risk due to low-dose-rate low-LET exposures.  If so, estimates based on
 the BEIR-III linear model would be conservative.  However, the Agency has
 reservations  concerning the adequacy of BEIR-III linear-quadratic risk
 estimates, due to the errors in the dose estimates the Committee used for
 the A-bomb survivors (EPA84a)  and its assumptions regarding the transfer-
 ability of animal data to humans.  Selection of the Committee's linear
 response estimates minimizes these sources of bias in the BEIR-III
 Committee's risk estimates.

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        Risk  estimates  for fatal  cancer  based  on, the  1980 and 1972 BEIR
reports are compared in Table  1.  These  estimates  assume  exposure  at 'a
dose rate of  5 rad  per  year of  low-LET radiation from age 18  to  65 (U.S.
Life Tables:  1969-71, NCHS75).  They were obtained using  a life  table
methodology to account  for age  dependence of risk,  and to correct  for  the
.effect'of competing-.causes .of death (Bu81).  A .linear, response is. assumed
in both sets  of calculations.   Following BEIR-III,  the expression  period
for'leukemia  is assumed to be  25  years,  after  a  minimum induction  period
(mip) of two  years... After.a ten  year mip, a balance  of lifetime
expression period is assumed for  solid cancers (NAS80).  Risk estimates
that assume that radiocarcinogenesis is  reduced  by a  factor of 2.5 at  low
dose rates (or an equivalently  model, such as  the  BEIR-III linear
quadratic dose response function) would  be 40% of  those listed in  Table. 1.
     Table 1.  Estimated probability of fatal cancer due to continuous
     exposure to low-LET radiation at 5 rad per year from age 18 to 65


                      Relative Risk).       0.06A                  0.027


'a)Absolute risk used for leukemia and  bpne  cancer; all  other  cancers
     based on relative risk.
(b)Average for both sexes


For comparison, .the balance-of-lifetime probability of cancer  in U.S.
males and females at age 20 was 0.17  and 0.16, respectively, in  the  year
1970.  From Table 1, it is seen that  risk estimates for  male- workers based
on the NAS BEIR-III estimates are quite comparable to those  provided
(average for both sexes, only) in the 1972 NAS BEIR-I report;  while  for
women, the newer risk estimates are somewhat larger.

         Table 1 refers to cancer mortality, not cancer  incidence.   Al-
though some have argued that cancer incidence is a better indicator  of
cancer risk than is fatal cancer .(NAS80), the Agency  has continued  to use
cancer fatality as its index of radiogenic risk for several  reasons.  The
mortality data for radiogenic cancer  is more extensive than  that for
incidence.  (This may change fairly soon when the Hiroshima  A-bomb survivor
cancer incidence data is published.)  A second reason is that  comparisons
of risk between industries should be  made using a common end point.
Mortality estimates meet this criterion.  Comparisons between  the number
of industrial accidents and the total number of radiogenic cancers are not
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 meaningful.   Comparisons  based  on days  of employment lost may be better,
 but  are  still not  a true  measure of impact.   It should be noted, however,
 that the estimated total  number of cancers due to occupational exposure is
 considerably  greater than the estimated number of fatal cancers.  Incidence
 is estimated  as  being about 54% greater than mortality for males and 100%
 greater  for females in NAS8Q.  The-difference between the sexes is largely
 due  t;o .the much  higher incidence of radiogenic thyroid cancer (20%
 mortality) and breast cancer (39% mortality) in females (NAS80).
•1.4.2'    From the  large.variety of  studies  on radiation-induced cancer,
 the  best  current  dose-response relationship for cancer risk is described
 by a shallow linear component  at low levels and a curvilinear or quadratic
 component at intermediate and  high  levels (B.a-40).

 Response:  The linear-quadratic response risk coefficients in the NAS
 BEIR-III  lead to  risk estimates for occupational exposure that are smaller
 by a factor of about 2.5 than  those shown in Table 1 (see comment 1.4.1.)
 It  is possible that at low doses (and low dose rates) the induction of
 some forms of human cancer is  reduced.   However, the only human cancer for
 which there is enough data to  test  this hypothesis,  breast cancer,
 indicates that any quadratic component  in the dose response is negligible
 and  in fact may be negative (Lac83).  Examination of cancer incidence for
 all  solid cancers  at Nagasaki  leads to  a similar conclusion (Wab83).

          The -Agency does not know of any human data on radiogenic cancer "
 at low doses' that  is appreciably more consistent with a linear-quadratic
 dose response function than with a  simple linear response-function.  Some
 data sets, such as that  for the radium  dial painters, do show a quadratic
 component at extremely high doses.   In  contrast, other studies, such as
 the  one on U.S. uranium  miners,  show a  reduced effect per unit dose in the
 high dose- range..  However, these perturbations occur at doses too large to
 be of regulatory  concern for occupational exposure.   The Agency
 acknowledges that  the precise  shape of  the  dose response function for
 chronic exposure  in the  normal range of occupational exposure is unknown.
 In this range of  exposure, both the linear  and linear quadratic hypotheses
 assume  no threshold and  a proportional  response between dose and effect.
 The  difference between the calculated risks using these two models, about
 a factor  of 2.5,  is smaller than the uncertainty as  to what the risk
 actually  is.  See  also the responses to comments 1.4.1 and 1.4.25.
 1.4.3    In the  region from natural  background radiation rates to the
 occupational annual limit of 5 rem/yr,  the overall cancer mortality risk
 is in the range  of lxlO~5 to 5xlO~5  per rem (B.a-40).

 Response:  The above estimate of  mortality risk appears to be derived on
 the basis of the 10   lifetime risk  estimate for occupational exposure
.described in ICRP Publication 26  and the Dose Rate Effectiveness Factor
 (DREF) discussed in NCRP Report No.  64.  This NCRP Committee said "The
 effectiveness per unit dose of high  vs. low dose-rate  exposure ranges from
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 a factor of about 2 to about 10.  However, it is incorrect to apply the
 NCRP. DREF to the ICRP Publication 26 risk estimate, since this risk
 estimate already includes a .dose rate reduction factor of 2.5, based on
 the limited analysis of leukemia mortality among A-bomb survivors
 presented in UN77. -See also the response to comment 1.4.1 and the
'document, referenced as.EpA84a.      .     .    .       . .         ..
 1.4;4    Use-of the. BEIR-III dose-response relationship, rather than the
 EPA risk model", results 'in a risk from occupational exposure to radiation
 which is .a factor of 1.-5 to 2.2 times lower than the EPA estimates, and is
 a more appropriate risk model than that used by EPA (A.b-17. B.a-30).

 Response:  The actual difference between the BEIR-III linear and
 linear-quadratic models is a factor of 2.5.  See the responses to comments
 1.4.1 and 1.4.2.
 1.4.5    The linear hypothesis probably overstates the risk by a factor of
 two to ten for low doses and low dose rates (B.a-13, B.a-30).

 Response:  This comment apparently refers, by implication at least, to
 conclusions reached in NCRP Report No. 64.  This report is considered in
 the response to comment 1.4.1.
.1.4.6:'.  The linear, .nonthreshold dose-re'sponse hypothesis is merely a
 theory,  and*should not be used as the basis for. setting lower occupational
 exposure limits (A.a-12,  A.d-40).

 Response:  The ICRP,  the NCRP, and the United Nations Scientific Committee
 on the Effects of Atomic Radiation, as well as EPA, estimate radiation
 risks based on this hypothesis.  Moreover, we know of no human data that
 seriously conflicts with the linear,  nonthreshold hypothesis.  It is a
 prudent hypothesis for evaluating radiation risks.

          The Agency does not believe  use of a. linear, nonthreshold
 response function to evaluate ra'diation risks is unduly conservative.  The
 late Dr. Walter Snyder,  a respected senior radiation protection scientist
 at the Oak Ridge National Laboratory, summarized the case for linearity
 many years ago in testimony before the Joint Committee on Atomic Energy:
 "Those who prefer to base radiation protection on a threshold hypothesis,
 which is just as unproven and just as uncertain and unsupported by data as
 is the linear hypothesis, often charge the linear hypothesis is too
 conservative.  There  is  no evidence...that it is conservative at all.
 However, one may wonder  why it is considered so undesirable to use a
 conservative criterion where human life is in question.  Surely if the
 linear hypothesis is conservative and is not in conflict with the data
 that are available, this  is a point in its favor.  When human life Is in
 the balance, it would seem that conservatism in safeguarding these lives
 has much to commend it." (Sn67).
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1.4.7    EPA's estimate of an increased risk of  3  to  6 in  100 of  dying
from occupational exposure to radiation at  the 'maximum hypothetical
lifetime limit of 235 rems is based on conservative assumptions and  is
likely to be an overestimate (E.a-5).

Response:.  We have tried to be reasonably, conservative in .our choice
of a dose.response function.  (See responses to  comments 1.4.1, 1.4.2,
and'l.'4.6,  above.')'  However, given the current uncertainties  in risk
estimation, .the likelihood that risks due to radiation have been  either
overestimated or, less likely, underestimated cannot  be established.
Current data supports the use of a relative risk model, indicating  the
maximum occupational risks may be nearer the higher estimate  than the
lower one (Ka82, Jaa83).
1.4.8    Risk estimates based on linear extrapolation  from high  doses  do
not provide realistic estimates of actual risks from low-level,  low-LET
radiations (A.a-13, A.d-13, E.a-5).

Response:  See the responses to comments 1.4.1, 1.4.2  and 1.4.7.
1.4.9 .   The 1980 BEIR report, as well as other published  studies,
were not able to demonstrate effects at the level of current  limits
Response:  Current' limits were set with the expectation  that  any  increase
in detrimental health effects due to allowed exposures would  be so" small
as to be hidden by normal biological variations  (ICRP64, NCRP71).   We
agree that, in this regard, current guidance and the use of the ALARA
principal have been successful.  Nevertheless, excess breast  cancer has
been observed among occupationally exposed workers  (Ba81).  Although the
Agency hopes the result of this study is not confirmed by  studies  of other
exposed .groups, we do not believe it is in the public interest to  be
sanguine on .this point.
1.4.10-   There are no demonstrated somatic or genetic effects  at  low
levels of radiation (A.a-17, C-2).

Response:  If by low levels of radiation one means dose rates  comparable
to background radiation, 0.1 rad per year, this statement is true.
Dose-response models are used to interpolate between the lowest exposures
at which excess cancer has been observed and exposure levels due  to
background.  This is reasonable, since there is no reason, a priori,  to
conclude that risk is zero even when it cannot be demonstrated
statistically.  It is unlikely that a study of a large enough  group  of
animals or persons can be mounted to irrevocably answer this question.
However, the data on excess cancer due to _in_ utero exposure indicate that
single doses as low as a few hundred mrem may cause cancer (St73,  Ha75)
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and occupational exposures of a few rems per year are  likely  to  be  the
cause of increased breast cancer  (see the response,  to  comment'1.4.9).   The
Agency believes it is likely that some radiation risk  does accrue from
even very low levels of exposure.


.1.4.11   There 'is no evidence to  indicate that  biological  risk factors are
any higher than they were considered to be when current guidelines  were
promulgated- (A.d-31).   ......'.....

Response:  .The comment does not reflect what was known about  risk factors
when the current guidelines were  promulgated in 1960.  This was  well
before any numerical risk estimates for radiogenic  cancer  became
available.  The first comprehensive and quantitative discussion  of
radiation risks, those of the NAS-BEIR Committee, was  published  in  1972.
The first explicit risk estimates by the Federal Radiation Council  were
made in their 1962 report on health implications from  fallout.
1.4.12   In'its risk estimates, EPA should correct surface doses  to  mean
whole-body dose, which- would result-in lower  risk estimates  by  at least  a
factor of two (A.b-17, A.d-22).

Response:  Like the.NAS BEIR-III Committee, the Agency  uses  organ doses,
not surface doses,.as the basis for its risk  estimates.   It  is  true  that
occupatioTial exposures are often regulated in terms  of  the dose measured
at or near, the body surface.  Depending on how penetrating the  radiation
is, the dose to body organs may be quite comparable  or  iti' some  situations,
such as for diagnostic radiation and deep organs, substantially less.
This is a problem related to implementing the Federal Guidance, not  risk
estimation.  We see no merit in specifying a  "mean whole-body dose".   A
weighting-system that considers the difference in the radiosensitivity of
various organs as proposed in ICRP 26 and adopted in this guidance is
preferable.
1.4.13 .  EPA's risk-estimating methodology  is  flawed  because  one-half  of
the calculated cancers occur past the average  life expectancy;  also,  the
dose received later in life is less likely  to  have a  genetic  effect
(A.a-12).

Response:  The comment is'not correct; the  Agency's risk-estimating
methodology does not contain such flaws.  In 1978, the Agency developed  a
life-table methodology for cancer risk estimation to  avoid  the  problem
cited in this comment (Coa78, Bu81)•  It has subsequently been  adopted by
other Federal agencies and was used by the  BEIR committee to  prepare  their
1980 report.  The EPA lifetable analysis accounts for exposure, minimum
induction period, and the period of expression across a  full  life  span,  as
well as for all of the competing risks leading to other  causes  of  death
(Bu81).
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          Our genetic  risk  estimates  are  based  on accumulated dose to age
30, which is the midpoint  of  reproductive  activity.   The total genetic
risk, including that.due to doses  received past  age  30,  is then estimated
from the mean accumulated  dose  at  age  30 to the  gonads  of persons having
children.                    .      '
1.4.14    There -is  ho  scientific  support  for the' assumption that all
radiation.exposure is harmful  (B.a-54).   Indirect  evidence suggests that
there''is  a threshold -value  of  radiation  below which it is harmless (A.c-6).

Response:   Most  radiation scientists,  including all of those on the
NAS/BEIR-III  Committee,  support  the  use  of  a nonthreshold hypothesis for
estimating the likelihood of radiation-induced cancer and hereditary
effects.   The Agency  follows the criterion  for the use of risk estimates
outlined  in 1972 BEIR report (p.  96);   "If  the intent of  authorities is to
minimize  the  loss  of  life that radiation exposure  may entail, they must,
indeed, be guided  by  such estimates, and will not  rely on notions of a
threshold." While .the  lack of a threshold  is unprovable  experimentally,
we know of no indirect  evidence  for  a  threshold for radiogenic cancer or
hereditary effects.   See also  the. responses to comments .1.4.6, 1.4.9, and
1.4.10.       •      ''••••   .   • ' ;•
1..4,.15   EPA does not  consider  the mounting  evidence that at low levels,
'radiation may everi.be  beneficial  (A.a-31,  A.a-46,  A.d-35, B.c-22).
Response:  The Agency  is  familiar  with  reports  'of the beneficial effects
of radiation, often  referred  to as -radiation  hormesis.   The  hermetic
action of radiation, and  a  number  of  other  nonspecific  hermetic stimuli,
is usually seen in an  animal  population reared  under  sub-optimal
conditions i.e.,.  a. high intercurrent  infectious disease level.   However,
there is no demonstrated  hormetic  affect  on tumor induction  or  the aging
process.  Hence,  the risk of  premature  death  due to radiation induced
cancer presented,  in.  the Background Report would be unchanged by
consideration of  hormesis.  This conclusion is  largely  based on the
discussion of radiation-induced hormesis  presented in "Handbook of the
Biology of Aging" (Saa77).
1.4.16    There  are  no  nonstochastic  effects  at  an exposure level of 15
rem/yr, and  the  stochastic  effects are  independent of  dose rate (A.a-41).

Response:  The  purpose of nonstochastic limits  is to prevent the
occurrence of impairment due  to a large amount  of cellular damage by
limiting  the rate at which  radiation injury  occurs.   It  is presumed that
at low dose  rates cellular  repair prevents any  manifestation of
nonstochastic effects.

          Not all stochastic effects  are dose rate independent.   For
example,  genetic injury is  believed  to  be dose  rate  dependent at exposure
rates greater than  0.8 R/min  [NAS80,  p.107]. As noted in the response to
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 comment 1.4.1,  the Agency agrees that it is prudent to assume that the
 probability of  inducing fatal cancer is likely to be independent of dose
 rate.
 r.4.17'   The'linearity .assumption for genetic.effects is erroneous,
 because  dose"rate  exerts, a significant influence on the hereditary effects
 of  a given radiation dose (B.a-42).

 Response:   The  variation in genetic  response with dose rate does not
 confound the linear dose -response relationship at low dose rates (BEIR-III
 p.113).   The Agency agrees that for  low-LET radiations, genetic risks are
 somewhat less for  chronic than for acute exposures.  This has been taken
 into account in the Agency's estimates of genetic damage (EPA81, EPA84a).
 However,  there  is  a limit to how much genetic risks are reduced at low
 dose rates.   Dose  rate effects for genetic risk estimations have not been
 noted at exposure  rates  less than 0.8 R/min [NAS80, p.107].  Few
 occupational exposures are expected  to occur at higher dose rates.

          It  should be noted that the genetic risk estimates published in
 the background  teport (EPA81) may be underestimates.  The genetic risk
.estimates  were  based on the 1972 BEIR report which assumed the sensitivity
 of  the oocyte was  near zero.  The BEIR-III committee assumed the female
 (oocyte) was about 40% as sensitive  as the male (NAS80).  More recent
 studies  have reparted that the .male  and female are equal in sensitivity
 (Doa83,  Dob84). See the documents,referenced as EPA84a for a more
 complete discussion of current EPA genetic risk estimates.  See also the
 response to  comment 3.8.51.


 1.4.18   It  is  a prudent and conservative approach, for regulatory
 purposes,  to assume a linear, nonthreshold dose-response model (B.a-38,
•B.a-40,  B.a-41).

 Response:   The  Agency agrees.
 1.4.19   EPA does not  call attention to the weaknesses of the 1980 BEIR
 report,  and  in particular,  its failure  to note the biases in the
 supporting data (A.b-25).   BEIR-III's numbers are not firm and they don't
 really allow you to set  firm guidelines for safety (A.d-25, A.b-4).

 Response:   Strengths and limitations of the 1980 BEIR-III report are
 described  in EPA84a and  in the response to comment 1.4.1 above.  The
 Agency believes it is  the  best available source of information, but that
 it  must  be interpreted carefully  in terms of more recent information (see
 the response to comment  1.4.1 and reference EPA84a).
 1.4.20   Based  on the  work of  Bross,  Mancuso,  Morgan,  and Rotblat,  the
'risk factors  are higher than those derived from the Japanese studies;
 therefore,  the  linear  hypothesis  is nonconservative (A.a-4,  A.c-6,  C-6)
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 Response:   While a "supra-linear" dose response for low-LET radiations at
 low dose and dose rates has been postulated by some,  almost no
 quantitative data have been presented.  The hypotheses proposed by Bross,,
 Mancuso, Morgan,  and .Rotblat have not been corroborated by other
'investigators.   The cited studies are often based on preliminary data,
 unknown or- incomplete  exposure data,  confounding with chemical and
 industrial'carcinogen  exposure, short follow-up, etc.  The Agency is
 familiar with these works as well as  those which contradict them.  The
 linear, ..nonthreshold hypothesis still appears to be the prudent approach
 to  use in  assessing the maximum risks permitted by radiation protection
 standards.
 1.4.21   Exposure at EPA's proposed limits for bronchial and female breast
 tissues  would at least triple the lifetime risk of lung cancer for
 nonsmokers,  and almost double the lifetime risk of breast cancer
 (A.a-38).  The doses of low level radiation currently permitted by NRG
 standards cause at least a doubling of the risks of leukemia, lung cancer
 and  other fatal and nonfatal diseases (A.a-4).

•Response:  The Agency believes consideration of the estimated fatality due
 to all radiogenic cancers, as shown in Table 1•at comment 1.4.1, is a
 better indicator of occupational risks than the potential increase of any
 particular cancer.  If a radiogenic cancer is of a type common in the U.S.
.population,  the percentage increase due to radiation is smaller than for a
 relatively'rare cancer; yet the numerical impact is larger. -For example,
 the  Agency;has calculated breast cancer mortality for a "dose of 5 rems per
 year for age 18 to age 65.  (An annual dose to the breast that exceeds the
 whole-body dose limit is unrealistic.)  The results of a life-table
 analysis using the data in tables A-4 and V-15 of NAS80 are shown in Table
 2 below.  These indicate that the estimated increase of fatal breast
 cancer due to. the.unrealis.tically high assumption of a lifetime exposure
 at 5 rads per year is 50 to 80%.

          The comment concerning the probability of lung cancer due to
 occupational exposure appears to assume the Agency's risk estimates for
 the  entire population may be applied directly to smokers and nonsmokers
 considered separately.  As there is yet insufficient data on radiogenic
 lung cancer to calculate separate risk coefficients for smokers and
 nonsmokers,  the risk coefficients used in NAS80 and those used by EPA are
 average values for smokers and nonsmokers combined.  Moreover, they are
 based on mortality data for males.  Table 2 compares the ambient risk of
 lung cancer among U.S. males with the increased risk due to 5 rems per
 year from age 18 to 65 (U.S. Life Tables: 1969.-71, NCHS75).  At this dose
 rate, the risk of radiogenic lung cancer is appreciably smaller than the
 normal risk for the U.S. male population as a whole.  For leukemia, the
 increased probability of induction by the maximum allowed occupational
 exposure compared to normal incidence is much greater than for radiogenic
 breast or lung cancer, see Table 2.  Because of these differences between
 cancer types, the Agency believes the estimated total of all fatal cancers
 (See Table 1 in the response to comment 1.4.1.) is the best index of
 increased cancer mortality.
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     Table  2.   Lifetime  probability of fatal cancer due to continuous
          exposure giving 5 rems per  year from age 18  to  age  65


         •  .        .   ..'•-.. -Increase in              Normal Lifetime
Cancer .  .             .     Lifetime Probability      Probability  at  age  20
  '••'••'.   •.      '''•'.'•  (5"rems'  per year)       (no- occupational dose)
Breast (female)
Lung Cancer (male)
Leukemia (male)
Leukemia (female)
All Cancer^) (male)
All Cancer^) (female)
0.024U)
	
______
_____
0.066(a)
0.09l(a)
o.oiew
0.014(b)
0.01l(b>
0.0085Cb)
0.035(b)
0.050(b)
0.03
0.052
0.0066
0.0060
0.17
0.16
(a)Based' on a relative risk projection and a linear dose  response  model.
(b)Based on .an- absolute risk-projection and a linear dose  response model.
(°)Including leukemia.
1.4.22  ; Because"of new evidence concerning dosimetry to be applied  to
dose-response results for the Hiroshima A-bomb survivors, EPA's  risk
estimates must be recognized as too low (A.a-38).  New guidelines  should
be delayed until the questions regarding the Hiroshima-Nagasaki  dosimetry
are resolved (A.a-19, A.b-16, A.d-14, A.d.-22, A.d-27, A.d-33, E.a-4).

Response:  In view, of the current uncertainty concerning the doses to
individual A-bomb survivors, we believe it is premature to categorize our
risk estimates as either too low or too high.  While the neutron doses  (in
air) from the Hiroshima weapon were probably much smaller than assumed  in
the 1980 BEIR report and other contemporary analyses, new estimates  of
organ doses due to gamma radiation are somewhat larger for unshielded
survivors (RERF 83, 84).  Final resolution of this question will depend on
the doses to individual survivors, most of whom were not in the  open, but
shielded.  We do not expect, however, that large changes will occur  in  •
risk estimates.  In any event, EPA risk estimates will be re-evaluated  as
riew data becomes available and are conservative to the extent- that they
are based on an assumed linear nonthreshold response, rather then  the
linear quadratic dose response proposed in the 1980 BEIR report.


1.4.23   The potential impact of the revised Hiroshima dose estimates does
not justify any delay in the development of new radiation guidance or
regulations (E.a-6).  The reexamination of the Hiroshima data is not
expected to significantly alter current dose-effect estimates (A.d-13).
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Response:  The Agency concurs to the extent outlined in the response  to
comment 1.4.22..
1.4.24   The existing data base relating to. risk is adequate  for  judgments
relating to.radiation guidelines (B.a-40).  .                   .   .

Response:  'The Agency agrees to the extent  outlined in the  response  to
comment 1.4.22.
1.4.25   Direct observations of human populations under 20 rad are not
going to improve the risk estimates (B.a-41).

Response:  Whether this is true or not depends on the size of the
population under observation and how frequently cancers of a particular
type are observed in an unexposed population (see LaaSO, LabSO).
Nevertheless, compatibility of observations at less than 20 rads with
those at higher levels are of interest even if they have low statistical
significance.  This 'is because they still can provide information on the
shape of the dose response curve.  For example, breast cancer incidence
among the Atomic Bomb survivors at doses less than 20. rad (low-LET) is
compatible with a linear projection of the incidence  observed at much high
doses.  This sets a. limit on how much the response at high dose might be
increased-by a. dose squared response.  It is anticipated that longer
follow-up ..-periods, will clarify this result for other  radiogenic cancers.  -
1.4.26   The time has come to answer the question of health effects at
occupational levels of exposure based on observed scientific data, rather
than on estimates, assumptions, and hypotheses (A.a-4, A.a-13).  No one
has. been identifiably injured by ionizing radiation while working within
the existing standards (B.a-1).

Response:  The absence of observed excess cancer in most occupationally
exposed groups is evidence that current regulations and health physics
practices are sufficient to keep the detriment due to radiation below
uncertainties due to normal variation in nonradiogenic cancer introduced
by sampling variation and normal population variability.  However, the
experience of the early radium dial painters illustrates that estimating
risk on the basis of observation at higher doses and modeling assumptions
is a small price to pay compared to the ultimate cost inherent in basing
radiation protection limits on a requirement that detriment be observed
before establishing adequate protection.  See also the response to comment
1.4.10.
1.4.27   Animal data from inbred strains, although not used for absolute
values of risk, provide information vital to our understanding of
radiation effects (A.d-22).
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 Response:   Animal  data  can provide  insights  into possible carcinogenic
 processes.   However,  in view of  the heterogeneity of all human
 populations, we  believe considerable caution must be exercised when
 drawing  conclusions  from observations on irradiated animals - particularly
 inbred strains of  laboratory animals.  Results  of animal studies must also
 be.-examined carefully to determine  if . comparable physiologic and . metabolic
 systems  occur so that .results can be extrapolated to man in a rational
 way.  It is often  difficult to interpolate between- different strains of
 even  the same species .for similar insults.

          Extrapolation  to other  species requires very considerable caution
 and qualification, particularly  when large differences in life span are
 involved.   Those who  perform animal studies  are usually careful to
 indicate that the  comparatively  large risks  per unit dose observed in some
 studies  should not be applied to estimates of human risk.  Yet they
 generally fail to  present evidence  that such increased sensitivity is
 unrelated to other physiological parameters  that affect interspecies
 comparisons.  For  example,  inbred species  which are much more prone to
 radiogenic  cancer  than  humans often show a quadratic response beginning at
.100 rad  or  so (NCRP80).   No evidence has been published indicating why a
 quadratic response in the- less radiosensitive 'human species would a_ priori
 begin at a  comparable dose  level.


 1.4.28.    The Bross.reanalyzes of the Tri-State  study adult leukemia data
 are.flawed'  by an erroneous  statistical  analysis,  -a correct version of-
 which,leads to results  which are so statistically indeterminate as to be
 meaningless (B.a-41).                           .

 Response:   The Agency did not base  estimates of occupational,radiation
 risks on the study referred to above.  See also the response to comment
 1.4.20.          ..-.
 1.4.29    Since  we  have  no  way  of  preselecting  the individuals most
 susceptible  to  radiation effects,  limits  set to  protect these individuals
 will  be  set  unrealistically  low for  the majority of workers (A.d-31).  The
 thesis of  significant variation in radiosensitivity used in EPA's
 background report  is not supported by  any quantifiable data,  and in any
 case, hypersensitivity  should  not  be used as a factor  in risk estimation
 of  large populations (A.b-17).

 Response:  The  recommended level  was not  chosen  based  on estimates of risk
 to  highly  susceptible individuals.   Nevertheless,  it is useful to recall
 the heterogeneity  of human populations when drawing conclusions from the
 shape of the dose  response function  observed in  studies with  animals (see
 the response to comment 1.4.22).   The  purpose  of the discussion in the
 Background Report  (pp.  43-44)  was  to highlight the  uncertainty of using
 data  from inbred animal strains.   It also points to the possible lack of
 conservatism for estimating  the risk to particular  individuals using the
 linear dose  response models.   To  the extent that a portion of an exposed
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 population is significantly more sensitive to .radiation than the average,
 a  linear  response  function  does  not  provide an  estimate of upper limit of
 the  risk.   However,  observations on  exposed human populations to date,
 which  presumably are a  cross section of  the human condition,  are
 compatible-with.a  linear response function (Wab83).
 1.4.30   We  do" not  know that  the  range  of  sensitivity of individuals is as
 extreme as that quoted  in EPA's  background document (A.d-22).

 Response:-  The discussion of  the  possible  consequences of population
 heterogeneity in the  background  document  is illustrative, not
 quantitative.  (See also the  response  to  comment 1.4.29).


 1.4.31   It  would seem  prudent  to avoid occupational exposure  in the
 radiation-sensitive subpopulation rather  than lower the maximum
 permissible  exposure  (B.a-52).

.Response:   Adequate techniques  to identify sensitive or unique
 subpopulations-have not been  developed.  (See also  the response to comment
 1.4.30)..
 1.4.32   EPA should  consider in its  risk estimates  the genetic as well as
 the  somatic'risk (A.a-3).       " •   '
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 Response:   EPA's assessment  included consideration  of genetic risk.
 1.4.33    Genetic  damage  and  mutations  may well  be the greatest risk of
 all;  yet  we  have  very  little.info-rmation. in .this area (C-8).

 Response: While  the Agency  agrees  that  the amount of information on
 genetic risk is  limited,  based  on BEIR III analyses (NAS80),  it doubts
 that  the  hereditary risk exceeds  that  of.radiation induced  cancer.
 Extensive study  of  the offspring  of Japanese  A-bomb survivors fail  to show
 any  statistically significant increase in genetic effects (Sc81,  Sab82),
 while excess cancer is clearly  evident in the survivors themselves  (Ka82,
 Wab83).   See also the  response .to comment 3.8.51.
 1.4.34   Limits  for workers  which deal  with genetic risk.should deal with
 all  generations,  rather  than just the first two  generations (C-8).

 Response:   EPA estimates of  hereditary  risks include two cases: the first
 generation,  and  the 1st  generation plus all succeeding generations  (EPA8.1,
 EPA84a).   We have considered both immediate and  long term hereditary
 damage,  recognizing that estimates of future risks  are based  on indirect
 evidence on the  prevalence of recessive mutations and how long they will
 be maintained.
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 1.4.35    Any  radiation exposure  limit  which adequately protects the worker
 against  the risk  of  cancer  will  automatically protect the population
 against  hereditary effects,  because risks of the latter are significantly
 smaller  than'risks of' the former (B.a-42).

 Response:  While  the. Agency agree.3  that genetic risks are probably less
 than-somatic  risks,  it does  not'believe they should  be ignored.  In the
 final .recommendations,  the  risk  of  hereditary damage is included in the
 calculation of- the effective dose equivalent limit.


 1.4.36    There is no evidence to support EPA's contention that the oocytes
 in  the female fetus  are more sensitive to radiation-caused mutations than
 are those  of  adult women  (B.a-42).

 Response:   Information in BEIR III  (Note 9. Oocyte Sensitivity, p. 110)
 shows the  relationship is more complex than originally thought (EPA81).
 There is now  evidence  of  species-specific differences in oocyte killing
 and mutation  sensitivity.   However, BEIR III indicated there is still
•uncertainty as to which stage of mouse oocyte development is similar to  .
 the immature  arrested  human oocyte.' While  it may be conservative to
 consider fetal oocytes more sensitive  than immature  arrested adult
 oocytes,  such prudence is not unreasonable  in light  of what is currently
 known.-  See also  the response to comment 3.8.51.
 1.4.37   The  relative  role  of  radiation risk  is  significantly distorted,
 given  the  very  high  risk of cancer  from other causes (A.a-41, A.d-13,
 B.a-31,  B.c-12).

 Response:  The  relative  probabilities  of fatal cancer due to occupational
 exposure and  due  to  ot.her causes  was not a  basis for, these recommendations


 1.4.38   Based  on the  1980  BEIR report and  a  linear quadratic dose
 response function, the additional cancer deaths  projected over a lifetime
 due  to  lifetime occupational exposure  in nuclear power plants at the
 collective dose rate occurring in 1979 are  1.2 to 2.0 percent of the
 deaths  from all forms  of cancer,  depending  on the risk projection model
 used, absolute  or relative  risk.  If the linear  dose response model from
 the  1972 BEIR report is  used,  these values  would rise by a factor of only
 2  to 3  (A.a-42).

 Response:  The  Agency  agrees and  notes that if the commenter had based his
 estimates  on  the  linear  dose response  estimates  in the 1980 BEIR report,
 his  estimate  of absolute risk  would be about  1.5 times larger than
 absolute risk estimates  based  on  the 1972 BEIR report.  In contrast,
 relative risk estimates  have remained  about the  same for exposure of
 adults.  This is  because additional cancers have continued to occur in
 exposed  groups  at about  the same  rate  as in nonradiogenic cancer in these
 aging populations, in  accordance  with  the basic  assumption underlying the
 relative risk model.
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 1.4.39    EPA should consider in its risk estimates the incidence of
 nonfatal  as well as fatal cancers (A.a-38,  D-ll).

 Response:   Data  on the  incidence of radiogenic cancer is very limited
 in comparison with mortality data for excess cancer due to radiation.
 Nevertheless,, we estimated that incidence exceeded mortality by about
 a factor  of: two  (NAS80,. EPA81,  EPA84a),-and considered this ratio in
 proposing these  recommendations.  Information on excess cancer incidence
"among- irradiated A-bomb survivors at Hiroshima is now being analyzed
 by the  Radiation Effects Research Foundation.  When these data are
 published,  along'with:new estimates'of the  doses to individual survivors,
 it then may be possible to make more acute  estimates of the increased
 risk of cancer incidence due to radiation.   See also the response to
 comment 1.4.1.
 1.4.40   The estimate that 50% of cancers are fatal is not supported by
 U.S.  death statistics (A.d-22,  B.a-26).

 Response:   Death statistics do not provide information on the incidence of
 nonfatal'cancer.   The background report  discussed various ways of
 estimating the ratio  of incidence to mortality;  none are exact.  Table
 V-15,  page 200 in the.1980 BEIR report indicates a ratio of 2 for females
 and  1.54  for males.   In our 1981 "Background Report", page 41, we
 ast.imated  this ratio  as. between'2.0 and  1.5 -(average for both sexes).
 Reconsidering this question in 1955, the Agency has-concluded that
 incidence  cannot  be estimated with any more accuracy now, but it may be
 possible  to do so. in  the foreseeable future.   See also the response to
 comment  1.4.39.
 1.4.41    EPA states  that cancer is fatal "at least" half the time; this
 should  have  been stated "at most half of the time," since it is not
 expected to  rise from its current value (A.b-1).

 Response: Based on  information available at this time,  half or more o'f
 all  cancers  combined is fatal.   We do not know whether this will increase
 or decrease  in the future.   See the response to comment  1.4.40.
 1.4.42   The use  of measures of life-reduction provides better perspective
 than the  use of average early fatalities when comparing various types of
 risks (B.a-30).

 Response:   A number of perspectives are useful when comparing different
 kinds of  risk.  Along  with the average years of life lost to affected
 individuals, we have also included lifetime risk and the average years of
 life lost  in the  population as whole.   We think all of these measures
 should be  available for judging the hazards associated with exposure to
 radiation.
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 1.4.43    The weight  of evidence appears to favor the absolute over the
 relative  risk model  (A.d-13);

 Response:   We disagree.   The appropriate model for projecting future risk
 varies  with the  specific cancer being considered. "An absolute risk
 projection mo.del appears to. be appropriate only for- leukemia-, and,
 possibly,  for bone cancer.   For all solid cancers a relative risk model
 agrees'much better with epidemi'ological observations (Ka82, Jaa83).  The
 observational evidence, is that.absolute risks increase with the duration
 of" foliow-up, regardless of the age'at exposure, while the relative risk
 remains fairly constant (Ka82, Wab83)•  We note that these results are
 unlikely  to be very'  dependent  on the results of the ongoing dose
 reassessment for A-bomb survivors.
 1.4.44   A combination of a threshold system of setting exposure limits
 with  a risk-based  system is unappealing (A.d-22).

 Response:   Some  types  of radiation injury are nonstochastic, that is, both
 the likelihood and severity of response changes with dose,  and may exhibit
 a' threshold.  .Other injuries' are stochastic, that is, the probability of
 their occurrence increases with increasing dose without exhibiting any
.threshold,  and their severity is independent of dose.  While it may be
 unappealing,  each  type of radiation injury must be considered and
.controlled  on-a  basis-  that is appropriate to the characteristics of its
 relation 'to dose'.    '  •
 1.4.45    At  occupational levels of exposure,  the quantification of risks
 are  so  highly  uncertain that  the balancing of risks and benefits is not
 useful  to pursue  (A.a-13).

 Response: We  do  not  agree.   Reasonable estimates can be made of the
 impact  of various levels of  radiation exposure on those occupationally
 exposed.   It is more  often  the benefits of the radiation exposure which
 are  difficult  to  quantify.   However,  we believe both estimates are
 necessary to informed decision making.
 1.4.46  With the  assumption of  uniform whole-body exposure the difference
 of  1.6%  in life  expectancy is presumptive and impossible to detect
 (A.d-21).

 Response:   We agree that  it is unlikely, that a 1.6% difference in life
 expectancy could be accurately assessed in any practical follow-up study
 of  the occupationally  exposed.  It is not clear,  however,  what relevance
 this  observation has to the establishment of radiation protection limits.
 1.4.47    Fanned-by  the  media,  the public's perception of radiation risks
 is .grossly  distorted  from the  actual  facts (B.a-35,  B.a-39).
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Response:  The purpose of the documents supporting this guidance is to
attempt to provide factual material to assist the public in its evaluation
of radiation risks.        •   •
Iv4.48  .The radiation worker should be .allowed to decide whether or not
to accept the risks associated with radiation (A.a-31, A.a-36, A.a-41,
A.d-19, B.a-54).   •'
Response:  This observation can be made (and has been) for all industrial
hazards.  However, the Government has an overall duty to its citizens to
limit the hazards of the workplace in a reasonable manner, since economic
pressures could otherwise force unwise decisions by individuals.
1.4.49   The excess population dose due to living in Colorado (200,000
person-rem/yr) is about five times the collective occupational dose
attributable to the nuclear power industry in 1979 (40,000 person-rem/yr),
yet no one is recommending evacuation or restriction of growth in Colorado
(B.a-39)..               '

Response:  The above-cited excess collective dose for Colorado residents
(2,890,000 persons in 1980) is in error.  The correct value is about
106,000 person-rem/yr above average U.S. background exposure.  Residents
of Colorado .'are .not., exposed annually to incremental background terrestrial
and cosmic radiation anywhere near the. current mean annual occupational
exposure to nuclear power workers.  The average dose equivalent from
background cosmic and terrestrial radiation for the entire U.S. population
is 53.4 mrem compared to a low of 40.4 mrem in Florida and a high of 90.1
mrem in Colorado (Boa81).  Thus, the mean incremental, risk to Colorado
residents from such background radiation (an average increment of less
than 40 mrem/yr above the.U.S. average) is much lower than that for
nuclear power workers (650 mrem/yr) (Ku84).
1.4.50   There is real concern that the reduction in occupational exposure
limits for nuclear medicine workers will have the effect of increasing
risks to patients (A.d-21).

Response:  While this concern was expressed occasionally by medical
practitioners at public hearings on the proposed recommendations, all
agreed that risks at their own institutions would not be increased.
Rather, the concern was for other institutions which had less
sophisticated radiation protection programs.  If this guidance encourages
better radiation protection at such institutions, it will have fulfilled
one of its purposes.  We believe this can and will be done without any
increase in patient risks.


1.4.51   The full range of risk given by the 1980 BEIR Report (BEIR-III)
should be used in lieu of the risk quoted from BEIR-I (A.d-22).
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Response:  The delay in publication of the BEIR-III Report, coupled with
ensuing uncertainties concerning this report, precluded its detailed
treatment in the background report.  The Agency, however, did determine
that the risk information in BEIR-III was not inconsistent with the BEIR-I
risk estimates.  In formulating the final guidance we have included
assessments of .risk.based on applicable results from BEIR-III.  See also
the responses to comments 1.4.1 and 1.4.2.
1.5     -COMPARISON OF RADIATION RISKS WITH OTHER OCCUPATIONAL RISKS
1.5.1  Radiation risks to nuclear power workers are not higher than the
risks experienced by workers in non-nuclear industries (A.d-21, B.a-31,
B.a-34).

Response:  We agree in general.  The estimated average lifetime risk of
premature death for nuclear power workers exposed to 650 mrem annual dose
(i..e. 0.3-0.8%) is comparable to the average lifetime risk of accidental
death for all industry workers (i.e. 0.5%) (NSC84), assuming a working
lifetime of 47 years.  However, see the response to comment 1.5.4 for
further detail of accidental death risks to specific worker groups and for
discussion of comparability of accidental and cancer deaths.
1.5.2  EPA should consider the value of radiation use in its.judgment
concerning acceptable occupational risk (A.d-14).

Response:  This consideration is covered by the first recommendation.


1.5.3  The comparison of the risk of maximum radiation exposure with
average accidental death rates in other industries is methodologically
improper and overstates the comparative risks of radiation exposure
(A.a-19, A.a-40, A.a-41, A.d-18, B.a-3, B.a-29, B.a-30, B.a-34, B.a-39,
B.a-24, B.c-12, E.b-8).

Response:  We agree, and stated in the Background Report (EPA81) that such
comparison was not appropriate.  Without knowledge of the distribution of-
risks that lead to the average value, it is not possible to ascertain and
compare maximum risks.
1.5.4  The risk from occupational exposure to radiation is much smaller
than other occupational risks (A.a-12, A.b-2, A.b-16, A.d-22, A.d-40,
B.a-38, B.a-39, B.c-12).

Response:  One must be careful in making comparisons of radiation risks
with other occupational risks.  For example, there are significant
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 differences  in accidental death rates among different groups of workers.
 Similarly,  there are significant differences of exposure to radiation
 among different groups of workers.   Unfortunately,  appropriate data are
 not generally available so that the distributions of these two different
 risks can be compared.  However, using available data*  we can make the
 following comparisons.  -There are-large numbers of individuals who work in
.retail trades- and service professions and who experience very small risks
 of 'accidental' de'a'th- compared to the average risk of accidental death for
 all U.S...,workers. .._The estimated, incremental risk of premature death
 (0.01-0.03%) "for the average worker measurably exposed to radiation (230
 mrem) in-one year is less than the  average annual risk of accidental death
 to workers  in construction (0.04%), mining (0.05%), or agriculture (0.05%)
 and is higher than the average risk of accidental death for such workers
 as those in trades (0.005%), manufacturing (0.006%), or services (0.007%)
 in 1983 (NSC84).  We finally note that a premature cancer death attributed
 to radiation is not equivalent to a premature accidental death.  It is
 estimated- that the average number of years of life lost is 12-18 years for
 a premature  cancer death due to radiation, whereas it is approximately 35
 years for premature, accidental death (EPA81).  See also the response to
 comment 1.5.3.
 1.5.5  The risk at 5 rem/yr is significant, but not excessive compared
 to  other industries (F-3).

 'Response:  See the responses to comments 1.5.1, 1.5.3, and 1.-5.4.
 1.5.6  Using the 1980 BEIR results,  and comparing the maximally exposed
 radiation workers with the maximally exposed workers in other industries,
 results in comparative risk estimates almost an order of magnitude lower
 than the EPA.-risk estimates (A.d-18).

 Response:.  We  disagree.  Use of the BEIR-III estimates does not result
 in an order of magnitude change in these comparisons.  See the responses
 to comments 1.5.1, 1.5.3,  and 1.5.4.
 1.5.7  Comparison with the risks of other occupations is not a justifi-
 cation for the acceptability of occupational risks from radiation (A.a-38,
 A.c-7).

 Response:   The comparison of risks of other occupations with those for
 exposed workers provides just one basis for judgment.  We agree that
 this comparison alone cannot provide justification for acceptability of
 risks.
 1.5.8  EPA should establish a consistent level of protection for all
 industries utilizing hazardous substances (A.a-11).
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Response:  Many different Federal agencies have diverse responsibilities
for providing protection of workers.  In addition, the practicality  of
risk avoidance may vary'widely for different hazards.


l.;5.9  'EPA assumes that-it mus± provide for a risk-free work  environment,
whereas the intent of Congress was that the hazards of atomic energy be
controlled' (B.c-20). ' '':'•'.•  ' • "•     " '   •    '  '

Response: . EPA does "not make such.an assumption.


1.5.10  In all risk comparisons, EPA fails to combine radiation  risks with
non-radiation risks to the workers before comparing the risks to- the
workers with risks to other occupational groups (A.a-3).

Response:: .The EPA has estimated only the incremental risks of premature
death due to radiation exposure because that is the only hazard  addressed
by .these recommendations.  In any case, although values of average  risk of
accidental death are published for some specific types of workers for whom
statistics are collected and analyzed by the Bureau of Labor  Statistics
(BLS84) and by the National Safety Council (NSC84), these classified
worker groups are not also further identified as to radiation exposure.  To
this end, it could be useful to have sub-code classifications for workers
exposed to radiation and other carcinogens under the Standard Industrial
Classification (SIC) code of the Bureau of Labor Statistics (BLS84).  A
comparison of radiation .risk with risk of death from other carcinogenic
agents in occupational environments would be relevant, but adequate data
for such comparisons are not available.  See also the response to comment
1.5.4.
1.5.11  EPA should compare the risk of cancer for radiation workers with
that of other workers occupationally exposed to carcinogenic agents
(A.d-13, A.d-22, E.a-4)..

Response:  See the response to comment 1.5.10.
1.6      CONSISTENCY WITH AND VALIDITY OF ICRP-26
1.6.1    The EPA guidance should be consistent with the ICRP-26 system
of dose limitation; EPA has not sufficiently justified its deviations
from the ICRP recommendations (A.a-1, A.a-17, A.a-20, A.a-22, A.a-40,
A.a-46, A.b-16, A.b-22, A.b-23, A.d-13, A.d-22, B.a-6, B.a-12, B.a-13,
B.a-17, B.a-20, B.a-23, B.a-24, B.a-29, B.a-33, B.a-34, B.a-38, B.a-39,
B.a-46, B.a-48, B.a-53, B.c-12, B.c-20, D-6, E.a-5, E.a-6, E.a-16, E.b-1,
E.b-2, F-2).
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Response:  The Agency adopts most of the basic recommendations of ICRP-26
in its final recommendations.  See also response to comment 1.3.1.


l;6..2   . EPA should use ICRP-26 consistently "in toto" or reject it
completely (A.a-17, A.a-40, A.d-22, A.d-34, B.a-6, B:.a-32, B.c-20, E.a-2).

Response:  The Agency adopts in its final recommendations most of the
basic, recommendations of ICRP-26, but not the contents of ICRP-26 "In
toto."" This is consistent with the following statement of the ICRP in
that publication:  "Because of the differing conditions that apply in
various countries, detailed guidance on the application of its
recommendations, either in regulations or in codes of practice, should
be elaborated by the various international and national bodies that are
familiar with what is best for their needs."  In addition, the premise
of the comment (that different parts of ICRP-26 are interdependent) is
not correct. • Some recommendations,; such as those for overexposure, stand
alone.
1.6.3    EPA's- proposed guidance adopts- parts of the many principles and
recommendations of ICRP-26, but there are so many deviations in major
respects from the ICRP system that the intent and effectiveness of  the
dose limitation system is destroyed (B.a-29, B.c-20).

Response: ' We. do not agree.'' The basic'intent and effectiveness of  ICRP-26
is retained in the proposal and in the final recommendations.  See  also.
the responses to comments 1.6.1 and 1.6.2.
1.6.4    There is no consistent basis for the proposed limits due to
arbitrary adoption of only .selected parts of ICRP.  This leads to
confusion and a loss of the basic premise of equivalent risk (A.a-11,
A.b-22, A.d-13, A.d-14, B.a-17, B.a-23, B.a-32, B.a-33, E.a-4).

Response:  We do not agree.  In fact, the equivalency of risk was enhanced
through the separation of "genetic and cancer risk in the proposal.  See
also the responses to comments 1.6.1 and 1.6.2.


1.6.5    EPA's dose-equivalent limits are not based on specified
acceptable levels of risk, as are those recommended in ICRP-26 (A.a-46,
A.d-9, B.a-17, B.a-24, B.a-29, B.c-10, E.a-5, E.b-2).

Response:  We disagree.  The estimated risks corresponding to the proposed
limits were specified in the Background Report (EPA81).  In addition,
since the proposed limits were only marginally different from
corresponding limits in ICRP-26, they corresponded to the same risk levels
that are "acceptable" to the ICRP.  Also, see the response to comment
1.6.1.
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 1.6.6     EPA should withdraw  its  proposed  recommendations;  changes
 should  be made  only after  full  consideration of BEIR-III,  NCRP,
 ICRP-26,  and other pertinent  studies  (A.a-18,  A.a-22,  B.a-7,  B.a-34,
 E.b-4).      '                   '      '•

 Response:  -.The  Agency's  proposed  guidance  did  take into consideration
 the  cited studies.. See  also  the  responses  to  comments 1.4.1,  1.4.2,
•'1.4.3,  and 1.-7.1.     •     v    •  ••  '   .    / .•
 1.6.7     For  the  sake  of  political  expediency,  EPA ignores the
 recommendations of  the ICRP when  they  conflict  with current standards and
 practices (A.d-9, F-3).

 Response:   "Political  expediency,"  played  no  part  in the formulation of
 the  recommendations, either proposed or  final.
 1.6.8     The  100  rem lifetime  limit  is  inconsistent with ICRP-26 (A.b-22,
 B.a-46).       '    •        •••••.'

 Response:   Consistency' with  ICRP was not  a precondition for accept-
 ability.   The "100 rem lifetime dose" was not  intended  as a limit,  but
 as  guidance for limiting  career exposure.  In  addition,  it is not
 inconsistent  with the ICRP. acceptable risk concepts.
 1.6.9     The  ICRP-26 guidance  is  not  appropriate for regulation.   Some
 European  nations  that have  adopted  ICRP-26  have  found it  to  be unworkable
 (A.a-35,  B.a-12).

 Response:- We are  aware  that  some practical problems in implementing
 ICRP-26 recommendations  exist,  but  they  can and  are  being resolved.
 The  final guidance makes some, additions  to  ICRP-26 formalism to assist
 in the solution of such, problems  with respect  to committed dose.   It is
 evident that  some  "retooling"  efforts would be required to change from
 pre-exis.ting  radiation protection systems.   It is also clear,  however,
 that  the  ICRP system has now  gained almost  universal acceptance in the
 international community.  See  response to comment 1.6.2.
 1.6.10    ICRP-26 concepts  cannot  be  effectively  applied  for dose  evalu-
 ation of  long-lived  emitters  such as  the  actinides  (E.b-7).

 Response:  We  disagree,  in general,  although  some difficulties  do exist.
 Although  the prospective control  of  such  radionuclides is  practicable,
 the  sensitivity of available  human assay  techniques  is only marginally
 adequate  with  regard  to  retrospective  assessment of  dose to individual
 workers.   The  final  recommendations  recognize this  difficulty and provide
 for  practical  means  of implementation.
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1.6-11   EPA's adoption of ICRP methods results in a  proposed  system of
guidance based on limiting the prospective dose and in which the  retro-
spective dose is irrelevant.  Since all dosimetry programs measure  retro-
spective dose this leads to confusion in the  proposed guidance (E.a-5).

Response:  This is. not the. case.  . The final recommendations provide  that
future exposure of.the worker be  appropriately managed where assessment of
actual intakes* of 'radioactive materials shows conditions for limitation of
intake (past) have not been met.  In further  response to this  comment, we
offer'the following quotes from ICRP-26 (page 16):  "In principle,  the use
of the dose-equivalent commitment concept does permit the dose equivalent
received in a single year to exceed the annual limit  (e.g., in the  case of
an intake in 1 year of a material of long effective half-life,  followed by
an intake in the next year equal  to an ALI of a material of short
effective half-life).  In practice such situations will be rare and  the
dose equivalent -during any year in excess of  the annual limit  will
normally be small...."  "The dose-equivalent  limits should not be regarded
as a dividing line between safety and danger; when limits have been
exceeded by a small amount it is  generally more significant that  there has
been a failure of control than that one or more individuals have  slightly
exceeded a certain agreed dose."  See also the response to comment  2.1.11.
1.6.12   ICRP-26 reverses the trend for reducing radiation exposure  to
workers> . It_recommends changes that would increase exposures  to  sensitive
organs where.radionuclides are'deposited' in one organ alone  (C-6).
         ' •    .                                                     •
Response:  Although the statement may be true  for  some  limited  examples,
the reverse is true for the majority of situations.  The organ  dose  limits
in the current (old) system were not set on the basis of equivalent  risks.
ICRP-26, however, limits the annual dose to a given organ on the  basis  of
its weighted .stochastic risk .(genetic plus somatic),, relative  to  that of
whole-body,, and additionally (when applicable) restricts it to  a  limiting
dose of 50 rems (15 rems to lens of eye) to prevent non-stochastic effects.
Consequently, some derived limits for radionuclides increase and  others
decrease.  However, even in the case of a numerically higher derived  limit
workers would not necessarily be subject to higher doses.  The  ALARA
principle is still a radiation protection requirement.
1.6.13-  The ICRP-26 limit of 50 rems per year for single organ exposure
cannot be shown to adequately protect worker health  (C-6).

Response:  This limit applies to non-stochastic risks only, and the
commenter does not supply any evidence that such risks are  significant  at
this dose.  Also, see the response to comment 1.6.12.
1.6.14   Nearly all members of the ICRP have been employees of
governmental atomic energy agencies or have worked in government-related
laboratories .and are unlikely to be inclined to reach conclusions  that
make nuclear energy more expensive or difficult (A.a-38).
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Response:  The Agency concluded that an overall limit of 5 rem/yr was
appropriate independent of ICRP recommendations.
1.7,.. .. .CONSISTENCY WITH NCRP
1-. 7..1 .-v-'The proposed limits should.be consistent with the  recommendations
of the NCRP (A.a-15, A.b-15, A.b-16, A.b-22, A.d-9, A.d-12, A.d-22,
A.d-34, A.d-15, A.d-22, B.a-5, B.a-32, B..a-34, B.a-53, E.a-5, E.a-7,
E.b-4).

Response:   In formulating the proposed recommendations, the Agency  took
NCRP recommendations into consideration.  We have also consulted with  the
NCRP in our consideration of final recommendations.  However, the Agency's
final recommendations are based on ICRP recommendation and cannot at the
same time adhere strictly to all of the recommendations of NCRP.  (There
is no legal.requirement for such consistency of Federal radiation
protection guidance.)  We do adopt, however, those elements of NCRP
recommendations 'that are appropriate', such as their recommendations
concerning exposure of the unbor-n, and these recommendations provide
overall protection consistent with NCRP recommendations.


1.7.2    The proposed changes in the RPGs should be reviewed and approved
by the NCRP before any significant changes are promulgated  (A.a-40,
A.b-15, A.d-9, A.d-22, B.a-34, E.a-5, E.b-4).

Response:   See the response to comment 1.7.1.
1.7.3    Both the ICRP arid NCRP are'reviewing their radiation protection
standards; adopting new RPGs before the positions of the scientific
community are established is not needed and will not improve personnel
safety (B.a-24, B.a-34).

Response:  Both ICRP and NCRP have  their current recommendations under
continuing review.  The existing Federal radiation protection guidance for
occupational exposure has not been  changed since its approval in 1960.
EPA, in view of its responsibilities, considers it appropriate to review
the guidance, and to update it in light of its findings and of significant
advances since 1960.  We have concluded that changes are needed and will
improve radiation protection of workers.
1.7.4    The EPA method of calculating radiation exposure, based on  the
1977 recommendations of the ICRP, has not been recommended for use by  the
NCRP (E.a-5).

Response:  See the response to comments 1.7.1 and 1.7.2.
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 1.7.5   .  The NCRP,  as. well as other scientific advisory groups, have, found
 after  continuing review that there is no need for a downward revision of
 the  RPGs  (B.a-12,  E.b-4).                     .  '

 Response:   The comment is  incorrect.   The NCRP has recommended adoption of
 a 5--rem/yr limit-.   Se.e also the response to comments 1.3.1, 1.6.12, and
. l.T.i.  .  ..   .  -      .  '  .       .    .      '        "   '
 1.7.6 •   The proposed organ limits differ from the limits accepted by the
 NCRP (B.a-14).               .

 Response:   See  the response to comment 1.6.12.
 1.7.7    The 100 rem lifetime limit is inconsistent with NCRP recommen-
 dations (A.b-13,. A.b-22,  B.a-38).

 Response:   See the response to comment 1.6.8.


 1.7.8    Scientists working in the NCRP have a number of potential biases
 due  to  their affiliations;  these biases make them less appropriate
 arbitrators of the risks  that other individuals should accept than
 scientists, whose., .livelihoods are not so. directly related to the day-to-day
 use  of  radiation (A.a-38).    '       '"''••

 Response:   The recommendations were based on EPA's independent assessment.
 1.8     • COORDINATION'WITH, OTHER U.S. AGENCIES.
 1.8.1  There is a need to develop one set of guidelines applicable to all
 Federal agencies (A.b-20, A.d-8, A.d-27,  B.a-3, B.a-8, E.a-2, E.a-3,
 E.a-4,  E.b-1).

 Response:   These recommendations for Federal radiation protection guidance
 for occupational exposure are applicable  to all Federal agencies.
 1.8.2    EPA's proposed guidelines are inconsistent with NRC's recently
 promulgated regulations.  The discrepancies should be resolved (A.d-14,
-A.d-29,  A.d-40).

 Response:  The NRC has only recently, December 20,1985, proposed its draft
 revisions to 10 CFR Part 20 (NRC85); final promulgation is not likely to
 occur in less than several years.  In any case, NRC will revise its
 regulations as necessary to conform with newly approved Federal guidance.
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1.8.3    EPA's proposed guidance  is too restrictive.   Standards  should  be
set by the federal agencies; generic guidelines for these  standards  should
be written by EPA (D-10)..           •  ."         .                 _

Response:  The division of responsibility proposed by'the  commenter  is
that actually, in effect.  EPA's statutory responsibility in  the  area of
radiation protection for  occupational exposure consists of making
recommendations to the-President  for the guidance of  Federal agencies in
their formulation of radiation standards.  Regulatory Federal  agencies
translate this guidance into regulations.
1.8.4    The following sentence should be added for clarification:   "These
proposals have not had a formal review by these agencies and,  therefore,
they do not carry the endorsement of these agencies"  (E.a-4).

Response:  In the section titled "Previous Actions by EPA" of  our  proposed
guidance (46 F.R. 7836), we stated:  "These agencies, which have not
formally endorsed these recommendations, will formally review  final
proposals when they are developed following public review."
•1.8.5    EPA should clarify the role to be played by the  Interagency
Working Group during the remaining phases of  this review  (E.a-4).

Response:'  In 'the'section titled "Previous Action by EPA"'of our  proposed
guidance (46 F.R. 7836), we st.ate that the role of  the  "Interagency work
group" is an advisory one:  "In developing these proposals, we have also
consulted with the technical staffs of the Federal  agencies that  regulate
or influence the regulation of occupational exposure, and will continue
this consultation in developing final recommendations."   The final
recommendations represent the result of this  consultation with affected
Federal agencies.
1.8.6    All federal .agencies concerned with radiation  should  have  the.
technical capability for independent evaluation of scientific  evidence
upon which the standards to minimize exposures to radiation  rest  (A.a-38).

Response:  We agree that this would be desirable, to the extent required
to carry out their responsibilities.
1.9      ECONOMIC COSTS AND COST/BENEFIT-
1.9.1    EPA's estimate of total cost to comply with regulations
($35 million) is simplistic, theoretical, and/or wholly unrealistic
(A.a-3, A.a-13, A.a-31, A.d-9, B.a-5, B.a-9, B.a-28, B.a-33, B.a-46,
B.c-22).
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Response:  EPA funded an independent study, "Analysis of Costs for
Compliance with Federal Radiation Protection Guidance for Occupational
Exposure; Volume I: Cost of Compliance with Proposed Radiation Protection
Guidance for Workers, and Volume II: Case Study Analysis of the Impacts of
Proposed Radiation Protection Guidance for Workers (November 1983)," to
provide cost estimates for the proposed guidance (EPA83a-)«  In. addition,
the NR.C funded a similar -study, "Cost of Compliance with Occupational
Exposure Revisions to 10 CFR. Part 20" (December 1982)," to provide
estimates for. implementation of Federal guidance (NRC82).  These cost
analyses by Jack Faucett Associates and S. Cohen Associates, Inc. (JFA/SCA)
are based on case studies of representative establishments in conjunction
with industry profiles and are extrapolated to the entire private industry
sector.  Several cost estimates were updated for the NRC as a result of
changes to draft revisions of 10 CFR Part 20 (Coc83, Lad84).  Some of the
estimated costs are attributable to changes in guidance, while others are
attributable to regulatory updates necessitated by changes in scientific
information; these are discussed below.

         The summary costs for implementation of new recommendations
include NRC licensed operations in Federal agencies, but do not include
activities of•Federal agencies exempted under the Atomic Energy Act.  To
confirm that there are no unusual new requirements for Federal agencies
that will require above normal program costs, EPA's case studies (EPA83a)
included two Department of Energy facilities, Rocky Flats Plant and Idaho
National Engineering. Laboratory, where the normal operations include
routine bioassay programs for surveillance of workers subject to internal
exposure. -These were selected, to assess unusual costs where the greatest
impacts would be expected in implementing the final recommendations.
Because the workers are not currently exceeding the annual effective dose
equivalent of the final recommendations from combined internal and external
exposures and since the affected agencies routinely update their radiation
safety programs, the associated costs would be part of normal operations.

         Costs of. implementing the 5-rem limit (0.3 $M initial plus
0.75 $M annually), ALARA (2.16 $M initial plus 1.48 $M annually), and the
new limits for the unborn (0.06 $M annually) are shown in the first three
entries in the table below.  The JFA/SCA cost estimate for instruction on
levels of risk (9.87 $M annually) is high, since much of this instruction
is possible within existing programs and/or with appropriate written
materials.  In addition, only new workers would lead to recurring annual
costs.  We have assigned 60% of the JFA/SCA cost estimate to recurring
annual costs.

         There normally are some costs due to revision of manuals and
procedures for carrying out new regulations.  However, the JFA/SCA
estimates of costs for manual/procedure revisions (10.74 $M initial only)
are primarily for implementation of new dosimetric models and summation of
internal and external doses.  These costs are not attributable to changes
in guidance; they would also be incurred under existing guidance.
Therefore, costs for manual/procedure revisions (shown in parenthesis) are
omitted from the total.
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                 Table 3.  ESTIMATED IMPLEMENTATION COSTS
                        (thousands  of  1982 dollars)
One-time .
Initial
     Annual
  Provision
    Change
   $300
  $2160
  $3950

($10740
      $750'

       $60

     $1480
     $5920
**
 5  rem limit

 Unborn (0.5  rem
 limit)
 ALARA program
 Levels of  risk
.instruction
 Manual/procedures
 revision
Reduction from 12 to 5 rem
maximum dose.
New requirement.

Re-emphasized requirement.
New requirement.

New dosimetric models
(update under 1960 guidance)
  •$6410'.'. '  $8210 .
                •Total
   These values are high, since they are based on hiring experts to con-
   duct instruction.  Much of this instruction should be possible within
   existing programs and/or with appropriate written materials.  Initial
   costs for all workers need not be repeated; only new workers generate
   recurring annual costs.  Thus, only 60% of the JFA/SCA annual cost
   estimate ($9,870,000) has been assigned to recurring annual costs.
**
   Only a very small fraction of this cost is attributable to proposed
   changes in Federal guidance, since these costs are almost wholly
   generated by the need to update allowed values of radionuclide airborne
   concentrations (to conform to new scientific information) and to sum
   internal and external doses; these changes would also be required under
   existing guidance.
     Some costs are attributable to new monitoring needs (due to changes
in scientific data that reduce limiting values of radionuclide
concentrations in air or water) or to summation of external and internal
exposure.  Since these are necessary under existing guidance, the JFA/SCA
cost estimates for internal exposure monitoring (8.7 $M initial plus
4.1 $M annually), retraining (3.61 $M initial), recordkeeping (3.67 $M
initial plus 0.14 $M annually), and reporting (0.18 $M annually) are not
due to new provisions and, therefore, not included in Table 3.

     The total estimated costs attributable to changes in guidance are
therefore a first-year total cost of $14.62 million and subsequent annual
costs of $8.21 million.  Since the estimated costs of instruction on levels
of risk are believed to be too high, realistic costs of about $10 million
in the first year, and about $5 million annually, thereafter, appear more
likely.
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1.9.2    Administrative detail/recordkeeping will be a significant  portion
of the costs that would occur should the regulations be promulgated
(A.a-10, A.b-15, B.a-32, B.a-37, B.a-48, B.b-1).

Response:.  We agree that there would have been additional administrative
detai-1/recordkeeping costs associated .with .implementation of  the  proposed
recommendations.  However,, the final recommendations do not lead  to such
additional costs.  While it is true that the NRG proposed revision  of  10
CFR 20 (NRC85)' will lead to costs for manual/procedure revisions, these
costs would occur under existing guidance and are not attributable  to
changes in Federal guidance.  See the response to comment 1.9.1.
1.9.3    The additional cost to U.S. industry inhibits its ability  to
compete with foreign producers (B.c-22).

Response:  We disagree.  Workers around the world have experienced  levels
of exposure comparable to those of U.S. workers (UN77, UN82) and operate
under, regulations requiring levels of protection comparable to  those
recommended here for U.S. workers.
1.9.4    To remove flexibility, such as stated on p. 7838 (46 F.R. 7836)
for the overall cumulative limit  [5 (N-18) rems] will result in more
unnecessary regulatory procedures at increased cost to  the taxpayer and
consumer (A.a-31).      '                          '

Response:  We disagree.  We do not believe that repeated exposures at  or
near the 3 rem quarterly limit in a given year are justified in view of
the estimated risks.  Removal of  the 5(N-18) rems and 3 rem quarterly  dose
limitations leads to small increased hiring/training of some additional
workers.  Although those workers  eligible under the 5(N-18) cumulative
dose limitation to receive 3 rems per quarter and up to 12 rems per year
will no longer be allowed, to exceed 5 rems per year, no single job
currently requiring 3 rems will be affected by the new limitation.


1.9.5    Training of additional workers will be costly, and will actually
lead to increased risks, as more workers will be exposed, raising the  col-
lective dose.  Further, there is  a shortage of workers able to qualify as
inspectors (A.d-40, B.a-21, B.a-28, B.a-37, B.a-44,  E.a-3, E.b-6, E.b-55).

Response:  Where additional workers are necessary there will be incremen-
tal costs for workers and their training.  The total costs estimated for
meeting the 5 rem limit are $300  thousand (initial)and $750 thousand
(annual) (NRC82).  We do not believe that there will be increases in
collective dose or risk as a result of final recommendations (see the
response to comments 2.7.2 and 2.7.6).  In addition, some period of time
will elapse between Presidential  approval and regulatory implementation of
the guidance, so that the training of new workers can be anticipated and
carried out over a reasonable period of time; the NRC regulatory implemen-
tation proposes a five year period (NRC85).  See the responses to comments
2.3.5 and 2.7.4.

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1.9.6    The present economic situation of  the U.S. makes  these
recommendations particularly ill-timed and  unjustifiable  (A.a-3,  A.d-21,
A.d-25, A.d-31, B.a-26, B.a-54).

Response:  The incremental costs of implementing  the  new  recommendations
are.small fractions of existing costs of radiation protection  or  health
and safety programs.  Furthermore, such costs are inherent to  an
acceptably safe program for workers, regardless of economic situations.
1.9.7    The cost of  the EPA recommendations  is  not  justified  as  the
resultant benefits are not recognizable, or are  insufficient to justify
the cost (A.a-31, A.a-34, A.a-41, A.a-46, A.b-10, A.d-21, A.d-27,  A.d-40,
B.a-21, B.a-28, B.a-54, B.b-3, B.c-9, B.c-12, D-2, E.a-2).

Response:  These recommendations are  the result  of over  ten years  of
extensive, review and  deliberation by  Federal  agencies and other interested
parties.   The recommendations are  in accord  with the internationally-
accepted recommendations of ICRP-26.  We expect  that the implementation of
this' guidance will lead to appropriate  protection of the unborn and  to few
workers approaching the annual limiting effective dose equivalent  of  5
.reins and that overall exposure to workers will decline.  The latter
benefits should be readily documentable after the new limits go into
effect.  See also the response to comment 1.11.19.
1.9.8 '   We suggest that the EPA perform a cost benefit analysis before
releasing these recommendations (A.a-11, A.a-13, A.a-23, A.b-11, A.b-17,
A.d-14, A.d-31, A.d-35, A.d-40, B.a-17, B.a-29, B.b-5, B.c-20,  D-2,  E.a-5,
E.a-6, E.b-5, E.b-6, E.b-9).

Resppnse.:  The EPA has conducted an assessment of  the  estimated costs  of
implementation and expected benefits.  See the responses to comments
1.9.1, 1.9.2. 1.9.5, 1.9.7, 1.9.11, 1.9.13,  1.9.16,  and 1.9.17.
1.9.9    Presidential Executive Order 12291  requires cost  benefit"
assessment before the release of regulations  that may  have a  major  effect
on the public.  EPA did not supply this analysis.   (A.b-4,  A.d-25,  A.d-27,
B.a-14, B.a-32, B.a-38, B.a-48 B.c-2, B.c-22).

Response:  Executive Order 12291 applies only to rules (regulations)  that
may have a major impact on the economy ($100 million or more  per year);
would result'in major increases in prices and costs; or would have
significant adverse effects on competition,  employment, investment,
productivity, or innovation.  We have judged  these  recommendations  would
not qualify under any of  these criteria.
1.9.10   Money could be more effectively spent on worker safety  than  by
reducing one cancer death at a cost of  fcl million (EPA estimates  reducing
cancer deaths by 35 at a cost of $35 million)  (A.a-12, E.a-5).
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Response:  Agency guidelines  suggest  that  the  value  of  a statistical life
be established in the range-of  $0.4 to  7.0 million in 1982 dollars
(EPA83b).  The value cited  falls within this range.
•1.9.11. /The added cost.of one  person  to  the  radiation  safety programs of
hospitals; alone.is estimated.at $40 million.   This  assumes 2,000 new
hospital  hires '(radiation protection personnel)  @$20,000/hire =
$40-million (A.d-14,. A.d-40)..,;, •.,•..-.-. •-. • . .  ...

Response: -The--costs of implementing the  supervisory  requirements of the
proposed  Minimum Radiation Protection  Requirements  for  Range C were quite
large when .based on  a  strict interpretation of the  proposal.  However,
such costs will  not  occur due  to  elimination  of  these requirements.  The
estimated costs  for  implementation of  the final  recommendations by
hospitals, is $5.1 million for  the first year  and $3.1 million annually
thereafter (EPA83a, -NRC82).  These costs  include part-time consultants
(these eliminate the need for  hiring new  full-time  employees) for
training/instruction on levels  of risk.   Other costs  associated with
monitoring of internal exposure,  regulatory reporting,  and
manual/procedure, revisions are  riot attributable  to  new  recommendations;
they would be incurred as a result of  utilization of  new dosimetric models
and summation of internal and  external doses  under  existing guidance.   See
also the  response to comment 1.9.17.
1.9.12  • If dose.limits are  to  be  decided  by what  a  given industry can
afford, then EPA should abandon all attempts at estimating risk from
actual  data, and leave it  to the economy to set radiation levels (A.c-6).

Response:  The basis for setting the  dose  limits was  not  what  an industry
can afford.                  . .- .   .  .   .
1.9.13    Increased  labor cost  for commercial  light  water reactors  is
estimated at a minimum of  $152 million  per year  (B.a-3).

Response:   Increased  labor cost  to meet the 5 rem limit  is  estimated to be
$340 thousand per year for- all 1982 nuclear power reactors  (NRC82).


1.9.14    Additional costs  for  the Department  of  Defense  due to a reduction
of the RPG  from  5 to  0.5 rem are estimated at $12 million initially,  and
$4 million  annually thereafter (E.a-2).

Response:   Since the  dose  limit  adopted in final recommendations remains
at 5 rems,  these incremental costs will not occur.
1.9.15    Industry  should  estimate  the  cost .due  to  the  proposed
recommendations'(B.a-16).
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 Response:   The  EPA is  aware  of  one  such study.   An assessment of the costs
 associated  with the "Dosimetry  and  Recordkeeping Implications of the
 Proposed  Revisions .to  10 CFR 20"  was  sponsored  by the Atomic Industrial
 Forum,  Inc.  (AIF80).   This.assessment only included consideration of
 nuclear power plants and fuel fabrication, facilities.


 l:.9.1-6   ' Overall, medical, costs  continue to rise, while technical
.radiologic. workers; continue-to  be underpaid. . Understaffing in this area
 is  severe:   EPA's additional regulatory burden  would only exacerbate a
 serious problem (A.d-39). .     .    :  .

 Response:   The  final recommendations  do not result in significant needs
 for additional  full-time radiation  safety  staff.  Much of the training on
 the subject  of  worker  risk (EPA83a) can be handled by part-time
 consultants.  See the  response  to comment  1.9.11.
 1.9.17   .The  cost  to  patients,  hospitals,  and insurers will increase
 significantly if the  recommendations  are  instituted (A.d-27).

 Response:  We disagree.   With over 36 million admissions (and  over 200
 million  outpatient  visits per year)  to U.S.  community hospitals in 1980,
 the  incremental cost  to  admitted  patients  from implementation  of the final
 recommendations would average.less than $0.14 per patient for  the initial
 year ($5.1 million  first-year costs)  and  $0.08 per patient for each year
 thereafter ($3.1 million- annual costs).  These costs would be  more than
 six  times smaller if  outpatients  also shared these costs.  In  either case,
 the  incremental costs are trivial  compared  to average expenses at
 community hospitals amounting to  about $1,900 per admission and about $250
 per  inpatient day in  1980 (AHA81).  See also the  response to comment
 1.9.11.         ...
 1.9.18  .  Utilities would  need  to  evaluate  internal procedures,  retool
 recordkeeping, and re-educate  its work force,  all  at  significant  cost
 (B.a-37).

 Response:  We  agree  that  there will  be some  incremental costs associated
 with  these activities.  See  the responses  to comments 1.9.1  and 1.9.2 for
 proper  assignment of such costs to new recommendations or existing
 guidance.
 1.9.19    A study  for  AIF  indicates  that  for nuclear power facilities one
 could expect an adverse negative  impact  exceeding  the  benefits  to  be
 derived  from  the  proposed 100  rem lifetime  limit  (B.a-50).

 Response:   Although we do not  agree with this  conclusion,  the comment is
 moot because  this proposed lifetime dose figure does not  appear in final
 recommendations.
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1.9.20 .  The EPA should fully evaluate the impact of  its  recommendations
on waste management and disposal facilities and spent fuel  reprocessors
(B.a-32).  • \      .

Response:  EPA requested comments on its proposed guidance  from  all
interested persons, in,all -types of• activities involving  radiation
exposure of workers.  The comments received have been taken  into
consideration in formulating final recommendations.  Additionally, a
•two-volume report, was prepared for. EPA regarding the  impact  of the
proposed guidance and the cost of compliance with that guidance  (EPA83a).
The report was based on case studies which involved qbtaining first-hand
information from a number of activities representative of the spectrum of
diverse types of facilities involving occupational exposure, in  both  the
public and private sectors.  Included in these studies are waste-
management and fuel reprocessing.  We analyzed the results  of these
contract studies and took them into consideration in  formulating final
recommendations.  See the response to comment 1.9.1.
1.10  '   RECORDKEEPING  '
1.10.1   The recordkeeping requirements associated with the proposed
guidelines would result in increased.costs to those regulated, with
little-, if any corresponding benefit (A.a-11, A.a-26, A.b-IO, A.d-14,
A.d-39, B.a-d, -B.a-1, B.a-12, B.a-13, B.a-36, B.aySS, B.a-54, E.a-5).

Response:  Changes in recordkeeping requirements are best  inferred from
the final recommendations, which may entail some new recordkeeping costs.
However, our assessment showed that final recommendations  do not  lead  to
additional recordkeeping costs over those that would occur under  existing
guidance.  See-the responses to comments 1.9.1 and 1.9.2 for more detailed
discussions.
1.10.2   Eliminating recordkeeping by substituting  the  three-tiered
grading system is not advised, as it may invite noncompliance due to its
complex nature (A.a-5, C-6, E.a-5).

Response:  It was not intended to eliminate recordkeeping practices
through use of the "three-tiered" system.
1'. 10.3   All workers should be given access to their records and  the
records should be made available  for epidemiological research  (B.a-38,
C-6).

Response:  The recommendations contain explicit provision  for  informing
workers of their exposures.  There may be valid reasons why an employer
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 should  not  make  radiation exposure  records available to anyone requesting •
 them  for  epidemiological  or  other  research.   A worker's radiation exposure
 record  is in some  respects akin to  his medical record and should therefore
 be handled  accordingly.   When  these matters  are handled in accordance with
 law,  we agree that there  may be value  in using worker exposure records for
 e.pidemiological  studies, .particularly  if ..the .technical do-simetric data on
•which.those .records are based  are  also made  available to and used by the
 investigator. .However,' legal  aspects  of access to radiation exposure
 records- are. not  within the scope of these recommendations.


 1.10.4    Additional lifetime recordkeeping requirements can be instituted
 at minimal  cost  as the requirements differ little from current practice
 (A.a-38,  A.a-39).

 Response:   We believe  this is  true  for most  existing recordkeeping systems.
 1.10.5    The  impact  on  the  practice  of  medicine  will  be almost exclusively
 to  increase administrative  recordkeeping  (A.b-4).

 Response: . See  the  response to  comment  1.10.1 above.
 1.10-6   .The  elimination  of  Form. NRC-4  is  not .compatible with other
 changes -in  notification and  reporting requirements (B.a-38).

 Response:   Such  a  decision by  the NRC "is  outside the scope of- Federal
 radiation protection  guidance.
 1.10.7    Records  should  be-kept  on diseases and defects of worker's
 children  (A.c-6).

 Response:   This comment  is  outside the  scope of consideration for these
 recommendations.       .  .
 1.10.8    A central  data  bank  of  radiation exposure histories for permanent
 and  temporary workers  is  needed  (A.c-6).

 Response:   Such  a data bank could  serve  a number of useful functions.
 However,  this matter is  outside  the  scope of  consideration for these
 recommendations.
 1.11      MISCELLANEOUS
 1.11.1    EPA's  Federal  Register  Notice  is  inadequate in that it does not
 address  the  issues  raised  by NRDC,  et al.  (A.a-5,  A.c-3).
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 Response:'  We disagree.  The issues listed in the proposal (46 FR 7836),
 and discussed more completely and extensively in the background report
 (EPA 520/4-81-003),  encompass the issues raised by NRDC. .Additionally,
 and as stated in the Public Hearings sections of the Federal Register
 notice containing the proposed recommendations, "The issues to be covered
 •by these hearings, are those listed a-bo.ve under the heading 'Issues
•Addressed.'-'  "They include those listed in our advance notice of September
 '17,. 1979 (44 FR 53785) and additional issues suggested since then.  As
 indicated in that notice, both EPA and NRC have been petitioned by the
 Natural Resources Defense Council, Inc., to revise occupational guidance
 a-nd standards.  The  subject matter of these hearings encompasses the
 issues raised in those petitions (See 40 FR 50327 of October 29, 1979)."
 The Agency considered the NRDC petitions in formulating both its proposed
 and final recommendations.  Explicit issues are addressed in the detailed
 subheadings of this  response to comments.
 1.11.2  'By relaxing certain organ dose limits, EPA is inviting public
 criticism (A.a-3).

 Response:   We invited the public to- comment, on our proposal, and received
 a large number of both written and oral comments.  We did not anticipate
 all comments to be positive, and they were not.  However, as promised, we
 have carefully considered all of them in- preparing final recommendations.

 1.1T.3   Cost-benefit -analysis is irresponsible until all premature.deaths
 are eliminated (A.c-8).

 Response:   Cost benefit analysis after elimination of all premature deaths
 would be meaningless.  In the context of the models used to estimate the
 risk of premature death from occupational exposure to radiation,
 elimination, of all such premature deaths would require completely
 eliminating all such exposure.  This, if it were feasible, would require
 elimination of all.activities and radiation sources giving rise to any
 exposure.   Also,  see the response to comment 1.3.10.
 1.11.4   We encourage EPA to take to heart the comments of the Health
 Physics Society (A.a-41, A.d-1, D-10).

 Response:  The Society's comments have been taken into consideration.  See
 the response to comment 1.3.2.
 1.11.5   New York City and Boston should have been public hearing sites
 (D-5).

 Response:  We regret that due to limited resources available, we were
 unable to hold public hearings in New York City and Boston (as well as in
 other cities).  We conducted a carefully researched selection process for
 the hearing sites so as to afford an opportunity for attendance by as many
 and as diverse types of workers and interested parties as possible.
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 1.11.6   Submitted comments are not adequately considered (B.a-31).

 Response:   We have made every effort to do so.


r'l>ll;7.  . EPA should- incorporate notes-into the. recommendations (B.c-22).

 Response:   The "notes" are designated as such because they are of an
:-explanatory, nature,.' not- basic- requirements.  However, since they serve to
 clarify the intent or application of the recommendations, they should be
 considered to be effectively part of them.


 1.11.8   "Guidance" will become "regulation" (B.a-10, E.b-8).

 Response:   We hope so.  Radiation protection guidance is for the use of
 Federal  agencies in the-conduct of their radiation protection activities,
 which includes the development  and enforcement of standards. -Guidance,
 however,  is intended to be used with a degree of flexibility.


 1.11.9   Include the background report as a part of the guidance when
 completed.(A.b-5).

 Response.:   The President approves only the recommendations themselves as
 Federal  guidance. '-However, the background report may bV used to clarify
 th*e intent"of the guidance. •                  -
 1.11.10  Effective radiation safety is not related to legalistic endeavors
 of pressure groups,  government bureaucracy,  or political expediency
.(A.a-26)»  ...         •            .        .

 Response:  The comment is not necessarily correct.  Endeavors of "pressure
 groups" (environmental,  industrial, worker,  women's rights, etc.) often
 serve to call attention to the need for a change or to whether a change is
 desirable.   They are a legitimate part of the existing institutional
 framework of democracy in this country.  Radiation protection of workers
 is a legitimate concern of many of these groups.

    Further, an effective national radiation protection program that
 excludes the active  participation of government is difficult to envision.
 However, we certainly agree that "political expediency" does not serve a
 useful role in the formulation of radiation protection guidance, or, for
 that matter, in radiation protection in general.  See also the response to
 comment 1.6.7.                       /
 1.11.11  Independent researchers must be granted access to the atomic bomb
 casualty data (A.a-7).

 Response:   These data are not within EPA's jurisdiction.


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 1.11.12   The  recommendations  are  unfeasible  (A.d-40).

 Response:  We disagree.   See,  for example, the  responses  to comments 1.6.9
 and  1.6.10 regarding  specific provisions.


 1.11.13'  Why  did  EPA  request  comments  from the  public  before requesting
 them from other federal  agencies  (A.a-18)?

 Response:  Representatives" of the principal  Federal  agencies played an
 active role in the  formulation of both the proposed  and final
 recommendations.  Also,  see the response  to  comment  1.3.4.
 1.11.14   The  nuclear  power  industry  will  need  an approximately 2 years
 implementation  period (B.a-20).

 Response:  We recognize  that  certain types  of  regulated  activities  will
 require more  time  than others  to  implement  the regulatory  changes resulting
 as  a  consequence of new  guidance.  We-have  explicitly  recognized that
 regulatory agencies should  allow  an  appropriate amount of  time for
 compliance-with regulatory  changes.   See  the response  to comment 1.9.5.


'1.11.15   The  requirement to "provide an estimate"  if finally  determined
 personnel monitoring  results  are  not available- at  the  time of termination
 does--not  address the  issue  of  who  is responsible if the  estimates prove _  .
 incorrect.(B.a-38).                                    "           •         *

 Response:  No response required.   This comment is  apparently  meant  for an
 NRC proposed  rule.  The  EPA proposal did  not cover record  requirements for
 termination of  employment..
 1.11.16   The  guidelines  mean nothing  if  there  is  no  enforcement  mechanism
 (A.c-7,  C-5,  D-l).

 Response:   The  regulatory  Federal  agencies  (and those  of  Agreement  States)
 translate  Federal guidance into  regulations which they then  enforce.
 1.11.17   EPA perpetuates  itself  by  establishing  guidelines  that  will be
 enforced  by  EPA  (B.a-26).

 Response:  EPA has  a  statutory responsibility  to recommend  Federal
 radiation protection  guidance.   Upon  approval  by the  President,  Federal
 agencies  develop regulations  which  they  themselves  prepare  and enforce.
 In  occupational  radiation  protection  matters,  EPA is  not  one  of  these
 regulatory agencies,  and  hence it  is  not an  enforcer.
 1.11.18   A number  of  the  proposed  provisions  could  be  disastrous  to  the
 medical  radiation  field  (A.d-5).

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Response:  We disagree.  Large costs of implementation were suggested
by some commenters who made erroneous interpretations of the proposed '
recommendations.  See the responses to comments 1.9.11, 1.9.16, and
1.9.17.
1.11.19  The statement "on page 7'84l, "If this new guidance is adopted,
workers-should :be-harmed les'S in the future," is unsupported by any
evidence presented (A.d-5).

Response:  The .proper interpretation of this sentence is  that the Agency
believes that proposed guidance should lead to lower average annual doses
to workers.  The.  text also acknowledged that it was not possible  to
quantify this belief because EPA cannot predict how effectively these
recommendations will be implemented.
1.11.20  EPA should place emphasis on overall assessments of radiation
exposure as they appear in the perspective of a national radiation budget
(B.a-35).

Response:-  There is no "national radiation budget" nor, in our view,
should there be one.  All exposures should be justified on their own
merits.  This principle is basic to all radiation protection, and has been
for many decades.      .-  . .
1.11.21  EPA should propose an agency-wide federal ALARA program-designed
to reduce population exposure to ionizing radiation.  This should be
organized along co.st-benefit evaluations so as to achieve maximum
reduction in person-rem per dollar spent (B.a-35).

Response:  We thank the commenter for this suggestion, but feel  that  it  is
not appropriate for EPA to propose a detailed ALARA program for
occupational exposure.  (These recommendations do not address exposure of
the general public.)  The requirement for ALARA programs, however, is
contained in the recommendations and such programs are the responsibility
of the implementing agencies.
1.11.22  EPA should coordinate with other agencies of Government a 10-year
program targeting a national annual dose reduction of 5 million
person-rems by 1990 (B.a-35).

Response:  The comment provided a table giving a U.S. population dose of
45 million person-rems of which 22.5 million person-rems and 22.0 million
person-rems were for natural radiation and patient medical radiation
exposure, respectively.  Since national occupational exposure was only
0.15 million person-rems in 1980, such a program is not relevant to
occupational exposure, which is the subject of this rulemaking.
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•1.11.23   EPA should provide the American people with a timely annual
 report on radiation exposure,  similar to the NRPB document, Radiation
 Exposure  of  the UK Population" .(B.a-35).

 Response:  EPA prepares reports-on occupational exposure in the USA at
 f-ive-yea-r intervals.  The 'first report'- [EPA 520/4-8.0-001] was for 1975;
 the  second report, [EPA 520/1-84-005], covers 1980.  We.have found that the
 preparation  of these reports is time-consuming and costly and that some
.data-are  difficult.-to obtain.   However, since, radiation exposures change
 relatively slowly over time, an- annual report is not necessary.
 1.11.24  The EPA should establish an Industrial Advisory Committee with
 representatives  from industry and professional societies to advise on
 occupational issues relating to ionizing radiation (B.a-35).

 •Response:-  EPA provides' for input from such groups on the same basis as
 other special interests and members of the general public; that is,
 through the mechanism of public hearings and comment.
 1.11.25  EPA should form an Ad Hoc group, to visit operating commercial
 power facilities,  so as  to gain first-hand knowledge of radiation
 protection practice (B.a-35).

 Response:  -EPA'staff and that  of other Federal' agencies that participated
 in.the formulation of these recommendations include personnel with such
 first hand knowledge.
 1.11.26  EPA should recognize that its guidance on radiation protection
 does  not  have the force of .law in. the courts.  It should coordinate an
 effort  by federal agencies to develop information on radiation risk that
 would be  useful to the courts and to the Congress (B.a-35).

 Response:  We do recognize that it is not guidance,  but regulations (based
 on guidance) that "have the  force of law in the courts."  We have
 sponsored all of the definitive reviews of radiation risk carried out by
 the National Academy of Sciences since 1970,  and will continue to do so.
 1.11.27  The purpose of the guidance is to deal with risk to the worker,
 not  measure societal cost (A.a-38).

 Response:   An important component of societal cost is the total detriment
 to workers.  The  recommendations  seek to minimize this detriment (i.e.
 collective dose),  while also assuring an appropriate level of protection
 to individual workers.
 1.11.28  The draft proposals would not in the aggregate be beneficial for
 among  other reasons,  there are no directly identifiable health effects for
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exposure levels imposed by current RPGs and EPA declines  to  recognize  any
obligation to justify the costs of its actions to the users  of ionizing
radiation (A.d-40).

Response:  There is clear societal recognition and acceptance of  the need
to set radiation., protection standards at. levels lower than those  at which
health effects are observed.  Although there should be no directly
observed health effects, 'we-have estimated the range of health effects
anticipated, at occupational.levels of exposure.  See also the responses  to
comments 1.3.1, 1.4.6, 1.4.7, 1.4.9, 1.4.10, 1.4.26, and  1.9.1.
1.11.29  The proposed guidelines remove any of the flexibility  to
administer a total program of radiation safety (E.b-9).

Response: "We disagree.  No evidence has been advanced to support  this
comment. • We believe,'along, with, participating Federal agencies, that the
recommendations provide for appropriate flexibility throughout.
l.llvSO  Are federal agencies required to implement the guidance  (A.a-5)?

Response:  Upon the President's approval of EPA's recommendations,  they
become a Presidential directive to the Federal agencies.
1.11.31 .The proposed guidance will be binding upon radiation workers but
not federal regulatory agencies (A.d—14).

Response:   Federal guidance is not directly binding on workers,
regulations derived from guidance are binding on their employers.  The
recommendations are for. the guidance of Federal agencies in  the conduct  of
their radiation protection'activities, including the development of  their
regulations.  Also, see the response to comment 1.11.30.
1.11.32  EPA's proposal will be beneficial to individual workers at the
expense of society because of i'ncreased collective dose.   (A.b-4).

Response:  We do not agree that -there is any need for increased collective
dose under these recommendations, which replace the former  (3 rems)
quarterly limit with a higher (5 rems) annual limit.  See also the
response to comment 2.1.5.
1.11.33  Death certificates should tell how long a person had a given
disease (A.c-6).

Response:  None required.  Such requirements are outside the scope of
Federal guidance.
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1.11.34  Existing guidance purports to be 5 rems per year; this is more
myth than reality (A.c-6).

Response:  In existing Federal guidance (25 FR 4402) for radiation
workers, the limits for whole-body exposure are:  a dose of 3 rems per 13
weeks;- and an accumulated dose -(in rem)- of..5.times the number of years
beyond age 18 [i.e. accumulated dose'of 5 (N-18) rems].  Thus, some
workers.could be permitted to receive a dose of 3 rems for 4 consecutive
quarters-, that is,--12..rems in a given year.  The notion of "5 rem per
year" in connection with the existing guidance therefore refers to the
average' annual limit over a working lifetime and not necessarily to  the
limit in any one year.
1.11.35  X rays do not prevent anything; the semantics on  this point
should be cleaned up in the guidelines  (A.b-4).

Response:  The final recommendations have been carefully edited  to prevent
unintended implications.


1.11.36  The guidelines should be based on a more carefully critiqued
background document (A.b-4).

Response:- Comments- received on-.our proposed recommendations and
background'report were taken into'consideration in preparing final  •
recommendations and this response to comments.
1.11.37  What is the legal, meaning and definition of the proposed Guidance
in regards to other government agencies and the private work place (A.a-5).

Response:  See the responses to comments 1.11.8, 1.11.16 and 1.11.17.
Federal- radiation protection guidance affects the private work place via
the regulations of cognizant Federal agencies (and Agreement States).


1.11.38  We question the authority of EPA to prescribe regulatory
approaches for all other Federal agencies (B.a-38).

Response:  In our proposal (46 FR 7836) we cited EPA's statutory authority
in the following statement:

       "Statutory Authority:  The Administrator of the Environmental
    ' Protection Agency (EPA) is charged under Executive Order 10831,
     Reorganization Plan No. 3 of 1970, and Public Law 86-373 to '...
     advise the President with respect to radiation matters, directly
     or indirectly affecting health, including guidance for all
     Federal agencies in the formulation of radiation standards and
     in the establishment and execution of programs of cooperation
     with States.'  This guidance has historically included both
     qualitative and quantitative formulations.  The recommendations
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     we propose here would replace  those portions  of  existing  Federal
     guidance that apply to radiation protection of workers, which
     were adopted in 1960 (25 FR 4402)."

EPA prepares and submits to the President recommendations  for  new Federal
radiation:-protection guidance..- Upon his approval,  these recommendations
become guidance to Federal agencies in the conduct  of. their radiation
protection activities.  Thus, it is not EPA, but the  President who   .
prescribes'-new guidance to--Federal agencies.  This  is  the  procedure
followed during and subsequent to the existence of  the former  Federal
"Radiation Council (FRC), whose functions were transferred  to EPA by  the
Executive Order cited above, under which the FRC was  abolished.  A
significant new feature.added by EPA to this procedure is  that of
providing the opportunity for public participation  in the  formulation  of
recommendations to the  President.
1.11.39 The establishment of a value of person-rem would  be  the most
important contribution the EPA could make to the development  of a  system
of dose limitations (A.a-40).

Response:  EPA has given some consideration to the appropriate value  for
the unit of collection dose, person-rem, in a number of its  rulemaking
activities.  We recognize that the choice of an acceptable value could, in
some respects,.simplify the, regulatory process.  However, in real
applications', 'different" values may be appropriate, and other
considerations are invariably also relevant to the choice of  an
appropriate level of control.  We have concluded that a fixed value  for
this parameter is not achievable at the time.
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                       SECTION 2.0 — SPECIFIC ISSUES
 2.1      LOWER RPGs
'Z.ll'l-'   The costs of' lowering the RPG'below 5 rems are not justified by
 any substantial benefit ,(.A.b-20,. A.d-19,  B.a-4, B.a-8, B.a-22, B.a-32,
 B.c-22,'E.a-6).' •   '         • '  .  "   '

 Response:  In .the  final recommendations,  the limit for the effective dose
 equivalent  is 5 rems, as  in the proposed  recommendations.
 2.1.2    There is no scientific reason to set the annual limit below 5
 rems (A.a-41,  A..d-12,  B.a-8).

 Response:   We  disagree,  since we assume a linear dose-effect relationship,
 not a threshold relationship:  However, the choice of an annual limit can
 not be made solely on scientific grounds.  See also the responses to
 comments 1.4.6, 1.4.9, 1.4.10, 1.4.14, and 1.4.26.
 2.1.3    The annual limits should not. be set below 5 rems (B.a-6, B.a-17,
'B.a-22,  B.a-26,  B.b-7,.' B.c-23,- D-4, E.a-5). '                       -

 Response:   See the response to comment 2.1.1.   •
 2.1.4    Setting the RPG below 5 rems is impractical, since some jobs
 require exposures near 5-.rems (A.b-18, B.a-8, B.a-32).

 Response:  See the responses to comments 2.1.2 and 2.1.9.
 2.1.5    A reduction in the annual limit below 5 rems would increase
 collective dose and health effects (A.a-42,  B.a-1, B.a-6, B.a-22, B.a-32,
 B.a-33,  B.a-48, E.a-6).

 Response:  We believe that this could occur only if the annual limit were
 established below 3 rems,  the current quarterly limit.  The magnitude of
 such counter-productive results would depend on how much lower than 3 rems
 the  annual limit were set.
 2.1.6    A reduction of the RPG to 3 rems would result in costs for
 equipment modifications,  etc.   A RPG less than 3 rems would impact the
 operational capabilities  of DOD (E.a-2).

 Response:  See the responses to comments 1.9.14, 2.1.1, 2.1.5, and 2.1.9.
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2.1.7    A reduction of the RPG to 0.5 rem/yr, 1 rem/yr, or 3 rem/yr would
result in an increase in the number of workers at a nuclear plant and the
associated costs would increase dramatically (B.a-48).

Response:  See the responses to comments 2.1.1, 2.1.5, and 2.1.9


2'.1.'8 •' 'Limiting lifetime accumulated dose is a "more viable" approach
than reducing.annual dose limits (A.a-49, A.a-50, A.a-51, A.b-18).

Response:  In part., we agree.  However, because a large majority of
commenters and Federal agencies opposed a lifetime dose limit, the final
recommendations do not specify a limiting lifetime accumulated dose.  See
also the response to comment 1.6.8.  However, the final recommendations do
address the recording and minimization of cumulative lifetime individual
dose.
2.1.9    Since 97% of all workers surveyed received less than 1 rem/yr,
the limit of 5 rem/yr is unrealistically high (D-l).

Response:  A number of commenters cited a need for a 5 rem/yr dose limit
rather than^a lower limit.  In the nuclear power industry commenters
testified that a 5 rem annual limit is needed for a small number of highly
skilled workers doing such specialized work as steam generator repairs and
steam generator eddy current inspections (B.a-1, B.a-8, B.a-28, B.a-37).-
Westlnghouse testified their experience suggests a further need for
exposures above 5 rem/yr for a small number of skilled workers involved in
nuclear power plant service (B.a-46).  They wrote: "Hiring or training
qualified replacement workers is difficult or impossible for many of the
complex skills and tasks involved ... that limits such as these would
severely restrict specialty workers to the point of making certain tasks
difficult or even impossible to perform (B.a-48)."  The result of not
utilizing experienced workers is increased worker exposure and/or costs or
increased length of power outages (B.a-34, B.a-44, B.a-46, B.a-47,
B.a-49).  In the medical profession, commenters said the limited number of
certain professionals, such as cardiologists, to conduct critical
procedures could lead to restrictions on the numbers of such procedures,
and that the current national manpower pool does not contain adequate
duplication of workers for certain skills (A.d-14).  In addition to the
difficulty of obtaining qualified personnel, we estimated associated
annual costs to be on the order of several hundred million dollars for
hospitals for a limit of 1-2 rem/yr (EPA83a).  A similar impact was
estimated for increased manpower, facility, and health physics costs in
some government research and development' programs (DOE80).

         EPA assessed the impact for an annual limit of 1.5 rems.  Although
risks to the highest exposed individuals would decrease, there is general
agreement that the overall risk or collective dose would increase, as
would costs for equipment and additional manpower.  We estimated a total
increase of approximately 6000 person-rems and almost 30,000 workers would
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be required, at a first year cost of over $100 million and recurring
annual costs of &400-700 million (EPA83a, DOE80).

         For the above reasons we concluded that there is a limited number
of situations -in which it may be justified for workers to receive annual
doses, up to. five rems.  Consideration .of the 1'ow level of worker exposure
under current limits, and the large'costs and difficulty of worker
duplication' in these areas led us to conclude that there is sufficient
reason.to retain a 5 rem annual limit at this time.
2.1.10   The RPG should be set at 0.5 rem/yr (A.a-38, A.a-44, A.c-6,
A.c-8, C-6).

Response:  See response to comments 2.1.5 and 2.1.9.
2.1.11   The annual dose limit should be 0.5. rem/yr, as 5 rem/yr does not
provide an acceptable level of risk (A.c-7).

Response:  The level of risk to the average worker under a limit of
5 rem/yr is expected to be less than the risk of accidental death in
industries considered "safe" (ICRP77).  The estimated average incremental
risk of premature death (approximately 2 to 5 in 100,000) for measurably
exposed (0.2'rem) U.S. .Workers in 1980. (Ku84) is comparable to the safest
industry group,' trades (averaged about-5 per 100,000 from 1980 to 1984),
and less than the Incremental risk of accidental death (11 per 100,000)
for all-industry workers in 1984 (NSC84).  The maximum annual risk at
5 rem/yr is approximately 1 per 1,000 for premature death from radiogenic
cancer.  The guidance further specifies that this annual risk should not
be incurred for a substantial portion of a working lifetime.
2.1.12   The dose limit to women should be 0.25 rem/yr (A.c-6).

Response:  We disagree.  There is insufficient difference between the
radiogenic risks to men and women to justify a lower limit for women,
except when pregnant and then for the protection of the unborn.  For this
case, our recommendations provide for protection of the unborn child
without economic penalty or loss of job opportunity and security to women.
See also the responses to comments 1.4.1, 1.4.2, 1.4.9, 1.4.21, 1.4.22,
1.4.26 and 2.13.6.
2.1.13   The RPG should be 2.5 rem/yr, with a quarterly exposure limit at
25% of the annual RPG (C-5, C-7, C-8).

Response:  See the responses to comments 2.1.2, 2.1.5 and 2.1.9.
2.1.14   The weighted sum of annual dose equivalents and committed dose
equivalents should be less than 1 rem (A.c-1, C-4).
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Response:  See the responses to comments 2.1.2, 2.1.5 and  2.1.9
2.1.15   The annual whole-body dose limit should be 1 rem, with  limits  to
the gonads of 1 rem, to the'eye lens of 1 rem, to the hands of 30  rems,
and to any other organ of 15 rems (A.a-1, C-4).

Response:  See the responses, to comments 2.1.2, 2.1.5 and 2.1.9.
2.1.16   The annual whole-body limit should be 1 rem, with  limits  to  the
gonads of 1 rem, to the eye lens of 1 rem, to the hands of  10  rems, and to
any other organ of 6 rems (D-5).

Response:  See the responses to comments 2.1.2, 2.1.5 and 2.1.9.
2.1.17   Given the proven hazard of radiation at all levels,  there is no
justification for exposure beyond background levels (A.c-7, C-6).

Response:  The possibility of risks from exposure at levels within the dose
limits is not, by itself, justification for shutting down all beneficial
activities that involve exposure to radiation.  Most employment carries
some attendant risks, and in most cases the observed risks of accidental
death are comparable to or greater than those estimated for average occupa-
tional exposure to radiation.  Also, see the response to comment 1.3.10.
2.1.18   The maximum permissible exposure to gonads and red marrow should
be reduced to 5 rem/yr (A.c-6).

Response:  The final recommendations adopt the limits specified  in
ICRP-26.  These values were chosen so that all types of exposure are
limited to approximately the same level of risk.  Also, see the  responses
to comments 1.3.1 and 1.6.12.


2.1.19   Whole body occupational exposure limits should be 0.5 rem per
year and the population environmental exposure should be limited to 25
millirem per year (A.c-6).

Response:  See the response to comment 2.1.9.  The subject recommendations
are confined to occupational exposure.  Other EPA standards (40  CFR 190
and 40 CFR 61) limit dose to members of the public to 25 millirem per year.
2.2      VALUES OF RPGs AND RIFs ONLY ALLOWED TO DECREASE
2.2.1    There is no sound technical basis for accepting only those ICRP
recommendations that produce more restrictive limits and selectively
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rejecting those that produce less restrictive limits  (A.a-41,  A.b-16,
A.b-18, A.d-9, A.d-12, A.d-15, B.a-6, B.a-7, B.a-9, B.a-17,  B.a-23,
B.a-34, B.c-22,- E.a-5, E.a-6, E.b-2, E.b-3, E.b-9, F-2).

Response:  We agree, in. general, and have deleted  this  provision.  However,
the 'proposed recommendation was. based o.n the -assumption that conformance  to
existing limits demonstrated tha-t such 'levels were achievable  and  "ALARA; "
therefore', no • justification existed for use of higher values.   In  situ-
ations.'identical ,Tor. similar .to those in effect in  the past  this observation
would continue to be true and higher values should not  be used,  since  the
final' recommendations' continue to require that ALARA be practiced.
2.2.2  •  Part b of Recommendation No. 5 has no  justifiable  basis  other
than the Agency's reluctance to change to less  restrictive  values,  and
should be deleted (A.a-41, A.d-19, A.d-21, A.d-40, B.a-13,  B.a-27,  B.a-32,
B.a-34, B.a-46, B.a-48, B.c-12, B.c-21).

Response:  See the response to comment 2.2.1.


2.2.3    In order to- properly allocate radiation protection resources
based on- risk, limits should be raised and lowered as the evidence
suggests (A.b-15, A.b-20, A.d-23, B.a-8, B.a-17, B.c-10, E.a-6, E.b-8).

Response.:'  We agree.  See, however, the responses to comments  2.2.1 and
2.2.8'    -..--.•...        .    '  -  .
2.2.4    The policy that limits be no higher  than  currently  in  use  will
result in confusion among radiation protection professionals  (A.a-6,
E.arS, E.b-8)..

Response:  The final recommendations do not contain  such  a provision.
2.2.5    The refusal to increase an RIF despite the indication  to do  so
tends to discourage research, since results  that  lead  to  an  increased RIF
would be ignored (E.b-2).

Response:  We do not agree.  However, see the responses to comments  2.2.1
and '2.2.8.
2.2.6    Reducing guides to levels that have been  shown  to  be  possible
will reduce the incentives to maintain exposures ALARA (B.a-29, E.b-8).

Response:  We disagree.  However, see the response to comment  2.2.1.
2.2.7    The ALARA criterion and not the arbitrary lowering of  limits  if
they can be achieved, should be used to reduce risk (E.a-6, E.b-5, E.b-10)
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 Response:   We  agree.   See  the response to comment 2.2.1.
 2.2.8    To raise the  MFCs merely because it can .be done without
 surpassing  the. whole body annual dose equivalent is contrary to the basic
 objective of radiation protection;  keeping- a-11 .exposures ALARA (C-l).

 Response:-  The MFCs and the ALARA principle serve two different
 functions.  , The. MFCs correspond, for normal circumstances,  to the limit on
 maximum committed dose-  The ALARA principle requires that  doses be
 maintained  as far below that limit  as reasonably achievable.  The
 importance  of maintaining exposures ALARA is emphasized in  the
 recommendations.   Under the ALARA principle, the calculational increase of
 a  regulatory MFC value,  per se,  is  not sufficient justification for then
 allowing the increase  of an individual's exposure.   See also the response
 to comment  2.2.1.
 2.2.9     Recommendation 5b suggests that errors in the past should be
 promulgated  into  the  future (A.a-40,  A.a-49,  A.a-50,  A.a-51, A.b-18).

 Response:  -This  is  incorrect.   The  proposal was based on the assumption
 that past  practice  demonstrated that  the previous  levels were reasonably
 achievable.   However,  see  the  response to comment  2.2.1.
.2.2.10    Recommendation 5b  applies  ALARA separately to each radionuclide,
virtually guaranteeing  a misallocat'ion of resources (E.b-2).

Response:  See  the  response to  comment 2.2.3.
 2.2.11   'The  real  harm of  constantly "ratcheting" limits is the
 inisimpression given  to the general  public;  namely, "If there isn't any
 harm  in radiation  exposure,  why  are the  limits constantly being lowered"
 (A.a-41)?

 Response:   Although  it is  a basic assumption that some harm is associated
 with  any radiation exposure,  we  did not  use the "ratcheting" approach.
 Under the  system of  dose limitation adopted in our final recommendations,
 some  of the new  derived limits are  higher and others  lower than in
 existing guidance.  These  recommendations,  as well as those of ICRP, NCRP,
 etc., are  based  on the belief that  there are risks involved in exposures
 at  any  level,  even at  the  levels within  recommended limits.  The limits
 are not to be considered a division between "safe" and "unsafe" levels-
 See also the  responses to  comments  1.6.11 and 2.2.1.
 2.2.12    If  EPA feels  unable  to  increase  limits,  the  lower values should
 be  listed as an advisory  list that EPA believes can be met in the cause of
 ALARA (A.b-16).
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Response:  -See the responses co comments 2.2.1 and 2.2.8.
2.2.13   We agree with EPA-that the ICRP recommendation should only be
adopted- in situations where current exposures are maintained or reduced
(C-2, C-6,.E
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recording lifetime doses to establish recordkeeping  requirements  that  will
help to minimize abuse of temporary workers.
2.3.2    Transient workers require special protection  since  they  do  not
admit their, exposure at previous plants,, are not well  educated, have small
regard for the.risks, .and frequently are in such a  financial  position that
if and when they develop radiation-related cancer their children  become  a
financial burden- to society (A.a-5)-

Response:  Workers who are able to circumvent  the rules and  regulations
designed to implement dose limits present a difficult  problem.  The  new
requirements for instruction on risks (including information  on the
specific risks of their jobs) and for recording of  lifetime dose  may lead
to rules that will reduce such occurrences.  It would  be  ideal to provide
protection for even those who, for whatever reason, wish  to  ignore or
circumvent regulatory dose limitations.  See also the  response to comment
2.3.1.
2.3.3'-   A partial solution to the abuse of transient workers  is  to
redesign reactors and improve shielding to minimize high dose  maintenance
jobs  (A.c-6).

Response:  Substantial efforts have been and are being made  to keep
exposures of both transient and regular.workers ALARA; these include
engineering efforts..  See also the response to comment 2.3.1.
2.3.4    EPA & NRC underestimate the number of transient workers and  the
doses they are receiving, and these workers may not be  fully  informed of
the hazards of radiation (A.b-21).

Response:  The EPA reports on occupational exposure in  1975 and 1980  do
not contain separate statistics on "transient workers"  (CobSO, Ku84).
Such workers at nuclear power plants are included in  the statistics for
all workers in the Nuclear Fuel Cycle category in these reports.   The NRC
has regulations designed to provide the same protection to all these
workers and to provide instruction on the risks of exposure to radiation.
Under NRC regulations, the dose record of any worker  at a nuclear  power
station is submitted to NRC each time he terminates employment at  a given
station.  These records are maintained by NRC.  See also the  response  to
comments 2.3.1 and 2.3.2.
2.3.5    EPA has not assessed the impact of its guidance on  the highly
skilled, but limited pool of transient workers.  The guidance would limit
the use of these workers, thus increasing total radiation exposure of the
workforce (B.a-46).

Response:  Although we have not carried out an independent study on this
matter, we have analyzed the reports of others, including those of the
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 Atomic  Industrial Forum (AIF80,  AIF84).   We conclude that the change of
 the  basic'limit  from 3  rems  per  quarter  to 5 rems per year,  will have no
 significant  adverse  effect (if any)  on either the highly skilled transient
 workers or on collective dose.   If any new workers must be trained to
 avoid exposures  greater than 5 rem. per year, the guidance recognizes the
..need for. an  appropriate .period, of time for implementation.  See also the
 responses  to .comments 1.9.5,  1.11.14 and 2.1.5.

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'2.3'.6  '  A'dose  limit should be  established beyond which documentation of
 a  transient  worker's year-to-date exposure record must be obtained
.(A.a-19, A.b-21).

 Response:  Appropriate  monitoring, maintenance of a cumulative record, and
 availability of  the  workers  exposure record on an annual basis are
 addressed  in the final  recommendations.   However, detailed implementation
 must be based  on procedures  specified in regulations by the  cognizant
 Federal agency.
 2.3.7-.   The-, current regulations  are sufficient to protect transient
 worker's  (E.a-5).

 Response':   Without  commenting  on  the validity of this comment,  it should
 be. noted that we  believe  the new  recommendations will lead to improved
 protection to all workers,  including transient workers.
 2.3.8  .   NRC,  not  EPA,  should  develop  strict  regulations  to cover
 non-nuclear  utility station employees  assigned to temporary nuclear duties
 (A.c-6).

 Response:  We  agree that  NRC is  the  agency responsible for detailed
 regulations  concerning  all  workers,  permanent and temporary,  at nuclear
 power  plants.   EPA is  charged  to advise the President on  appropriate
 recommendations  to Federal  agencies  applicable to the protection of all
 workers;  it  does not directly  regulate worker exposures to ionizing
 radiation.
 2.3.9  •   The  occupational  exposure  data base  used by EPA is questionable,
 since  personnel  monitor  readings  misrepresent whole  body doses (A.b-15,
 A.d-22,  A.d-28).

 Response:   The  significance and  possible shortcomings of the data used by
 EPA to derive exposure  statistics are  discussed  in our occupational
 exposure reports [EPA 520/4-80-001  (CobSO)  and EPA 520/1-84-005 (Ku84)].
 For example,  "A  monitoring device only records the dose it  receives...the
 recorded dose may  or  may not approximate...whole-body dose" (CobSO).   We
 believe, however,  that  these possible  shortcomings do not affect  the
 recommendations.
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 2.3.10   By using  the arithmetic mean  to  indicate  the  average  worker's
 exposure, EPA has  overestimated occupationally-related radiation risk
.(A.b-1).         .                  .                •     •

 Response:  We disagree.  EPA  Reports No.  520/4-81-003  (EPA81)  and
 No. 520./.4-80-001 (GobSO) .cont.ain 4!! essential  data, .including dose
 distributions, and explain  in detail the  methods used  in the
 computations. .For'.estimating' radi'ation risks,  the statistic of "average"
 .(arithmetic mean)  dose  is the relevant quantity for  estimating the
 detriment in a'group of known size.

         The problem may be one of  semantics.   We  have defined the term
 "mean" annual dose to be the  collective dose of all  potentially exposed
 workers divided  by that number of workers.  This may not be equivalent to
 the "average worker" referred to by the commenter.
 2.3.11    In some risk comparisons, EPA averages  in unexposed  workers to
make the  mean worker exposure appear lower  (A.a-3).

Response:  We 'believe-we presented a clear',  objective,  and  meaningful
analysis  of worker-risks.  These  risks-were  given  both  for  "all
potentially exposed" workers and  for just  those  workers "measurably
exposed."  See also the response  to comment  2.3.10.


2.3.12    The occupational exposure data  base is  inadequate, as monitoring
in many occupation's is nonexistent while in  others  it is  not  universal;
until badging is universal EPA  should err  on the side of  safety  (A.a-5).

Response:  There are, indeed, many difficulties  in making comprehensive
radiation .exposure analyses of  occupational  exposures in  the  United
States.   These are- discussed for  the period  from 1960 to  1980 in our
reports EPA 520/4-80-001 (CobSO)  and EPA 520/1-84-005 (Ku84). Although we
expect to make continued improvements in future  analyses, we  believe a
careful reading of these reports  will show that  the exposure  of  workers is
adequately assessed for the purposes of  risk assessment.
2.3.13   EPA should update  its  information  base  before  decisions  on this
guidance are made final, since  it does not  reflect  6  years  of ALARA
redu'ctions and occupational exposures  since 1975 (B.a-1,  B.a-29).

Response:  We have done so.  Recently we completed  a  comprehensive
reanalysis of occupational  exposure  for the period  1960 to  1980 and made
projections for  the year 1985  (EPA 520/1-84-005).   The  results of  these
analyses do not  differ  significantly enough from the  earlier analysis
(EPA  520/4-80-001) to warrant  changes  in the  proposed guidance.
 2.3.14   EPA overstates  the  number  of  radiation  workers  in medicine
 (A.b-4).
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Response:  In our report covering 1980 exposure, we use  improved  methods
for estimating  the number of workers  in medicine (Ku84).   These  estimates
indicate there  are 584,000 potentially exposed workers in  medicine,  which
comprise approximately 44 percent of  the potential exposed work  force  in
this country; corresponding figures in the report for 1975 exposures were
546,300 persons arid 49 percent .(CpbSO).. Revised estimates for 1975  are
485,000 persons and 44'percent (Ku84), which indicate our  original
estimates  (CobSO)' were only slightly  high.
2.3.15   Since the data base on dose to medical radiation workers  'is
deficient, it is difficult  to analyze  the  effectiveness  of  the  proposed
minimum radiation protection requirements  (A.d-8).

Response:  The proposed minimum radiation  protection  requirements  do  not
appear as such in final recommendations.   In  the final guidance, general
recommendations are used  to carry out  the  objectives  of  those proposals.
2.3.16   All nuclear licensees should obtain and take account  of
cumulative radiation .doses of  temporary workers before  exposing  them to
more radioactivity  (A.c-6).                 .   .

Response:  The  final recommendations encourage maintenance  of  a  cumulative
record of lifetime.occupational.dose.  However, such procedures are
specified, irr regulations and -regulatory guides of  the Federal  agencies,'
•such as -NRG.
2.4      OMISSION OF MEDICAL AND OTHER NON-OCCUPATIONAL  EXPOSURES
2.4.1    EPA should include guidance on medical exposures  (A.a-12,  A.c-8,
A.d-8, B.a-35).

Response:  Radiation exposure of all workers, including medical workers,
is covered by this radiation protection guidance for occupational
exposure.  But "occupational exposure" does not include exposure received
as a patient.  Medical exposure of patients to diagnostic  x  rays is the
subject  of separate EPA recommendations for Federal  radiation  protection
guidance (43 FR 4377), approved by the President on  February 1, 1978.
2.4.2    EPA's omission of guidance for medical exposures  can  only  be  the
result of political expediency  (A.b-8).

Response:  See the response to  comment 2.4.1 above.
2.4.3    If EPA's concern for somatic and genetic effects in  radiation
workers is real, diagnostic medical exposures must be controlled.
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Physicians cannot make risk-benefit judgments, as  they have no  idea what
occupational exposures their patients receive (B.c-21).

Response:  EPA is concerned about all unnecessary  exposure to radiation.
However, occupational exposure usually has no bearing on whether or not a
medical expo.sure is justified..  The, decision for each medical exposure
should be based on its own individual merits, without'regard to occupa-
tional exposures. ' (A" possible exception may occur when the non-stochastic
limits are exceeded.)  - .       .
2.4.4    EPA should require medical practitioners  to provide  patients  with
doses for each medical exposure.  Such information is essential for
intelligent career planning (A.a-8).

Response:  EPA does not have the authority to require medical  practitioners
to provide patients with a statement of the dose received in each medical
exposure.  See also the response to comment 2.4.3.
2.4.5    EPA should require informed consent prior to radiologic or
nuclear medicine procedures.  This would eliminate unnecessary  procedures
and reduce exposure to patient and worker populations.  '(A.c-8, A.d-8).

Response:  This comment is. outside the scope of this rulemaking on
occupational exposure to ionizing radiation.          '    '


2.4.6    Epidemiological studies require records showing  both occupational
and medical exposures (A.a—8, C-5).

Response:  We agree that this would .provide the most meaningful results,
all other applicable' requirements for such studies also being met.


2.4.7    The EPA should outlaw dangerous.practices in health institutions,
such as holding of patients during x rays, that cause radiation exposures
of workers (A.c-8).

Response:  To the extent that such practice represents unnecessary
exposure of workers, it should be avoided.  The ALARA provision of Federal
radiation protection guidance directs that such unnecessary exposure
should not occurt  However, it is the responsibility of regulatory
agencies, not EPA, to assure that ALARA practices are followed.
2.4.8    The Federal Radiation Guides should require the identification of
radioactive patients and require standard care plans to protect medical
personnel caring for such patients (A.c-8).

Response:  Such requirements would be useful for the achievement of ALARA
exposures.  However, the suggested requirements are most appropriately
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promulgated  by  Federal  and  State  regulatory  authorities  in their
regulations  and guides,  since these  requirements are of  a detailed nature
not normally addressed  by Federal guidance.
.2.4.9  '• Adequate  shielding, of  patients  and  medical workers should be
mandatory  (A.c-8)..    .    ,•    '  " •   .          . .

Response:"  See' the "responses  to comments 2'.4.1,  2.4.7 and 2.4.8.
 2.4.10    EPA  should  provide  guidance  for  x-ray  exposures  that would keep
 doses as  low  as  reasonable achievable,  and forbid diagnostic x rays unless
 other diagnostic procedures  indicate  such x rays  will  be  useful (A.a-5,
 A.c-6).

 Response:  ' See  the  responses to comments  2.4.1  and 2.4.11.


 2.4.11    The  EPA should  recommend  against routine pre-employment and
 annual x'.rays for employment screening' purposes (A.c-6, A.c-8).

 Response:   EPA has  done  so in its  Federal radiation protection guidance
 for  diagnostic x rays  (43 FR 4377;  February 1,  1978).
 2.4.12'  Medical  exposures  should  be treated  separately (A.b-10, A.b—17,
 A.b-26,  A.d-13, A.d-22,  B.a-20,*B.c-23).

 Response:   They are.   See  the  responses  to  comments 2.4.1 and 2.4.3.


 2.4.13   The  guidance proposed by  EPA should  include consideration of
 variations  in natural radiation levels and  the  many activities that can
 technically enhance  the  natural radiation background (A.a-10).

 Response:   Under  the  caption,  "Other Considerations,".in the preamble to
 our proposed  recommendations  (46 FR 7836) we  state:

         "These recommendations  apply to  workers  exposed to  other than
      normal background radiation on the  job.   It  is sometimes hard- to
      identify such workers, because everyone  is exposed to natural sources
      of  radiation and many  occupational  exposures are small.  Regulatory
      agencies will have  to  use care in selecting.classes of  workers whose
      exposure does not need to be  regulated.   In  selecting such classes we
      recommend that  the  agency consider  both  the  collective  dose which is
      likely to be avoided  through  regulation  and  the maximum individual
      doses  possible."
          We  recognize" that  there  are  wide  variations  in normal background
 radiation.   See  the  response  to comment  1.4.49.   Doses  received by workers
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 from-such radiation are not considered "occupational," under Federal
 guidance.  However, a variety of working environments can involve
 "technically enhanced natural radiation" levels.  Although the radiation
 involved is "naturally occurring," workers may have the potential for
.receiving significantly more than normal background exposure as a result
•of- their occupation and -therefore it is-considered "occupational
 exposure.,'.' • For' certain activities,  such as uranium mining and milling,
 this is'recognized as such and worker-exposure is controlled accordingly.
 In.-other.activitiesf .such as-air .transportation, some exposure of workers
 occurs  but it may or may not warrant regulatory control.
 2.4.14    The EPA should release the research information and data pertinent
 to occupational exposures caused by radon decay products in new energy
 efficient buildings  so that all significant exposure sources of occupation-
 al exposure  can be examined in evaluating the proposed guidance (B.c-1).

 Response: This involves an issue (radon decay products) that is not
 addressed by the proposed guidance.  However, EPA continues to gather
 information, sponsor studies,  and publish reports related to such exposure
 as suggested by the  -comment.  Although 'such exposure can be characterized
 as technologically enhanced, it is more properly considered as a generic
 issue  involving .the  entire U..S. population when indoors, regardless of the
 location  of  a workplace or home. .See also the response to comment 2.4.13.
 2.4.15    EPA should  withdraw the proposed guidance and concentrate on-the
 much  larger  and more dangerous  problem of indoor radon exposures (A.a-9).

 Response:  The Agency has  proceeded with the formulation of final
 recommendations for  new Federal radiation protection guidance for
 occupational exposure•because, we believe it is.needed and will benefit
 workers.   However, we agree  that indoor radon exposure is a major public
 health  issue, and EPA is conducting,  in concert  with other Federal
 agencies,  a  careful  study  of this problem and its solutions.
 2.4.16    Rather than set  extremely rigorous standards for indoor radon
 exposures,  EPA should relax  the  recommended guidance to reflect the
 growing, consensus  that exposures to low-LET ionizing radiation at low dose
 rates are less hazardous  than previously assumed (A.a-9).

 Response:  Standards for  indoor  radon exposures are not a part of the new
 recommendations for  occupational exposure (See the  response to comment
 2.1.14).   As  indicated in its background report, EPA makes use of the best
 available scientific information on the biological  effects of ionizing
 radiation.  This information includes consideration of low-LET ionizing
 radiation at  low dose rates  (See the response  to comment 1.4.1).


 2.4.17    Persons incidentally exposed,  i.e., the general public, should
 also be protected  by guidelines  (A.d-13).
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Response:  They are.  As stated in the preamble to the proposed
recommendations (46 FR 7836), the new recommendations "would replace  those
portions of existing Federal guidance that apply to radiation protection
of workers,- which were adopted in 1960 (25 FR 4402)."  Thus existing
guidance for the protection of the general public would continue in force.
2.5 •...  •- .OMISSION.OF UNDERGROUND MINERS AND OTHER OCCUPATIONAL  CATEGORIES
2.5.1    EPA should reconcile its recommendations with the Mine Safety and
Health Administration (E.a-3).

Response:  A close liaison is maintained between EPA and the Mine Safety
and Health Administration (MSHA).  MSHA is a member of the interagency
working group'formed by EPA to develop this Federal radiation protection
guidance for occupational exposure, and has concurred in the final
recommendations.
2.5.2    EPA should take note, particularly of highly damaging-alpha
radiation released in uranium mines, that doses to uranium miners are
calculated from air concentrations measured at regular intervals in mines
but which do .not. account.for. high individual doses (A.c-6).

Response:-  It is the responsibility of regulatory agencies to  require
types and frequency of measurements appropriate to assuring that
individual workers do not exceed the limit specified by Federal guidance.
We note, however, that existing Federal guidance for radon decay products
is not changed by the subject guidance.  See also the response to comment
2.5.3.-         ...
2.5.3    EPA should establish a RIF for uranium miners (in terms of rems)
consistent with the RIF's for other categories of nuclear workers  (C-5).

Response:  The existing guide (36 FR 12921) for limiting exposure  of
underground miners to radon decay products is not changed by the final
recommendations for Federal radiation protection guidance for occupational
exposure.  We intend, however, to review that guidance in the near
future.  In the meantime exposure of miners to radiation other than from
intake of radon decay products is governed by the new recommendations.
2.5.4    EPA should review the guide for exposure of uranium mine workers
as there may be serious adverse health effects at levels formerly
considered relatively safe (A.b-9).

Response:  As stated in the preamble of our proposed guidance  (46 FR
7836), "We expect to review the guide (36 FR 12921) on exposure of miners
to decay products of radon in the future."
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 2;5.5     What  radiation protection guide  applies  to  non-uranium miners.
 exposure  to  radon  decay products  and  how  does  it  compare to the uranium
 miners' guide  (A.a-10)?        ...

 Response:  .Although the Federal guide (36 FR 12921)  for radon decay
 products  (4.  WLM/yr) addressees  "underground uranium  miners,." it is applied
 by  regulatory  agencies  (e.g., MSHA, NRG)  to other classes of miners,  and
 workers in other employment  activities, for which that guide is
 appropriate..  ...........


 2.5.6     EPA should consider the  doses received by non-radiation workers
 in  industries  such as phosphates,  fertilizers  and the airlines (A.b-4).

 Response:  EPA was cognizant of exposures received by such groups of
 workers  (Co80,  Ku84) in the  phosphate (EPA76),  fertilizer (EPA76) and the
 airline (EPA74) industries,  as  part of the background information used in
 developing new recommendations  for Federal guidance  on occupational
 exposure.  See the response  to  comment 2.4.13.


 2.5.7     EPA should not allow transportation workers to receive radiation
 exposures higher than the  general public  (A.c-6).

 Response: . Many.transportation  workers are already protected to the same
''level  as  members of the public.  There are, however, transportation
 workers engaged wholly  or  significantly in the  transportation of
 radioactive  materials who  may receive higher doses.   EPA is not the'
 appropriate  agency to decide that  a lower dose  limit should apply rather
 than the  maximum permitted other  workers.   However,  Federal radiation
 protection guidance provides the  basis for such regulations by the
 regulatory agencies (DOT,  NRCj  etc.)  when they are appropriate for the
 protection of  such workers.
 2.6       OMISSION OF  EMERGENCY EXPOSURES
 2.6.1     Setting  guidelines  for  accidental  or  emergency  exposures  serves
 no  purpose  as  such exposures are,  by  definition,  uncontrolled (B.c-23).

 Response:   While  it  is  true  that accidental exposures  are  uncontrolled,
 the same is not  true for "emergency exposures."   Emergency .exposures are
 controlled  exposures involving doses  above  the established limits  received
 by  workers  in  assignments of an  emergency nature,  such as  a  lifesaving
 operation.
 2.6.2    Emergency exposures  should  be addressed  in the recommendations
 (A.a-18,  A.a-19,  A.d-9,  A.d-22,  B.a-20,  B.a-32, C-22,  E.a-5).
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 Response:  .Recommendation 10,  which  addresses  emergency exposures, does
 not  include  specific  limits.   This matter is left to the Federal agencies,
 to be  determined  on the  basis  of  the general guidance provided,  because
 they are most-knowledgeable  about, the specific situations under their
 jurisdiction in which emergencies.may occur;


 2.6.3   .-Emergency guidance  should include the recommendations of the NCRP
 and  the. application of ALARA. (A.a-8)..

 Response:  Recommendation 2  (which addresses ALARA)  applies to all types
 of controlled  exposures,  including emergency exposures.  See also the
 response to  comment 2.6.2.
 2.6.4     The  only  way to eliminate "Higher Than Normal" doses is to
 eliminate accident and inci'dent prone situations.   Exposures can be
 minimized through  employee education (A.a-5).

 Response:  While we agree in general,  it  should be noted that
 higher-than-norma-1 doses are not confined to accidents and emergency
 situations.   There are unusual  circumstances (e.g.,  astronaut missions)
 for  which- it  may be necessary to permit doses  higher than the limits.
 These  situations are covered by Recommendation 10.  Also,  see the response
 to comment 2.6.3.
 2.7       IMPACT OF RPGs  ON COLLECTIVE DOSE
 2.7.1.  •  A reduction  in the  individual dose  limit will result in an
 increase  in collective  dose  (A.a-19,  A.a-42,  A.d-31,  B.a-1,  B.a-2, B.a-3,
 B.a-17, B.a-21,  B.a-38,  B.a-39,  B.a-46,  B.a-54,  C-2,  D-6,  D-ll,  E.a-5,
.E.b-6,  E.b-8,  E.b-10).

 Response:   There is a possibility for this to occur,  depending on the
 extent  to  which  the dose limit  is reduced.  We gave this matter  serious
 consideration  and concluded  that the  dose  limits chosen in the final
 recommendations  would not lead  to an  increase in the  collective  dose to
 the  work  force.   See  the response to  comment 2.1.5.
 2.7.2     Guidance  should  be  provided  on  how to  weigh the benefits of
 decreased individual  exposure  against the costs of increased population
 exposure  (A.a-42,  B.a-1,  B.b-5,  D-6,  E.b-10).

 Response: We  know of no  single  method for determining trade-offs between
 the  reductions in  dose to an individual  and in  collective dose that would
 be applicable  to all  cases.  Rational decisions on trade-offs between
 individual and collective doses  can only be made on a case-by-case basis,
 and  may,  in  rare cases, have to  be arbitrary.
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2.7.3   . EPA should clarify its position on ALARA individual  vs.  ALARA
collective doses .and revise the guidance accordingly  (A.d-40,  B.a-54).

Response:  See the response to comment 2.7.2.
2.7.4 '.  Since only. trained persons are used, collective dose will  not
increase when rotation of workers is- used to reduce individual doses
Response:  We agree that this is generally true, and employers  should
ensure that only properly trained workers are used.  However, the  extent
of unavoidable unproductive exposure (such as that during entry  to and
exit from high radiation areas) can be relevant in high dose rate
situations.  While there is the possibility of an increase  in the
collective dose in such operations, we do not believe that  the  final
recommendations will lead to. increasing the collective dose in  the work
force due to increase in such exposure, because the limit applicable to
any single job has not been decreased.  (In fact, it has been increased:
the 'effective previous limit applicable to such situations was  3 rems ; the
new effective limit is 5 rems.-)  See also the responses to  comments 1.9.5
and 2.3.5.    •
2.7.5   . Collective dose is less' significant than  individual  dose;  the
primary risk is-to the worker and his family (C-8).
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Response:  This depends upon the point of view that  is  relevant  to  the
judgment.  However, EPA believes that both types of  doses have
significance and therefore are addressed by the final recommendations.
From a national point of view the total detriment, which is related to  the
collective dose, is most- significant.  From the point of view of
sufficiently limiting the risk to each worker, the maximum individual dose
is most significant.
2.7.6    The consequent increase in collective dose resulting  from  the
guidelines will lead to an increase in potential health effects  (A.a-42,
A.b-4, A.d-5, A.d-14, B.a-17, B.a-18, B.a-46).

Response:  We do not believe these recommendations will result in any
increase in collective dose to the work force.  See the responses to
comments 2.7.1 and 2.7.4.
2.7.7    Lowering the individual RPG implies that engineering controls
must be improved to keep collective doses from rising  (C-5).

Response:  We disagree.  See also the responses to comments 2.7.4,  2.11.1,
2.11.3 and 2.11.4.
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 2.8     •  CONSIDERATION OF WORKER AGE
 2.8.1     Age is also  an important factor in determining risk.  EPA's
 guidance  should consider age in justifying the proposed lifetime limit
 •(IUa-46)'.    ...        /- . .       . .       .........

 Response:   We agree that age is an important factor in estimating risk.
 However,  because of overwhelming opposition in public comments, the
 admonishment or objective to manage workers so that their lifetime
 accumulated dose is less than 100 rems does not appear in the final
 recommendations.
 2.8.2    Setting reduced exposure limits for young workers creates two
 inconsistencies:  first, the majority of the high exposure jobs are
 physically strenuous and require younger workers, and second, older
 workers  are typically given more frequent physical exams to detect
 physical limitations (E.b-8).

 Response:   The recommendations do not differentiate younger from older
 workers, except 'in the case of minors.  The lower dose limit far minors
 (workers younger than 18) is consistent with previous guidance and
 longstanding custom that underage persons should be given greater
.protection.against occupational hazards than adult workers.


 2.8.3    EPA should include the age factor in its guidance (A.a-38,
 A.a-46).

 Response:   We recognize that the risk from exposure generally appears to
 decrease with age.  However, age-dependent limits discriminate against
 younger  workers.  They would also be'difficult to administer.  We have
 concluded  that it is not practical to limit doses to workers on the basis
 of an assumed age-dependence of risk, given the present state of
 knowledge.  See also the response to comment 2.8.5.
 2.8.4    Consideration of worker age will only result in additional work
 and  lack of  acceptance by both labor and management (A.d-22).

 Response: We have no comment on this opinion.
 2.8.5    EPA should not include a higher limit for older workers since
 specific health .problems may put them at higher risk (A.b-26).

 Response:  We are not aware of any scientific support for the thesis that
 such workers are  at higher radiation risk.   However, the dose limits in
 both our proposed and final recommendations are age-independent.
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2.8.6    The possibility of increased cancer risk  from  radiation  in  both
younger and older workers compared  to middle-aged  workers  should.be
explored (A.c-6).

Response:  EPA considered•the available data on age  dependence  of risk.
This information is further updated and discussed  in the responses to
comments given in subsection 1.4.
2.8.7   The'genetic risks do not justify setting age-dependent  dose
limits (B.'.a-42).                      .

Response:  The limits recommended are intended to protect  against  both
somatic and genetic risks.  However, the recommendation of an age-indepen-
dent limit does not imply that we consider genetic risks to  be negligible.
2.8.8    Since older workers are.more experienced and generally can  do
difficult jobs which might involve higher exposures more  efficiently than
less experienced younger workers, a scheme allowing older workers higher
dose increments in any time period would probably result  in  a  lower  total
workforce exposure (A.a-38).

Response:  The recommendations permit this type of strategy  to be
followed., provided the. overall annual limiting doses are  adhered to  and
continued exposure-of'a worker at or near annual limiting doses for
substantial portions of a working lifetime is avoided.
2.9      NEGLECT OF PROCEDURES FOR OVEREXPOSURES
2.9.1    ICRP recommendations for handling overexposures should be
included in the guidance to allow needed flexibility  (A.d-13, B.a-46,
B.a-48).

Response:  The recommendations do not address overexposures with  respect
to the limiting values for annual dose, since we believe this is  a matter
properly addressed by regulatory authorities.  (However, for the  case  of
failure to satisfy the recommendations for control of committed dose due
to intake of radioactivity, there is follow-up management of a worker's
future exposure.  That is, when conditions for control of intake  of
radioactive materials have not been met, the recommendations provide that
annual dose equivalents from such intakes should be assessed for  as long
as they are significant for ensuring conformance with the limiting values
for effective dose equivalent in any year.)
2.9.2    Situations requiring larger doses should have been  part  of  the
guidance (A.d-22, A.d-24, B.a-46, B.a-48).
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Response:   Recommendation  10  provides  for  such  unusual  circumstances.
 2.9.3   .  EPA should  clarify the  consequences  to  both the worker and the
 employer,  when an  RPG is  exceeded (A.b-15,  A.d-21).

 Response:   These  matters,  by law,  are  determined by' the cognizant
 regulatory' agencies,, not EPA- •                  .            •
 2.9.4     EPA must  provide  guidance for reporting and evaluating
 overexposure incidents  and prescribe  and  enforce penalties  that will
 induce  industry  to limit worker exposures to  within the proposed limits
 (C-6).

 Response:   See  the response to comment 2.9.3.
 2.9.5     Failure  to  provide  for  overexposures  may result  in serious
 distortions  of  the  significance  of minor  overexposures (in the range of
 6-10 rems)-and  lead  to  emotional trauma- for the  worker and other
 undesirable  over-reactions  (A.b-13).

 Response:  We disagree  that  such overexposures should  be  considered
 minor.   In any  case,, the  risks from such  exposure can  be  evaluated.  This
 evaluation should be made available to the  worker to avoid inappropriate
.reactions.
 2.10    ADEQUACY/ACCURACY OF DOSE MEASUREMENT TECHNOLOGY
 2.10.1    Internal  dosimetry  techniques  are  not,  in general,  sufficiently
 sensitive or sophisticated  to provide the data required by ICRP's concept
 of weighting factors  for organ doses  from internal emitters.   The 50-year
 annual  committed  dose equivalent  concept  only compounds the  difficulty,
 effectively  reducing  the RIF for  long-lived biologically persistent
 isotopes by  a factor  of  50  (A.d-12, A.d-15, B.a-24, E.a-5, E.b-3, E.b-6).

 Response: The comment is based upon  an apparent misconception of the use
 of weighting factors. It is not  necessary  that  dose to each of the organs
 of a  worker  be measured  for  internal  emitters.  Instead, the  total intake
 is measured  (or inferred from workplace conditions) and models specified
 by ICRP-30 (or their  equivalent)  are  used to calculate the effective (i.e.1
 weighted) dose.  Detailed'tables  already  exist (ICRP80) for  this purpose.
 Thus,  the estimation  of  dose is,  in effect, identical  in procedure to that
 now  employed for  determination of conformance to the existing limits based
 on the  Maximum Permissible  Concentrations (MPCs).  The assertion that the
 RIF  is  effectively reduced  by a factor  of 50 over the  MPCs for long-lived
 radioisotopes is  incorrect.   Current  MPCs are based on a similar concept
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involving the assumption of 50 years of intake, and yield  identical  values
for equivalent' metabolic .and internal distribution models.
2.10.2   In Vivo counting, .in some cases, cannot- establish  that  EPA's
required •RIF.'s'are opt being exceeded  (E.b-5, E.b-6)..

Response:  See the response to comment 2.10.1.
2.10.3   Neither personnel dosimeters nor air monitors are  sensitive
enough to detect exposures at the levels provided  for in  the  guides
(A.c-6, B.a-24, E.a-5, E.a-7).

Response:  We disagree.  See the responses  to comments 2.10.1,  2.10.4,  and
2.10.5.
2.10.4   The 50-year dose commitment requirement will  require  greatly
improved surveillance methods and greatly- increased bioassay frequencies
(E.a-5, E.a-7,;: E.b-6).   .          • •     •  '

Response:  This is not the case.  The existing regulatory  requirements  are
based on models that are mathematically  identical or equivalent  to  the
50-year dose commitment.  That is, the old MFC and the new DAC values are
based on the 'same -50-year dose commitment requirement. Thus,  the new
guidance imposes no new burden.  The sometime* large changes in  these
values are primarily the result of improved dosimetric a~nd metabolic
models (EPA84b), not changes in the limits.  See the responses to comments
1.6.12 and 2.10.1.
2.10.5   Low-level chronic uptake of internal emitters makes  it  virtually
impossible to determine what fraction of the material in  the  body  organs'
is attributable, to the current year's intake (E.6-3).

Response:  Such difficulties are not new to these recommendations.
However, health physicists have been able to -deal with them in  the  past,
and we expect that they will continue to be able to do so.  See  also  the
responses to comments 2.10.1 and 2.10.4.
2.10.6   Personnel dosimetry is not accurate for extremity exposures.   If
limits to extremities are unnecessarily reduced, more  frequent  and
accurate measurements will be needed and applied health physicists will  be
faced with the task of interpreting the actual dose from a multiplicity  of
conflicting data (E.b-8).

Response:  Final recommendations adopt the dose limitations  in  ICRP-26,  in
which the annual limiting-dose to the extremities  (hands and forearms,
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 feet  and ankles)  is 50 rems.   This limiting annual dose of 50 reins, is only
 marginally lower  than the 75  rem limit in previous guidance (25 F.R.
 4402).   We believe there will be no difficulty arising from this modest
 reduction.            •                                    .
 2.i'0*i7" ••  EPA should'delay .implementing its' proposed guidance until a
 detailed-analysis  of dosimetry and internal measurement methods are shown
 to  be  practical (E.a-7):

 Response:  We do not believe this is required.  See the responses to
 comments 2.10.1,  2.10.4,  2.10.5,  and 2.10.6-
 2.10.8    The ICRP scheme of weighted whole body equivalents for organ
 doses  ignores the  lack of data on factors such as chemical species,
 physical form,  and route or intake that affect the movement and fate of
 radionuclides taken into the body.  Thus, the amount in a given organ
 cannot be easily deduced (E.b-3).

 Response:  Values  of the ALIs (and DACs) are available in ICRP-30 for
 different chemical species, physical forms, and route of intake.
 Additional values  may .be computed for special cases using the models
' provided of' by  developing,  in rare cases, new models, as has been th.e
 practice,in the past.  See also the responses to comments 2.10.1 and
 2.10.4.       .
 2.10.9   Accurate dosimetry monitoring is essential if recordkeeping and
 remedial  actions  based  on recordkeeping are to have credibility.  Current
 dosimeter processing techniques are so variable that performance standards
 are  necessary (C-5)•

 Response:  We agree  to  the desirability of'performance standards for
 dosimetry processing.   Actions are already underway, by the Federal
 agencies, for assuring  the reliable processing of personnel dosimeters for
 external  radiation (NRC84).            .   •
 2.10.10  In the physical conditions at a nuclear station, the current
 badge  system in conjunction with area surveys is as' good as c;an and need
 be .achieved (A.a-46,  A.b.4).

 Response:   We concur,  in general,  although improved measurements may be
 required  in a few situations where intake of radioactive materials is
 possible.
 2.10.11  Film badges are not an accurate measure of actual exposure, but
 interpretation can make the readings meaningful (C-8).
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Response:  We agree that appropriate interpretation  of  film  badge  readings
is needed to determine the meaning of the actual exposure measured.
Obviously the type and energy of the radiation are important
considerations for determining deep dose and shallow dose, as  defined  by
the ICRU (ICRU76).  In some cases the exposure of, worker to  beam vs
isotropic radiation situations is important to proper estimates of dose.
See the'-response to- comment 2.3.9.   •••   '     . .  .   •
2.10.12  Film badge readings do not reflect actual exposure,  but  are
useful as moving environmental monitors for design purposes  (A.a-46,
A.b-4).

Response:  We disagree.  However, film badge readings do  require  proper
interpretation.  See response to comment 2.10.11.
2.10.13  EPA's cho.ice of committed dose equivalent as a  primary  control
will not afford any greater worker protection.  The effort  required  to
implement the required air monitoring system could be better  spent on
other'protection activities (E.b-6).

Response:;. ,We...do-not believe, it is appropriate to relax  the currently used
system for controlling internal exposure, which is equivalent to  the new
recommendation based on committed dose equivalent.  See  the response to
comment 2.10.1.
2.10.14  EPA's guidance (proposed Recommendation  5)  calls  for  establishing
committed dose equivalent on the basis of intake  data.  This method gives
a less accurate.indication of internal dose than  the current practices  of
whole body counting and urinalysis (A.d-13).

Response:  The recommendations do not specify whether compliance  should be
assessed based on exposure or intake.  The use of derived  limits  such as
the. DAC is a generally accepted practical means for control of  anticipated
dose.  However, we agree that, when significant doses are  involved,
accurate establishment of committed dose equivalent requires assessment of
actual uptakes via whole-body counting or urine/fecal analysis
methodologies.  See the responses to comments 2.10.1 and 2.10.8.
2.10.15  Personnel dosimeters do not measure whole or partial body
radiation doses or organ doses.  They are merely assumed  to do  so,  despite
the overestimation, for administrative purposes.  To use  data derived  from
these inaccurate devices as a basis for assessing noncompliance  penalties
or as a basis of legal action is untenable  (A.d-13, A.d-21).

Response:  Use of personnel-dosimeter data  as a basis for imposing
penalties or for taking legal actions, involve issues which are  outside
the scope of Federal radiation protection guidance.  Such matters are
determined by regulatory authorities.
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 2.10.16   The  gross  inaccuracy of personal monitoring devices leads to
 underestimating  doses and a false sense of security for workers (A.c-8).

 Response:  'Proper'use and processing of'personnel dosimeters can provide
 acceptably accurate exposure data.   We do not agree, in general, that data
'from  such  dosimeters are "grossly inaccurate-.."  See also the responses to
 comments'• 2.3.9 and. 2.10.il.    •  ' •'   •    " .  '   •'  . '.
 2.10.17   Occupations  involving unsealed sources,  dust problems, or high
 yield  source  material will require complex monitoring systems to comply
 with the  proposed guidance (E.a-3).

 Response:   Monitoring systems to comply with these recommendations need,
 in  general, be  no more complex than has been required heretofore.
 Increased  complexity  might occur for some operations where changes in
 metabolic  models  lead to greatly reduced derived  limits and the margin of
 safety is  correspondingly reduced.  However, this would have occurred
 whether or. not  Federal radiation protection guidance was revised (EPA84b).
 2.10.18 . The proposed guidance will reduce the effectiveness of lapel air
•samplers" as-.a ..tool: for., providing timely exposure evaluations (Bia-16).
        ".••.•''    •            •
 Response:  -On the contrary,  such samplers could 'provide the means for
 readily evaluating' the significance of suspected radionuclide intakes.
 2.10.19   A guide on an acceptable means of measuring whole body dose is
 needed (A.a-41).

 Response:   Note 3 of the recommendations provides references.for such
 means.  •           •


 2.10.20   There are so many difficulties in monitoring a total body
 exposure  that  attempting to regulate a partial body exposure
 is  unreasonable (A.a-38, A.b-10).

 Response:   Such difficulties do not preclude the need to control
 partial-body exposure.   Usually this can be accomplished by the simple
 conservative measure of monitoring the most exposed part of the body and
 treating  this exposure, for control purposes, as whole body exposure.
 2.10.21   Improved  dosimetry will  be needed to monitor doses at the lower
 limits  on feet,  ankles,  and forearms (E.a-5).

 Response:  We  disagree.   The limit for the extremities is 50 rems.  This
 is  10  times the  limiting dose equivalent for whole-body exposures.
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 2.10.22   Indirect  measurements,  such as air concentration or exposure'
 duration  and/or  body  burden measurements,  should be considered to be
 acceptable methods for  the  demonstration of compliance with the proposed
 guidance .(B.a-33,'  B.a-46,•B.b-2,  E.a-2, E.a-2).           .

 Response:  We. agree,'.-in general;  although at higher doses approaching the
Xtimlts indirect -measurements may  not 'always be., sufficient.
       , *  *      "   *         .    .            •
  ':.'.'•  \   '.•..*   . •'   •.•'  •    • V '  • •  . :.  ..'•''; •    ••''•'.
'2.10.23   The  limits  that  would  be imposed by the EPA recommendations are
 so  restrictive for plutonium that the existing state-of-the-art does not  •
 permit the detection  of the proposed limits (E.b-7).

 Response:  The premise  of the comment is incorrect.  Plutonium is one of
 the radionuclides  for which the derived air concentration (DAC) is
 significantly reduced due to revised metabolic models.  This change is not
 imposed by;the recommendations;  rather, it is  the result of improved
 knowledge of  how much dose  is delivered by a given intake of plutonium.
 Regarding.existing state-of-the-art, detection capability for exposure at
 derived limits (DACs) is  adequate,  but  the adequacy of detection of intake
 (ALls) corresponding  to committed dose  depends on timing of urine and/or
 fecal sampling.(See  the response  to comment 2.10.14).  See also the
 responses' to-comments 2.10.1 and  2.10.4.'
 2.11     ENGINEERING CONTROLS/DESIGN LIMITS
 2.11.1   EPA's  proposed  guidance totally ignores engineering controls
 which are  the  preferred  method of reducing exposure (A.c-6, D-ll).

 Response:  We  do  consider  engineering controls to be important.  However,
 Federal  guidance  specifies.what  is  required,  while the regulatory agencies
 and management  determine how those  requirements are to be met.


 2.11.2   Exposure  levels should  be  based on technical feasibility (A.c-7).

 Response:  We  agree,  to  the  extent  that technically feasible levels are
 ALARA.   However,  we do not agree that exposure should be reduced to the
 lowest - levels  that are  technically  feasible,  without regard to costs and
 other relevant  factors.  The recommendations  require exposure to be kept
 ALARA by taking all relevant factors  (including technical feasibility)
 into consideration, on a case by case basis.   This will assure the most
 efficient  use  of  resources to provide radiation protection.
2.11.3   The  low average  doses  received  by  workers  are the result of
extremely  conservative  engineering  design (A.d-38).
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Response:  No response required.
2..11.4  . Rather than set-exposure limits for workers, EPA  should  replace
the.ALARA principle with a design limit for facilities" of  500 mrem/yr.
This design .limit should not -be construed as a regulatory  limit (A.a-38),

Response:  Design -limits for facilities are not within the  scope  of
federal, radiation protection-', guidance.  Such limits,, however, could  be
specified by regulatory agencies, on either a generic or case-by-case
basis.  However, imposition of a single design limit, e.g.,  500 mrem/yr,
to be applied to all facilities without regard to  site-specific" factors,
could lead, in some cases,, to serious misallocations of resources and  to
unwarranted costs, and, in others, to unnecessarily high exposures.
2.12     QUALITY AND OTHER MODIFYING FACTORS
2.12.1  • EPA should specify quality factors so that all the various
effects, of ionizing radiation can be added to determine the magnitude  of
the total injury (C-8).   -'...,.

Response:  Footnote 3 of. the recommendations provides, in part,  that:

     "The values specified by the International Commission on  •
     Radiological Protection for quality .factors and dosimetric
     conventions for the various types of radiation...may be used..."

We will recommend other factors when and if they are more appropriate.


2.12.2  Quality and other modifying factors should be dealt with by  the
regulatory agencies (A.d-13).

Response:  See the response to comment 2.12.1.


2.12.3  Reevaluation of the Nagasaki and Hiroshima data suggests a quality
factor of about 10 for fission neutrons at dose rates below 25 rads, not
the quality factor of 50-100 suggested by BEIR-III (A.b-1).'

Response:  There appears to be an error in interpretation of BEIR-III.
Neutron RBEs are 27.8 in the LQ-L model and 11.3 in the L-L model in
BEIR-III [Table V-8, p. 184].  The RBE of 27.8 was used in the "preferred
model" in BEIR-III, the LQ-L model [equation V-10, p. 187].

        As regards what will happen when the reevaluation of Hiroshima and
Nagasaki data is complete, it is premature to make an estimate.  Both
gamma and neutron air kerma estimates and the proper shielding factors for
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 individuals are still in a state of flux.  It may be possible to
 reestimate RBEs when the dose reassessment in Japan is complete, hopefully
 late  in 1986.                             •
 2/.12.4--.How can limits, be. set. in terms .of-dose equivalent, without  an
.'agreement .upon unifprm.'parameters that should be used' in the determination
 of quality (A.d-22).     ,•'.'.     ' .'  ' '       .   •        '
 ,    •    *   ..    ' * '• '    •          .    -    •    '         • ' -
  -.•.*••• •*      •-•--.:  •••••.   ,,.    .   -   .   •-•'•..-•  .   .   , •
 Response:   Use of  quality factors, dosiraetric conventions, and metabolic
 models are specified in Note 3.  See  also the response to comment  2.12.1.
 2.12.5  It is undesirable to leave the specification of quality  factors
 and  metabolic models to the discretion of the user or regulatory agency,
 as suggested by EPA in Note 3 (B.a-8, B.a-34, E.a-4).

 Response:   The intent of the recommendations is that ICRP quality factors
 and  models be- used,  to the extent feasible.  The use of the phrase  "may  be
 used," provides for  unforeseen developments or situations that make it
 desirable  to use alternative quality factors and' models.
 2.13    DIFFERENT GUIDES FOR .DIFFERENT CATEGORIES OF WORKERS
 2.13.1  All workers should be' equally protected by law.'  It is
 unreasonable to support one set of limits and one level of risk for some
 workers and a different set of limits and levels of risks for other
 workers (A.a-5, A.c-6,  A.c-7, A.c-8, A.d-13, A.d-22, B.a-34, B.a-37,
 B.c-23, C-5, C-8)

 Response:   The recommended guidance specifies only one set of limits  for
 adult  workers.  However,  competent authorities may, on the basis of ALARA
 considerations, specify varying, lower limits for specific categories  of
 workers or work situations.  We do not believe this represents unequal
 protection under law,  since the ALARA provision applies equally to all.
 (The dose  ranges identifying the proposed Ranges A, B, and C were not
 limits.  Those ranges  simply served as a structure for specifying proposed
 minimum radiation protection requirements.  No such range system appears
 in the final recommendations.)
 2.13.2  The provision for certain categories or levels of exposure limit
 based  on type of work is a good idea (A.d-8, A.d-18, A.d-30, D-l).

 Response:   We concur.  Recommendation 9 provides for such situations.
 2.13.3  The practice of informed consent is the only practical solution to
 the women worker exposure question, as labor agreements make no mention of
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 distributing  overtime  on the .basis  of  sex or exposure .to ionizing
 radiation (C-2).

 Response:  'We- disagree.  • Informed .consent amounts to offering a pregnant
 woman- the choice  of  subjecting her  fetus  to up to 5 rems,  finding other
• employment,-.or. not working while pregnant..  .
•2.13.4  \ .Potential- legal  conflicts  should/be resolved prior, to implementing
 any  changes  which'would  discriminate between men and women (B.a-13).

 Response:  We  believe  the  final  recommendations are clear on the question
 of. discrimination.   The  recommendation for protection of the unborn
 specifies  that conformance to  the  limiting value should be achieved
 "...without  economic penalty or  loss of job opportunity and security...."
 See  also  the response  to comment 3.8.22.
 2.13.5   The  rationale for establishing different guides for different
 categories of  workers is  not  clear (A.d-22).

 Response:- See the  response  to comment 2.13.1.
 2.13.6'-  Lower  exposure  levels  should be used for women,  as they are the
 most sensitive' segment  of the-population (A.a-38).

 Response: -  The risk differences  between men and women are believed to be
 relatively  small,  and in any case  are not known with sufficient confidence
 to  justify  establishing two  different sets of limits.  See the responses
 to. comments 1.4.1,  1.4.2, 1.4.9,  1.4.21, 1.4.22 and 1.4.26.


 2.13.7   Current radiation protection guides are adequate for medical'
 radiation workers,  although  current facility design requirements do not
 measurably  affect  occupational exposure (A.b-10).

 Response:   None required.
 2.13.8  Guides should  be developed for temporary workers (A.a-5).

 Response:   The recommendations  apply to all  workers,  regardless of their
 status as  regular,  transient,  or temporary.   We are aware that there are
 problems associated with temporary workers,  such as recordkeeping and the
 use  of such workers for short  periods near the dose limits.   Provisions
 (e.g.  regulations and  regulatory guides) to  assure compliance with the
 recommendations are the responsibility of the regulatory agencies.  EPA
 will monitor the implementation of these recommendations, and, if
 warranted,  propose  supplementary recommendations or issue clarifications
 of this guidance.   See also  the responses to comments 2.3.2 and 2.3.7.
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 2.13.9  Guides should be based on health risk, 'not the type of..wo-rk
 (A.c-6,  A.d-13,  A.d-22, B.a-34, B.c-23).    ".             '    _.•

 Response:   We- agree,  and this is reflected in the recommendations  for
 limiting values.  However,,. .the type of work does affect the dose levels
 that  are ALARA, .:as. in the past. ,_• .      .    .-.     ......   •-..••


 2. 13,. 10. Dif.ferent. -guides^ for different classes of workers must* not be used
 as  a  disguise  for discrimination.''  Exposure limits should be set at ; a
 level that protects the most vulnerable worker (A.a-38, A.c-7,.B.a-13,
 C-5,  C-6,  C-8).

 Response:   See the responses to comments 2.13.1 and 2.13.4.  The
 recommended limits provide for the  protection of such broad classes -as
 adult  workers,  minors,  and the unborn.  We know of no means for_
 predetermining which  individual adult workers are "most vulnerable," nor
 the' applicable risk factors.  See also the response to comment -2.1-12 i
 2 i 13. 11  Exposure' limits for the- general public should apply to nonnuclear
 workers  exposed to radiation in the workplace (A.d-22).

i Response:'.'-  See the- '.response tb- comment 2". 13. 9.  The comment er does not
 provide.' 'i'' oasis for such, differential treatment.  However, the guidance
 provides for  establishing lower limits for groups or classes of workers
 when this, is  justified on the basis of ALARA.  See the responses- to
 comments 3.6.1, 3.6.6 and 3.6.14.                                  .   .
 2.14     OTHER ISSUES/CONTROVERSY
 2.14.1   EPA should take a position on how to monitor the radiation
 exposure of persons, wearing lead aprons during fluoroscopy.  Dose to the
 "whole  body" is  best assessed by a dosimeter bene.ath the lead apron, while
 dose  to the "lens  of the eye" is best assessed by a dosimeter outside of
 the  lead apron at  collar (neck) level.  Which measurement should be used
 to determine "lifetime dose"? (A.b-5).
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 Response:   Actual  "how-to" provisions are not within the scope of Federal
 guidance,  but are  the responsibility of the regulatory Federal agencies
 (and  Agreement States).  However,  in this case, both measurements may be
 needed,  since there are limits applicable both to whole-body (effective),
 dose  and the lens  of the eye.  The final recommendations substitute
 recordkeeping of cumulative dose and the admonition to avoid continued
 exposure at or near the limiting values for substantial portions of a
 working lifetime in place of the proposed admonition to maintain lifetime
 dose  below 100 rems.
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 2.14.2  To reduce overexposure to radiation from medical and dental x-ray
 equipment, the operator of the radiographic equipment should be competent
 in radiation safety and technique (A.d-30).     • .                 '

 Response:   Recommendation 7 provides for this.


 2.14.3'  There should be 'two main types of numerical exposure limits:
 first.,  a-- s.trict design limit £or purposes of guiding personnel in
 designing  facilities and procedures, and second, a worker protection limit
 expressed  in terms of long-term exposure limits with an upper limit over
 short periods of time (A.a-38).

 Response:   Design limits for new facilities and procedures are not within
 the scope  of Federal guidance.  See the response to comment 2.11.4.  With
 respect to limits for longer and shorter periods of time, since there is -
 no biological basis for imposing restrictions for different periods, these
 recommendations do not do so.  This, however, does not obviate the
 imposition of limits for shorter term periods, for management purposes, by
 regulatory agencies or by management at the user level, or by both.


 2.14.4- EPA guidance p.n internal exposure should address accidental
 internal' '.exposure,, as internal exposure- is seldom planned or deliberate
 (S.a-5). •'  '. • •  "•: ' ' /..'.       • '    .

 Response:   We agree.  Recommendation 4 provides guidance for such.
 situations.   '              *
 2.14.5  Society must decide whether or not society's gene pool should be
 damaged,  not the individual radiation worker (A.c-6).

 Response:  The potential risk to society's gene pool from occupational
 radiation exposure is limited by the limiting values for dose for
.individual workers.  This recommendation, when approved, would represent a
 societal  decision that includes consideration of the risk of genetic
 effects.
 2.14.6  EPA should maintain one year as the averaging period over which
 dose rates  apply (B.a-34).

 Response:   Except for protection of the unborn, limiting values for dose
 and dose commitment in the  recommendations are for one year.  See the
 response to comment 2.14.3  for further discussion.
 2.14.7  There  is a problem in communication and public education when the
 ideals of the  BEIR committee, recognized for purposes of scientific
 conservatism,  are written as regulations (A.d-36).
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Response:  The  findings  of  the  BEIR  committee  were intended for use in
establishing  guidance  and regulations.   That was the basis of the charge
to. the BEIR committee  by EPA.            .                .      '
 2.14.8  The  proposed  guidance  is  based  partially on the philosophy that
 all.the,workers,are already down  in  the proposed exposure ranges.
 However-, that  philosophy  c'ould  repeat itself  in the future,  resulting in
 changing regulations  without a.,cutoff .(A..d-38).   •

 Response:  The  comment  is, in  part,  true.   However, the burden involved in
 maintaining  a given level of protection is  also considered before lowering
 limits.
2.14.9  Radiation exposure  guides  should  not  be provided for periods
shorter than one year  (A.d-22).

Response:.  Guides for  periods  shorter  than one  year  are not included in
either'proposed or final recommendations,  with  the exception of those for
protection of  the unborn.   However,  also- see  the response to comment
'2.14..3.   ••••••         ..........
2.14.10  Ehy-sical exams and medical  tests  for  workers  in high risk jobs
should be paid for b'y the employer and  the  frequency of  such  exams should
be set forth in  the  guidelines  (A.d-8).

Response:  These are regulatory matter's  not within  the scope  of Federal
radiation protection guidance.
2.14.11  Employee protection and monitoring  should  be  a requirement for
all licensing of equipment and reimbursement  for  treatment  and  diagnostic
procedures which involve  radiation  exposure  in hospitals,  clinics,  and
private practices (A.d-8).

Response:  These are  regulatory matters  outside the scope  of Federal
radiation protection  guidance.
2.14.12  Employees transferred out of high  radiation  areas  after having
received limiting radiation doses should  retain  full  job  security,
seniority, and pay (C-5).

Response:  We agree.  The guidance specifically  covers  this situation with
respect to exposure of pregnant women.  See  the.  response  to comment
2.13.4.  However, the handling of such cases is  the  responsibility  of the
employer and the Federal agency having regulatory  or  administrative
jurisdiction.
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 2.14.13  The' proposed guidance would require  approximately 20,000
 additional special procedures and radiation therapy technologists (A.d-14)

 Response:  This 'could be- possible only under  unreasonable interpretation
 of the requirements of .the minimum radiation  protection requirements of
 proposed .recommendation. 4.  ,The final recommendations  do not contain this
 provision.'"  ''  '   •'•  ""• ''••' •'"'•'      '•    •   •   '      •-•-•-.
 2.14.14  The proposed guidance, by limiting  the  availability of trained
 workers,' would have a negative impact on safety  (B.a-38).

 Response:  We disagree.  It is the responsibility  of  users  of radiation to
 ensure that sufficiently trained workers are used  to  assure physical
 safety as well as ALARA exposure.  See also  the  responses  to comments
 1.9.5, 1.9.16 and 2.3.5.
 2.14..15  To. assure objectivity .the DOE -should  be  relieved of its
 responsibility for radiation health-effects research  (A.c-6).

 Response: .This question is outside the scope  of  Federal  radiation
_pr.pt.ec.t'ion: guidance.,for, occupational.; exposure.  ..
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                  SECTION 3.0 — PROPOSED RECOMMENDATIONS
3.1   -  JUSTIFICATION '
3.1.1 .. Implementation of justification oh a detailed  individual work
situation. basis 'will- 'result in severe administrative costs  (A.a-12, A.d-9,
A.d-29, A.d-42, B.a-5, B.a-8, B.a-12, B.a-14, B.a-28,  B.a-32,  B.a-48,
B.a-53, B.c-22, E.a-5, E.b-3).

Response:  This comment was sometimes made in reaction to proposed
Recommendation 1 and sometimes in reaction to proposed Recommendation  4.
Recommendation 1 in existing Federal radiation protection guidance
(25 F.R. 4402; May 18, 1960) states:

     "There should not be any man-made radiation exposure with-
   .  out the: expectation of benefit resulting from such exposure.
     Activities- resulting in man-made radiation exposure should be
     authorized for useful applications provided [the]  recommen-
     dations set forth' herein are followed.'"
We are not aware of any -adverse impact in terms of "severe administrative
costs" in the over 25 years of experience with this requirement.

     .Cpmmenters did not present data supporting any- such impact, but,* .
instead anticipated future impact.  Proposed Recommendation  1 was  intended
to continue the same requirement as that in existing Recommendation  1.
Since it was commonly misinterpreted, it has been reworded in the  final
recommendation as follows :

     "There should not be any occupational exposure of workers
     to ionizing radiation without the expectation of an overall
     benefit from the activity causing the exposure.  Such
     activities may be allowed, provided exposure of workers is
     limited in accordance with these recommendations."

We do not foresee any unwarranted costs arising from this recommendation.
Also, see the response to comment 3.1.2.  Regarding the implications  of
Recommendation 4, see the responses to comments in Section 3.4.


3.1.2    Justifying all exposures on a cost/benefit basis is unnecessary,
considering nonexposure alternatives (A.a-39, A.b-23, A.d-18, A.d-29,
A.d-40, B.a-8, D-2, E.a-3).

Response:  Recommendation 1 concerns assuring an overall benefit from an
operation or practice that involves radiation exposure of workers.   Such a
determination necessarily includes considering alternatives  (if any)  that
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do not require radiation  exposure.   Determining  whether a specific
instance of worker exposure  to  radiation from an already justified
operation or practice is  necessary  or  not,  may or may no't involve a
judgment about whether  the exposure is justified, depending upon the
specific circumstances.   This is a  matter for management of programs for
•radiation protection to decide.  Maintaining  justified worker exposure
ALARA and;:within the,, limiting, dose  for individual workers are. governed by
recommendations 2-10.      '         .        .
3.1.3    Exposures  from  routine  operations  and maintenance are considered
at the time a. plant is designed.  ALARA provides  guidelines for any other
exposures.  This  is sufficient;  additional  justification is unnecessary
(A.d-42, B.a-8, B.a-10,  B.a-12,  B.a-14,  B.a-27, B.a-36,  E.a-2, E.b-1).

Response:  Although this may  often  be  true,  it is not always the case.
New practices may be considered  for institution at an existing plant,  and
it may be appropriate  to consider their justification under recommendation
1 before instituting them.  See  also the response to  comment 3.1.2.


3; L.4    Justification of occupational  .exposures  on the  basis of net
benefit -cannot .be. done until,  a- dollar /person-rem  figure  is established
•(Ai;a:-40^.A.drl.3V"B\c-10) •:--';- •••;'  .' >.  —:  ' T; •'"
Response:  The term  "net  benefit"  does  not  require  chat 'precise
quantification be carried out.   In any  case,  the  term "net" does not
appear in  the final  recommendation.   .   -                  '  ,


3.1.5    As written, Recommendation  1 is not  adequately directed to
•limiting occupational exposure.  Better guidance, primarily on assessing
net benefit, is needed by both  implementing agencies  and  practicing health
physicists (A.d-23).

Response:  Recommendation 1  is  aimed at preventing  "unnecessary" worker
exposure to radiation.  Limiting doses  from "necessary" exposures and
keeping "necessary"  exposures ALARA  are covered  in  separate recommenda-
tions.  See the response  to  comment  3.1.4.
3.1.6    The efforts  required  by  Recommendation 1 would divert key
technical and management efforts  from  protection activities (A.d-18,
A.d-42, B.a-5, B.a-28).

Response:  See the responses to comments  3.1.1  and 3.1.2.
3.1.7    Justification of exposures must  be  on  a  generic  basis (A.d-42,
B.a-2, B.a-5, B.a-8, B.a-9, B.a-11, B.a-32,  B.a-33,  B.a-48,  B.a-53).
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Response:  We- agree that this will often be  the  case.   However,  it may
also be appropriate for individual practices or  operations.


3.1.8.  Recommendation 1 is impossible.to implement  (A.a-10,  A.b-6, A.d-11,
B..C.-23, _£'.^-3,.. E:.a-5, E;.b-3)..   ,-  .  ..  ,'...;. •   ..  • ..  V  •:

Response: ..This is clearly, not'the case, since it has  been implemented for
25 years.  See the responses'to comments 3.1.1 and-  3^1.2.
3.1.9.  Justification could be very beneficial,  if  carried  out
conscientiously (A.a-38, A.d-6, B.a-29, E.a-6).

Response:  We agree.
3.1.10  To whom is the justification  to  be addressed?   (A.a-7,  A.b-23,
B.c-20, B.c-21, B.c-22, B.c-23, E-.a-2, E.a-5)

Response:  Justification is reviewed  through a variety  of  means.   One
example is the preparation of. Environmental Impact  Statements.   Another
example, is'-.the-.,agreements, reached .in. collective  bargaining.   Regulatory
agencies' may make such judgments.   In other cases  there may  be  no
immediate review.  However, such determinations  are open  to  challenge and
revised by society on a continuing  basis  through the various processes  of
government and other institutions.    •


3.1.11  What are the criteria for justification'? (A.a-10,  A.a-40,  A.b-23,
A.d-11, A.d-23, A.d-29,, B.a-5, B.a-7, B.c-20, B.c-22, E.a-5, E.b-4)

Response:  Criteria for justification are that the  benefits  of  an  activity
are judged to exceed its costs, and that  this overall benefit is greater
than that achievable through alternative means not  requiring radiation
exposure.
3.1.12  Will justification be required  for each  occupational  category of
exposure, or for every individual exposure?  (A.b-23,  B.a-5, B.a-7,  B.c-20,
B.c-22).

Response:  See the responses to comments  3.1.1,  3.1.2,  and  3.1.3..
3.1.13  EPA should delete Recommendation 1 and adopt  the  ALARA statement
in ICRP-26 (B.a-7, B.c-20, B.c-22).

Response:  Recommendation 1 is not a  substitute  for ALARA.   Recommendation
1 corresponds to the first of the three main  features  of  the ICRP-26
system of dose limitation: "no practice shall be adopted  unless its
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 introduction produces "a positive net benefit."  The recommendations also
 include  ALARA provisions that are effectively the same as those in
 ICRP-26.
 3.1-..14.'.  The  need to consider alternatives not involving exposure to
^ad-iatioTi  could .'lead .to regulatory interference and abuses,.' particularly
 inr.deteraining  appropriate medical procedures (A.b-5).

 Response:  Regulatory  "interference and abuses" should be identified and
 eliminated on specific merit;  the mere possibility of abuse should not
 prevent  making  a recommendation to avoid nonbeneficial practices.
 3.1.15  Exposure limits should reflect acceptable levels of risk that are
 comparable  to  other safe industries.  Industry should then be free to
 operate within those limits without the added burden of justifying each
 exposure (A.a-38,  A.d-13,  B.a-26,  B.b-3,  B.c-12).

 Response:   See responses to comments 3.1.1 and 3.1.2.  We note that
 operation  simply within exposure, limits alone is, in any case, not
 sufficient.' Two other-features are inherent elements of an adequate
 system of.  dosey limitation,, namely, (IX-elimination of "unnecessary"
-.exposure^: an(f  (2)'  maintaining; "necessary"'exposures ALARA.  Implementation
 of  these two features- is a continuing function of the operational
 radiation  protection organization of each activity.  See also the-
 responses  to comments 1,6.11,  2.1.11 and 2.7.11.
 3.1.16  The  justification for allowing any exposure is the trading of
 human  life for profit.   An individual can only make such a choice if he is
 completely  informed of  the dangers.   And a society can only permit such a
 choice if  it is willing to pay for the cancers and genetically damaged
 children that result (A.a-5).

 Response:  The first premise might more accurately have replaced the word
 "profit" by  "beneficial human activity."  Since all jobs (radiation or
 nonradiation) entail risks,  this same premise applies to all jobs.
 Recommendation 7 addresses education of workers on risks from radiation.
 Societal responsibilities for health care are not addressed by this
 guidance.
 3.1.17  EPA has confused the concepts of justification and optimization.
 The  atomic energy act justifies the peaceful uses of nuclear energy and
 ALARA optimizes exposures (3.a-24,  E.b-1).

 Response:   The Atomic Energy Act does not "justify" any and all peaceful
 uses.   Its purpose is to further the development of justified peaceful
 uses,  and  judgments on justification must be made independently.
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 3.1.18  Justification of exposures should not be adopted as a regulatory
 obligation (A.a-13,  A.a-39, A.d-9, A.d-14, A.d-18, A.d-40, E.a-2, E.b-1,
 E.b-3).                            -      .

 Response:.  See the responses to comments 3.1.1, 3.1.2 and 3.1.17.


 3*1.. 19  The extent and nature of justification should be left to the
 regulatory agencies-implementing the guidance (A-d-13, B.a-33., E.a-2).

 Response:   In general, this is true.  However, see also the response to
 comment  3.1.11.
 3.1.20  The word "justified" in Recommendation 1 should be changed to
 "justifiable"  (A.d-29).

 Response:   The word "justified" does not appear in final guidance.  See
 the  response to comment  3.1.1.
 3.1.21  EPA is "waving the flag of carcinpgenesis" instead of presenting
•s'cie^ific:;_'iustif±ca'tion.;for/the._gul.delines. (B.a-26).

 Response:  'We believe that our review of published studies on radiation
 risk (see  for example the response to comments 1.4.1, 1.4.2, and 1.4.3.)
 and  effects of exposure of .the unborn.(see for example response to •
 comments 3.8.15,  3.8.17,  3.8.52,  and 3.8*.57) accurately reflects'the
 substantial scientific basis for estimation of carcinogenic risks from
 exposure to radiation.
 3.2      AS LOW AS REASONABLY ACHIEVABLE (ALARA)
 3.2.1     The intent of Recommendation 2 is good (A.a-10, A.a-39, A.a-49,
 A.a-50,  A.a-51,  A.b-18, A.b-26,  A.d-6,  A.d-11, B.a-5, B.a-8,' B.a-9,
 B.a-24-,  B.a-33,  B.a-46, B.a-48,  B.a-53, B.c-20, D-2, D-5, E.a-2, E.a-6,
 E.b-3).  .

 Response:   No response required.
 3.2.2  Existing ALARA programs have been very effective (A.a-19, A.b-26,
 B.a-3,  B.a-6,  B.a-9,  B.a-11,  B.a-14,  B.a-26,  B.a-27, B.a-28, B.a-32,
 B.a-33,  B.a-34, B.a-36,.B.a-38, B.a-44,  B.a-48, B.a-50, B.a-53, B.c-21,
 B.c-22,  E.a-5,  E.b-8).

 Response:   We  agree-
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 3.2.3.  EPA's .recommendation is unnecessary given existing ALARA programs
 and regulations (A.a-19,  A.a-4l,  A.d-18,  B.a-26, B.a-27, B.a-28, B.a-33,
;B.a-34,  B.a-36, B.a-44,  B.c-23).

 Response:   We  disagree.   The ALARA provision in Federal guidance provides
 a.basis  for existing ALARA programs.   Such provision should continue to
.'provide, the--basis.--.for. future such.programs. . .   '    •;•;'•


 3.2.4  ALARA should be applied only as an operating philosophy and not a
 standard until it is defined in quantitative terms such as dollars/person-
 rem (B.c-10, B.c-21).

 Response:   The recommendations in Federal guidance are not regulatory
 standards.   They constitute guidance  for the Federal agencies in the
 conduct  of  their radiation protection activities.   While a fixed, dollar
 value per person-rem may facilitate, some ALARA analyses, it is not
 necessary for  such a value to be  established under Federal guidance.
 Different values may be  appropriate for different  situations, and for
 different periods of time.  Many  ALARA determinations can be made without
 such a value.   We have concluded  that it is not possible or even desirable
 to recommend a value for a person-rem in Federal guidance at this time.
 See the -response; .to comment 3.1.4.   -.


 3.2.5  EPA'shoul'd define a de minimis'dose so that jobs resulting in
 exposure below such a dose would  be excluded from ALARA considerations
 (A.b-7,  B.a-14). ' There  must be some  limits-below which further reductions
 are unjustified (B.a-1).

 Response:   We  recognize  that for  workers engaged in certain types of
 activities, maximum feasible exposures may be so small as to warrant their
 not needing or requiring regulatory controls.  This concern was expressed
 under "other considerations" in the preamble to our proposed guidance by
 the following  statement:

      "Regulatory agencies will have to use care in selecting
      classes of workers  whose exposure does not need to be
      regulated.  In selecting such classes we recommend that
      the agency.consider both the collective dose  which is
      likely to be avoided through regulation and the maximum
      individual doses possible."

 As- this  statement reflects, application of the ALARA principle in an
 activity of a  given type requires optimizing both  collective and
 individual  doses.  Since this is  generally a complex function involving
 many factors,  which can  vary from one activity to  another, the optimal
 solution, in terms of individual  doses, is not necessarily the same for
 all situations.  We conclude that a single de minimis dose that applies to
 an individual  for all situations  is neither feasible nor appropriate.
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 3.2.6   ALARA must be implemented on the basis of expert judgments.  To try
 to  regulate  the implementation of ALARA could be counter-productive
 (A.d-40,  A.b-10,. B-a-38,  B.a-46, D-10).   .             .   .

.Response:. We agree 'that .judgments are required in applying the ALARA
.principle,; but--.'this-)does, not; eliminate .the .need for. Federal guidance and
 corresponding regulations  to require that this principle be implemented.
.We  agree,.'. however,  that, regulations "on ALARA should be formulated with
 care  to avoid causing possible counter—productive consequences.
 3.2.7   Implementation of ALARA should be left to the regulatory agencies
 (A.a-21,  B.a-24).                          •                .

 Response:   It is.
 3.2.8.  Regulators,  not industry,  should bear the burden of proof that
 exposures' below 5. rem/yr are- not  ALARA (B.c-12).

 Response:   It-is the responsibility of 'regulators to assure that industry
 applies. ALARA. •  "Burden of .proof" responsibility, therefore, exists at two
.•levels-': .•"•first.,1; 'industry'should-ber able to demonstrate to regulators that
 ALARA is. being  applied, and %second, regulators should be able to
 demonstrate that they are requiring industry to do so.
 3.2.9   ALARA should  be applied to individual rather than collective dose
 so  that individuals  are not sacrificed to save the group (C-4).

 Response:  -Reducing  the dose to one individual at the expense of
 increasing  collective dose of the group by a significantly larger amount
 would  amount,  on the other hand, to sacrificing the group to benefit the
 individual.   It is true that repetitive assignments to one individual to
 perform a given task involving high level exposure simply because he
 becomes expert (and  presumably receives a smaller dose per task than would
 other  workers) is also not in keeping with the ALARA principle for
 individual  dose.  Equity considerations would suggest a rotation of
 assignments,  even if the collective dose should increase somewhat at the
 start.  Thus,  a difficult balance is involved in the trade-offs between
 equity and  reducing  collective risk.  Care must be exercised in assuring
 that equity  considerations are not disregarded in efforts to keep the
 collective  dose ALARA.  Hpwever, keeping the collective dose ALARA is most
 generally achieved by methods (e.g., engineered safeguards) which also
 reduce the   exposure of each worker in the group or task involved, so that
 such difficult decisions do not occur in the majority of occupational
 exposure situations.
 3.2.10  Current  practice of maintaining each task ALARA insures that
 collective  doses are ALARA (B.a-14,  B.a-26,  B.a-32, B.a-38, B.a-48).
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Response:   No  response  required.
 3.2.11   EPAJs  recommendation to. hire additional workers to keep'within the
 proposed limits  is  not  compatible with ALARA (A.a-3, B.a-44, E.b-7).

 •Response:- "We  disagree'.  .See title response tp-comment 3.2.,9.-
 3.2.12   Incorporating  the ALARA concept in the guidelines may result in
 legal  liabilities,  as  it could be interpreted as overriding the guides
 provided  in Recommendation 3 (A.d-29).

 Response:   These  are  independent requirements that must both be satisfied.
 3.2.13   EPA should  adopt  the ALARA language of the ICRP, which includes
 the  need to consider  social and economic factors (B.c-20, B.c-22, E.a-4).

 Response:   We  agree and equivalent wording appears in the final
 recommendations..     . . . '  •      .    ...      •.  •
-  .„•••  ....••.„... .•*•..•.••• •--...    •.••  •. .-  ••• ••..... •.  •
3. 2*. 14' -  Since  rigorous,' "quantitative implementation procedures for ALARA
have  not been  perfected,  EPA should add a  note that ALARA implementation.
should proceed on a structured qualitative -basis (E.a-6).

Response:  We  agree.   The preamble to the  recommendations makes it clear
that  ALARA will require  qualitative judgments.
 3-2.15   EPA should  emphasize that ALARA is the fundamental concept of
 radiation protection (A.b-10,  A.d-23,  B.a-19).

 Response:   We  agree that ALARA is of fundamental importance.  ALARA is one
 of  the  three principles that constitute the basic system.of dose
 limitation in  Federal  radiation protection guidance for occupational
 exposure:   (1) elimination of  unnecessary exposures; (2) keeping necessary
 exposures ALARA;  and (3) not exceeding the dose limits.
 3.2.16   EPA should  emphasize that meeting the RPG limits is not ALARA
 (A.a-38,  A.c-1,  A.d-23).

 Response:   We  agree,  and  this point is made in the final guidance.
 3.2.17   The  phrase "sustained effort..." in Recommendation 1 should be
 clarified  so that it does not imply more than continuing professional
 evaluation (E.b-2).
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 Response:   The recommendations require more than "continuing  professional
 evaluation."  For example, workers should play a major role in keeping
 their exposures ALARA.


 .3..2.IS  EPA-should adopt- the. following wording for Recommendation  2:   "for
'•any -justifiable .activity :a sustained effort should'be made to assure  that
•the collective dose of all. individual's involved" in this activity is as  low
 a.s  is . reasonably, achievable"' (A.b-5,. Ai.d-29).     ' .

 Response:   We believe Recommendations 1 and 2 clearly include that intent.
 3.2.19  The theory of radiation ho tmesis may invalidate the concept  of
 ALARA (A.d-35).

 Response:  To date, the theory has not received- sufficient scientific
 support that it needs to be considered seriously.  In any case, it is not
 clear that it would apply at occupational levels of exposure.   See the
 response to comment 1.4.15.
 3..2.20 r The:. ALARA" conc.e-pt. should .be .dropped since it has  resulted  in
'annuaiv.expo'sufe- limits being- Improperly'adopted as' engineering design
 criteria. (A.a-38).       .      •

 Response:  We-do not believe the premise is generally correct.  Even
 if it were,'the solution, would be to enforce use of the ALARA concept
 in engineering design, not to drop it.
 3'.2.21  Inclusion of proposed Recommendation 2 makes proposed
 Recommendations 1 and 4 superfluous (A.a-12).

 Response:  We disagree.  Recommendations 1, 2, and 4 deal with
 justification, optimization, and implementation of optimization,
 respectively.  These are separate matters.
 3.2.22  -Adoption of the proposed guidelines codifying ALARA will make
 protection programs less flexible and effective (A.a-41, A.a-45, A.d-21,
 A.d-31,  B.a-27, B.a-32, B.a-34, B.a-38, B.a-48, B.c-20, B.c-22, E.b-8).

 Response:  This was not the intent of the proposed recommendation on
 minimum radiation protection requirements, and we do not believe it would
 have been their effect.  In any case, the issue is moot, since proposed
 Recommendation 4 does not appear in the final recommendations.
 3.2.23  ALARA is too vague in a legal sense to serve as a basis for
 regulation (A.a-38).
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Response:  ALARA has been an  explicit  part  of  existing Federal, guidance
since 1960, and has been a successful  and integral  feature  of the radiation
protection programs of Federal  agencies.  Insofar  as  implementation of the
ALARA principle results in regulatory  requirements, such implementations
are not vague and have a legal  and enforceable meaning.   See-the response
to comment 3.2.12.             .   .
3.3'      RADIATION PROTECTION  GUIDES  (RPGs)


3.3.1    WHOLE BODY, INCLUDING 5(N-18)
3.3.1.1  EPA has not presented  a  convincing .scientific argument that the
risk associated with a  5  rem annual  limit  is  substantially lower than that
associated with a  3 rem quarterly limit  coupled  with the  5 (N-18)
cumulative limit (A.a-8,  A.a-15,  A.a-41, A.d-9,  A.d-14, A.d-19, B.a-9,
B.a-18, B.a-20,' B.a-27, B.a-32', B.a-48,  B.c-14,  B.c-20).

Response:  The proposed limi't permits a  dose  of  5  rems in a year to an
adult- worker,, regardless  of the .worker.' s age.  Existing guidance permits
      in:-exces9r"6f:: 5-- 'rems..up' to- a 'limit' af ,12' rems  in a year,  if the
'accumulated dose does not  exceed  5(N-18)  rems,  where  N is  the worker's age
in years.  Thus, for example, under a  5 rem  annual  limit  the  maximum
accumulated dose for a  specific worker first employed at  age  40 for only 5
ye.ars would be a maximum of  25 rems (i.e., 5x5).  Under a  3 rem quarterly
limit, the accumulated  dose  allowed would be 60 rems  (i.e., 5x12).

         It is true that the maximum lifetime  risk  possible under the new
recommendations is the  same  as under the  former guides for a  worker
receiving 5 rems every  year  from  age 18 to age  65.  However,  the general
pattern of dose accumulation by individuals  during  an occupational
lifetime indicates that elimination of the 5(N-18)  flexibility will reduce
cumulative dose and, hence,  risk.
3.3.1.2  The imposition of  the  proposed  5  rem limit  would  increase the
work force by 75 percent  (B.a-33).

Response:  The comment is grossly  in  error.   Independent  studies indicate
that less than a few percent increase would be  needed,  at  most,  even in
those few industries that now deliver high doses  to  workers.   We believe •
even these studies are overly pessimistic, since  only  0.1% of  workers now
receive more than 5 rems  per year  (AIF80,  CobSO,  DOE80, Ku84).
3.3.1.3  A change in the limit to  5  rem/yr  is  not  necessary  in  view of  the
relative level of safety in  the  radiation  industries  and  the inherent
margin of safety in radiation risk assessments (B.a-17).
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 Response:  This, view is not shared by EPA, the majority  of  commenters,
 nor by national or international communities of radiation protection.
 See the responses to comments 1.5.4 and 1.5.6.


 .3.3.1.4.  .The imposition of the.5 rem limit .would not  substantially  reduce
;_current exposures,, whilef it; would increase the administrative burden of
 .radiation protection -(A. a-10, A.d-18).:

 Response:  The 5 rem limit should not impose-any increase in administrative
 costs, since annual doses and cumulative doses are less  difficult to record
 than quarterly doses and the 5(N-18) record.  See also the  responses to
 comments 3.3.1.1 and those regarding collective doses.
 3.3.1.5  Because most exposures at nuclear power plants  occur during  the
 six to seven week outages, the five rems per year limit, or some
 straight-line interpolation thereof, would severely hamper activities
 during-these outages (B.a-54).

 .Response:'  The contrary is true, since the recommended dose limit  of  5  rems
 for 'one year actually' provides more operational flexibility than a  3  rems
 .per ..quarter ..Limit;.   ;  • • • •. -.-,  :  .;  -.  .'  ......",.-   •     •.
 3..3.1.6  A revision in the current 5(N-18). rems dose  limitation  to  5  rem/yr
 would present problems -in performing major tasks at nuclear power plants
 (B.a-50).   '         •  •          .      .             •

 Response:  We disagree.  See the responses to comments  1.9.13 and 3.3.1.5.
 3.3.1.7" An inflexible dose- limit of 5 rem/yr would require some work  to
 be deferred until the next calendar year (B.a-38).

 Response:  The comment implicitly assumes that use will be made of  the
 so-called 5(N-18) "budget."  It is the intent of these recommendations to
 prevent this practice.
 3.3.1.8  The 5 rem limit might do more harm than good, because a  larger
 number of less skilled workers would have to be used to perform necessary
 maintenance and modification work (B.a-47).

 Response:  See the responses to comments 3.3.1.5 and 3.3.1.6.
 3.3.1.9  A change in the dose limits at this time will be misperceived  by
 the public and/or workers as indicating that radiation is more hazardous
 than thought in the past (A.d-14, B.a-38).
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 Response:   If so,  the public perception would be correct.  The  risk  assumed
 associated,, in 1960,  with the previous limits was smaller than  is now
 estimated  for the' same dose.
 3%3:. 1.10  The S(N-18) cumulative dose limit should, be. retained; however,
•the 3 rems. per'quarter restriction, .-which" is arbitrary, should be..
 abandoned (A.a-4l).   .      .'.       .

 Response:  We disagree.   This proposal would allow very large annual  doses
 in  some cases.  For example, a newly-employed 26 year-old worker with no
 previous accumulation of radiation dose could receive a dose of up to 60
 rems  the next five years.  The opportunity for abuse of such a system is
 obvious.
 3.3.1.11  A quarterly limit of 3 rems should still be maintained,  even  if
 an annual 5 rem limit is adopted (B.a-32, B.a-33, B.a-36, B.b-7, B.c-10).

 Response: .Since there is no biological basis for specifying limits  for
 periods of less than'one year, except for the. unborn, we have not
 specified such' shorter term limits.  Regulatory agencies, may, however,
• a.d'pgt;..l;imits- for. s-HortJe.r..pe.ri.ods..fqr; operational reasons.  Such limits
 should't?ke into account: the.need for operational flexibility required  to
 maintain doses ALARA. This might very well lead to a decision to  retain a
 3 -rem quarterly limit.  See the' response to comment 3.3.1.5.
 3.3.1.12  A quarterly limit should be retained to distribute the exposure
 evenly (A.a-18,  C-8).

 Response:   See .the response to comment 3.3.1.11.
 3.3.1.13  The replacement of the quarterly limit with an annual limit
 removes a radiation protection tool which assures management  that  the
 worker's exposure is accurate within three months "(B.a-11).

 Response:  The absence of dose limits in Federal guidance  for periods  of
 less  than one year does not preclude regulatory agencies or management
 from  specifying administrative control levels or reference levels  for
 periods of less than one year.
 3.3.1.14  If the regulatory agency were to impose a quarterly limit  at
 one-quarter of the 5 rem annual limit, or 1.25 rems per quarter, many
 tasks at nuclear power plants could not be performed (B.a-48).

 Response:   There is no requirement that regulatory agencies do so.   See
 the response to comment 3.3.1.11.
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 3.3.1.15   Any quarterly limit more restrictive than 3 rems would cause
 unwarranted hardship and unnecessary costs (B.a-20, B.a-33).

.Response:   See response to. comments 3.3.1.11 and 3.3.1.14.


 3-v3-'.lu.l&;.. It .is not beneficial'-for the worker to. be exposed up to 5' rems
• in a  quarter, since he would be'unable to work for the remainder of the
.year  (B.a"-33-).  '.;    •        .   .   -.

 Response:   This same comment applies to using up any limit (including the
 previous  value of 3 rems per quarter) early in the period to which the
 limit applies.  We assume that the same forces of self-interest on the
 part  of  the worker (in the case  of temporary employees) or the employer
 (in the  case of permanent or tenured employees) will operate under the new
 limits 'as  formerly.
 3.3.1.17  The 5 rem annual limit is justified based on the recommendations
 of  the ICRP and'the NCRP (A.d-42, F-3).

 Response:   No response required.   '        •

 3.3.1.18  Setting annual-occupational exposure limits at a whole-body dose
 equivalent of 5 rems is quite reasonable (A.b-9, B.a-53, D-2, E.a-2,
 E.a-5,  E.a-7).

 Response:   No response required.


 3..3.1'. 19  The proposed 5' rem annual limit,  coupled with a 100 rem lifetime
 limit,  will allow flexibility and at the same time restrict the maximum
 dose (A.b-8,  B.a-5).

 Response:   We agree.  However, the "100 rem lifetime dose" was not pre-
 sented  in-proposed recommendations as a dose limit.  The recommendations
 now include an admonition to avoid exposures near the limit for a
 substantial portion of a working lifetime,  as a substitute for this
 numerical  objective.  See also the response to comment 3.4.6.
 3.3.1.20  EPA should establish quarterly limits equal to no more than
 one-half of the proposed 5 rem annual limit (A.c-7).

 Response:   Dose limits for periods of less than one year, except for
 protection of the unborn,  are an operational matter left to the regulatory
 agencies.   See the response to comment 3.3.1.11.
 3.3.1.21   Workers should have the option of building a "bank" for potential
 exposures  under the present 5(N-18) formula,  with the worker assuming the
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 responsibility  of  increased risk in return for higher compensation
 (A.b-20).

 Response:   We believe that the existence of such a "bank," .which was
 permit-ted  under the  old guidance,  leads to the possibility of unacceptably
 high ,lifetime risk.       •
'5.3,1.22-  A worker•should be permitted- to receive a 7 rem/yr external
whole  body dose  equivalent for routine plus planned special exposures and
an additional  contingency of 3 rem/yr should be available (B.a-38).

Response:   We  disagree.   The risk associated with 10 rem/yr is
unacceptably high.
 3.3.1.23  The  total of the exposure in excess of the 5 rem/yr should go
 into  a  dose  bank which should not exceed 25 rems over a lifetime (B.a-34,
 B.a-38). .                     •....

 .Response:  There is no."dose bank" in final guidance.  (See the response
 to  comment 3'.3.1.21.)   However, -regulatory agencies may establish
 •provisions- for- unusual circumstances.-under .Recommendation 10.
 3.3.1.24   The  proposed' guidance, should',  following the lead of ICRP-26,
 allow.an  exposure  as  high as 10 rems for a single .event (C-2).

 Response:   See the response to comment 3.3.1.23.
 3.3.1.25'  EPA claims  that a 100 rem lifetime limit would be adequate to
 insure  that  radiation workers would be as.safe as those in other
 industries;  if this is true,  it would not be necessary to impose any
 particular short-term or annual limits (B.a-38).

"Response:  We made no such broad claim for the objective of a 100 rem
 lifetime dose.  See "also the  response to comment 3.3.1.21.
 3.3.1.26  Whole-body limits should be the following:  for any radiation
 worker  - 5 rem/yr deep dose and 25 rem/yr shallow dose; for radiation
 workers with recorded radiation histories - 15 rem/yr deep dose [limited
 by  5(N-18) and 45 rem/yr shallow dose]  (A.a-41).

 Response:   The recommendations provide  a similar limit (50 rems) for skin
 (which  is  approximately equivalent "shallow" dose)," based upon avoidance
 of  nonstochastic  effects.   A whole-body limit of 5 rem/yr deep dose
 corresponds to the ICRP limit of 5 rem/yr effective dose equivalent.  We
 see no  basis for  allowing  a higher dose to workers with recorded radiation
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 histories.   The substitution of a 5 rems per year limit for the 5(N-18)
 rule obviates the need for making assumptions of previous exposure
 history.   See also the response to comment' 2.10.11.


 3'.3.1'.27. ' Whole-body. limits- should be the following:  15 rem/yr deep dose
"and 45' rem/yr shallow 'dose.'•'"•  V  .    .  :  :

 Response:  'See'the response -to-comment 3'.3.-1.26.-
 3.3.2    GONADS
 3.3.2.1  The separate limit for the gonads is the most "incoherent" part
 of the Guidelines,  since the total stochastic risk is the sum of the
 somatic risk to all organs of the body plus the genetic risk (A.a-40).

 Response:  The cbmmenter assumes that the only "coherent" way to approach
 risk.limitation is  to combine all.effects designated as "stochastic" for
 the purpose of limiting dose.  This is 'an incorrect assumption.  Genetic
; and. somatic--.effects : are; nor the'same.; The severity, and significance of
 genetic'effects varies from inconsequential to lethal.  Somatic effects
,are usually lethal. ' Furthermore, genetic effects occur only in
 descendants of the  individual receiving a dose, and somatic effects occur
 only in the individual.  It is necessary to make a judgment of the
 relative severity-of  and the importance of avoiding these quite different
 types  of effects in different groups of people (the workers who receive a
 direct benefit from work involving exposure, and descendants who, in
 general, may not, and who.clearly do not make the decision to assume the
 risk).  Only if this  judgment is that the severity and importance of these
 different risks (on a unit risk basis) are both the same is it appropriate
 to combine them.  In  the proposed recommendation we did not elect to do
 so.  Limiting the genetic and somatic risks separately, as we proposed,
 permits an independent judgment to be made (or changed) on genetic risk
 without affecting the judgment on somatic risk.  Final recommendations
 combine these stochastic risks using the ICRP-26 weighting factors for
 genetic vs somatic  risk only because the difference in protection is
 minimal, and it is  in the interest of international uniformity.


 3.3.2.2  The effect of placing the same nonstochastic limit (5 rem/yr) on
 the gonads as on the  whole body has effectively raised the weighting
 factor for stochastic risk estimation for the gonads from 0.25 (ICRP) to
 1.0 (EPA) (E.a-5).

 Response:  The comment is correct.  In part, this compensates, for the
 failure of the ICRP's weighting, factor to account for any genetic effects
 beyond the 2nd generation.  In practice, this limit would almost always be
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 satisfied through the 5 rem limit for somatic stochastic effects, so that
 the  effective factor is 1.2,  not 4.  See the response to comment 3.3.2.1
 for  further discussion.


 3.3-2.3  The.'proposed annual  limit of 5 rems is sufficient to protect
 against."genetic damage.'..rNo further action is. necessary (A.a-31, A.a-36,
 A.a-46, B.a-5.2).' '.""•''-'.'   .        ;  '

 Response:  This comment is in agreement with our proposed guidance  for
 limiting  genetic or mut.ational effects in progeny.  It may be useful here
 to distinguish between the two types of radiation effects in progeny.
 Genetic (or "hereditary") effects refer to those affecting the progeny of
 the  irradiated person, and the risks of those effects is limited by
 restricting the dose to the gonads of the irradiated person.  Somatic
 effects (teratogenic and carcinogenic) are manifested in children from
 their exposure in utero.  See Section 3..8 for further discussion of the
 risks of  such effects, particularly the responses to comments 3.8.15 and
 3.8.51.                    '
 3>3.3 :;.'.../LENS-; OF-EYE'    .,.  . '  •'•.:,,'.
 3.3.3.1   We agree that a dose limit- to the eye lens should be maintained
 at  less  than- 5 rem/yr (D-2).                                       '         .

 Response:   The current consensus for protracted irradiation of the lens
 with high or low-LET radiation is that a total dose equivalent of 1500
 rems over an occupational lifetime would be below the threshold  for the
'production of any lens 'opacificatioh that would interfere with vision
 (ICRP 77).  However, some opacities might be produced which, while not in
 themselves detrimental to vision, might develop without further  exposure
 to  the point of causing deterioration of vision.  Therefore, the
 recommended dose-equivalent limit to prevent- nonstochastic effects for the
 lens of  the eye over a working lifetime was reduced from 30 rems in-a year
 to  15 rems in a year (ICRP80).
 3.3.3.2  The lens of the eye has a threshold for vision-impairing opacity
 at  around 1000 rad (A.b-24).

 Response:  The dose value cited lies within the range of reported
 thresholds for observed lens opacities that are not vision impairing
 (ICRP80).  See also the response to comment 3.3.3.1.
 3.3.3.3  It takes exposures in excess of 200 rems to produce cataracts
 (B.b-4, E.a-5,  E.b-1).
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Response:  See the response to comment  3.3.3.1.
3-. 3.3.-A  The annual dose limit-to  the  lens  of  the  eye should be increased
from .15 to 30 rems (A.b-14, B.b-1, E.b-1);  to  50 rems (E.b-8).

Response:.  Final' recommendations .specify an annual dose limit of 15 rems
for lens of eye in agreement with 'ICRP recommendations.  See the response
to comment. 3.3.3.1..-. '.'.••   .       '-...-  ...   •..-..
3.3.3.5  A limit of 5 rem/yr to  the  eye  lens  would  bring a number of
radiation workers into Range C,  which would require "professional
radiation protection supervision before  and while  such jobs are
undertaken"; which would impose  considerable  operational difficulties
(A.b-17, A.d-5).

Response:  Final guidance adopts an  annual limit of 15 rems for lens of
eye and the proposed ranges for  the  minimum Radiation Protection
Requirement do not appear.
3-3; ..3.-. 6.. ••• .The 'p.ro.p.osed-, _RPGs-:: in- Recommendation 3a.  of  the guidelines are not
entirely understandable^. : For •'example,  the  dose-equivalent  of 5 rems from
external sources cannot  equal that  of  the lens  alone (A.b-15, A.d-21).

Response:  .We do not agree.  The  limit  for  lens of  the  eye  is independent
of that for the whole body, as  in the  1960  guides.
3.3.4 HANDS
3.3.4.1  EPA does not present adequate  justification for reducing the
annual limit on hand dose from  75  to  50 rems  (A.d-23,  B.a-8,  B.c-21,
E.a-2).

Response:  Final recommendations adopt  the  ICRP-26 system of  dose
limitation, in which nonstochastic effects  are  believed  prevented by
applying a dose-equivalent  limit of 50  rems in  a .year  to all  tissues
except the lens of the eye, for which the limit is 15  rems in a year.
This ICRP limit is based on preventing  any  one  organ or  tissue from
receiving a total dose over a working lifetime  that  could lead to the
induction of nonstochastic  effects.   Although irradiation of  extremities
does not include all skin of the body,  there  is no demonstrated need to
exceed 50 rems, even in glove box  operations.
3.3.4.2  A dose limit of 50 rem/yr to  the hands  is  reasonable (D-^2).

Response:  No response required.
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3.3.4.3  Feet, forearms, and ankles- should be addressed  in a  category
labeled "extremities" with the same limit as the hands  (A.a-41,  A.d-23,
B.a-4, B.a-5, B.c-12, E.b-3, E.b-5).

Response:  This has been done in the final recommendation.
3.3.4.4  -Feet should be included with'hands, whereas  forearms  and  ankles
should be included -with'."'any other organ"  (E-.b-8).      " •

Response:  In the final recommendations, "hands" is replaced by
"extremities" (i.e., "hands and forearms,  feet  and ankles")  for which the
annual limit is 50 rems.  Forearms and ankles are therefore  included  in
extremities and are not included-in the  "remainder" organs in  the  weighted
summation for the effective dose equivalent.  This is done because it is
convenient to apply such a limit in practice, and there is no  special
biological significance to the ankles and-  forearms with respect to
radiosensitivity.  Final guidance provides an expanded  but not exhaustive
listing of tissues and organs to be considered  in the ."remainder"  and from
which five are selected for calculation  of effective  dose equivalent.


3;.3.,.4»5;.'Separate dose-.limits, f or the-forearms, feet,, and ankles equal to
those'proposed'by "the ICRP should be included in the  proposed  guidance
(A.d-9).'. '.'-.'   '      .     -; '

Response:  See. the. response .to comment _3.3.4.4.


3.3.4.6  Since there is generally not a  large dose differential between
the hands and forearms, the effective limiting  factor under  the EPA
guidelines would' be the'whole-body limit of 5 rem/yr  (B.a-46).

Response:  Final guidance limits the dose  to hands and  forearms
("extremity")- to 50 rem/yr.  When the entire body is uniformly irradiated
then  the hands and forearms are effectively protected to a 5 rem/yr limit.
3.3.4.7  EPA does not justify the reduction in  the foot  limit  from 75 to
30 rems (B.c-21).

Response:  The limit in final guidance for extremities is  50 rems.   This
limit is also recommended by the ICRP.  In addition, we  know of  no
requirement for extremity doses greater than 50 rems.  See the response  to
comment 3.3.4.1.
3.3.4.8  The whole-body limit may be controlling  for  the  forearms  and
ankles under the proposed EPA guidance, which could result  in  serious  time
restrictions or major facility modifications (E.a-5,  E.b-6).
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Response:  Final  guidance  specifies  extremities to. mean the forearms and
hands, or the lower  legs and  feet.   The  limit  of 5 rem/yr would be limiting
for the extremities  only in the  case of  essentially uniform irradiation of
the whole body.   See the responses to comments -3-3.4.1 and 3..3.4.6.
3.3".4..9"" EPA.rs .justification-for'reducing the limit for; the forearm is
that  "such.a high  value  is  not  needed";  this'is  neither adequate
•justification nor  is-it  necessarily true (A.a~-4, A.d-9, B.a-47, E.a-5,
E.b-7).

Response:  Final guidance  limits  the extremity dose to 50 rem/yr rather
than  the proposed  30  rem/yr.  See the response to comment 3.3.4.1.


3.3.4.10   In applying  the  whole-body limit to the forearms, feet, and
ankles, EPA has not considered  future activities such as decommissioning
and cleaning (B.a-47).

Response:  The final  recommendations provide a 50 rem/yr nonstochastic
limit of protection for. the extremities,: which are defined to include the
forearms and hands, or the  lower  legs and feet.   The commenter does not
pxoyide; a..r.easoni why;  such.future  activities .would, justify a limit higher
.'than " th'e- assumed'':threshold"for  nonstochastic effects.
3.3.4.11   The low  proposed  limit  to the  forearms could re-suit in high costs
for  the chemical processing of  plutonium,  since remote operations'would
likely be  required;  this  expense  is not  justified in light of EPA's
apparent reason for  lowering the  limit ("such a high value is not needed")
(E.a-5).   .

Response:  We do not believe that the modest  reduction from 75 to 50 rems
would result in such major  changes  being required.
 3.3.4.12   There  are  some  occupational  tasks  in which the whole-body/skin
 limits are not•appropriate  to  the  extremities; a case in point is work
 inside a  steam generator  or a  recently drained reactor cavity (B.a-28).

 Response:  The whole-body dose limit does  not  apply to the extremities or.
 the skin.  The applicable limit for both is  50 rems.  See the response to
 comment 3.3.4.1.
 3.3.4.13   Extremity  limits  should  be  the  following:   For any radiation
worker - 50  rem/yr deep  plus  shallow  dose;  For radiation workers with
 recorded radiation histories  - 75  rem/yr  (A.a-41).

Response:  See  the responses  to  comments  3.3.4.1  and 3.3.1.26.
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3.3.5    ANY OTHER ORGAN
3.3.5'.l  EPA has not .adequately justified  the  selection  of  a  30 rem organ
limit, rather than the internationally-adopted value  of  50  rems (A.a-40,
A.a-41, E.a-6).  EPA should adopt  the  ICRP-26  organ limit of  50 rem/yr
         B;a-32i;B;Q-lQ,-'E.a-5-, E,.a-6, E'.b-5VE.
Response:  The final recommendations adopt the  ICRP-26  annual limit of
50 rems.
3.3.5.2  EPA should adopt a value of  15 rem/yr as  the  organ limit,  rather
than 30 rem/yr (A.c-1).

Response:  This comment is apparently  based  on the precedent established
by the previous guidance, in which the organ limits addressed both
stochastic (e.g. cancer and genetic)  risks and nonstochastic (e.g.
opacification of the cornea, skin erythema)  risks.  In the  present
recommendations the so-called "organ"  limit  addresses  only  the latter type
of -risk.  The former (stochastic risk) are addressed by the effective dose
equivalent limit of 5 rems through use of  the organ and tissue weighting
fac.t.ora* •••.'..• •.;.•-..•:..   •  ... •.   ... .-.-:.    •    ....
3.3.5.3  A confusing precedent is set by EPA  in  including  skin as  a
specified organ within the weighted sum of annual  dose  equivalents,  since
ICRP chose to exclude it (B.6-7)."

Response:  The ICRP, at its 1978 meeting at Stockholm,  noted  that  a
weighting factor equal to 0.01 (as proposed by EPA) was  appropriate for
cases in which the detriment from skin irradiation was  to  be  accounted for.
3.3.5.4  Is the dose equivalent limit to a  small area  of  the  skin  the  same
as .that to the skin of the whole body?  (A.d-22, B.6-7)

Response:  Yes.  However, the dose is to be over an  appropriate  area of
the skin.  As provided in note 3 of  the proposed and final
recommendations, dosimetric conventions specified  by the  ICRP for
measurement of the various types of  radiation may  be used for determining
conformance to these recommendations. .  Paragraphs  182  and 183 of ICRP
Publication 26 specify the appropriate areas for averaging as 1  cm^ for
external radiation and 100 cm^ for surface  contamination  of  the  skin.
3.3.5.5  EPA should define in the guidance what  the  organs  are  that  are
protected .by the 30 rem organ limit  (A.a-46).

Response:  This has been clarified in the final  recommendations.
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 3.3.5.6  It is not clear what constitutes an organ; are the head  and  neck
 governed by the whole-body limit of 5 rems or the organ limit of  30 rems
 if  lead glasses are worn to protect the eye lens?  Does "whole-body"
•literally.mean the whole body and not a "major part thereof," such as  the
 head and-trunk (A.b-24).

 Response:  This/ has -Been-,clarified in---the..final recommendations.  The
.application of the' "whole body" limit is governed by'the degree of
 exposure-of.individual organs, (e.g. the thyroid and such "other"  organs as
 thymus  and  brain).
 3.3.5.7  Exposure to the four tissues which "have a sensitivity  to  cancer
 incidence greater than for the whole body - thyroid, bone marrow,  breast,
 and bronchial epithelium - should be equivalent to whole-body exposure
 (A.a-38).

 Response:  Even though some tissues have a sensitivity greater  than  that
 of. average tissue,  the total risk, from whole body irradiation cannot
•exceed the sum of risks from all individual organs and tissues  irradiated
 at the same dose-level.  The weighting' factors, represent.the proportion of
 stochastic' risk'for each tissue when the whole body is irradiated
•uniformly.. .' They, thus provide a consistent system for. calculating  the
,'efi'ee'tive,;.dose.' equivalent, .regardless-".of' whether the whole body  is
.irradiated-uniformly or.not.
 3.3.5.8  EPA should consider addressing the problem of partial-organ  doses
 (A.a-14).

 Response:   In general,  this is accomplished by averaging the dose  to  an
 organ over the entire organ.  See also the response to the comment 3.3.5.4,
 3.3.6    WEIGHTING FACTORS
 3.3.6.1  EPA has not sufficiently justified their departure from  the
 ICRP-recommended weighting factors (A.a-18, A.b-17, A.d-18, B.a-5, B.a-14,
 B.a-34, C-5,  E.a-5,  E.a-6, E.b-5).

 Response:  The final recommendations adopt ICRP-26 weighting factors.
 This  was done because the difference in protection between use of  ICRP and
 the proposed EPA weighting factors is minimal and it is in the interest  of
 international uniformity.  See also the response to comment 3,3.2.1.
 3.3.6.2  There is no scientific validity in the weighted sum of annual
 dose equivalents (A.d-19,  B.a-9, E.a-5).
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 Response:   We  disagree.   There  is  now sufficient knowledge to permit the
 summation  of detriment  according to the relative risks of irradiated
 tissues.         -                   •
 3.3.6.3   Devi-ation- from, the ICRP-26 values would cause much confusion in
 the  scientific, and  radiation- protection community (B.a-36,.E.a-5).

 Response:   See' the  response to comment 3-..3.6.1"..
 3.3.6.4   EPA should  use  the organ weighting factors recommended by ICRP-26
 to  relate organ risk to  whole-body risk (A.a-6,  A.a-38, A.a-46, A.b-23,
 B.a-6, B.a-14,  B.a-17, B.a-46,  B.c-11,  B.c-21,  B.c-22, D-10, E.a-5, E.b-1,
 F-2).

 Response:   We have  done  so.  See the response to comment 3.3.6.1.
 3.3.6.5   EPA's  weighting  factor for gonad dose should be the same as
 ICRP-26  (A.a-6,  A.a-38, A.b-23,.A.d-13,  B.a-17,  B.a-53, B.c-11, D-6,
 E..a-6, E.b-10).  '          '   '     .    .

 Response:  'Tina! recommendations adopt the ICRP-26 weighting factor for
•gonadsV.  See  the-'responses' to. comments 3.3.2.1 and 3.3.2.2.

                          - -   -                 .    ' -      *
 3'. 3.6.6   EPA  should  have  set the gonad weighting factor, at least as low as
 any  of the  other weighting factors,  i.e., 0.2 or lower (E.a-5).

 Response:   See  the response  to  comment 3.3.6.5.


 3.3.6.7   EPA  may depart from the ICRP weighting  scheme as  long as they are
 able to  justify their  departure on the basis of  significant differences in
 risk evaluation (A.d-23)-.

 Response:   See  the responses to comments 3.3.2.1 and 3.3.2.2.


 3*3.6.8   Application of the  ICRP-26 concept of weighted whole-body
 equivalent  doses for organ doses is not  practical and results in
 overestimation  of individual exposures (E.b-3).

 Response:   We disagree.   The system has  been shown to be practical through
 its  wide  international application.   We  are not  aware of any significant
 examples  of this system leading to an overestimate of effective dose
 equivalent  or risk.
 3.3.6.9   EPA should  consider the adoption of separate risk factors for
 organs dominant  in one  sex  only (A.a-18).
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Response: . This was considered,  but  it  was  rejected as an unnecessary
complication  that  was  not  justified  by  a large enough difference in risk,
and that could encourage sex  discrimination.  . See the response to comment
•2.13.6.  .          •        /   •   .          •        '
-3'.3.6r.io '-'The- weight ing /factor  of 0.20' for breast is inconsistent with the
"other organ" limit of 3.0  r ems  for breast  '(B'.a-9) .  '

Response:   The weighting factor and "other organ" limit address different
types of risk, and therefore  need 'not  be the  same.


3.3.6.11  The EPA weighting  factors are unnormalized (i.e.,  sum to 0.68)
(B.a-17).

Response:   This  is not true.  The commenter evidently applied the weighting
factor (0.08) to only one  of  the "other organs,"  instead of  to five "other
organs," as indicated in proposed guidance.


3.3.6.12  the stochastic formula would' permit an  intake of strontium - 90
,qf-  17'- times.: the. uptake of  this  substance 'under, the  critical  organ concept
             ''       ''       "
Response:  As  illustrated  for  various  radionuclides in Table Bl of the
Background- Report  (EPA 520/4-81-003) of  our proposed guidance,
computations based  on the  proposed  dose  limits and the new  •
dosimetric/metabolic  models  result  in  intake limits that -are higher for
some  radionuclides  and lower for others.   These new models result in an
intake  limit 7 times  higher  for  the old  critical organ limit for Sr-90.
Only  the' additional' factor of  two is attributed to the conversion from
critical to weighted  organ limits.

      We note  that  the fact  that the proposed intake limit for a given
radionuclide may be substantially higher  is not a valid reason to permit
otherwise  unnecessary intakes  or necessary intakes that are not ALARA.
The dose (and  intake) limits do  not stand by themselves:  unnecessary
exposures  should not  occur;  necessary  exposures should be kept ALARA; and,
finally the limits  should  not  be exceeded.
 3.3.6.13   In  the  EPA weighting  scheme,  the  thyroid gland is given little
 emphasis despite  the fact  that  this  organ is  as  sensitive to induction of
 cancer  by  external  radiation as any  tissue  in the body (A.a-38).

 Response:  While  the thyroid is sensitive to  the induction of cancer by
 radiation, only a small  percentage (about 6%  or  less)  of those cancers are
 lethal.  On the other  hand,  mortality  for lung cancer  and for leukemia
 (red bone  marrow) is nearly  100%.   These  differences are considered in the
 weighting  factors.
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 3.3.7    50-YEAR DOSE COMMITMENT
 3.3'.7.1  The age of a worker should be taken into account when assigning
 dose commitment; for older workers, much of the 50-year dose commitment
 will.'occur after;.the .individual, has- died. (E.a-5).

 Response:'  One purpose of the.committed dose equivalent is to assure
 that for the limiting .case of intake of•radionuclides every year during
 a  50-year working lifetime, the annual dose received in the 50th year
 from accumulated body burdens will not' exceed the annual dose limits.
 When workers experience intakes late in their careers it is true they may
 never actually receive an entire 50-year dose commitment.  On the other
 hand,  there will also be workers who receive more than the 50-year
 committed dose equivalent, because they live longer than 50 years after
 intake.  It would be difficult to accurately adjust the committed dose
 equivalent for each worker, because longevity cannot be predicted.  We
 have concluded that it is not practical to adjust committed doses
 according to age.  .(See .also responses to comments 2.8.1, 2.8.2, 2.8.3,
 and  2.8.6.)
.:3;..3~7..:2.-';j'I.t ;.is i^eitherv reasonable, nor .justified to assign all of  the dose
'from long-lived raidioriuclides to their year of intake, since this is not
 the- manner 'in which the dose would actually be delivered (A.b-23, A.d-13,
 A.d-22,  B.a-24, E.a-5', E.a-7, E.b-5, E.b-6, E.b-7).                '  '

 Response:  -We disagree.  The primary purpose of the use of the committed
 dose concept  is to assign accountability for the future dose that will
 accrue to  the worker to the situation under which the intake occurs.  In
 some cases., however, it is- important to also manage committed doses on a
 year-to-year  basis.  For the case of large intakes where the committed
 dose equivalent significantly exceeds the limiting values for committed
 dose,  the  final recommendations provide that the doses received from that
 intake in  subsequent years be considered so that the sum of annual doses
 from such  intakes and additional exposures do not exceed the annual
 limiting values.   See also the response to comment 3.3.7.1.
 3.3.7.3  The use of annual committed dose equivalent operates to shorten
 the  working life of a worker by approaching the lifetime dose limit faster
 (E.b-9).

 Response:   The commenter is apparently concerned that the summation of
 committed  dose equivalents would cause, for long-lived radionuclides, a
 lifetime  dose limit to be reached (or exceeded) at some time considerably
 before  the doses were actually received.  This would be particularly .
 relevant  if a worker received large intakes whose committed doses exceeded
 a  lifetime limit early in his career.  If this were the case it would
 indeed  be  necessary to avoid future intake or external exposure to avoid
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 an excessive lifetime dose (and hence risk). .This specific  issue  is  moot,
 however,  since no lifetime dose value is given in the final  recommen-
 dations.   Howeverx the recommendations also contain an applicable
 admonition to avoid continued exposure at or. near the limits  that  has  a
 similar, objective. .         .                      .


 3.3.7.4  Doses should be assigned in advance for each year from  intake to
 age "6*5 or 70 (A.a-14).    ."'     •""      '    '  •    '•   '    •

 Response:  The suggestion that annual doses from actual uptakes  be
 assigned  in advance for each year through age 65 or 70 would  entail
 burdensome and unnecessary recordkeeping.   In addition, it is an arbitrary
 assumption that most workers will die (or risk should be neglected) at age
 65 or 70.  It is not clear why this would be preferable to the present
 50-year assumption.  See the response to comment 3.3.7.2.
 3.3.8'    COMBINED INTERNAL AND EXTERNAL DOSES
•\:3>3,.'.8..-If.'.,''We. a.re< In--'agreement.'.that ripnuniform exposure should be treated
 using a weighted.sum of doses to individual organs (A.a-18, A.a-46,
•A.a-49, .A.a-50-, A-.a-Sl, A.b-9, A.b-18, A.c-6, A.d-13, A.d-23, A.d-42,
 B.a-3,  B.a-5, B.a-33, B.a-34, B.a-46, B.a-53, C-5, C-6, D-4, ).
                           *            .    •       '        '

 Response:   No response needed.
 3.3.S..2. -The additional cost of combining internal and external dose
 equivalents is not justified by the decrease in risk or by its technical
 validity (A.a-8, A.a-19, A.a-41, A.d-18, A.d-40, B.a-11, B.a-31, B.a-36,
 B.a-37,  B.a-39, B.a-48).

 Response:  We disagree.  The commenters do not provide a basis for  their
 assertion that risks for internal and external exposure are not additive.
 Current  information on occupational exposure of workers indicates that
 relatively few workers receive significant doses from both external and
 internal exposure to radiation.  Thus, the additional cost associated with
 informing and protecting the worker on the basis of total radiation risks
 is expected to be small.
 3.3.8.3  The combination of external and internal dose equivalents using
 weighting factors will be difficult and costly to implement (A.b-6,
 B.a-14, B.a-32, B.a-33, B.a-48, B.b-7).

 Response:  The weighting factors are automatically incorporated into ALIs
 and DACs, just as they were into the formerly-used MFCs.  Thus, it is
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 difficult to justify any need for large additional costs.  The draft
 revisions to 10-CFR 20 regulations of the NRC show that a reasonable
 scheme can be devised to combine external and internal dose equivalents.
'See also the response to comment 1.9.2.


.3v3.8.A  The guidance regarding internal exposures is difficult to
 Interpret and will require, the use' of a-consultant (A.d-6).

 Response:  Instructions on acceptable practical means for compliance are
 expected to be formulated by the regulatory Federal agencies.  There
 should not be a general need for consultants to interpret new
 regulations.  See also the response to comment 3.3.8.3.
 3.3.8.5  Separate standards on internal and external exposure should be
 maintained (B.c-8).

 Response:   Separate standards, would permit doubling the allowable annual
 increment  of risk.   The intent of new recommendations is to control the
 total risk from the. 'sum of both types of exposure.
 3.3.8"^6 •'• The critical, organ methodology'has been an effective means of
 control (E.a-5.).   .' •               .     •

 Response:   We agree,  in general.  However,, the new recommendations take
 much more  accurate account of the total risk attributable to all
 irradiated tissues.
 3.3.8.7  A "de minimis" value of internal exposure should be defined,
 below which it should not be necessary to combine internal and external
 exposures or report the dose (A.a-41, A.d-13, A.d-40, B.a-4, B.a-8,
 B.a-14, B.a-15, B.a-27, B.a-48,  B.a-53, B.c-20).

 Response:  To the extent that such practical cutoffs are advisable, we
 expect the regulatory agencies to specify them.
 3.3.8.8  As a practical matter,  EPA should limit the combining of internal
 and external exposures to those  situations in which an internal exposure
 has occurred which exceeds 1/10  of the applicable Radiation Protection
 Guide (A.d-42,  B.a-5,  B.a-6,  B.a-9, B.a-10, B.a-32, B.a-33, B.a-46).
              *
 Response:  See the response to comment 3.3.8.7.
 3.3.8.9  Separate records should be maintained for external exposure and
 internal intake (A.a-41,  A.d-40).
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Response:   The  final  recommendations provide that the committed effective
dose equivalent  and the  quantity of each radionuclide in the body should
be assessed, and  recorded for the intake of radioactive materials.  In
addition, a summary of annual,  cumulative, and committed effective dose
.equivalent.should  be  provided'annually to workers.  However, the actual
details^ of-  recordkeeping requirements, are left to the regulatory agencies-


3.3V8.10'' The conservative assumptions Vhich are necessary to comply with
the internal exposure guidance  will obviate the utility of any future
epidemiological  studies  of radiation risk (A.a-10).

Response:   It was  not an objective of these recommendations to permit
doses  large enough to ensure the utility of such studies.  In any case,
such studies only  require accurate dose information, whether it be from
internal or external  exposures, and do not depend upon the implementation
scheme  used to assure compliance with the standards.
 3.3.8.11   Given the  current  state-of-the art,  we are only able to develop .
 an  imprecise  estimate  of• organ,-dose (B.a-31,- E.b-7,  E.b-9).

 Response:..:"We. recognize-;, there'-.are. limitations to the current state of the
 art^'but  belie-ve.it  is adequate  to assure proper protection of workers.


 3.3.8.12   In  implementing the internal- exposure guidance, considerable
 care will  have  to  be exercised to assure that the individual's exposure
 record  reflects the  true  exposure and not some highly conservative
 estimate  (B.a-33).

 Response:  We agree  that  an  individual's exposure record should contain
 accurate  data, for  internal as well as external exposures.  Recommendation
 8 specifies  that the quantity of radionuclides in the body be assessed and
 recorded,  to  the extent practicable,  in addition to  the calculated
 committed  dose  equivalent.  See  the response to comment 3.3.8.9.
 3.3.8.13   Guidance  3.c  is  not  consistent  with 3.a and 3.b; as it reads, it
 appears that, two  sets  of records would be required - one for the "sum of
 dose  equivalents  in the various  organs and one for this sum plus the
 external  dose  equivalent (E.b-1).

 Response:   The comment  apparently confuses partial exposures with whole
 body  exposures.   The final recommendations clarify this.
 3.3.8.14   There  exists  no  standard method for the calculation of dose to
 the breast  or  bone  surface (B.a-9).

 Response:   Such  methods were  used  to compute the limits for intakes listed
 in ICRP Publication 30  (ICRP80)  and are  described in Part 1 of that report.
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 3.3.8.15  Whether  or  not  to  require  the  summation of internal and external
 doses is a decision that  should  be left  to  implementing agencies (B.a-31).

 Response:  We agree that,  the specific  situations  which require summation
 of internal and external  doses should  be determined  by the  cognizant
.regulatory; agency.. See. the  response .to.  comment  3.3.8.7.


'3-.3.8.16 • The new  MPCk  for uranium Class "Y  material  would result in the
 need  to redesign major  elements  of fuel  handling'and processing equipment,
 yet it has not been adequately demonstrated that  such lowering of limits
 is warranted by medical case histories (B.a-16).

 Response:  The changes  in derived limits are the  result of  more accurate
 metabolic/dosimetric  models,  which show  that a given intake of such
 material yields a  larger  dose than formerly assumed.  It is not our intent
 to await medical case histories  for  each type of  radionuclide before
 reflecting such improved  knowledge in  the MFCs.
 3-.3.8.17  -The: requirement  to  add '. dose-equivalent  exposures of organs and
 tissues, to whole-body doses is hopelessly  complex and  likely to  be ignored
           '           '            '                 '
Response:  We disagree.  .Where  such  addition  is required,  the  weighting
system provides a  straightforward methodology that  is  no more  complex than
'current practice.  '    '         •          .                  •            '
3.4.
MINIMUM RADIATION PROTECTION REQUIREMENTS
3.4.1
OVERALL APPROACH
          Comment s;*
          The proposed  range  requirements will  increase  paperwork (A.a-13,
          A.a-41, A.b-8, A.d-9, A.d-12, B.a-11, B.a-15,  B.a-16,  B.a-19,
          B.a-21, B.a-24, B.a-27,  B.a-48, B.b-7,  E.a-2,"E.a-5,  E.a-7,
          E.a-14, E.b-9).
          The three-tier system is needlessly complicated  and  potentially
          expensive (A.a-16,  A.a-39, A.d-11, A.d-14,  A.d-21, A.d-22, B.a-3,
          B.a-21, B.a-31, B.a-37,  B.a-44, B.c-12,  E.a-6, E.a-7).
          The range approach  would introduce a-  degree of administrative
          and/or operational  complexity not  justified by any health benefit
          (A.b-10, A.c-13, A.d-9,  A.d-38, B.a-6,  B.a-11, B.a-15, B.a-17,
          B.a-24, B.c-12, E.a-12,  E.a-5, E.a-6, E.a-7, E.b-2,  E.b-8).
          The varying dosimetry requirements for  the  proposed  ranges will
*Note:  Joint Response  Immediately Following  Comments  1-37.
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    result in less health physics protection  than  is  currently
    provided (A.a-45. A.b-8, B.a-21, B.a-44,  E.a-2, E.a-5, E.a-7,
    E.a-2, E.b-3).
5.  The three-tier system may actually increase  total  occupational
    exposure by eliminating the flexibility in job planning and  execu-
   '-tion available under, current standards (A.d-9, B.a-48, E.a-5).
6.•• -The specification of. minimum protection requirements  limits  the
    •judgment and flexibility'of qualified experts  (A.a-24, A.a-25,
    A'.a-27, A.a-28, A.a-29, A.a-30r A.a-32, A.a-33, A.a-41, A.a-52,
    A.a-53, A.d-23, A.d-40, B.a-25, B.a-27, B.b-6, B.c-16, B.c-18,
    E.b-3).
7.  The proposed ranges are not needed (A.a-39,  A.a-41, A.b-6,
    A.d-19, A.d-23, A.d-28, B.a-6, B.a-32, B.a-37, B.c-21, E.a-6,
    E.b-2, E.b-5, E.b-6, E.b-8, E.b-10, F-3).
8.  Dose ranges are unnecessary if every exposure  is  justified and
    ALARA  (A.a-16, A.d-28, B.a-11, E.a-5, E.a-7, E.a-6, E.b-9).
9.  The range approach is unwarranted as workers' will  view it as a
    calibration of risk (A.d-28, B.a-35).
10. An- expected level of dose for operations, based on optimization
    studies, would 'be preferable to the three-tier approach suggested
    (A.d-22).             :   .    .
ll. The proposed scheme of anticipated exposure  ranges is intended to
-. •  place  the ALARA concept into a. cookbook formulation, for use  by
'•"'-. ^nohprbfe'ssional-, completely undermining the  application of sound
    •professional judgment (E.b-3).
12. Recommendation 4 contains requirements licensees  cannot meet
    .(A.a-19, B.c-21).
13. Implementation of Recommendation 4 will lead to program
    degradations (A.a-12, A.d-23).
14. Further detailed guidance on exposure of  individuals  is not
    needed (E.a-6).
15. The- concep.t underlying the range approach is inherent in all
    existing ALARA programs (A.b-6, A.d-19, A.d-28, A.d-40, B.a-11,
    B.a-14, B.a-15, B.a-16, B.a-21, B.a-27, B.a-29, B.a-31, B.a-32,
    B.a-36, B.a-44, B.a-48, E.a-6).
16. The emphasis of regulatory requirements should be  on  ALARA,  not
    the proposed ranges.  This would allow organizations  to develop
    radiation protection programs best suited to their specific  needs
    and situation (A.a-45, A.d-9, A.d-18, B.a-24, B.a-36, E.a-6,
    E.b-1).
17. It should be made clear that any requirement or model procedures
    developed to implement ALARA, including Recommendation 4, are
    only for the guidance of federal agencies (B.a-34, E.a-4).
18. What are the criteria to justify the need for work situations
    that are expected to make a significant contribution  to Range C
    exposures?  Are cost/benefit analyses required as  implied?   If so
    must they be documented and will they be  subject  to regulatory
    review, inspection, and enforcement? (B.a-29)
19. Justification of Range C work situations  must  be  generic.  EPA
    should specifically state that it is not  its intent to require
    case-by-case justifications of each exposure activity (B.a-3,
    B.a-6, B.a-17).
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20. Justification of Range C work situations will result  in
    unnecessary hardship and costs  to the nuclear power industry.
    The need for'such Range C activities has been historically
    demonstrated (B.a-6, B.a-20, B.a746, E.a-2).
21. It is not clear to whom the justification of Range C  exposures  is
    to be addressed (A.d-18, B.a-4, B.a-6, B.a-36, E.b-3).
22i; The;concepts' of ."justification" .and  "ALABA". are used  differently
    in Recommendation 4 than in Recommendations 1 and 2' (E.a-4).
23. Prior regulatory approval of Range C exposures is redundant
    and/or unwarranted (B.a-6, E.'b-6, E.b-8).
24. In Range C, what constitutes a  "significant contribution  to
    exposure?" (B.a-4, B.a-6).
25. The requirements associated with Range C will result  in increased
    collective exposures as more workers are used to perform  a.task
    (B.a-31, E.b-6).
26. A graded set of minimum radiation protection requirements based
    on expected dose in the work place, with specific dose ranges
    established by the implementing agencies, is a good approach
    (A.b-9, B.a-5, B.a-33, B.a-34, B.a-46).
27. The deterrent effects' of increased justification, supervision,
    and monitoring are an administrative method of lowering the
'   ' 5 rem/yr limit to-0.5 rem/yr (B.a-3).
28-- Relaxing .the. .personnel .monitoring requirements (Range A)  is
' 'r^-mbrally;.:and legally •expensive '(A.b-8)-
29.' The proposed Recommendation 4 should be deleted and replaced with
    the following guidance:  "The appropriate authorities of  each
    workplace should ensure that a competent health-physics program
    is in place"  .(A.a-12).                "    '
30. The varying dosimetry requirements for the proposed ranges will
    make it difficult to provide concise, realistic dose  assessments
    to workers (A.b-8, A.a-18, A.b-18, B.b-7).
31. The ranges provided in Recommendation 4 are detailed  administra-
    tive requirements for implementing the general guidance and RPGs.
    Such administrative requirements should be left to the cognizant
    regulatory agencies; they can fashion such requirements to their
    needs and practices (A.a-21, A.d-21, A.d-27, B.a-24,  B.a-29,
    B.a-34, B.a-38, B.c-21, E.a-6, E.a-7).
32. A cost/benefit study should be made and considered before .final
    inclusion of this recommendation (A.a-41, A.d-14, A.d-29, A.d-40,
    B.a-11, B.c-12, E.a-5, E.a-6).  ,          '                    '
33. Imposing minimum radiation protection requirements for different
    job categories could hinder new developments in these areas if  a
    higher range designation is needed (A.d-22).
34. Field inspectors will abuse the three-tier concept (A.a-14).
35. The proposed ranges introduce many new requirements for
    occupations in which persons were not previously considered
    radiation workers (A.a-10).
36. The effect of the proposed ranges on dosimetry requirements will
    result in radiation workers being covered with dosimeters.  It  is
    clearly unworkable (B.c-21).
37. We do not support the proposal  for a graded set of radiation
    levels within the RPGs (A.c-6).
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Response:  The proposed recommendation 4 for a graded  set  of  minimum
radiation protection requirements (MRPRs)does not  appear in  the  final
recommendations.  Instead, three broad recommendations  provide for  (i)
instruction on-basic risk to. health from, ionizing  radiation  and  radiation
protection procedures for workers to avoid and minimize exposure;  (ii)
moni-toritig and recprdkeeping. of occupational doses, and (iii) supervision
of,, workers-and. use '!ofv. administrative.control, and reference levels for
carrying out ALARA'programs.  Comments'relative to these general topics
that-are-not specific, to the proposed use of a graded  set  of  minimum
requirements in these-areas are addressed under separate headings.

      Many of the comments explicitly or implicitly argued that  the  costs
of MRPRs would not be justified by the health benefits.  EPA  considered
the costs of such- requirements (EPA83a) and found  the  cost/benefit  ratio
was, indeed, high.  The estimated costs were $6-10 million for startup
plus $500-700 million annually.  If the MRPRs achieved an  average dose
reduction of 25%, this leads to roughly .$40-170 million per death averted.
3.4.2    SUGGESTED'NUMERICAL RANGES
    • Iv :.iCRF's''working '.levels' A and .&: as reference  levels would  be  pre-
       '.'farable'to EPA's ranges. (A.b-15, A.d-21, B.a-7, B.a-19,  B.c-20).
     2'.  The two levels of control (above and below  25%) in  the current
         regulations are adequate (A.a-lD, A.a-14).
     3.  The current classification of radiation workers and  the  general
         public, with exposures to each minimized by application  of  ALARA
         by professional health physicists, is adequate  (E.b-2).
     4.  The proposed ranges are too restrictive, preferable  values  would
         be.v  Range A:  0.02-RPG; Range B: 0.2-0.5 RPG; and  Range C:
    •    -. 0.5-1.0 RPG (E.a-3).            .
     5.  Two ranges, below 0.5 RPG and above 0.5 RPG are all  that is
         necessary (A.b-6).
     6.  The proposed ranges should.be replaced with:  0-10%, no  records;
         10-100% keep lifetime records; above 100% report to  the  cognizant
         regulatory authority (B.a-26).
     7.  Range A should be eliminated; Ranges B and  C are useless (A.a-46,
         A.b-16, B.a-7, B.c-20).
     8.  The ranges proposed are .adequate as ALARA guides (E.b-1).
     9.  The range proposal would have merit if used to establish a
         de minimis category with minimal training and exposure control
         requirements (B.a-4).
     10. The nuclear power industry is already meeting the requirements of
         Ranges A and B,  and ALARA programs effectively accomplish
         "Justification" of the "Need for work situations which are
         expected to make a significant contribution to exposure  in  Range
         C."  Therefore the recommended ranges are not justified  (B.a-3).
     11. EPA should explicitly state that exposures  in Range  C are not
         prima facia evidence of a poor radiation protection  program, and
         should not be a basis of disciplinary action (A.b-5).
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     12. Additional  requirements  for Range C would effectively limit
         exposure  to  1.5  rem/yr.   The nuclear power industry cannot
         function  with  such  a  restrictive  limit .(B.a-3).
     .13. There does  not appear to be any rational cost/benefit basis to
         restrict  Range C exposures beyond'the requirements of a 5-rem
      , : annual  RPG. (E.a-6) . .-' ' -
     • 14.;'InRange  A.^sub^part  A»  change "justified" activities to
         '.'licensed" .activities (E.b-1).
     •15.. In. Range. B,' sub-part  D;.eliminate the word "justified" (E.b-1).
     16. The- minimum limit of  concern should be half a rem a year; below
         that  limit  no  regulations are necessary (A.a-46).

 Response:  Final guidance does not contain the proposed minimum radiation
 protection requirements with suggested numerical ranges.   Instead of
 numerical ranges,  final Recommendation 9 provides for establishment of
 administrative control  and reference levels, usually below limiting
 values,  for  specific  categories of workers or work situations, as dictated
 by  the  situations.   See also the  response  to comment 3.4.1.
'3.4.3  ':  INSTRUCTION
 3.4.3.1  Workers  should  be  instructed  on basic  hazards of radiation and
 radiation  protection  principles,  and on the  specific risks and protection
 activities of  their work situation (A.a-5, A.a-16,  A.a-19, A.d-8,  A.d-19,
 E.b-1).           •-

 Response:   We  fully agree and  Recommendation 7  provides for this.
 3'.4.3.2  Workers  do  not  know the  risk;  they assume the risks are minimal
 (C-9).

 Response:  Workers exposed  to radiation and managers of activities
 involving  radiation  should  be instructed on the basic risks to health from
 ionizing radiation.   See the response  to comment 3.4.3.1.
 3.4.3.3  Whose  version  of  radiation  hazards  should be used in instructing
 workers?  (A.d-15)

 Response:   A current  summary  of  EPA  risk methodology and estimates is
 given  in  the response to comment 1.4.1.   This  discussion provides an
 update to  the Background Report  (EPA81),  issued on January 23, 1981.
 Subsequent  information  should be disseminated  by Federal agencies as
 appropriate. See  also  the responses to  comments 1.4.10 for somatic or
 genetic effects at  low  levels of radiation,  comment 3.8.15 for teratogenic
 effects to  unborn  irradiated  in  utero, and comment 3.8.51 for hereditary
 effects due to  irradiation of the gonads  of  males and females.
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 3.4.3.4   EPA must  specify the  kind of information that workers are to
 receive  to  assure  uniformity (A.c-1).

 Response:   See..the. responses to. c.omments 3.4.3.1 and 3.4.3.3.
.3.4*3.5  SRC licensees'* currently provide detailed instructions on health
 risks  and protection methods' to all individuals working in or frequenting
 "res,tricted. areas"  (B-a-29).   ' .     , '    . .

 Response:   No response required.
 3.4.3.6   Although NRC licensees already have programs, more extensive than
 required  by EPA's recommendations,  there is no justification for such
 unreasonable and  burdensome requirements to be issued in a memorandum for
 the  President (B.a-29).

 Response:   We do  not  agree that the recommendations for instruction of
 workers are unreasonable or burdensome.  The fact that NRC requires this,
 and  have'.not objected appears to demonstrate this.


'IvAiS.^'-'Gbvernment-sponso'red training "iri; radiation safety is appropriate
 (A.a-8).  . : ;  '. -."  •'''     '     '   •  '          .   •.

 Response:   It is  up to Federal agencies in accordance with their statutory
 authorities to determine whether or not they sponsor training programs in
 radiation safety.
 3.4.3.8  • EPA should  mandate standard training for health workers, to
 include-  personnel  protection,  identification, and hazards of radiation
 exposures.   The requirements of Recommendation 4, being open to
 interpretations based on inadequate data,  are of dubious benefit to
 workers  (A.c-8).

 Response:   EPA has no authority to mandate training programs for health
 workers.  This is  the responsibility of cognizant Federal regulatory
 agencies.   However,  the final  recommendations do specify that
 occupationally exposed workers be instructed on basic risks to health from
 ionizing radiation and on basic radiation protection principles.
 3.4.3.9   No  instruction requirements  are needed for Range A exposures
 (B.a-29,  B.c-8).

 Response:  We disagree.  All workers  with potential for exposure to
 ionizing  radiation require some instruction on basic risks to health and
 on basic  radiation protection principles.
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3.4.3.10   Instruction must not  leave  the  impression that  doses below a
certain limit are  "safe" or  "negligible"  (A.d-8).

Response:  We agree, and believe  that  this  is--clearly stated in the
preamble to the recommendations.  -See  also  the  responses  to  comments
1..6.11, 2.1.11, .2.2.11 and- 3.1.15.        .
•3.4.3..11 , EPA should" address- the  issue, of. the  information flow between
plant management and workers  (A.a-5).

Response:  Final, recommendations  provide  the basic  objectives for
instruction, monitoring,  recordkeeping, and supervision related to. this
matter.  Federal agencies will  stipulate  the necessary regulatory detail
for implementation of  these  recommendations.
3.4.3.12  The  need  for financial  support  for  education and  training
programs in radiation protection  should be  considered  (A.b-11).

Response:  The  substance  of  this  comment  is outside  the scope of Federal
guidance,  the  Federal regulatory agencies  implementing the guidance may
examine the.need-for.financial  support 'of education  and training programs
in- accorda-nce • with:-their  statutory-"responsibilities.
3.4.4    MONITORING AND RECORDKEEPING
3.4.4.1  Workers should be monitored  and  detailed  records  of  all  doses be
maintained  (A.a-16, A.a-38, A.c-4, A.c-8,  C-4,  C-6,  C-7, E.a-3, E.a-5).

Response:   Recommendation 8 specifies  that there be  monitoring of workers
and exposure recordkeeping appropriate  to  insuring conformance to the
recommendations.  This includes  the maintenance of a cumulative record of
lifetime dose equivalents for each worker.  However,  individual monitoring
and recordkeeping for all potentially  exposed workers,  without exception,
could lead  to substantial expenditures  in  many  work  situations without the
possibility of increasing worker protection or  benefits.   Federal
regulatory  agencies will specify criteria  for determining  when monitoring
and recordkeeping are required for individual workers.   Such  criteria,
however, do not prohibit employers from providing  such  services to workers
even though not required by regulation.


3.4.4.2  Maintenance of lifetime dose  records implies a central records
repository; EPA should clarify its intent  (B.a-22, B.c-20).

Response:   Establishment of a national  central  repository  for occupational
radiation exposure records is not within  the scope of the  subject
guidance.   See the response to comment  1.10.8.
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          It appears useful to clarify here the concept of lifetime dose  as
 it  is  a focal point of many comments.  "Lifetime dose" means accumulated
 dose from' all occupational exposures.  Current regulatory interpretation
 of  the 1960 guidance requires maintenance of a lifetime dose record if a
..worker.is to. be. permitted to receive, in a calendar quarter, a whole body
 dose in: excess of' 1.25. rems (up to the...3.0 rem limit) as proof that such a
 dose"'woul'd' not- -lead'' to exceeding- the accumulated dose condition of 5(N-18)
 rems,' where N is the worker's age in years. 'These .recommendations,
 however,  specify a simple annual "limit of 5 rems-j and there is no explicit
 lifetime  dose limit.  However, we do not intend that this be interpreted
 to  mean that "lifetime dose" is now considered irrelevant.  Such records
 are important in limiting accumulated lifetime risks.  Thus, we encourage
 the maintenance of lifetime occupational dose records.
 3.4.4.3  Expanded monitoring in the two higher ranges does not appear to
 be justified (E.a-5).

 Response:  The proposed recommendation.4 and its monitoring/recordkeeping
 requirements for dose ranges do not appear in the final recommendations.
 See also the. .response to comment ..3.4.4.1.     .    .   .
 3.4.4.'4 /Eliminate"the- additional" monitoring and" recordkeeping
 requirements in-Ranges B and' C (E.b-1).

 Response:   See the response to comment 3.4.4.3.
 3.4.4.5  Any worker in exposure Range A should be entitled to 12 months of
 employer-paid monitoring to satisfy himself that he is not being exposed
 'beyond the limits (A.a-36).

 Response:  The Federal regulatory agencies will specify minimum monitoring
 requirements.  If an employee believes additional, monitoring is warranted,
 that request should be made to the employer, the cognizant Federal
 regulatory agency, or the employee's union or professional organization,
 as appropriate.  See also the' response to comment 3.4.4.1.


 3.4.4.6  Requiring lifetime monitoring and recordkeeping once a worker has
 been exposed in Range C places an unfair burden on future employers
 (A.d-12).

 Response:  The burden of maintaining an exposure record is very small.  In
 any case, except for intake of radionuclides that exceed the limiting
 values and require future exposure management of the worker, the final
 guidance should not place new monitoring or recordkeeping burdens on
 future employers beyond those already in place.  See also the response to
 comment 3-.4.4.1.
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3.4.4.7  Guidelines for monitoring should be evaluated on the basis of
task-by-task risk assessments (A.d-8).

Response:  The details of such guidelines; if justified, would be
established by the Federal regulatory agencies.
3.4.4.8  The monitoring program required for Range B exposures will cover
too many workers and 'be 'too* expensive. (B.c-14).

Response:  See the responses to comments 3.4.4.1 and 3.4.4.3.
3.4.4.9  The minimal monitoring requirements for Range A exposures could
fail to detect some potentially hazardous levels of radiation from
unexpected contamination problems (A.a-36).

Response:  See the response to comment 3.4.4.1.  It is the responsibility
of Federal regulatory agencies to .specify criteria for monitoring
sufficient to detect actual and potentially hazardous levels of radiation
for-.all sources or .activities, that are included within their statutory
authority.-   '      '     '  •.    .        .
3'. 4.4.10  .A significant effort .would be - required to upgrade records
programs to comply with the three-tier system (B.a-6, E.a-5, E.a-7).

Response:  See the responses to comments 3.4.4.1 and 3.4.4."3.
3.4.4.11 .Lax recordkeeping requirements will defeat all attempts to
conduct low-dose epidemiology studies (A.b-23, A.c-4, C-4, C-6, E.a-5,
E.b-1).

Response:  We do not agree that the proposed (or final) recordkeeping
recommendations encourage laxity.  If the comment is suggesting additional
recordkeeping'beyond that required for administration of radiation
protection programs for the purpose of low-dose epidemiology studies, that
is beyond the scope of the subject guidance.
3.4.4.12  EPA's proposal will result in escalated monitoring and
recordkeeping requirements without any justification being shown for such
actions (A.d-40, B.a-29, B.a-50, E.a-5).
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Response:  We do not agree.  The cognizant Federal regulatory agencies
have sufficient experience in these matters to assure justified
requirements.  In addition, the public and affected parties will have an
opportunity to assess and comment on proposed monitoring and recordkeeping
regulations.  See also the response to comment 3.4.4.1.
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3.4.4.13  The burden of maintaining the required  records  would  be  lessened
if the major dosimetry services would establish and share exposure  data
bases (A.b-5).    •            .  •

Response:  This matter is not within the scope of  the  subject guidance.
3.J4-4.14  The varying.recordkeeping "requirements are  totally unworkable  in
the-case of the transient worker  (B.a—9).       ..--..

Response:  We are confident that  the final recommendations are  now
flexible enough to permit the Federal regulatory agencies  to- provide
"workable" recordkeeping requirements for all significantly exposed
workers (transient and otherwise).  See the  responses  to comments  2.3.1
and 2.13.8.
3.4.4.15  Records of annual exposure levels, should  be  sufficient.(B.a-10).

Response:  Recordkeeping is required'to demonstrate compliance with  the
limiting values of dose as well as other parts of the  recommendations.
Records of annual exposure levels may or may not accomplish  this, and  thus
each Federal.-regulatory, agency must make this determination.   See the
responses" ctd; comments .3.4.. 1.and' 3:. 4'. 4.1.
3.4.4.16  How long must Range B exposure records be maintained  (B.a-22)?

Response:  At least long enough to compile lifetime dose  records.


3-.4.4.17  EPA's guidance should include a requirement  to  maintain
(lifetime) records of consumer's medical and dental exposures  (A.c-8,  C-5,
C-7, C-8, D-5, E.a-3).

Response:  Medical and dental exposures are not within the  scope of  the
subject guidance.
3.4.4.18. Workers should have access to all  their dose  records  (A.d-8,
A.c-1, A.c-4, A..C-8, C.2).

Response:  Recommendation 8 provides that workers receive a  summary  of
annual, cumulative, and committed effective  dose equivalents on no less
than an annual basis and further information upon their request.  See also
the responses to comments 1.10.3 and 3.4.4.1.
3.4.4.19  All workers subject to recordkeeping should be  furnished
quarterly dose and cumulative lifetime dose records on a  quarterly  basis
(C-5).
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Response:  In addition to specifying recordkeeping  requirements,- the
regulatory Federal agencies will also  specify  requirements for keeping
workers informed of their radiation exposure status  on  at  least an annual
basis, consistent with these recommendations.  More  frequent  informing of
workers could be specified by the regulatory agency.  See  also the
response to-, comment 3.4.4..1.-..
3.'4.4".20  "All workers in the nuclear  industry-should  receive a current
copy of their annual and lifetime accumulated  whole body  radiation
exposure records from their employers on an  annual basis  (C-8).

Response:  See the responses to comments 3.4.4.1 and  3.4.4.19.
3.4.4.21  Some workers have trouble getting  their dose  records  (C-5,  C-8).

Response:  We are not aware of circumstances where occupational  exposure
information.can properly be .withheld  from  the worker.   Any  such  current
problems should be eliminated when these recommendations  are  implemented.
See also. the. responses-to .comments 1.10..3,.- 3.4.4.1,  3.4.4.18, and  3.4.4.19.
3.4.4.'22 ""individual' monitoring/ as defined in  10  CFR 20,  2(b)(l),. is
inappropriate for assessing internal exposures  in  Ranges.B and  C (A.a-12)

Response:  Regulation-s of the Federal agencies  (for  example,  the cited
Section of 10 CFR 20 of the NRC) will have to be revised to conform with
final Federal radiation protection guidance.  See  the responses  to
comments 3.4.4.1 and 3.4.4.3.
3.4.4.23  Internal and external exposure  records  should  be  maintained
separately (A.a-41).

Response:  Although the final recommendations  provide  numerical  limits
that apply to the sum of the dose from both external and  internal
exposures, they also call for separate recording  of internal  and external
exposures.  The appropriate means of keeping records to  demonstrate
compliance will be detailed by the regulatory  agencies.   See  the responses
to comments 3.4.4.1 and 3.4.4.22.
3.4.4.24  Monitoring should be done by qualified  personnel  (A.a-16)

Response:  No response required.
3.4.4.25  EPA should include in its guidance  criteria  for  notification of
workers exposure levels  (E.a-6).

Response:  Recommendation 8 specifies  that workers  should  be  so  advised.
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 3.4.4.26   Lifetime  dose  records  should be  maintained for all radiation
 workers  (A.a-38, A.a-45).

 Response:  We  believe  final  recommendations .are  in. agreement with this
 comment.   Final .recommendation 8 requires  "Appropriate  monitoring of
 workers and  the work:, placed should, be  performed .and records kept to ensure
 conformance  with 'these'recommendations..iMaintenance of a cumulative
 record of  lifetime  occupational  doses for  each worker is encouraged."
 Such  records would  be  useful to  both  employer  and employee if questions of
 a worker's occupational  dose are raised  at some  later date.
 3.4.4.27   A 100  rem  lifetime  limit  will  require employers  to maintain a
 complete  exposure  record  for  each employee  (A.a-19).

 Response:   We  agree  that  this would be  the  case if  and  when a lifetime
 limit  is  adopted.  However, it would not be unreasonable for employers to
 maintain  complete  exposure  records  even  without a lifetime limit.   See
 also  the  response  to comment  3.4.4.26.
.3.4x4.28.  Lifetime  dose .records  within  the  current  limits  are meaningless
                                         '      ''
 Response:  We' disagree.   Such  dose  records establish that workers do not
 exceed  standards and  also the  levels  of  dose  actually received.   These
 dose  levels  are important to any subsequent calculations of probability of
 causation  for cancers that may occur  for individual  workers.
 3.4.4.29"  Recommendation. .4 .h appears  to  require  the  maintenance of a
 lifetime  record  even  after  an employee terminates  employment.   This places
 an  unreasonable  burden on  the employer;  this  requirement should be
 reconsidered  (A.a-19,  B.a-6).

 Response:  We believe  that  lifetime dose records should be maintained by
 someone  for some time  after an employee  terminates employment  and that
 such a requirement  can be  formulated  by  the cognizant regulatory agency
 without  an unnecessary or unreasonable burden on employers.  Without such
 record maintenance  it  would seem impossible for  either the employee or
 employer  to accurately establish radiation exposures for any given period
 of  employment.   The actual  location for  maintenance  of such records would
 be  determined by the  cognizant regulatory agency.  This determination
 should include consideration of benefits and  costs.   Recent cases of
 litigation would appear to  confirm the desirability  of maintaining all
 exposure  records, as  there  are potentially large benefits from being able
 to  document what doses a worker did or did not receive.  See the responses
 to  comments 3.4.4.26  and 3.4.4.28.
 3.4.4.30  What  is  the  rationale  for  strongly  encouraging lifetime records
 for workers  exposed  in Range  B  (A.b-5)?
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 Response:   There is good reason for keeping lifetime records of monitored
 workers  at all levels of exposure.   Even where workers receive no
 measurable exposure lifetime records provide corresponding documentation
 to. reassure the worker and to ve-rif y the level of protection provided by
 the employer's radiation protection .program.  See also the responses to
 comments 3\4.4.26,  3.4.4.28 and-3.4.4.2.9.
• ! v '.'I.
 3.4.4-31 •  The 100.rem lifetime limit would.require obtaining a worker's
 exposure history before Range B exposures would be allowed (A.a-1.9,
 B.a-29).

 Response:   We would agree that if and when a lifetime limit is
 established,  it would require that a worker's exposure history be obtained
 to properly manage future exposure.  However, the implementation of such a
 lifetime limit by regulatory agencies would  have to include provisions for
 some appropriate and timely transfer of worker exposure histories.
 3.4.5  .  SUPERVISION
-3v4Y5'.lT'' 'Increased'on-'the-job supervision does not appear to be justified
 (B..a-4> B.a-29,  B;b-7, E.a-2, E.a-5).

 Response:   This  matter is left to the discretion of regulatory agencies.


 3.4.5.2  The radiation protection supervision requirement should be
 clarified  so that it is not interpreted to require the physical presence
 of  the"supervisor during 'the job (B.a-33, B.a-37, B.a-46, E.a-2).

 Response:   The intent of the proposal was not that radiation protection
 supervision involve  exposure, unless that was essential to achieve
 adequate control of  radiation protection.
 3.4.5.3  A requirement that professional radiation protection personnel be
 available and empowered to do the necessary job would be preferable to the
 proposed guidance calling for these professionals to be in the workplace
 (A.d-13).

 Response:  See the response to comment 3.4.5.2.
 3.4.5.4  Having supervision present (under Range C) will result in
 increased exposures (A.a-19,  A.a-21,  B.a-17, B.a-37, B.c-12).

 Response:  See the response to comment 3.4.5.2.
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 3.4.5.5   Part  d of  Recommendation. 4 should be clarified.   As presently
 written  it  could be interpreted as requiring certified health physicists
 to  be  stationed in  all  areas  where individuals may receive in excess of
 0.5-rem/yr  (B.a-5,  B.c-23)..    .              •

 Response:   See the  response to comment 3.4.5.2.


.3..4.S.6   Supervision beforehand during jobs in'Range- C will increase costs
 (A.a-21,  B.b-7). ''•..'

 Response:   Such supervision should already be in place at such high
 doses.   If  they are. not,  costs may indeed increase.
 3.4.5.7   The  term "professional radiation protection supervision" must be
 clearly  defined before the guidance is issued (A.b-11,  A.b-23,  B.c-23).

 Response:   The  final recommendations do not include the specific elements
 of  proposed recommendation 4 on minimum radiation protection requirements
 for supervision'in dose ranges.  They do, however, contain a broad
 recommendation  on radiation-protection supervision.


 3.4.5.8   Recommendation-4.f should "be rewritten to read:"... and provide
 management  supervision and radiation protection personnel review before,
 and frequent  surveillance while such jobs are undertaken, to assure that
 collective  and  individual exposures are ALARA" (A.d-42,-B.a-10).  '•

 Response:   See  the response to comment 3.4.5.7..


 3.4.5.9   Range  A would require professional radiation protection
 supervision to  assure exposures are justified and ALARA.   This  is
 unnecessary since doses in this range should be considered de minimis
 (B.c-4,  B.c-20).                               -  .

 Response:   Doses below 500 mrem/yr are clearly not "de  minimis"."
 Recommendations 1 and 2 are intended to apply as  fully  to such  doses as to
 higher doses.
 3.4.5.10  Range A would require professional radiation protection
 supervision to  assure that  all exposures are justified and ALARA (B.a-39).

 Response:   We agree.   However, such supervision could be managed on a
 generic  basis.
 3.4.5.11  Guidelines  for supervision should be evaluated on a task-by-task
 basis  (A.d-8).
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Response:   In.some  cases,  yes.   In others, more generic treatment may  be
adequate and  appropriate.
3.4.6-   LIFETIME DOSE
3..4*6«1. .The  100. rem lifetime limit .is;unnecessary (A.a-18, A.a-41,
A.a-46, A.b-15,  A.b-16,  A.b-26,  A.d-9, A.d-21, A.d-29, B.a-3, B.a-6,
B.a-9, B.a-17, B.a-21,  B.a-22,  B.a-31, B.a-44, B.a-46, B.a-48,  B.a-53,
B.c-12, E.a-4, E.a-5,  E.b-6,  E.b-7, E.b-8, E.b-10).

Response:  We agree.   Since few workers have historically received more
than a 100 rem lifetime  dose  up  to the present time it is unlikely,
according to  present  levels and  trends of exposure, that workers  currently
entering the  work force  would exceed such a lifetime dose.
3.4.'6.2  The  need  and  benefits of 'the 100 rem lifetime limit are  unclear
(A.a.-8, A.a-13,  A.a-<39,.  A.b-22,  A.d-fr, A.d-22, B.a-4," B.a-20, B.a-23,
B.a-24', B.a-27,  B.a-32;' B:a-33, "B.a-34, B.a-37, 'B.a-39, B.a-46, B.c-12,
B.cr20, E.a-7.,;:.E,b-5,  F-l).. . .   .-.•;••..•....  .••.'•...
 • -• "- ""'*' • ,-j "".-**;?•-"'"  .'-'•„•"'• f  •«••:   •*.•*'•., .-.'•-'' .•,..•,"-•-"    -  •  ..  • -
. • . • •   ••  •;  .*•••.•  ''«.-••     .••••.'•.•.  •  -, •   ,.-•••-•.-.

Response:   The  benefit"of a lifetime 'limit is to clearly limit  the maximum
risk to an  individual  worker.   See the response to comment 3.4.6.1 for  the
question of need.


3.4.6.3  The  100 rem lifetime  limit would result in legal problems by
making- a worker  unemployable (A.a-8, A.a-13, A.a-39, A.b-22, A.d-6,
A.d-22, B.a-5,  B.a-6,  B.a-8,  B.a-14, B.a-17, B.a-20, B.a-22, B.a-23,
B.a-24, B.a-27,  B.a-29,  B.a-30,  B.a-32, B.a-33, B.a-34, B.a-36, B.a-39,
B.a-46, B.a-48,  B.a-50,  B.c-21,  C-l, C-2, E.a-5, E.a-6, E.b-2,  E.b-5,
E.b-6, E.b-7, E.b-10).

Response:   The  issue is  moot as  no lifetime limit is adopted in final
recommendations.   However,  a recent EPA analysis of accumulated doses of
terminated  workers  indicates that such a limit would not affect even the
currently highest  exposed workers, such as those found in the nuclear
industry (Ku84).
3.4.6.4   The  100  rem lifetime limit would adversely impact  the nuclear
industry  by unnecessarily restricting the availability of skilled workers
(A.d-18,  B.a-1, B.a-3,  B.a-20,  B.a-21, B.a-27, B.a-32, B.a-33, B.a-36,
B.a-37, B.a-44, B.a-46,  E.b-2).

Response:  See  the  response to  comment 3.4.6.3.
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3.4.6.5  Some formula  to adjust  the  previous  exposure of workers is
necessary to protect the livelihood  of  veteran workers when a lifetime
dose i's established  (A.d-5, A.d-12,  B.a-7,  B-c-20,  C-8, E.a^3,  E,b-3).

Response:  We agree.   However, see also the response to comment 3.4.6.3.
3.4.6.6  If the annual  RPG  is  appropriately  derived,  there is no need for
a-lifetime • limit  (.A.d-13, B-.a-33j- B.a-35,  B.a-46,  B.a-53,  E.a-4).

Response:  This is not  the  case.   The  justified  need  for allowing a
maximum annual dose  to  a worker  in any given year  does not.justify
allowing that maximum annual dose  in other years without considering the
equity of utilizing  other workers  and  other  alternatives.   Because the
maximum annual dose  allowed workers would  result in an unacceptable
level of risk if  received every  year of a  working  lifetime,  a lifetime
limit could become necessary if  such patterns of worker exposure should
develop.


3".4..6.7  .The 100.rem lifetime .'limit is. chosen, to assure that the risk of a
maximum exposed radiation worker is comparable to  the average risk in
rothe.r; .industries*•••• This .is  not!''a .valid method, for  making the comparison
(A':b'-i; A'.d-lK-B^a-^''B'^-22^B.a-3l,  B.a-33, B.a-37, E.a-6).

Response:  This is not  true.   According to the relative risk model, the
lifetime risk of  death  for  workers receiving 100 rems uniformly spread
over the age range 18 to 65 would  be more  than three  times larger than the
average accidental death risk  for  all  U.S. workers.
3.4.6.8''. The proposed  100 rem  lifetime  limit  is  appropriate (C-5,  C-8,
E.b-3).

Response:  No response  required.
3.4.6.9  The lifetime  limit  should  be  less  than 100 rems (A.a-3,  A.a-38,
C-8).

Response:  The comment  is moot  since the  final  recommendations do not
include a numerical lifetime dose objective.  However,  the  final
recommendations encourage the maintenance of  lifetime  (accumulated) dose
records for workers and  stipulate that "continued  exposure  at or  near
[the] limiting values  for substantial  portions  of  a working lifetime
should be avoided."
3.4.6.10  The lifetime limit  should  be  restricted  to  10 rems  (A.c-6).

Response:  See the response to comment  3.4.6.9,
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3.4.6.11  The proposed 100 rem lifetime  limit would  increase  the  risk of
genetic damage (A.a-19, A.b-16, A.b-20,  A.d-18,  B.a-7,  B.a-21,  B.a-29,
B.a-30, B.a-31, B.a-32, B.a-44, B.a-48,  B.b-1, E.a-5, E.a-6).

Response:  We disagree.  A lifetime  limit would  neither encourage the
increase nor cause the increase of genetic  or somatic damage.   See also
the ^response-; to .comment 3.4; 6.. 9>.-..    ./•:.•/  -,.-.   :-•  ....


3.4.6.12  The proposed 100 rem lifetime  limit fails  to  consider the
decreasing risk of radiation exposure with  increasing age.  As  a  result,
total risk- might be  increased if workers receive most of their  lifetime
risk early in their  careers (A.a-8,  A.b-20, A.d-18,  B.a-17, B.a-30,
B.a-33, B.a-37).

Response:  We agree.  However, see the response  to  comment  3.4.6.9.
3.4.6.13  Exposure beyond 100 rems should be on  the  basis  of  the  worker's
informed consent (A.b-5, E.a-6).

Response r  See .the'response to comment'3.4.6.9.
3.4.6.14.  Workers_approaching 100 rems accumulated  exposure  should  be
informed 'and restrictions of future doses decided on  a  case-by-case  basis
(C-l, E-.b-2).   .               .

Response:  See  the response to comment 3.4.6.9.
•3.4.6.15  Eliminate the 100 rem lifetime limit and  replace  it  with the
following guidance:   "Maintain lifetime doses ALARA.   The accumulated dose
of individual workers should be managed so  that  it  is  less  than a
specified, reasonably achievable ALARA goal.  Where workers have, already
accumulated more than 50% of this lifetime  limit  due to work under
previous regulations, they should be  allowed  to  accumulate  additional
exposures up to 100% of this lifetime limit"  (E.b-1).

Response:  See the response to comment 3.4.6.9.
3.4.6.16  Does the 100 rem lifetime limit  include  emergency  exposures?
(B.a-32, B.a-38, E.a-5).

Response:  See the response  to  comment  3.4.6.9.
3.4.6.17  Employers might use lifetime dose histories  to  discriminate
against workers with significant  exposure histories  (B.a-8).

Response:  See the response to comment 3.4.6.9.
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3.4.6.18   The  100  rem  limit  could  lead, to dose falsification by workers in
high exposure  industries  (A.d-6).

Response:  . See the' response  to comment 3.4.6.9.


31.4'.6'.T9.  Lifetime dos'e 'records for  all radiation workers must be
available  to all radiation workers ..(C-2).

Response:  See the response  to comment 3.4.6.9.
 3.4.6.20   This  recommendation could  give rise to claims of apparent past
 negligence by the government  for  those  workers  who have exceeded the
 proposed  lifetime limit  (E.a-5).

 Response:  See  the  response to comment  3.4.6.9.
 3.5    ,   RADIOACTIVITY INTAKE FACTORS .


.3"'.'5-.T''•'" EPA"dbesnot  'present sufficient  'justification for a change from
 the current MFCs  to  the  proposed  RIFs (B.a-3,  B.a-4,  B.a-27, B.c-21,
 E.a-2).     ''.               •                 '

 Response:  Final  recommendations  adopt the internationally-accepted
 approach  of ICRP  Publication  26  (ICRP77),  where the same basis ( i.e.
 committed  dose) used for deriving MPCs and the proposed RIFs or final ALIs
 is continued.   In  the  ICRP-26 weighting  system, the ALI (Annual Limit on
 Intake) replaces  the RIF-.      •  '

          Some  discussion of old  and new acronyms and their relationships
 appears useful here.  The DAC (derived air concentration) for a
 radionuclide under final recommendations  is the counterpart of the old
 MFC.   Thus, for inhalation of radionuclides,  the DAC or MFC
 (microcuries/cc of air)  of a  specific radionuclide multiplied by the
 volume of  air  inhaled  during  a working year (2.4x10' cc of air/working
 year), by  "Reference Man" (ICRP75) gives  the  ALI (microcuries/working
 year)  of  that  radionuclide.
 3.5.2   There  is  no  need  for the  RIF approach,  nor are there any benefits
 to be derived from  it  (A.a-39).
                               *

 Response:  We disagree.   Although final recommendations adopt the ALIs
 rather  than RIFs, as a result  of adopting ICRP-26 weighting factors, both
 the ALI and RIF  are based on the same committed dose concept used for the
 former  MPCs.   See also the response to comment 3.5.1..  As a practical
 means of compliance (with the  basic dose limits), presented in Note 2 of
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our  proposed  guidance,  use  of  the RIF greatly facilitates the control of
workplace  exposures  to  assure  that the dose'limits are not exceeded.  The
same is  true  of  the  ALL
 3.5.3   Exposure" should  not  be" regulated through use of RIFs (E.b-2).

 Response:   Secondary  limits,'such as RIFs or ALIs,  provide a practical way
•to  implement  the basic, limits.  .See. also the. responses to comments 3.5.1
 and 3.5.2.  Although  the  basic  limits are expressed in units of dose
 equivalent  or committed dose  equivalent, secondary limits (ALI or RIF) are
 derived for practical radiation protection in terms of quantities that can
 be  measured.   These  secondary limits reflect the use of models which
 relate  a radionuclide quantity  with the corresponding dose equivalent to
 an  adult Reference Man.  From secondary limits, a derived limit, such as
 the DAC,  can  be calculated  which expresses the basic limit in terms of a
 limiting environmental  condition for Reference Man.
 3.5.4   The  proposed  use  of  Radioactivity Intake Factors will involve more
.operational problems in-  implementation then the continued use of
 Radioactivity 'Concentration Guides (RCGs)  (A.b-11).

'Response:" ~We. disagree."" ^Both'. secondary limits. (RIFs and ALIs) and derived
 limits' (RCGs or  DACs)  have  their necessary and practical use in
 operational radiation  protection.  See the responses to comments 3.5.1,
 3.5.2,  and  3.5.3.
 3.5.5   It  is  more practical to regulate and monitor concentrations and
 contamination rather  than intake (A.b-23).

 Response:   See the response to comment 3.5.4.
 3.5.6   The  added  workload required by Recommendation 5 is not justified by
 the  potential  radiation exposure reductions (B
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 3.5.8   Recommendation 5 should be covered as a part of Recommendation  3
 (A.a-41)  or as a part of Recommendation 4 (B.c-20)..

 Response:.  Proposed recommendation' 5a- appears in final recommendations as
 a  note. .See the .response to comment 3'.5.6.
 3.5.9" .The-use: of-Radioactivity Intake Factors is an improvement over  the
 current  practice of basing internal exposure limits on airborne
 concentrations (B.a-5,  B.a-33, B.a-46, B.a-53, D-2).

 Response:   We agree,  for purposes of meeting the primary limits of  dose,
 that  the determination of actual radionuclide intakes is a better measure
 of  compliance than the measurement of airborne concentration  to which  the
 worker was  exposed.
 3.5.10  Part  b.of. Recommendation No. 5 is not consistent" with ICRP
 Publication 30.and'adds an additional element of confusion to radiation
 protection (A.d-18,  B.a-33, B.a-36, B.c-22, E.b-1).

.Response:   Part b of. proposed recommendation 5. has been deleted.  See  the
. response* to commejit 3~5v;6-v' ....; ;.- ,'.'••.•;:/'•...•..;..• '-••'  :   .
 3.5.11  Recommendation 5.b contradicts Recommendation 5 and is ambiguous
 (A.a-19).      .         . '   •              *        •__        -

 Response:   See the responses to comments 3.5.6 and 3.5.10.
 3.-5.1'2  We vigorously -support Recommendation 5b, in part because of the
 large uncertainties -in the organ weighting factors, w^ (C-5).

 Response:   When changes in metabolic and dosimetric models lead to higher
 ALI or DAC values,  the application of ALARA should determine whether
 actual levels of exposure need to increase.  Therefore, this
 recommendation has  not been retained in final recommendations.  See the
 response to comment 2.2.8.
 3.5.13   Is  it the intent of EPA to make the derivation of the RIFs  the
 responsibility of each user? (A.b-5, A.d-11, A.d-14, A.d-29, A.d-40,
 B.a-33).

 Response:  We did not intend that users derive their own RIF values.   It
 was  our  intent to furnish that set of values.  Since we have adopted  the
 ICRP Publication 26 basic system of dose limitation for final guidance,
 the  ALIs  (annual limit on intake) replace our proposed RIFs, and currently
 acceptable values of the ALIs are available in ICRP Publication 30.
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3.5.14  Will EPA provide individual  RIFs  for  each  situation,  each
employer, and each job classification?  (A.d-11,  A.d-14,  A.d-29,  A.d-40).

Response:  No.-  EPA will provide or-  reference ALI  (RIF). values based on
Reference Man.  It-is permissible  to use  more specific metabolic and
dosimetric models 'in those situations where the. necessary data are
available.  See the: response  to- comment 3.5.13.  .
3.5.15  EPA should either derive and  publish  RIFs  or  use ICRP's ALIs
(B.c-11, E.a-4).

Response:  See the response  to  comment  3.5.13.
3.5.16  EPA should make  the  RIFs numerically  equal  to ICRP's ALIs in ICRP
Publication 30  (A.a-1, A.a-49, A.a-50,  A.a-51,  A.d-13,  A.d-18,  B.a-29).

Response:  See  the response  to comment  3.5.14.


3.5.17  EPA should permit  the. use  of  site-specific  RIFs where actual data
arer-a.y.ailable::(B..a-:33,;Bia-46)..--.:;  :.; .  .•:/.: .  ...   .-••

Response:  This is EPA's intent. .  However,. Federal  regulatory agencies
will'determine  the specific  criteria  £or  such use of  site-specific ALIs.
Modifications to  the. ALIs  in KRP-30  could be made  for specific
individuals where there  is adequate metabolic/dosimetric data available to
modify the model  data assumed for  Reference Man (see  ICRP Publication
23).  See the response to  comment  3'.5.14.
3.5.18  A consistent methodology,  representing  equal risks,  should be used
in deriving RIF values  (B.a-22).

Response:  This has been done Tsy adopting  the ICRP-26 basic  system of dose
limitation for final recommendations.
3.5.19  EPA uses complex mathematical  models  which may not be understood
by the average Radiation Safety  Officer  (A.d-6).

Response:  The mathematical  formulations  recommended  are not complex.
3.5.20  Is a  "Radioactivity  Concentration  Guide"  the  same  as  a
"Radioactivity Intake Factor"  divided  by the  amount  of  air or water an
individual ingests in a year (A.a-12).

Response:  Yes.  See responses  to  comments 3.5.1,  3.5.2,  and  3.5.3 for
further discussion of the terms used in final recommendations.
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3.5.21  The RIFs appear  to  be  unnecessarily restrictive;  there is no valid
reason to arbitrarily  reduce the  airborne  uranium concentration limit by a
factor of 10 below  its current value  (B.a-14).

Response: • The values  for. secondary limits (ALIs  or RIFs) and for derived
limits :(DAGs or MFCs)  are not  arbitrarily  lowered or raised.   They have
chaiiged: due-: to-improved  knowledge, of  metabolism and dosimetry.  The ALIs
and. DACs are the'result'of  computations  based 'on  the models and parametric
values described .in ICRP-30.  .See also .the responses to comments 2.2.8,
3.'5.6, and 3.5ll2.   '    '         .
3.5.22- EPA's substitution  of  the  terminology "Radioactivity Intake
Factor" for  ICRP's  "Annual  Limit of  Intake"  is  unnecessary and confusing
(A.a-1, A.b-6, A.d-13, A.d-18,  B.a-29,  B.a-36,  B.c-22,  E.a-6).

Response:  The proposed Radioactivity  Intake Factors  (RIF) were based on a
system similar, but  not identical,  to  that  of ICRP's  "Annual Limit on
Intake" (AH), because -they depend on  a somewhat  different set of organ
weighting factors.  'Hence,  the  RIF is  not  the same  as an ALL   To use the
same term would lead to confusion.   As  the  basic  system- and numerical
limiting d.oses irr ICRP-26 have  been  adopted  in  final  recommendations, the
; secondary limit, will now be- called, the  ALL  .
3.6  •    LIMITS BELOW THE  GUIDES
3.6.1     If  the  recommendations  of  ICRP,  NCRP,  and EPA's guidance are
valid, there is  no need  for Recommendation 6 "(A.a-14,  A.b-5,  A.d-12,
A.d-40,; B.a-14,  B.a-15,  B.a-27,  B.c-12,  B.c-14).

Response:  We do not agree.   Such additional  limitations are  part of  the
current framework of radiation protection programs,  including the
recommendations  of the ICRP.  Thus,  the  final recommendations provide for
establishing- administrative control  levels below  the specified limits by
agencies  or management.   Such control  levels  are  called "authorized
limits" by the ICRP (See paragraph  148 of ICRP  Publication 26) and may be
established  through an optimization  or ALARA  process.
3.6.2  Recommendation  6 defeats  the  purpose  of  having a lead agency set
standards  (A.a-41, A.d-14, A.d-24, A.d-40).

Response:  We do  not agree.   The  intent  of this recommendation is to
further facilitate the elimination of  unnecessary  exposure  and the
achievement of ALARA.  See the response  to comment 3.6.1.
3.6.3  Allowing federal agencies  to  set  lower  limits  will  lead  to
confusion and undermine the  confidence of workers  and the  public  in the
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'safety provided at  the proposed  limits  (A.a-10,  B.a-11,  B.a-21, .B.a-44,
B.b-7,. B.c-20).

Response:  We-disagree-  On the  basis of  the  linear  nonthreshold
hypothesis., risks are proportional to dose, and  there  is no  completely
risk-free level' of  radiation exposure..  The recommendations  therefore
encourage, administrative control levels below the  limiting values  to be
established by agencies or management,  on the basis  of generic ALARA
findings.  Setting .of' such administrative levels has'been a  common
practice in many user activities.  This practice has not led to confusion
or to undermining the confidence of workers and  the  public.   See also
response to comment 3.6.1.
3.6.4  We are opposed to Recommendation  6, as  it  would  give  regulatory
agencies authority to establish arbitrary and  discriminatory guides
(A.b-15, A.d-11, A.d-14, A.d-18, A.-21,  A.d-40, B.a-7,  B.a-19,  B.a-27,
B.a-36, B.b-7, B.c-20, D-2).

Response:  We do not believe that agencies would  establish capricious  or
discriminatory regulations.  If this, were the  case, administrative
remedies are-available.
3.6^5" We are opposed.to .Recommendation  6, as  it  gives  regulatory  agencies
license to legislate ALARA (B.a-7, E.a-2). -                    •   '      '

Response:  That is the intent, when  it is  justified.  The  intended use  of
administrative control levels is to  further ensure  that the  objectives  of
that guidance, including ALARA, ar§  met.   See  the responses  to  comments
3.6.1. and 3.6.4.
3.6.6  Establishing limits lower than  the  proposed  guides  should  be  an
administrative option of the licensees, not a  regulatory option of federal
agencies (A.a-14, B.a-5, B.a-33, F-2).

Response:  Radiation control measures  should be determined and used  by
both management and regulatory authorities, as appropriate.   See  the
responses to comments 3.6.1, 3.6.3, and 3.6.5.
3.6.7  Allowing federal.agencies to set  lower  limits will  lessen  the
willingness of licensees to employ ALARA principles (-B.b-7,  B.c-20,
B.c-22).

Response:  If this were so, then it would  imply  that the system of  dose
limitation, which depends on both the existence  of limiting  values  and
application of ALARA, is not feasible.   This would imply the need  for  low
enough limiting values so that ALARA is  not needed.  We hope this  is not
the case.
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3.6.8  The effect .of agencies  setting  lower  limits  will be to penalize
licensee's with good.radiation protection programs  (B.a-33, B.a-46,
B.c-20, B.c-22)..                             '

Response:  If  a licensee's "radiation"protection program is indeed a "good1
one, it would'not be adversely affected  by such limits..  See also the
responses, "to comments' .3..S.l'-and 3.fr.7.    • ".   . ^  "  •    ...
3.6.9  Lower limits,  set  by  regulatory  agencies  that  do  not- fully
understand  the operational requirements of  an activity,  could cripple
operations  by denying needed flexibility (A.a-41,  A.d-12,  A.d-15, A.d-40,
E.b-9).

Response:   Regulatory agencies  should be fully cognizant of the
operational requirements  of  the activities  they  regulate.   See the
responses to comments 3.6.1,  3.6.3,  and 3.6.8.
3.6.10  Many federal agencies  do  not  have  the  expertise  to  set limits
based on different  categories  of  workers or  work situations.   If this
recommendation is retained,  it must specify  that a  certified  health
physici.st. make.--the;,  dete'rminatfons upon which-.the limits  are based (E.a-3).

Response:  The establishment of administrative control levels should be
carried out by competent  authorities,  whether  Federal regulatory agencies
or management.   See the responses to  comments  3.6.1,  3.6.8, and 3.6.9.
3.6.11  Conscientious  application  of  ALARA makes Recommendation 6
unnecessary  (A.a-10, A.a-39,.A.b-16,  A.d-6,  B.c-20,  B.c-22).

Response:  We agree with  this comment insofar as ALARA is conscientiously
applied.  However, it  is  not  possible to  insure  that a largely voluntary
process will be universally  or uniformly  applied.   To the extent that
'generic ALARA findings are possible,  the  establishment of administrative
control levels would correct  this  deficiency.  See  the responses to
comments 3.6.1, 3.6.8, and 3.6.9.
3.6.12  Recommendation  6  is  unnecessary  (A.a-41,  B.a-8,  B.a-14,  B.a-26,
B.b-7, E.a-2).

Response:  We disagree.   We  believe  the  substance of  this recommendation,
as also recommended in  ICRP-26,  provides  an  important means  for
eliminating unnecessary levels  of  exposure that  are within the maximum
dose limits.  See also  the response  to comment  3.6.11.
 3.6.13  Recommendation  6  is  unnecessary  as  Federal  agencies  already have
 the authority to  set  lower limits  (E.a-6).
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 Response:   It  is  true that Federal agencies already have such power.
 However,  guidance promulgated by executive order provides clear direction
•from the  President to Federal agencies to use this means to eliminate
.unnecessary exposure.     .        .  .
 3.'6.14 . Recommendation*. 6 would vitiate any attempt at rational development
 of  standards  (A.a-13.,  A.d-21).'      '  .

 Response:   This comment is not correct.  .The establishment of authorized
 limits or  administrative control levels is a well-established component of
 radiation  protection standards (see ICRP Publication 26).
 3.6.15   Recommendation 6 is  consistent with current policy (A.d-23, B.a-9,
 E.a-5).

 Response:   We agree.
 3.6.16  If. Recommendation 6 is-retained.it should be revised to encourage
 iiiteragency cooperation and consistency in setting standards (A.b-6,
 •E.a-4,  E.ar-6.,. E-b-2)..    .;•,•-.•.'•.;.•   -.--....

 Response:'   Interagency'cooperation and consistency'are only particularly
 necessary  for those  facilities-regulated by more than one -Agency.  Such
 cooperation already  exists with few,  .if any, complications of
 recordkeeping,  reporting,  and administrative procedures.
 3.6.17   If  Recommendation 6 is retained,  EPA should provide guidance for
 uniform implementation (A.b-5, A.b-15,. A.d-23,  B.a-21,  B.a-44).

 Response:   The  details of regulatory implementation are outside the scope
 of  Federal  guidance.   However, EPA will keep informed of Federal agency
 actions to  implement  the guidance so as to promote a coordinated and
 effective Federal  program of work protection.  See the  response to comment
 3.6.17.
 3.6.18  Recommendation 6 would unnecessarily complicate recordkeeping,
 reporting,  and  administrative procedures (B.c-33).

 Response:   We disagree.   See the responses to comments 3.6.16 and 3.6.17.


 3.6.19  Replace "federal agencies should establish..." with "Federal
 agencies may establish..."  (E.a-4,  E.a-6).

 Response:   The  final  recommendations make this change.
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3.6.20  Recommendation 6 should Be included in Section 4, and  should  refer
to ALARA goals rather than limits (E.b-1).

Response:  We believe the establishment of radiation exposure  control
measures.is important enough to warrant a separate recommendation•
Therefore, the use., of. administrative control, level's is recommended  in
final guidance to achieve a key .objective of the- guidance, ALARA
exposures.  See-also  the responses to comments 3.6.1 and 3.6.7.


3.6.21  Setting administrative levels should be the function of industry,
not federal regulations (A.a-45, A.a-8, A.d-18, A.d-42, B.a-2, B.a-32,
B.a-46, B.c-12, E.b-8).

Response:  We disagree.  Administrative control levels can be  used  by
either regulatory or  industrial authorities.  See also the response to
comment 3.6.3.
3.7  -.  ' OCCUPATIONAL EXPOSURE' OF MINORS
3.7.1    -The recommendation that occupational exposures to individuals
younger-than eighteen should.be limited to one^tenth of the Radiation
Protection Guides for adult workers is acceptable (A.a-10, A.a-39, A.a-41,
A-.b-5, A.b-6, A.d-11, A.d-14, A.d-29, A.d-40, B.a-5, B.a-8, B.a-11,
B.a-14, B.a-26, B.a-32, B.a-33, B.a-46, B.a-48, B.a-53, B.c-12, D-2,
E.a-2, E.a-3, E.a-5, E.a-6, E.b-2, E.b-9).

Response:.  No response required.


3.7.2  Adoption of this recommendation should have little or no effect on
radiation exposure in the health care and nuclear industries (A.d-18,
B.a-7, B.a-36, B.c-20).                    .

Response:  No response required.
3.7.3  Recommendation 7 is made without justification (A.d-23, B.a-7,
B.c-20).

Response:  This recommendation is implicit in previous guidance (25 FR
4402), complies with existing' Federal laws on employment of minors, and is
consistent with accepted international practice (IAEA82).  Therefore, we
proposed no change and it appears in final recommendations.
3.7.4  Recommendation 7, which restricts occupational dose to those under
18 to 0.1 RPG, would result in an annual permissible dose of 50 millirem
if Recommendation 8.d is adopted (A.a-14).
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 Response:   Proposed alternative 8d represented an extreme solution, out  of
 four  alternative recommendations for protection of the unborn, that was
 not adopted in final recommendations.
 3.7.5.  Recommendation 7 should be clarified to read "...in addition  to  any
 other "Federal .restrictions,  the occupational exposure .'of individuals
 younger than- eighteen years  should be limited to 5.0 mSv per year."
 •(A.b-8)*.        '•"•'" .-•"--..    .   ..   -. ;  •  •

 Response:   The  additional phrase "in addition to any other Federal
 regulations" was not included in final recommendations because it is
 implicit  to all the recommendations.  Numerical limitations in SI units
 are  specified in parenthesis.
 3.7.6  Is  it the intent of Recommendation 7 that an individual under age
 18 be limited to one-tenth of the 5 rem/yr whole body RPG or one-tenth of
 each range limit? (E.b-3). .     .           ...

 Response: •' The Proposed recommendation 7 for minors explicitly refers only
 to one tenth of the numerical limits (RPGs), and not the suggested  ranges
;fqr-proposed .recommendation^ .4V  .'  ..-'•.--. . •".-.  -   .' .  ...... -.-..
 3.7.7  Recommendation 7 requires .clarification in view of the Range Guides
 (A.b-11).  '.•••.      •                  .•

 Response:   See the response to comment 3.7.6.
 3.7'.8  individuals less than 18 years of age should not be allowed to work
 in a radiation area under any condition. (A.d-6, B.a-53).

 Response:   The guidance for minors serves for controlling exposures  they
 might receive as a student apprentice or trainee, either in formal
 educational institutions or during on-the-job training (whether or not  it
 entails their receiving wages).  We believe that most (if not all)
 "employment" of minors in tasks involving radiation exposure is of this
 nature.  This recommendation requires that any individual who is under  age
 eighteen and is in an occupational type of environment be protected  as
 though they were a member of the general population.  See also the
 response to comment 3.7.3.
 3.8      EXPOSURE OF THE UNBORN
 3.8.1    Alternative A, which recommends that women voluntarily limit
 exposure to less than 0.5 rem during any known or suspected pregnancy,
 should be adopted by EPA (A.a-6, A.a-8, A.a-10, A.a-13, A.a-34, A.a-39,
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 A.a-40,  A.a-41,  A.b-17,  A.b-20,  A.b-23,  A.d-11,  A.d-14, A.d-19, A.d-23,
 A.d-29,  A.d-34,  A.d-40,  B.a-3,  B.a-6,  B.a-13,  B.a-17, B.a-22, B.a-26,
 B.b-1,  B.c-11,  B.c-12,  B.c-14,  B.c-20, B.c-21, D-2, E.b-1, E.b-2, E.b-3,
 E.b-5,  E.b-9,  F-3).  .      '  -          -       "'

 Response:.  This alternative,  was ,not adopted because it places the entire
 burden  of  protecting the unborn on- women, -i.e-. could incur economic
 penalty or loss of job  security.   The  final recommendations specify that
 the  dose equivalent  to'an unborn'child of  a woman-voluntarily declaring
 her  pregnancy  should be maintained ALARA and should not exceed 0.5 rem
 during  the entire  gestation  period.  In addition, efforts should be made
 to avoid variation above the uniform monthly exposure rate that would
 satisfy this limiting value. We  believe this  formulation reflects both
 the  numerical  level  of  protection and  the  acceptable voluntary elements of
 proposed Alternative A.
 3.8.2   Alternative  B,  which recommends that women able to bear children
 voluntarily  avoid  job  situations involving whole-body dose rates greater
 than 0.2  rem per month and to keep total dose to the unborn to less than
 0.5  rem during  a known.. pregnancy,  should be adopted by EPA (A.a-13,
 A.a-36% A.b-S,  A.b-20,. A.b-22,  A.b-26, A.d-6, A.d-9, A.d-11, A.d-14,
:A.d^l9,vvA>d-?9/-A/d-40',B'a-3,.: B.a-6,. B.b-7, B-.3-12,. B.a-20, B.a-22,
 '                       "'"'""      ""''  '    '"
 Response:   This  alternative was not adopted because it -places the burden
 of  protecting  the  unborn entirely on women, who could incur economic
 penalty or "loss  of job opportunity and security.  See also the responses
 to  comments 2.1.12,  2.13.4 and 3.8.1.
 3.8.3   Alternative  C,  limiting'women able to bear children to job
 situations  involving whole-body dose rates less than 0.2 rem per month and
 limiting  exposure of  the unborn to less than 0.5 rem during any known
 pregnancy,  should be  adopted by EPA (A.a-2,  B.a-19,  B.a-31, B.a-42, E.a-3).

 Response:   Proposed alternative C was not adopted in final guidance
 because it  would unnecessarily equal employment opportunities to women
 able  to bear children;  and the desired level of protection for the unborn
 could  be  achieved by  less restrictive means.  See also the responses to
 comments  2.1.12, 2.13.4 and 3.8.2.
 3.8.4   Alternative  D,  restricting whole-body doses of both men and women
 to  less than 0.5  rem per  six-month period,  should be adopted by EPA, as it
 would  afford all  workers  equal protection from radiation exposure as well
 as  protect  the  most sensitive  individual (unborn) (A.c-1,  A.c-2, A.d-20,
 C-4, D-ll).

 Response:   Proposed alternative D was not adopted because  of its
 unacceptable impact on necessary activities in defense,  medical, and
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 energy applications and because the unborn can be provided the desired
 level of protection by other more acceptable means.
 3.-8'.5  Alternative A.is not acceptable (A.a-12, A.a-46, A.c-1, A.c-2,
 'A.cKLO, A.d-12,. A.d-20, A.d-42, B.a-8, B.a-27, B.a-33, B.c-5, B.c-11, C-4,
 C"-5'r .C-6,':E*.a-2, 'E-.a-S-, 'E-Va-:6)>'.'.••/;Yv' "'    .  ' .   " - •;-..

.Response:-  The- final, recommendation provides an assured level of
• protection to the  unborn without relying on voluntary action by the
 mother, other than declaring her pregnancy.  See also the responses  to
 comments 2.1.12, 2.13.4 and 3.8.1.
 3.8.6  Alternative B is not acceptable (A.a-6, A.a-12, A.a-16, A.a-41,
 A.b-17, A.c-1, A.c-2, A.d-10, A.d-20, A.d-34, B.a-8, B.a-12, B.a-27,
 B.c-5,  C-6,  C-8,  C-4, E.a-3).

 Response:   The final recommendation achieves the desired level of
 protection of the unborn without denying equal opportunity rights to or
 placing the  burden of protection on women.  See also the response to
 comment 3.8.2.      '      •   . .   .
 3.8.7 -Alternative C is not acceptable (A.a-13, A.a-16, A.a-36, A.a-40,
 A'.a-41,  A.a-46,  A.b-16, A.b-17, A.b-23, A.c-1, A.c-2, A.c-10, A.d-11,
 A.d-12,  A.d-14,  A.d-20, A.d-22, A.d-23, A.d-29,. A.d-34, A.d-40, B.a-3,
 B.a-8,  B.a-17,  B.a-20,  B.a-22,  B.a-26, B.a-27, B.a-33, B.b-2, B.c-12,
 B.c-20,  C-4,  C-5,  C-6,  C-8, E.a-2, E.a-6, E.a-7, E.b-1, E.b-3, E.b-6).

 Response:   See  the response to  comment 3.8.3.
 3.8.8  Alternative D is not acceptable (A.a-13, A.a-34, A.a-40, A.a-41,
 A.a-46, A.b-16,  A.b-17, A.b-23, A.d-9, A.d-11, A.d-12, A.d-14, A.d-22,
 A.d-23, A.d-24,  A.d-29, A.d-34, A.d-40, A.d-42, B.a-3, B.a-6, B.a-7,
 B.a-8,  B.a-17,  B,a-20,  B.a-22,  B.a-26, B.a-27, B.a-33, B.a-42, B.b-2,
 B.c-5,  B.c-12,  B.c-20,  B.c-21,  C-5, C-8, E.a-2, E.a-6, E.a-7, E.b-1,
 E.b-3,  E.b-6,  E.b-8,).

 Response:   See the response to  comment 3.8.4.
 3.8.9-  Alternative D would degrade the social benefits of radiation,
 and/or  increase total doses and costs (A.d-9, A.d-23, B.a-22, B.b-2,
 E.a-7,  E.b-8).

 Response:   We agree that Alternative D would lead to unacceptable impacts
 that are not necessary to assuring appropriate protection for the unborn
 child.   See also the response to comment 3.8.4.
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 3.8.10   Alternative  B would be acceptable for protection of the unborn if
 it were  rewritten  to include only pregnant women instead of all women of
 child-bearing  age  (A.b-17).

 Response: '  This  change would not completely satisfy the problems discussed
 in the response  to comment  3.8.2.  .
 3.8.11   Alternatives A and B' are unacceptable since they assume that the
 women are  sufficiently knowledgeable to make valid judgments regarding the
 welfare  of themselves and any unborn child (E.a-3).

 Response:   The  final recommendations provide that workers and their
 employers  be  informed of current knowledge of risks to the unborn from
 radiation  and of  the responsibility of both employers and workers to
 minimize exposure of the unborn and that protection of the unborn be
 achieved without  economic penalty or loss of job opportunity and security
 to  workers.   However,  the recommended limit for dose to the unborn is
 still only invoked when a woman voluntarily declares her pregnancy.
 3.8.12   Alternative  D is -a "sleeper" that establishes the annual exposure
•i'iini.t.at-l.O'.-rem-.; '-It :is:: totally, unacceptable (A.a-41, A.d-40, B.a-3,
 B'.a-26>.    '        :

 Response:   See  the response to comment 3.8.4.
 3.8.13.  Alternative  D would  be acceptable if the reference to male workers
 were  dropped  (E.a-3).

 Response:   If  the  reference  to male workers were dropped, Alternative D
 would still be subject to  the  objections  to Alternative C.
 3..8.14   The  proposed  guidance on Protection of the Unborn should be
 withdrawn  since  EPA has  failed to construct a valid scientific,  legal, or
 policy  case  f6r  choosing amongst the alternatives (B.a-24).

 Response:   In proposing  four alternatives we afforded the public the
 opportunity  to raise  the scientific, legal, and policy issues they feel
 are germane  to protection of the unborn.   The many comments received have
 been  useful  in that regard.
 3.8.15   EPA's  background  report  exaggerates the effects on children
 exposed  in  utero.   There  is  insufficient  evidence to make statistically
 valid conclusions  on teratogenic effects  of in utero exposure; including
 the mental  retardation  studies based  on In utero exposures at Hiroshima
 and Nagasaki  (A.c-1,  A.c-2,  A.b-17, A.d-20, B.c-11).
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 Responser .The background report summarized the most current information
 on the  effects of radiation on children exposed in utero..  It was not our
 intent  to exaggerate,  and new evidence clearly substantiates our earlier
 conclusion that the risk of teratogenic damage is substantial and much
.greater than hereditary risks due to exposure of workers prior to
 conception.   In our background report, we. placed .considerable emphasis on
 evidence of structural anomalies among.the A-bomb survivors exposed to
 radiation in utero.  For' example, the risk of microcephaly was estimated,
 assuming a linear response, as between.5 x 10~3 and 20 x 10"^ per
 rem.  New studies of doses at Hiroshima (RERF83,84) now indicate neutron
 doses were overestimated, so that the risk of microcephaly was very
 probably closer to the higher of these two values.  These studies of
 structural anomalies were cited as indicative of the probable sensitivity
 of the  fetus to more serious effects, such as severe mental retardation.
 It has  now become clear that this concern was well founded.  The recently
 published investigation by Otake and Schull of severe mental retardation
 among the A-bomb survivors irradiated in utero, 8 to 15 weeks after
 conception,  indicates that the dose-response function seems to be linear
 and without  a threshold.  These authors estimate this risk, to be about 4 x
 .10~3 cases per rad to,the fetus (Ot84).  This is not the total impact.
 Less severe  mental retardation also, occurred and its excess is the topic
 of a paper now being drafted (W.J. Schull, personal communication).  We
 •note !that.:thds. work'haa. been, followed.for a number'of. years by the
'International'Commission on Radiological Protection and provides the basis
 for their current recommendations for increased protection of the fetus. .

          The question of the sufficiency of the evidence of teratogenic,
 effects in Hiroshima A-bomb survivors is a question that can not be
 answered here.  We have reviewed the results available in published
 studies and  any rebuttal or disagreement should likewise be published so
 the scientific community can evaluate all the evidence.  We note, however,
 that there are some animal studies that support the in utero studies on
 mental  retardation of children of survivors in Hiroshima.  Radiation
 exposure has been reported to interfere with normal neuronal development
 in rats (No79) and even relatively low levels of exposure can have
 detrimental  effects on locomotor- and maze-learning in rats (We61, We62).
 The observations are also consistent with the types of teratogenesis seen
 in laboratory animals (Ru71) arid with effects seen in animals at exposure
 as low  as 1 rad (M178).
 3.8.16  Since current managerial policy is generally to limit exposures to
 60%  of the RPGs,  it is questionable if additional restrictions on fertile
 women are necessary or desirable.   Such policies would limit (on the
 average) the potential exposure of a conceptus to 0.5 rem during the first
 two  months of pregnancy without placing additional or discriminatory
 restrictions on the employment of  fertile women in the radiation industry
 (A.b-1).

 Response:  We disagree.  Such a general policy assures neither the
 protection of all unborn nor achievement of the desired level of dose
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limitation.  An  explicit  recommendation  is  required to assure protection
of  the unborn  as well  as  rights  of  women to nondiscriminatory treatment in
employment.


3.8.17.  NCRP'Report  #53 .gives  adequate guidance on exposure to the unborn
(B.a-i4V-B.a-21, ;Bva;-44,  B.a-48,-Eib-2,  E.b-3).  •

Response: '.These recommendations  of' the  NCRP were taken into consideration
and, in  large  part,  adopted.   See also the  response to comment 3.8.37.
 3.8.18   Current  guidance  such  as  NCRP 39  and  Reg.  Guide 8.13 appear to
 provide  sufficient  incentive for  voluntarily  limiting  doses  during
 pregnancy  (A.a-16,  A.a-46,  B.a-4,  B.a-6,  B.a-32,  E.a-5).

 Response:   The existence  of NCRP  recommendations  and NRC Regulatory Guides
 do  not obviate the  need to  include explicit  provisions for protection of
 the unborn in Federal guidance.
 3.8.19   Recommendations  8  (a)-(c)  are  unacceptable for women workers as
.they,.-.would-;.vtolate^.'f.ederally  secured', rights to  equal employment
 opportunities while' hindering the  exercize of the fundamental right pf
 procreation-and  placing.the burden-of  a. healthy and safe  environment on
 the worker'.  EPA must  assure  that  regulatory agencies adopt a consistent
 policy in  this matter  (A.c-1, A.c-2, A.d-18,  B.a-36,  B.c-10).

 Response:  We agree, and the  final recommendations encompass the goals
 expressed  in this comment.         .
 3.8.20   The  legal  constraints  preventing  issuing of guidance calling for
 mandatory  protection  of  unborn children must  be  resolved and the federal
 government should  take  the  lead (A.d-42,  B.a-10, B.a-24).

 Response:  We  believe the final recommendations,  achieve this objective.
 3.8.21   EPA  should  postpone  guidance  on this  issue until the Federal
 regulatory agencies  can  agree  on the  regulation (A.a-19, B.c-23).

 Response:  Federal  agencies  do agree  on the  final recommendation.
 3.8.22   Congress  should  resolve  the  equal  employment  opportunity issues
 raised  in  connection with  the  protection of  the  unborn (B.a-12,  B.a-38).

 Response:   The  Congress  has  addressed  these  issues.   The  final
 recommendations are consistent with  civil  rights and  equal  employment
 opportunity laws  and guidelines.
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3.8.23  Alternative C is unlawful under Title VII; if the hazard affects
the fetus through women only, the exclusion must be pregnant women  only
and not all women of child-bearing age (A.a-36, A.a-40, A.b-16, A.c-1,
A.c-2, A.c-10, A.d-34, B.a-7, B.a-22, B.a-26, B.b-2, B.c-11, B.c-20,
E.a-7, E.b-3,..E,b-6).      ...  '

Response: " We "agree.  See the response to comment .3.8.24..    .
3.8.24  The reference to "women able to bear children" is over inclusive
and discriminatory.  It contains the assumption that  such women  are  always
potentially pregnant and that women cannot control when they become
pregnant (A.c-1, A.c-2, A.c-10, A.d-20).

Response:  We agree.  Final recommendations provide an appropriate level
of protection to the unborn child only for a woman declaring pregnancy.
3.-8.2S- Requiring all employers to make provisions for not exposing female
workers to more than 0-. 2 rem per month could restrict employment
opportunities for women (A.a-6, A.a-16).

Re'sponse;:;. We; agree... \.-ihe. appropriate protection 'of the unborn child  does
not require that occupational exposure of all women be restricted, just
those who are pregnant.  See the response to comment 3.8.24.
3.8.26  These guidelines will adversely affect labor agreements,
particularly pregnant worker agreements (C-2).

Response:  We disagree.  The final recommendation for protection of  the
unborn is written so as to protect the rights of workers and  should  be
supportive of labor agreements.  Since 1975, the State of Michigan has
required 0.5 rem protection of women who have submitted written notice of
their pregnant condition to a licensee or registrant (MDPH75).  There are
no known cases where women have incurred discrimination, economic
penalties, or loss of job opportunity and security as a result of this
regulation.
3.8.27  Even .excluding a worker from any exposure once a pregnancy  is
known may not be an adequate precaution against litigation  (B.a-35).

Response:   The subject of litigation is outside the scope  of Federal
guidance; protection of the unborn and not prevention of litigation is  the
objective of guidance.  However, litigation could take into account all
the relevant factors involved, including Federal guidance.
3.8.28  EPA should have adopted the legal opinion obtained by DOE and NRC
that this problem should be treated through informed consent (E.a-5,
E.a-6, E.a-7).
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.Response:   These and other Federal agencies of our Interagency Working
 Group concurred with the formulation of the final recommendation.


 3". 8V29 ; Protection of future generations must be given precedence over
 equal job .opportunity (A.a-2,. A.b-20, B.a.-42,. D-3).

 Response:   Final guidance assures achievement of both objectives.


 3.8.30  The mother should have the informed responsibility for protecting
 her unborn child from the risk of radiation exposure (A.a-6, A.a-14,
 A.a-46, A.b-1,  A.d-5, A.d-23, B.a-3, E.a-7).

 Response:   We agree.  Final guidance requires that workers (both male and
 female) be informed of current knowledge of risks to the unborn from
 radiation  and of their responsibility to minimize exposure of the unborn.
 The final  recommendation recognizes the responsibility of women to declare
 their pregnancies.        .  •             '  •


 3.8.31  EPA should adopt the standard neces'sary to protect the future
, children. _of••workers; .of ..either .sex..:-. It/should express the same level of
' concern.'£6r the health and employment rights of both men and women (A.c-1,
•A."c-2, A.cr-8,. A.c-10,- B.a-53, C-4, D-5).  •

 Response-:   We believe the recpmmendations satisfy this objective.  See the
 responses  to.comments 3.8.15 and 3.8.51.  •
 3.8-32  Both male and female workers should receive instruction on the
 potential for genetic and somatic damage from'radiation.  Both males and
 females wishing to parent children should be allowed, to remove themselves
 from exposure situations prior to conception and during pregnancy with
 provisions to retain seniority, payrate, and other benefits (A.c-1, A.c-2,
 A.c-6, A.c-10, A.d-20, C-4).

 Response:  Final guidance includes provisions for instruction for all
 workers.  The proposal that both male and female workers wishing to parent
 children have the option to remove themselves prior to conception was not
 adopted because the risks are very significantly smaller than those to the
 unborn after conception.  Protection of the unborn during a declared
 pregnancy is provided for.  See the response to comment 3.8.31.
 3.8.33  Exposure to the fetus should be restricted by ALARA procedures
 during any verified pregnancy with a limiting value of 0.5 rem during the
 entire pregnancy (A.a-16, B.a-7, B.a-34, B.a-48, C-8, E.a-2).

 Response:   The final recommendations contain these provisions.
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3.8.34  EPA should establish a mandatory exposure limit to  the  fetus
(A.b-13, A.d-37, B.a-33, B.a-46).

Response:  The final recommendations provide for a limiting dose  of 0.5
rem to the unborn.
3.8.35  .An alternative approach would be; to include  the  fetus., with
appropriate weigntingr in the list of critical organs  (A.a-37, B.a-17,
E.a-6).

Response:  This approach would require establishing  a  weight  greater  than
one (approximately 10) to achieve equivalent protection.   This would  be
inconsistent with the logic under which weighting factors  are developed,
currently.
3.8.36  EPA should establish a mandatory exposure limit  for females
(B.a-27, B.a-38).         '     .

Response :• This is neither needed nor desirable for either protection  of
the- unborn or differential protection, between males and  females.  While
thete/.arev some\differences'-.in radiosensitivity between males  and  females,
for radiation protection purposes the relevant differences do not warrant
establishing separate sets of dose limits at this time.   See  also the
responses to comments 2.13.6 and 3.3.6.9.
3.8.37  EPA should adopt the ICRP's recommendation of a dose  limit  of  1.5
rems during any known pregnancy (A.a-37, B.a-53, E;a-6).

Response:  The comment does not accurately reflect the ICRP recommendation
which assumes that, under normal practice,, the use of working condition  B
will result in achievement of the recommended dose limit  of 0.5  rem.   The
ICRP also recommends measures to assure a uniform rate of  exposure.
3.8.38  There should be a mandatory limit of 0.5 rem  during  pregnancy,  and
a mandatory requirement 'for the employer to arrange the work situation  so
there is no penalty to the employee for carrying out  the  protection  of  the
fetus (A.a-16, A.d-24, A.d-38, B.a-5, Ba.-ll, B.a-42, E.b-8).

Response:  These features are explicit in the final recommendation for
protection of the unborn.           •       .
3.8.39  Any woman suspected or determined  to be  pregnant  should  be
immediately removed from all radiation exposure  for  the balance  of her
pregnancy without loss of job security or  economic penalty  (A.a-43, A.c-4,
A.c-6, C-5, C-6, C-8).
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 Response:   We disagree in part with this comment-.  A woman who suspects or
 believes  she is pregnant should have to voluntarily so declare to trigger
 appropriate protection of the unborn to less than 0.5 rem.  Otherwise,
 abuse  of  women's employment security could occur on the basis of false
 concern for liability by an employer.  Removal of the woman- from all
 further, radiation exposure may. or may not be. appropriate, depending on the
 level  ofj exposure, and the. availability of alternative work assignments.
 In; any "case,.-the exposure should-be-ALARA and assure the limit for the
 unborn.    •..-..•••   -       .^     • •.- .
 3.8.40  EPA should adopt the State of Michigan's approach to the
 protection of the unborn (B.c-5).

 Response:   Although designed to achieve equivalent levels of protection,
 the  final  recommendations differ from the State of Michigan formulation
 (MDPH75).   Final recommendations limit the unborn of a woman declaring
 pregnancy  to a maximum dose of 0.5 rem whereas the State of Michigan
 approach limits the mother to a maximum dose of 0.5 rem after the mother
 has  given  written notice of her pregnant condition.  In addition, Federal
 guidance-require-s efforts .be made to-avpid substantial variations above
 the  uniform^monthly exposure rate that would satisfy the limiting value.
•;.Thi's..-.is:.-an Impprta-nt- feature -for .avoiding the. entire 0.5 rem being
 received In the relatively short period of greatest sensitivity.
 3.8.41  Protection of the unborn would be achieved if all workers under
 age  35 are restricted to 0.4 rem per month,  and if employers are required
 to badge all such workers and report doses before they could reasonably be
 expected to accumulate another 0.2 rem (A.a-46).,

 Response:   In our opinion the adoption of such a recommendation would be
 unduly and unnecessarily restrictive when applied to all workers.
 3.8.42  A female worker should not receive more than 0.5 rem in a six
 month period,  and once her pregnancy is known, she should be treated as .a
 burned-out worker until the baby is born (C-7).

 Response:   Such extreme measures may not be necessary if the desired level
 of  protection can be provided by other means.
 3.8.43  The RPG for fertile women should be 0.625 rem per three month
 period (C-8).

 Response:   We  disagree.   There is no scientific or other need to so
 restrict fertile women in order to protect the unborn child, if adequate
 measures are taken to restrict doses once conception occurs.  In addition,
 this  recommendation does not provide an adequate level of protection
 following  conception.  See also the responses to comments 3.8.19 and
 3.8.42.
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3.8.44  Since changing from a high-exposure  to a  low-exposure  job  is"often
unfeasible for workers in hospitals and clinics,  standards applying to
both male and female workers of child-bearing age should  be  set  (A.d-8).

Response:  We believe that the final recommendations are  practical, and
provide the desired level of protection for  the unborn without unnecessary
dose: limitations -on iall/work'ers of parenting age.  . \"
3.8.45  The guidance should simply be:  "Pregnant females are  limited  to
0.5 rem for the year of the pregnancy."   (A.a-41).

Response:  The recommendations achieve this level of protection, while
also requiring that discrimination in employment be avoided.
3.8.46  If doses are limited to 0.3 rem per month for all workers,  no
additional reductions on exposure of fertile women are necessary, and  the
only additional requirement would be to educate  such employees  to report
possible pregnancies to their supervisors  (A.b-1).

Response:  In our opinion.such a limiting  dose applied to all workers
would-Tse. .unnecesTsai:il.y restrictive,:.and appropriate protection  is afforded
to the unborn by the final recommendation.
3.8.47  Exposure to the unborn should be'limited to one-tenth  of  the  RPGs
for adult workers, with special consideration of ALARA practices  for  women
(A.b-8).

Response: .We believe that final guidance accomplishes the  intent  of  this
comment.-
3.8.48  The use of sterile workers in high-dose  jobs would  reduce  genetic
exposures (A.a-5).

Response:  Yes, but we believe that such a requirement is both
discriminatory and unnecessary.
3.8.49  Women of child-bearing age should be excluded from high exposure
jobs (B.a-31).

Response:  We disagree.  Such exclusion is discriminatory and
unnecessary.  Not all women of child-bearing age are pregnant all of  the
time.  Instruction on radiation risks to the unborn to all workers  and
their employers, limitation of the unborn to 0.5 rem when their mother
declares pregnancy, and application.of ALARA will provide adequate
protection of the unborn.
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 3.8'.50  The proposed NRC amendments to 10 CFR Parts 19 and 20 dealing
 with the,unborn should be adopted in place of EPA's proposed guidance
 (B.c-12).

 Response:   The draft NRC amendments which .were based on informed consent,
 .would .not. provide.assurance of protection of the unborn, and would subject
 women to potential economic;'penalty.   •    •    '  -
 3.8.51  EPA has considered risks of teratogenic effects to liveborn, but
 has  underestimated,  particularly from exposure of males, the risks of
 genetic effects,  including those that do not result in liveborn.  This
 leads to inadequate  protection of the unborn and to sex discrimination
 (A.a-5, A.c-1,  A.c-2,  A.c-10, A.d-20).

 Response:   Doses  to  the unborn give rise to teratogenic effects and occur
 as a consequence  of  exposure of the expectant mother, while doses to the
 gonads. of  male  or female workers give rise to genetic (hereditary) risks,
 which affect the  children, of such workers.

       . -Two issues  need to be examined:  first, the relative risks from
 irradiation of  male  vs..female prospective parents; .and second, the size
•'•of'- these hereditary  risks, compared to the risks from, direct irradiation of
 the' fetus.  •        •;.•••...••

         • The 1980 National Academy of Sciences BEIR-III report (NAS80,
 pages-85 and 127) indicates that the risk to a child.is between 4 x 10~6
 and  61 x 10~6 per rad  to the male gamete and because of lower
 sensitivity of  the oocyte between 1 x 10"~6 and 14 x 10~6 per rad to
 the  female gamete [these values are somewhat smaller than those cited in
.our  Background  Report  (EPA81),. which was. based on the earlier BEIR-I
 report (NAS7.2)].   Recently, our Science Advisory Board's Subcommittee on
 Radionuclides informed us that they believe recent studies by Dobson, et.
 al.  (Doa83, Dob84),  indicate that the BEIR-III Committee's assumption that
 oocytes are about 5  times less prone to genetic damage than spermatogonium
 may  not be valid. The Subcommittee advised the Agency'to use hereditary
 risk estimates  that  assume equal male and female sensitivity, i.e.,
 hereditary risks  per child of between '4 x 10~6 and 61 x 10~6 per fad
 to the gamete of  either parent (EPA84c).  Our staff believes that the
 Subcommittee may  be  correct, but, since the question is as yet unsettled,
 consideration of  both ranges for females is appropriate in estimating
 hereditary risk.

          It should be  noted that these estimates of hereditary risks are
 based on animal studies.  Excess genetic effects have not been substan-
 tiated in studies of the children of A-bomb survivors or in other studies
 of human populations;  at most, the data are suggestive.  And, although
 peer-reviewed quantitative estimates of the risk of severe mental retar-
 dation are, as  yet,  based on a single study (Ot84), the observed excess of
 this effect in humans  as a result of fetal exposure is clear-cut.  The
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 risk of  severe mental retardation is 4 x 10~3 per rad or 2-3 orders of
 magnitude greater than genetic risk on a unit dose basis.

  "  •      In' comparing the risks from in utero exposure to hereditary
 risks,  it should be no-ted that the relative importance of each depends on
 the. duration and pattern,of exposure. .Most of the .in. utero risk seems to
 result - from exposure during, a-very, short-period, from. 8 to 15-weeks after
 conception.   Risk of genetic damage, on the other hand, accumulates
 throughout the"period' of exposure.  'Therefore, the relative importance of
 each depends on to what extent male or female workers have been exposed
 before  their children are conceived.  Nevertheless,  the in 'utero risks are
 very high, and since the estimated hereditary risks  cited above are two to
 three orders of magnitude less per rad of exposure,  even an exceptionally
 long term or high level of exposure prior to conception should not elevate
 hereditary risks to a comparable level.

          Commenters have cited the following publications, among others,
 in  support of increased sensitivity of males to contribute to adverse
 outcomes of pregnancy and to pass genetic effects on to future
 generations:  L.K. Wagner and' L.A.. Hayman (Waa82), J.A. Bonnell and G.
 Harte (Boc78), J.F. Crow (Cr55), S.H. Macht and P.S. Lawrence (Ma55), and
 J.  Boue, A.. Boue and-P.» Lazar (Bod76).-  The Bonnell/Harte paper and the
 Wagner/Hayman paper-'.'discuss..point's of .radiation protection philosophy and
"do  not' present data or discuss'the question of maternal versus paternal
.contributions to', genetic- effects.-

         • The paper by. Crow addresses only the absence of a difference in
 fetal and infant death rates in progeny of male radiologists vis-a-vis
 male pathologists.  However, the number of subjects  was small, no exposure
 data is  available and there is no comparison group of female
 radiologists..  The Macht/Lawrence paper also addresses only small numbers
 of  male  radiologists with unknown exposures and concludes there is
.increased probability of congenital defects associated with radiation
 exposure.  These papers shed no light on the question of differences of
 such effects in maternal versus paternal exposure to radiation.

         . The Boue et_ a_l_., paper concludes that in a  comparison of cases of
 maternal and paternal exposure [of unknown magnitude] there is a
 significant increase in chromosome anomalies in cells obtained from
 spontaneous abortion tissues when the father was exposed to radiation in
 the occupational setting.  However, the increase is  all in the incidence
 of  triploidy and tetraploidy.  It has been estimated that 21% of cases of
 triploidy are due to. maternal nondisjunction, 49% are due to dispermy and
 30% due  to dispermy or paternal nondisjunction with  dispermy being more
 probable; while tetraploidy is due to failure of a cleavage division in
 the zygote (JabSO).  Only nondisjunction is reported to be radiation
 related.  Dispermy (fertilization of an egg by two sperm) is not
 considered a genetic effect but a problem of fertilization.  Cleavage
 failure  in the zygote is also not a genetic effect related to radiation
 exposure of the parental gametes.  Therefore, the differences observed by
 Boue e_t_ al.  appear unlikely to be related to differences in maternal
 versus  paternal exposure.
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          Consequently,  we conclude that for reproductive effects, for com-
 parable  exposures,  the  risk from irradiation of the unborn is substantially
 greater  than the risk from irradiation of either parent or both prior to
 conception.'  Thus,  control of.dose, to the unborn is the primary considera-
 tion for minimizing such effects, not control of dose to parents.  We
 believe  that the-..recpmmenda.tlons-for worker exposure,, designed primarily
 to -'protect against  cancer in'workers;-are. also sufficiently protective of
 genetic  risks.   It  is perhaps worthy of note that, although the risk of
 cancer 'fatalities is somewhat1 larger 'for female than for male workers
 because  of the  greater  radiation sensitivity of breast tissue, the
 recommendations call for the same limit for protection of male and female
 workers.  In part,  this is due to our desire to avoid discrimination in
 employment.   See also the responses to comment 2.13.6 and 3.3.6.9.
 3.8.52  EPA has underestimated the effect of radiation on the unborn
 (A.c-4,  A.c-6,  D-3).

 Response:   We do not  believe-that we have underestimated these effects, on
 the  basis  of the most current available scientific information.  See the
.responses  to comments 3.8.15- and 3.8.51.
 3.8.53 .EPA should place the risk of radiation exposure to the unborn in
 perspective by comparing it with other risks taken during pregnancy.
 Limiting .exposure of the mother once the pregnancy is known is the most
 reasonable approach (B.a-16).

 Response:   We do not agree that other types of risks during pregnancy are
 relevant  to limitation of risks due to radiation.  However, we agree that
 limitation of dose to the unborn only after pregnancy is known is the most
 reasonable approach. •
 3.8.54  EPA has not presented adequate information on the number of women
 of  child-bearing age in the work-force,  the possibility of their becoming
.pregnant,  and the doses they now receive.   Thus,  the size of the problem
 is  unknown (A.d-22).

 Response:   Contrary to the comment, EPA cited in the proposed guidance, as
 part  of previous actions noted,  its analyses of the estimated mean annual
 dose  equivalent and collective dose equivalent to workers in the United
 States in  1975 by occupation, age and sex  (CobSO).  These same analyses
 were  updated recently for 1980 (Ku84).  The latter study shows collective
 dose  equivalents of 29,438 and 29,913 person-terns to 436,231 and 568,121
 women from age 18 to 49 corresponding to average mean dose equivalents of
 67  and 53  mrem in 1975 and 1980, respectively.
 3.8.55  EPA has ignored the fact that 0.5 rem refers to fetal, not
 maternal dose equivalent.   Thus none of the alternatives are reasonable
 (A.d-12, A.d-15).
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Response:  The proposed alternatives were  explicit  regarding the
distinction between dose  to  the whole  body of  the woman and dose to the
unborn.  The limiting dose of  0.5  rem .in final recommendations refers to
unborn.                    '  .
3.S.-56  EPA .should, resolve  the-scientific  uncertainty regarding the risk
of radiation exposure  to  the  unborn.   If restrictions are scientifically
•warranted, they must'be made'-mandatory (B.a-Z4).

Response:  There is admittedly  scientific  uncertainty in this matter.
However, EPA cannot resolve scientific uncertainty in the absence of new
information.   Current  knowledge and  recommendations of radiation
protection organizations, however, lead us to conclude that it is
necessary to include radiation  protection  provisions for the unborn.
Those provisions are under  continuing  review by EPA.  Should new
information warrant making  future  changes,  we will do so promptly.
3..S.57  EPA should.make  it  abundantly  clear, to the  public that
intra-uterine exposures within' the.-0.5. rem  per-pregnancy limit are safe
(B.a-42).  ; .,....,..'

.Response:'  Although, the  risks are believed to be acceptably small for
doses to-the unborn  within  a  0.5  rem  limit,  no one  can state that such
exposures are  "safe" (i.e., zero) for  that limiting dose, or for any of
the limiting dose's in Federal guidance.  We  assume- that there is no
completely risk-free level  of radiation  exposure.   See also the responses
to comments 1.6.11,  2.1.11, 2.2.11, 3.1.15,  and 3.4.3.10.
3.8.58  None  of  the  four  alternative  recommendations  should be included in
the guidance; such implementing  choices  should  be  left.to the regulatory.
agencies  (E.a-4).

Response:  We disagree.   The  alternatives  involve  basic differences- in
radiation protection policy that it is  the function of Federal guidance to
resolve.  However, specific implementation is left to the regulatory
agencies, within the numerical limitation  and objectives specified.
3.8.59  The  proposed  recommendations  do  not  adequately provide for
employee education so  that workers  can make  informed  decisions about their
employment and  radiation  exposure.   In particular,  female workers should
be fully informed of  the  risks  to  the unborn from radiation exposure
(A.a-14, A.a-16, A.b-8, A.b-15,  A,c-l, A.d-20,  A.d-21, B.a-5,  C-7, C-8,
E.a-2)

Response:  We disagree.   Proposed  and final  recommendations make it clear
that workers should be informed  of  the levels of  risk -from radiation in
relation to  protection of the unborn.
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 3.8.60  EPA should  be aware that informing workers of the risks associated
 with  radiation exposure of the unborn increases their apprehensions
 (A.d-36).                         •         .

 Response-:   To  the contrary, we believe that proper instruction on the
 risks and  on.these  recommendations, for protecton of the .unborn will dispel
 unwarranted apprehensions."   '   .    .   ...          .
 3.8.61   If  workers  quit their jobs because of the risk of continuing
 exposure, do  worker's  compensation and unemployment benefits apply
 (A.d-8)?

 Response:   These matters are not within the scope of Federal radiation
 protection  guidance for occupational exposure.
 3.8.62  Worker's  compensation benefits should cover genetic damage of
 offspring,  miscarriages,  and early retirement due to chronic illness for
 any  worker  receiving more, than 0.5 rem/yr (A.c-6).

 Response: '.The  applicability of workerfs compensation benefits-to these
.•.situations;  are-.' outside -the;, scope of 'Federal, guidance.
 3.8.63   Radiation workers  should be monitored by independent researchers
 for miscarriage,  genetic defects, and heart disease,  and the observed
 effects  assigned  a probability of being job related (A.c-6). •

 Response:   Such studies  have been made and are ongoing.  The results of
 such studies  have been considered in this rulemaking  and will be•
•considered in future  rulemakings.  However, such monitoring is outside the
 scope of the  subject  Federal guidance.
 3.9       EXCEEDING THE RPGs
 3.9.1     We have no objection to Recommendation 9 (A.a-10,  A.a-39, A.b-5,
 A.b-6,  B.a-5,  B.a-9,  B.a-26).

 Response:  No  comment necessary.  [Note:  Recommendation 10  in the final
 recommendations  corresponds  to proposed Recommendation 9.]

 3.9.2   Since the proposed RPGs set limits substantially below the level of
 observable  effects, Recommendation 9 is a good one (A.d-11, A.d-14,
 A.d-29,  A.d-40).

 Response:  No  response required.
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3.9.3  EPA should adopt ICRP's guidance  (ICRP-26,  Paragraph 113)  for
exposures exceeding the limits of  the RPGs  (A.a-13,  A.d-18, B.a-6,  B.a-10,
B.a-14, B.a-20., B.a-24, B.a-27, B.a-29,  B.a-31,  B.a-32,  B.a-33,  B.a-36,
B.a-38, B.a-46,. B.a-48, B.a-53').

Response:  Final guidance does not  adopt the  dose  limits in ICRP-26
(Paragraph' 113) "for "planned  special exposures*" -This matter is  left up
to the Federal  agencies because they have the.detailed-  information
'required to make judgment's oh-'these'matters,  and we "do not  believe that
generic provisions for such situations are  appropriate.


3'. 9.4  Recommendation 9 should be  deleted.  Allowing "planned special
exposures" will only allow the guidelines for worker protection  to be
ignored (A.a-5, A.c-4, A.d-8, C-l,  C-6,  E.b-3).

Response:  We disagree.  Proposed  recommendation 9 is effectively the same
as recommendation 7 of current guidance  (25 F.R. 4402) which states:  "The
.Guides may be exceeded only after  the Federal agency having jurisdiction
has carefully considered the  reason for  doing so in  light of the  recommen-
dations, in this, paper.".  To our knowledge,  that  recommendation has not been
abused.  To date, we know of  no use of this provision by the Federal agen-
cies^ 'vo'the'r'. than .the special  'guides established  .by NASA, for the  protection
of'astronauts-.from cosmic radiation exposures received on flight  missions
(NAS70).'  The basic guides-are applicable to  normal  operations.   It is
appropriate to  recognize that unusual circumstances  can  and do arise.


3.9.5  The restrictive wording of  Recommendation 9 would deny management
the flexibility needed to deal with unforeseeable circumstances  (A.d-18,
B.a-3, B.a-29,  B.c-20).

Response:  We disagree.  Recommendation  9 may have been  mistakenly thought
applicable to emergency exposures,  contrary to Note  5.   This provision is
clarified in  the final recommendations (Recommendation  10)  and we believe
it's scope and intent is amply clear to the  regulatory Federal agencies to
which the guidance is directed.  Management at the user  level will be
guided by corresponding regulations and  regulatory guides of the  Federal
agencies.
3.9.6  Allowing each regulatory authority  to  decide  if,  and  by how much,
the 5 rem/yr limit may be exceeded will  lead  to  confusion  and
inconsistency (D-6).

Response:  We very much doubt  that such  will  occur because it  has not
occurred in the past under similar Federal  guidance.   See  the  responses  to
comments 3.9.3, 3.9.4, and 3.9.5.
3.9.7  The requirement  for prior  regulatory  approval  could  result  in admin-
istrative burdens and costly delays  (B.a-3,  B.a-6,  B.a-32,  B.a-37,  B.a-48).
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 Response:   The  only previous approval for exceeding numerical limitations
 was given  by NASA (NAS70) and administrative burdens, and costly delays
 were  not an issue.   See also the response to comment 3.9.4.
•3.. 9.8- .The; requirement, for prior regulatory approval could jeopardize
safety .('A.d-18,B."a-i5,  B'.'a-29,;-B^a-36, BVc-20, E.a-6).. •  •

Response:   We-' disjagre'e.   Short of' emergencies that are excepted by this
recommendation,  there is no reason for prior approval to jeopardize
safety.                                           .
 3.9.9   EPA should provide criteria and standards for justifying planned
 special exposures (B.a-33,  B.a-38).

 Response:   The regulatory Federal agencies have the best understanding of
 actual  needs  in activities  under their jurisdiction.  Hence, for unusual
 circumstances, they are. better able to. establish appropriate regulatory
 requirements  for radiation  protection.
'.3.i.9r,LO V Unless-- the .-intent : is" to 'gut.. the RPG: limits, exceptional
circumstances  and maximum acceptable upper limits must be better defined
                   '
 Response:   Past  radiation practice provides no evidence for. such an
 apprehension.   See  the responses to comments 3.9.4 and 3.9.9.
•3.9.11   The  requirement for mandated Federal, review should be dropped
 (A.d-23,  B.a-8,  B.a-12,'B.a-14,  B.a-27,  B.a-31, B.c-12, B.c-22, D-2).

 Response:  We believe that review and authorization by Federal agencies  to
 exceed  numerical limitations,  except during emergencies, is a responsible
 requirement  that assures due consideration of unusual circumstances.  See
 the  responses to comments 3.9.^4, 3.9.7,  3.9.8,  and 3.9.9.
 3.9.12  The  rationale for public disclosure is unclear.'  It will not help
 protect  workers.   It should be deleted (A.a-41, A.d-40, B.a-8, B.a-16,
 B.a-22,  E.a-5).

 Response:   Public disclosure will provide public notice that an authorized
 use .of final recommendation 10 was carefully considered to assure that
 workers  are  responsibly protected.
 3.9.13   The  burden for public disclosure must rest with the employer, not
 the  licensing  agent (A.d-6).
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 Response:   An employer may also provide public disclosure,  but  Federal
 agencies  acting on behalf of the public should make  such  authorizations a
 matter  of  public record.   See the responses to comments 3.9.4 and  3.9.12.


.1,9.14  EEA should state that Recommendation 9 does  not apply in
 emerge-ncy'/lifesaving-situations- (E.a-*5-)'.    '.        •"•  •

•Response:   This.-wa's'the intent" of'Note. 4 of the proposed  recommendations.
'However,  Recommendation 10 (replaces proposed Recommendation 9)  of the
 final recommendations explicitly exempts "emergencies," which would
 include lifesaving situations.
 3.9.15   Recommendation 9 should be rewritten to include emergency
 situations  (B.a-48,  B.a-27,  B.c-22).

 Response:   We  disagree.   Emergency situations are unpredictable  and  cannot
 by  their nature  be regulated.  .However, the. handling of emergency
 exposures should involve the general principles of this guidance.  See the
 response to comment  3.9.14.      .....

 * :.''  '•'.'. 5''.'''.t::"-':;-- •.•:'.-'  •••'.' :'•'-:-'" \'' '• .-.'•:.- .-•:.1'. .•.,'-••-.- .''•.-''.•'•• .-.,-'. .  .   .'. .  •
 3.9.16   The workers  -receiving the higher dose must be  fully  informed and
 voluntarily.accept the risk prior to the exposure (A.d-29, B.a-33,  C-l,
 E.a-4,  E.a-6).

 Response:   Final recommendations require that occupationally exposed
 individuals be instructed on the basic risks to health from  ionizing
 radiation.   The  degree and type of instruction tha£ is appropriate  will
 depend  on the  potential  radiation exposures involved for their work
 situations, including those of an emergency nature where the worker
 knowingly and  voluntarily accepts the risk.
 3.9.17   The  guidance to licensees should include:  (1) Demonstration- that
 exceeding  the  individual limits results in the lowest practicable  level  of
 total person-rems for the activity; (2) the affected workers  have  had the
 potential  risks  explained,  and that they are understood; and  (3) the
 workers  voluntarily accept the risk .(B.a-33).'

 Response:  The details of instructions to licensees are the responsibility
 of  regulatory  agencies which implement the Federal guidance.  However,  the
 response to  comment 3.9.16 applies to the last two points of  this
 comment.  We cannot comment on how the regulatory agencies might implement
 the first  point.   In emergency situations, it would appear generally true
 that the fewer the number of emergency-workers the lower the  collective
 dose to  achieve  the specified goal.  This would be the case where  there  is
 high "unproductive" dose received during the periods of entry,  tooling-up,
 and exit.  However, very large individual doses would not necessarily be
 acceptable just  to reduce collective dose.  See also the response  to
 comment  2.7.4.
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3.9.18  If  the old guidelines  (3  reins  per  quarter,  12 rams per year) were
retained, there would be no  need  for higher  exposures (3.a-ll).

Response:   We-disagree  that .retention  of  the previous guides would obviate
the 'need for proposed recommendation 9, which is  effectively the same as
recommendation-. 7 'of  current  guidance (25  F.R. 4402).   Radiation exposure
in 'ather-than-normal situations  (including "emergencies)  would likely take
place during, periods-of less  than one-quarter year.   Thus, it is not clear
how'either-the c'urrent guide of'  3 rems per'quarter, or,  for. that matter,
the final guide of 5 rems  per  year eliminate the  need to provide for
unusual circumstances.
3.9.19  If  the prior approval  requirement  is  retained,  it  must allow
approval on a generic basis  (E.a-6).

Response:   Final  recommendations  require Federal agencies  to make public
any generic procedures  that  specify conditions  under  which such exposures
may occur. ' .       .   .           .             .  •    .
3.9.20' The need  for exposures  exceeding  the  limits  should be judged by
•the'.practicing.,healt.h physicist^- not- the  EPA  (A.a.-41)..

Response:-' EPA is  not a  regulatory  agency of  occupational radiation
exposure.  Regulatory Federal agencies  provide  the generic criteria and
procedures governing these  situations.
3.9.21  Proposed recommendation  9  should  only  be  allowed  if  no individual
is subjected  to lifetime  doses in  excess  of  the cumulative RPG established
in'the guidance (E.a-4).   .

Response:  The lifetime accumulated  dose  of  100 rems in proposed
recommendation 4 does not appear in  final recommendations.  However,
lifetime accumulated dose should be  one  factor, among others,  in
considering workers for tasks requiring established  limits to  be
exceeded.  See also the"response to  comment  3.9.16.
3.9.22  It may be necessary  to  justify a  higher  limit  for  an entire class
of workers (D-2).

Response:  We are aware  of only one  class of  workers  (astronauts)  for
which such justification was  previously established.   However,  such
justification by the  regulatory agency having jurisdiction is provided for
in the previous, proposed and final  recommendations.
3.9.23  Add  the  following  to  the  section  on  "other  considerations":   "For
astronaut exposures in  space, NASA will be the  controlling Federal  agency"
(E.a-1).
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Response:  We believe it is obvious that NASA is the Federal agency having
that responsibility.  In addition, we know of no group of occupationally
exposed workers for which there is not a controlling regulatory authority.
3.9v24  EPA should .emphasize that ALARA is expected to be applied in
emergency situations, and that regulatory agencies will consider to what
extent. ALARA was applied- in assessing what actions to take if the RPGs are
exceeded (A.a-8).      '.'••'        •

Response:  We agree that ALARA should be applied in all situations,
including emergencies.  However, emergencies are exempted from proposed
recommendation 9 and final recommendation 10.  Regarding unusual
circumstances, the wording of final recommendation 10 explicitly requires
careful consideration of the reasons for exceeding the numerical limits by
the Federal agency having jurisdiction.
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 St73     Stewart  A., 1973, "The Carcinogenic Effects of Low Level
          Radiation.  A Re-Appraisal of Epidemiologists Methods and
          Observations," Health Physics, 24, 223-240.

 UN72     United Nations Scientific Committee on the Effects of Atomic
          Radiation, 1972,  "Ionizing Radiation: Levels and Effects, Volume
          II: Effects, A Report to the General Assembly," Sales No. E.72.
          IX.18.  United Nations, New York.

 UN77     United Nations Scientific Committee on the Effects of Atomic
          Radiation, 1977,  "Sources  and Effects of Ionizing Radiation,"
          Report of the General Assembly, with Annexes, UN publication E.77
          IX.1., United Nations,  New York.
                                    164

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UN82     United Nations Scientific  Committee  on the  Effects of Atomic
        . Radiation, 1982, ."Ionizing Radiation:  Sources and Biological
         .Effects,." 1982 Report to the  General Assembly,  with Annexes,
 -      •' Sales No. E.82.IX.8, United Nations, New York.

Waa82  .  Wagner L..K- and,- Hayman'L-A., .1982;  "Pregnancy and Women
    '  • ' . Radiologists;" Radiology,  145:559-562.    /  •   • '  .

Wab83'"  Wakabayaski'T., Kato H.,: Ikeda 'l. and  Schull  W.J.,  1983,  "Studies
         of the Mortality of A-bomb Survivors,  Report  7.,  Part  III.
         Incidence of Cancer in  1959-1978,"  Based on the Tumor Registry,
         Nagasaki.  Rad. Research,  93, 112-146.

We61     Werboff J. et_ al_., 1961, "Effects of Prenatal X-Irradiation on
         Motor Performance in the Rat,"  Amer. J>.  Physiol., 201:703-706.

We62     Werboff J. et_ al^., 1962, "Effects of Prenatal X-Irradiation on
         Activity,. Emotionality, and Maze-learning Ability in the  Rat,"
         Rad. -Res., 16:441-452.
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       APPENDIX A '
COMMENTER IDENTIFICATION

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                             APPENDIX A

                      COMMENTER  IDENTIFICATION

                                                                     Page

 A.  Public
    a.   Individuals  .  .  -	A-l
    b.   Universities	A-6
    c.   Public  Interest  Groups	A-9
    d.   Professional/Scientific  Organizations  	   A-10

 B..  Industry  .                   •     .
   • &;•  '-Nuclear'Power  .  .  .  .  .. •  «  •	A-14
.   .b..:. .Medical  ..  *..' ...  ..'  .;..-.  .....'.  ......	A-l 9
 '. '•_•!,c«••'.' .Otiiecs-'  .'••".' ••>• r  «: '«. •»'•' •  • ''••  «. »•-.« «•.•'•  >.......<   A—20

.C'.  Unions'-' '.•'/ .-. Y ".'....-...	A-23  .

 D.  State Government   .  '	 .  .  .   A-24

 E.  Federal Government
    a.   Executive  Agencies   	   A-25
    b.-   National Laboratories	A-26

 F.  International	'.   A-27

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                  APPENDIX A.  COMMENTER  IDENTFICATION


iomment.er  Affiliation  '  Commenter (Name & Address)
        -Individuals       ••'•;"••    "•;     - •'•.'.

        A.a-1     William E.  Kennedy, Jr.
                 406 Shoreline Ct.
                 Richland,  WA  99352

        A.a-2     Stephen D.  Manning
                 1431 W. Forest Avenue
                 Decatur, IL  62522

        A.a—3     Richard S.  Bredvad
                 1244 North Tenth Street
                 Manitowoc,.-WI  54220

       .A.ar4     Dr.i-. Irwih-. D^J.. .Bross .  -. ..  •
       ..-.•.•• -..-  '•-'••:'Rb:9weir Park Memorial Institute
        '•   '  '.'.   New York State Dept. of Health
             •    666 Elm Street
                 Buffalo, NY  14263

        A.a-5     Marvin I.  Lewis
                 6504 Bradford Terrace
                 Philadelphia, PA  19149

        A. a-6     Ormand L.  Cordes
                 2201 Brandon Drive
                 Idaho Falls, ID  83401

        A.a-7     Rosalie Bertell, Ph.D., G.N.S.H.
                 Jesuit Centre
                 947 Queen Street East
                 Toronto, Canada  M4M 1J9

        A.a-8     Gregory P.  Yukas
                 790 West "J" Street
                 Benicia, CA  94510

        A.a-9     Henry Hurwitz, Jr.
                 827 Jamaica Road
                 Schenectady, NY  12309

        A.a-iO   W.S. Geiger
                 741 Woodhall Drive
                 Lakeland,  FL  33803
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 A.a-11   Jack J. Fix, Certified Health  Physicist
          107 Jackson Court
    •  •    Richland, WA • 99352

 A.a-12-   Patrick T..Glennon
 V •   •    ZOO Marietta Ave.
.-• .--..:?-.  v PassaicxNJ.. 07055      :    .....  .;  .-.   .

 A,a-:1.3   Jphn. W» Duley, . Jr.          ..        ,
          3012. Gilmary Ave.
          Las Vegas, NV  8910-2

 A.a-14   Gordon A. Little
          1625 Richmond St.
          El Cerrito, CA

 A.a-15   Jerome B. Martin
          Certified Health Physicist
         .144 Sherman St.
          Richland, WA  99352

 A.a-16 '  Francesca .B. Davis'.
 ...  ..   .:  .Health 'Physicist..        .......
••'".•''•:••.!; "V.: 8 Sedgewood Court .  :   •   '   '-'
          North.Augusta, SC  29841

 A.a-17   John C..Courtney
          Certified Health Physicist
          10326 Hackberry Ct.
          Baton Rouge, LA  70809

 A.a-18-  ' Gordon M. .Lodde-
          Health Physics Consultant.
          619 Mulberry Lane
          Edgewood, MD  21040

 A.a-19   David K.  Helton
          123 Worcester Road
          N. Grafton, MA  01536

 A.a-20   James C.  Carlson, M.S.
          Hackley Hospital
          1700 Clinton St.
          Muskegon,.MI  49443

 A.a-21   Stephen A. McGuire,  C.H.P.
          (Occ. Rad. Protection Branch,  NRG)
          6813 Fairfax Road (Apt. 222)
          Bethesda, MD  20014
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 A.a-22   Dwayne R. Speer.
          Health Physicist
          4231 W. Hood Ave.
          Kennewick, WA  99336

 A.a-23   Donald Busick
••;.;•'.;  'Operational Health Physics
.  .        SLAG, 'P.O. Box 4349
     .-••.-.'.  Stanford, .CA  94305

 A.a-24   Donna Earley
          Radiation Safety Officer
          Cedars-Sinai Medical Center
          Box 48750
          Los Angeles, CA  90048

 A.a-25   Marilyn Wexler
          Medical Physicist
          Cedars-Sinai Medical Center
          Box '48750
          .Los Angeles, CA  9-0048

•A.a.-26..   Robert .P... Plott . ••; .'   •' . •
•---:'.-'*''•'.•'••': 6342" Caste joh Drive      ..'•'"
 •  ;       LaJolla, CA  92037

 A.a-27   J.B. Dittraan
          10 Arborglen
          Irvine, CA  92714

 A.a-28   Vincent L. Gelezunas
          Veterans Administration
          Medical Center
          5901 East Seventh  St.
          Longbeach, CA  90822

 A.a-29   (Name not legible)
          White Memorial Medical Center
          1720 Brooklyn Ave.
          Los Angeles, CA  90033

 A.a-30   D. Stewart Farquhar
          Jet Propulsion Laboratory
          Calif. Inst. of Technology
          4800 Oak Grove Drive
          Pasadena, CA  91103

 A.a-31   Anne E. Jochens
          7679 S. Holland Way
          Littleton, CO  80123
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 A..a-32   A.F. Klascius
          Jet Propulsion Laboratory
          Calif.- Inst. of Technology
          4800 Oak Grove Drive
          Pasadena, CA  91103

 A.a-33 ' -  F.W~ Sanders-- •     .-, .  '• •;'••'•"     •' ,  ,'..'.
          Rad,'Safety Officer   '   '  '  •
      •-   Jet Propulsion-Laboratory  ...'..;'•.
    •  '    Calif. Inst. of Technology
          4800 Oak Grove Drive
          Pasadena, CA  91103

 A.a-34   J.W. Cure, III
          2308 Interlink Road
          Lynchburg, VA  24505

 A.a-35   J.H. Heacock, CHP
       •  1801 St. John Road, 40H
        '  Seal Beach, CA  90740  '

 A.a-36  'Gerald'R. 'Campbell           .
    --...-  ., 1230,.York'.Ave... Box 29.  .-.    -,
r;^:'N;/;-New: York,V:NY--'--; 10021;'';.••.','•••  ;:; "' ;  '

 A.a-37 '  James  L. Blaha      '.
          U.S. Nuclear Regulatory Commission
        "Washington,. D.C. 20555
          Enclosure:   Comments From
          Commissioner John. F. Ahearne

 A.a-38  -Edward P. Radford, M.D.
          Prof,  of Environmental Epidemiology
          Univ.  of Pittsburg, and Former
          Chairman of the National Academy  of Sciences
          Coram.  on the Bio. Effects of Low-Level
          Radiation (BEIR-III)

 A.a-40   Charles B. Meinhold
          Brookhaven National Lab.(BNL)
          Upton, NY

 A.a-41   A.L. Biaetti
          Certified Health Physicist

 A.a-42   Robert J. Catlin
          Nuclear Safety Analysis
          Center (NSAC)
          Palo Alto, CA
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 A.a-43.   Thomas B. Doyle (OCAW)
          3842 Legde Bay Road
      '•  'Lumrni Island, WA  98262  .

 A.a-44   Dr. & Mrs. .Neil Aronspn
   -, .   .  '• 9822 Kar.lov  . •  -.  .. '        .
:••'. ••••:;-•'„ ';-•,, Skokie> -IL ' 60076  •• .   -•_  ;  .

 •A. a*r45 , : Drv- Roger, doping
          Radiation Safety Officer
          San Jose University

 A.a-46   Terry Johnson
          Goddard Space Flight Center

 A.a-47   George O'Bannon

 A.a-48   Al Tschaeche

 'A.a-49  ' Ronald G.' Blanken Baker, M.D.
          State Health Commissioner
'   •'     ' Indiana State Board of. Health
          .13.30- W. Michigan. St. •; ,'.
          .', ' IN".' 46206 :'\  '"•'•
 A.a-50  ' Ralph C. Pickard
          Ass't Commissioner  for Env.  Health
          Indiana State Board of Health1
          1330 W. Michigan St.
   .  .     Indianapolis, IN  46206

 A.;a-51-  'Hal S. Stocks, • Chief
          Rad. Health Sec., Div. Ind.  Hyg.  and Rad.  Health
          Indiana State Board of Health
          1330 W. Michigan St.
          Indianapolis, IN  46206

 A.a-52   Frank D. Riggs
          Radiation Safety Officer
          The Aerospace Corporation
          P.O. Box 92957
          Los Angeles, California  90009

 A.a-53   Robin K. Durkee
          EG&G
          Energy Measurements Group
          130 Robin Hill Road
          Goleta, California  93017
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    A.a-54   E.A. Manughian
             Radtronics  Company
             3244 Arroyo Seco  Avenue
         , .   Los.Angeles,  California  90065
b.'- Individuals from Universities       .  •:

    A.b-1    Edward ;I.-Shaw  •'..'•••     . ..•'•.   ,
             Professor of  Radiation Biophysics
             The University of  Kansas
             Lawrence, KS   66045

    A.b-2    Bernard L.  Cohen
             University  of Pittsburg
             Dept. of Physics and  Astronomy
             Pittsburgh, PA  15260

    A.b-3    Harald H. Rossi
             College of  Physicians & Surgeons
             of Columbia University.
             Department  of Radiology
   ..••„•  ..-.-'630;;West.-1.68th Street .    .       . .
   -••:'.!;/."'v";t 'New-:Ybrk^NY  : 1.0032'•••-  •'•>'••'••'-..-••

    A.b-4  '  Reynold F."  Brown,  M.D.
             University  of California
             Office of Environmental Health-" and Safety
             1344  3rd Avenue
             San Francisco,  CA   94143

    A.b-5    Anthony R.  Benedetto
             Division of Nuclear Medicine
             Health Science Center at San Antonio
             The University of  Texas
             7703  Floyd  Curl Drive
             San Antonio,  TX 78284

    A.b-6    George R. Holeman,  Director
             Health Physics Division
             Yale  University
           •  314 Wright  Nuclear 'Structure
             Laboratory, West
             260 Whitney Avenue
             New Haven,  CT  96520

    A.b-7    John  H. Tolan
             Radiation Safety Officer
             University  of Missouri
             413 Clark Hall
             Columbia, MS   65201
                                A-6

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A.b-8     Roger'Ji  Kloepping
          University Radiation Safety Officer
       ''  San Jose -State University
:     .   •  Washington"Square-•
          San Jose,  CA  95192

Aibr-9-"  .  Lawrence  D-.-Weiss, Ph.D,
 .    '   .'.'Director,  Occupational  and
 .   '-"••     Environmental Health Program
          The University of New Mexico
          School of  Medicine
          Albuquerque,  New Mexico  87131

A.b-10  -  Stewart C. Bushong, Sc.D.
          Professor of Radioologic Science
          Baylor School of Medicine
          Texas Medical Center
          Houston,  TX  77030

A.b-11    Gerald. A.  Schlapper
          Nuclear Engineering Dept.
  • '  '  "•'  Texas A&M University
••:..•'.....,  .College Station, TX  7-7843.   ..

A.b-12  .  Ralph G.' Robinson,- M.D.
  •        The University of Kansas-Med. Center
          Dept. of  Diagnostic Radiology •
          Kansas City,  KS  66103

A.b-13    John W. Thomas
          University of Pennsylvnia
 ••••      Radiation Safety Committee
          Philadelphia,' PA  19174

A.b-14    Suresh, K.  Agarwal, Ph.D.
          University of Virginia
          Box 375 Medical Center
          Charlottesville, VA  22908

A.b-15    Eugene L.  Saenger, M.D.
          RIL .- #577
          University of Cincinnati Med. Center
          234 Goodman St.
          Cincinnati, OH  45267

A.b-16    Richard C. McCall, et al.
          Health Physicists
          Stanford  University
          Stanford  Linear Accelerator Center
          P.O.  box  4349
          Stanford,  CA  94305
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 A.b-17   Edward W. Webster,  Ph.D.
          Prof, of Radiology
          Member, BEIR III Committee
     . .    Massachusetts General Hospital
          Fruit Street
 •  -   .    Boston, Massachusetts   02114-

.'A.b-18 '  Henry C. Briggs-     •       '
•'••••  •'•  ..  Radiation: Saf.ety .Of ficer
          Indiana University
          625 North Jordan Avenue
          Bloomington, IN  47401

 A.b-19   Robert M. Boyd
          Radiological Safety Officer
          Georgia Institute of Technology
          Atlanta, GA  30332

 A.b-20   John E. Doerges
          Radiological Safety Control  Program
          The University of Wyoming.
   '  '.  •  ' Lararai.e, WY'  82071

••A.b-2t ;':V'jiar.y:':ff.- '•'Melville' '• . V-::|;-. ••'•v;.  .-.-';'-.  -"
          Research Associate  .
        :' Clark'University
 :         Center for Technology,  Environment,
          and Development
          Worcester, MA  01610

 A.b-22   Ronald E. Zelac, Ph.D., C.H.P.
         •Director; Radiological  Health
          arid Biohazards Control
          Temple University
          Philadelphia, PA  19140

 A.b-23   Kenneth R. Kase, Ph.D.
          Div. of Physics-Dep. of Rad. Therapy
          Harvard Medical School
          44 Binney Street
          Boston, MA  02115

 A.b-24   Roland A. Finston,  Ph.D.
          Director of Health  Physics
          and Hospital Radiation  Safety  Officer
          Stanford University
          67 Encina Hall
          Stanford, CA  94305
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 A.b-25   Karl Z.  Morgan
          School of Nuclear Engineering
          Georgia Institute of Technology
        •  Atlanta, GA  30332

 A-b-26   Herman. Cember
 •-. . •  •   ---Professor of -Env.. Health- Engineering
: ••   '     Northwestern'University'
 .  ...   ..  Evansto.n, IL-. 602Q1  .   ,.    ...
 Public Interest Groups

 A.c-1    Coalition for the Reproductive
          Rights of Workers
          1917 Eye Street, N.W. - Suite 201
          Washington, B.C. 20006

 A.c-2    Joan E. Bertin
          American Civil Liberties Union Foundation
  :      '.  132 West .43. Street      .   '
 :  .'. '    New York, NY  ' 10036

.A.c^J- '•'•.Thomas-B..: Cbchran, Ph.D.     -•''••
 .  .   .    Natural Resources Defense
          Counc i1, Inc.                 .

 A.c-4    Kitty M. Tucker, Director
          Radiation Law Project (RLP)

 A.c-5    Robert Alvarez
 .-      " Environmental Policy Center  ,

 A.c-6    Catherine Quigg
          Research Director
          Pollution & Environmental
          Problems, Inc. (PEP), Box 309
          Palatine, IL

 A.c-7    Robert Ginsburg, Ph.D.
          Citizens for a Better Environment

 A.c-8    Karen Peteros
          Low Level Radiation
          Committee (LLRC)            *-
          San Francisco, CA

 A.c-9    Andy Hull
          Scientists and Engineers for
          Secure Energy, Inc.
          2011 I Street, N.W.
          Washington, D.C.
                            A-9

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   A.c-10   Karen Eccles, Legal  Intern
            (For Donna Lanhuff,  Staff" Attorney)
            Women's Legal Defense  Fund
     '.'      2000 P.. Street, N.W.. (Suite  400)
   '  .       Washington, D.C.   20036
..-. Professional/Scientific Organizations-

   A.d-1    W.C. Reinig, President
            Health Physics Society
           . Savannah River Plant
            Aiken, South Carolina   29898

   A.d-2    Philip Handler, President
            National Academy  of Sciences
            2101 Constitution Avenue
            Washington, D.C.  20418

   A.d-4    F.L. Purcell, M.D., President
            American Occupation Medical  Association
  ..  - '.-•..;• .'Hydra-Matic Division   . .   .         . .
 V''''"- •-"-.":?'. General Motors Corporation  .
         •  • Ypsilanti,.Michigan  48197
   A.d-5    Colin G. Orton, President
            American Association of  Physicists
              in Medicine
            Rhode Island Hospital
            Radiation Oncology Department
    •  •   '. Eddy Street
            Providence, Rhode Island  02902

   A.d-6    Wallace W. Hinckley, Chairperson
            New England Radiological Health
              Committee
            State of Maine
            Dept. of Human  Services
            State House Station 11
            Augusta, Maine  04333

   A.d-7    Columbia Chapter
            Health Physics  Society
            P.O. Box 564
            Richland, Washington  99352

   A.d-8    Karen A. O.'Rourke, RN, MS
            The Federation  of Nurses and
              Health Professionals
            11 Dupont Circle, N.W.
            Washington, D.C.  20036
                              A-10

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A.d-9    J.R.  Lovell,  Pres. -Elect
        • Eastern  Idaho Chapter of the
          . Health Physics  Society
       • . 455 Croft Drive-
..;. .    .: Idaho Falls,  Idaho   83491-  .

AJd-10  James H.  Saramons,  M.D.
...'••' .:;•.  Executive. Vice President  .  .
       • American- Medical  Association
         535 North Dearborn  Street
         Chicago,  Illinois   60610

A.d-11  Ward  M.  Keller, R.T.
         Executive Director
         The American  Society of
           Radiologic  Technologists
         55 East  Jackson Blvd.
         Chicago,  Illinois   60604

A.d-12 " American Association of Physicists
   .   '    "in  Me'dicirie  ''.,''   '  .
;....'-    : The Midwest .'Chap tar
 ''  "  -^-                -
                 Illinois -  60141
A.d— 13    Scientists  and  Engineers
        '  .  for  Secure  Energy,  lac.
          1225 19th  Street,  N.W.
          Suite  415
          Washington, D.C.   20036

A.d-14    Otha Linton,  Director of
            Governmental  Relations
          American College  of Radiology
          6900 Wisconsin  Avenue
          Chevy  Chase,  Maryland  20015

A.d-15    Lincoln B.  Hubbard,  PhD
          Health Physics  Society
          Midwest Chapter
          1825 West  Harrison Street
        •  Chicago, Illinois   60612

A.d-16    H.  Dean Belk, M.D.
          President,  American Occupational
            Medical  Association
          150 North  Wacker  Drive
          Chicago, Illinois   60606
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A.d-18   Gary T. Barnes,  President
         The Alabama  Chapter of  the
           Health  Physics Society
         University of  Alabama
         Dept. of  Radiology  - University Station
         Birmingham,  Alabama  35294   .        '

A.d-1'9  • Dr.' F« Eugene  Holly,  'President   '  •' '
         ,Am. Assoc. of  Physicists .in. Medicine
           Southern California Chapter
         UCLA, Center for Health Sciences B3-143
         Department of  Oncology
         Los Angeles, California  90024

A.d-20   Jeanne M. Stellman,  Ph.D.
         Executive Director  and
           Associate  Professor
         Women's Occupational Health Resource Center
         Columbia  University,  School of  Public Health
        • 60 Haven  Avenue,  Room B-106
         New. York, New  York   10032

.A.d-21 ... .Dona-Id Holmquesf,. M.D.  Ph..D.      ..
;•..-•..-" .;'::;Paul-:Murphy, Ph.D. :..;';••'•  ••
       • ' Robert Anger,  M.S.
         American  College of Nuclear Physicians
         1101 Connecticut Avenue, Suite  700  .
         Washington, .D.C.  20036"  '

A.d-22   Warren K. Sinclair,  Ph.D.
           President
                   and
         Harold 0. Wyckoff,  Ph.D.
           Honorary Member
         National  Council on Radiation
         Protection and Measurements (NCRP)

A.d-23   Dr. Warren W.  Schadt
         Georgetown University
         Washington,  D.C.

A.d-24   Jean St.  Germain
         Sloan-Kettering  Cancer  Center

A.d-25   Capt. William  H.  Briner
         Dept. of  Nuclear Medicine
         Duke Univ. Medical  Center

A.d-27   Donald L. Holmquest,  M.D.
         President, Health International, Inc.
         Houston,  Texas
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A.d-28   Paul H. Murphy
         Southwestern Chapter
         Society of Nuclear Medicine

A.d-29   Dr. Lee Rogers
         Chairman and-Prof. .of  Radiology
'•:'••'.••: •.••:-''• • Northwestern University,; and
         Chancellor of the American
... .  :..   College of Radiology'(ACR)  ..

A.d-30 '  Donald A. Balasa
         Director, Legal Dept.
         American Dental Assistants
           Association (ADAA)
         Chicago, Illinois

A.d-31   Larry L. Heck, President
         American College of
           Nuclear Physicians  (ACNP)

A.d-33 .' Gerald L. DeNardo, M.D.
      .   University .of California
      ./  .Davis.Medical Center               •
'•••'-:'; -'."•;•• Sacrament 0-- California'  .-. .  •

A.d-35   'Jerry J. Cohen
       . Liyermore, California

A.d-38   Lloyd Bates, SCO
         Mid-Atlantic .Chapter
         American Association of  Physicists
    •  •     'in.Medicine

A.d-39   Ms. Wright
         American Association of  Physicists
           in Medicine

A.d-40   Russell H. Morgan
         American College of Radiology

A.d-41   Fred Sanders, President
         Southern California Chapter
         Health Physics Society

A.d-42   E.P. Wilkinson, President
         Institute of Nuclear Power Operations
         1820 Water Place
         Atlanta, Georgia  30339
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B.  INDUSTRY

    .a.  .Nuclear Power Industry

        B.a-L    Len Gucwa
              .  • Chief Nuclear Engineer
    •• ;:•  ••". '•'."•.;.'' Georgia. Power Company     .        -  ••

        B.»a-2 .  -Dalwyit R^ Davidson  - . ;
                 Vice President
                 System Engineering  and
                   Construction Group
                 The Cleveland Electric  Illuminating  Co.
                 P.O. Box 5000
                 Cleveland, Ohio  44101

        B.a-3    Billy R. Clements,  Vice  President .
                 Texas Utilities Generating  Company
                 2001 Bryan Tower
                ' Dallas, Texas  75201'

    '"    B.a-4   '"jphn J. Mattimoe
          •-<: .-'•;-•'  Sacramento Municipal Utility  District
          •' '"'' ": Street - Box 15830  .
       '  -. .   ',' Sacramento, California   95813

        B.a-5    Philip A.- Crane, Jr.
                 Pacific" Gas- and Electric  Company
                 P.O. Box 7442
                 San Francisco, California  94106

        B. a-6..   Morton I.: Goldman
                 Senior Vice President
                 NUS Corporation
                 4 Research Place
                 Rockville, Maryland  20850

        B.a-7    Evan R. Goltra, M.D.
                 Kerr-McGee Corporation
                 Kerr-McGee Center
                 .Oklahoma City, Oklahoma   73125

        B.a-8    Mohamed T. El-Ashry, Ph.D.
                 Tennessee Valley Authority
                 Norris, Tennessee  37828

        B.a-9    Russell B. DeWitt
                 Vice President Nuclear Operations
                 Consumers Power Company
                 1945 Parnall Road
                 Jackson, Michigan  49201
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B.a-10   Richard D. Grouse
         .Vice' President, Nuclear
         .The Toledo Edison Company
 •        300 Madison Avenue
  -;    .  -Toledo, Ohio  43652

B.a-11   G. Carl' Andognini
       ..Vice President.  ..    ..
         Arizona Public Service Company
         P.O. Box 21666
         Phoenix, Arizona  85036

B.a-12   William 0. Parker, Jr.
         Duke Power Company
         422 S. Church Street
         Charlotte, North Carolina  28242

B.a-13   S.W. Shields
         Senior Vice President
         Public Service Indiana
'  •   •. " P;.0. Box 190         .   .
       . ..New Washington, Indiana  47162

B.a-14   R. Nilsdn, Manager
        •'Corp. Licensing and Compliance
         Exxon Nuclear Company, Inc.
         2955 George Washington Way
         Richland, Washington  99352

B.a-15   R.H. Leasburg
        • Vice President
         Virginia Electric and Power Company

B.a-16  . D.W. Zeff, Manager
         Health-Safety & Licensing
         Babcock & Wilcox
         Mt. Athos
         P.O. Box 800
         Ly.nchburg, Virginia  24505  •

B.a-17   A.L. Cahn
         Manager of Engineering
         Bechtel Power Corporation
         P.O. Box 3965
         San Francisco, California  94119

B.a-18   D.W. Edwards, Director
         Operations Project & Licensing
         Yankee Atomic Electric Company
         1671 Worcester Road
         Framingham, Massachusetts  01701
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 B.a-19    Harold L.  DeHoff
          Radiation  Safety Officer
          Newport News  Industrial Corporation
          230 41st Street
 .     ;    Newport News,  Virginia  23607

 B.a-20 •   W'.G. Counsil -          •'"    '  •           .        d.
  '      .  Senior Vice President                           ov
      • •  Northeast  Utilities          '    .               ^
          PiO. Box 270
          Hartford,  Connecticut  06101

 B.a-21    David G. Cadena
          Radiation  Safety Officer
          Southwest  Research Institute
          6220 Culebra  Road
          San Antonio,  Texas  78284

 B.a-22    G.D. Bouchey;  Director
          Nuclear Safety
          Washington Public Power Supply  System
        •  P.O. Box 9.68                '..  .       .            Wt
:;:.^..;!-V;-v:Richlahdv.  Washington, ;99352
                  ' •'       .                   •
 B.a-23    J.S. Loorais,  Head          •                     .,
          Nuclear Safeguards & Licensing  Division
       • .  Sargent &  Lundy Engineers
          55  East Monroe Street
          Chicago, Illinois  60603

 B.a-24    Joseph.Gallo
          Isham, Lincoln & Beale •
       :   1120 Connecticut Avenue, N.W. - Suite 325
          Washington, D.C.  20036

 B.a-25    M.K. Sullivan
          Southern California Edison Company
          San Onofre Nuclear Generating Station
          P.O. Box 128
          San Clemente,  California  926/2

 B.a-26    Dick Cheney
          Member of  Congress
          Congress of the United States
          House of Representatives
          Washington, D.C.  20515
           Enclosed:  Letter from Constituent (4 May 1981)
              Ralph  F.  Peak
              Professional Engineer
              1361 Torjan Drive
              Casper, Wyoming •82601
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B.a-27    J.  Edward Howard
          Vice  President,  Nuclear
          Boston Edison Company
          800 Boylstom Street
         .Boston,  Massachusetts  02199
'B.a-28    Robert- E. -Uhrig^  Vice President   -
     •    'Advanced Systems  & Technology
          Florida Power. & Light Company. •
          P.O.  Box 529100
          Miami,  Florida  33152

B.a-29    Lester  Rogers
          Health  Physicist

B.a-30    William D.  Rowe,  Ph.D.
          Director,  American University
          Institute  of Risk Analysis
                  and-         •'    •  •
        -  Frederick  C. Williams
••    -: .   Isharaj  Lincoln-&  Beale
      . .   1120  Connecticut  Avenue, N.W. - Suite 325
•: J:^i^-'i ^Washing tSxn.j.. Dy C v^'' 200 36v/^ '.'.,; ;,•;•-'•	:'•'•'-..- •.'•.'•'
          •(Enclosures:  Answers by;Dr. W.D. Rowe
          to  questions asked him at Washington
          Hearings)
         •     '                  -.
B.a-31    Vincent Boyer
          Chairman of the Group;* and
          Sr. Vice President, Philidelphia
          :. • Elec trie  . Company

B.a-32    Lionel  Lewis
          Duke  Power Company

B.a-33    Andrew T,  Sabo
          Ted L.  Erion    ...
          W.S.  Brown
          Representing Westinghouse
          Electric Corporation "

B.a-34    Dr. James  R. Sumpter, Mgr.
          Nuclear Services  Department
                     and
          Gordon E,  Williams
          Houston Lighting  and Power Co. (HLP)
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  B.a-35    Dr.  Ralph E. Lapp
           Lapp,  Inc.
           Alexandria, Virginia
                      and
;  .•"     'William Hoey
    :     ...Sr.' Radiation Protection Engineer
••;• ..- .'".' :• Boaton. Edispn .Company ...    .     . ..
.'.'•' :       Pilgrim Nuclear Power Station.
V ,    .';  RFD #1 Rocky Hill Road
      '•'   Plymouth, Massachusetts  02360

  B.a-36    Dr.  W.M. Jackson
           Corp.  Health Physicist
           Alabama Power Company  (APC)

  B.a-37    Byron Lee
           Executive Vice President
                    and
           Cordell Reed
         •  Vice President .        ..
           Commonwealth Edison.Co. (CEC)
   ...  .  Chicago, Illinois'.  ',

t VB^T?£;..^Robert.-&.,P.ayl.icfc'. ;;'•:.:'..;.-.;,'...'.;•'..-'';' .;':••
J''  ''.'  : 'Comnionweaith Edison Co. '(CEC)..''

  B.a-39    Edward Lipke
           Wisconsin Electric Co. (WEP)

  B.a-40    Dr.  Marvin Goldman
           Davis, California

  B.'a-41    Dr.  George I. Hutchison
           Harvard School of Public Health
           Boston, Massachusetts

  B.a-42    Dr.  Robert Brent
           Jefferson Medical College
           Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

  B.a-44    David G. Cadena
           Radiation Safety Officer
           Southwest Research  Institute
           6220 Culebra Road
           San Antonio, Texas  78284

  B.a-45    William R. Hoey
           Sr.  Radiation Protection Engineer
           Boston Edison Company
           Pilgrim Nuclear Power  Station
           RFD #1 Rocky Hill Road
           Plymouth, Massachusetts  02360
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        B.a-46   J.S. Moore
                 General Manager
                 Water Reactor  Divisions
                 Westinghouse Electric  Corporation
       ''"  •      Nuclear Center
        ,...../  '.. 'Box 355-'     : '  '  •     ',    '     . .
             ".:  'Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania .15230

        B.a-48   William J. L.  Kennedy          . '•
                 Chairman, AIF  Committee  on Environment
                 Atomic Industrial  Forum, Inc.
                 1747 Pennsylvania  Avenue,  N.W. - Suite 1150
                 Washington, D.C.   20006

        B.a-50   E. David Harvard,  Envir. Project Manager
                 Atomic Indust. Forum,  Inc.
                 7101 Wisconsin Avenue
                 Washington, D.C.   20014

        B.a-52   Frederick C. Williams
                 Isham', Lincoln & Beale         .
                 Utility. Occup. Rad.  Stnds.  Group.
       .^;.^.x'}~-;., ;tl20 •Cpnnec.ticu.t. A.veriue,. N..W... .•'...•
         •'.•"'"'    Washi'hgtpri, D.'C.   20036.  .   " '

        B.a-53   Joel I. Cehn
                 Pacific Gas &  Electric 'Company
                 San Francisco, California

        B.a-54   Walter D. Peeples,  Jr.
                 President
                 Gulf Nuclear,  Inc.
                 202 Medical Center Blvd.
                 Webster, Texas  77598
b.  Medical Institutions

        B.b-1    William  Pavlicek,  M.S.
                 The  Cleveland  Clinic,  Div.  of Radiology
                 The  Clinic  Center
                 9500 Euclid Avenue

        B.b-2    C. Barrie Cook,  M.D.,  Chairman
                 Radiation Safety Committee
                 The  Fairfax Hospital
               •  3300 Gallows Road
                 Falls  Church,  Virginia  22046
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         B.b-3    Bruce J. Gerbi
                  Nix Hospital. X-Ray Laboratory
                  1502 Nix .Professional Building
                .  San. An-bbnio, Texas . 78205

         B'.b^4.'   Richard Geise, M.S.,
         ":••' "••'.';."•' /'Medical Physicist''    '"'    •
                •  North Memorial. Medical Center'
        ..-!•.."    3220 flowry Avenue, .North.
                  Minneapolis, Minnesota  55422

         B.b-5    Robert J.  Flanagan, Jr., DBA
                  Group Vice President
                  American Hospital Association
                  840 North Lake Shore Drive
                  Chicago, Illinois  60611  •

         B.b-6    W.H. Blahd, M.D., and
                 _ L.W. Wetterau
                  Radiation Safety Officer
                  Veterans Administration
                  Wilshire 'and Sawtelle Boulevards
        .;.-.. / .•'.',;.. -LoVAngeles,, California.  90 073-
"c.   Other  Industry
         B.c-1     R.S.  Patenaude
                  Proto-Power Management Corporation
                  591 Poquonnock Road
                  Groton,  Connecticut  06340

         B.c-2     Larry- A.  Bbggs, Senior Counsel
                  American Mining Congress
                  1920 N Street, N.W. - Suite 300
                  Washington, D.C.  20036

         B.c-3     Edwin M.  Wheeler
                  The Fertilizer Institute
                  1015 - 18th Street, N.W.
                  Washington, D.C.  20036

         B.c-4     William L.  Rogers
                  Gulf Mineral Resources Company
                  1720 So.  Bellaire Street
                  Denver,  Colorado  80222

         B.c-5     Paul F.  Allmendinger
                  Vice President
                  Motor Vehicle Manufacturers Assoc.
                    of the United States, Inc.
                  300 New Center Building
                  Detroit,  Michigan  48202
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B.c-6    Kenneth J. Green
         Vice President
         Associated Couriers, Inc.
.   -  •    342. Fee Fee Road  .
         St. Louis, Missouri  63043

B.c-8  .Homer Hooks  '  •". •      .
         President      ;     •    .'  .  •  .
         Florida Phosphate Council
         Suite 24, Executive Plaza
         4406 S. Florida Avenue
         Lakeland, Florida  33803

B.c-9    C.P. Hopcraft, Vice President
         Gulf Nuclear,  Inc.'
         202 Medical Center Blvd.
         Webster, Texas  77598
         (Note:  Comments submitted to Docket
         in' lieu of 'Oral ' Presentation at Houston
         Public Hearings,  1 May 1981.).

B.c-10   Robert .G.-Wissink.       .      . :  ....
 •       • 3M Center           .
         St. Paul, Minnesota  55101

B.c-11   Lyda W. Hersloff, Ph.D.
         Environmental Specialist
         Rocky Mountain Energy
         Box 2000
        . Broomfield^ Colorado  80020

B.c-12   A.E. Moffitt, Jr.
         Manager of Environmental Health
         Bethlehem Steel Corporation
         Bethlehem, Pennsylvania  18016

B.c-13   Paul B. Sunde
         Vice President & General Manager
         Radcal Corporation
         426 W. Duarte Road
         Monrovia, California  91016

B.c-14   James M. Kortright, Ph.D.
         Radiation Calibration Company
         P.O. Box 6432
         Orange, California  92667
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 B.c-16   Philip S. Rummerfield
          Applied Radiation Protection  Services
          4901 Morena Blvd. - Suite  104
          San Diego, California  92117

 B..C-18   Randall W. Harman
   ' . V-.  Radiation Safety. Officer-   .    '. •  '  .  .
      : ' '• Nuclepific.Data Systems, Inc.     ••• •••
          :281.1. MeGaw. Avenue       .        '     .
   '  •'  '   Irvine, California'• 92714'•'

 B.c-20   J.  Allen Overton, Jr.
          President
          American Mining Congress
          1920 N Street, N.W.  - Suite 300
          Washington,  D.C.  20036

 B.c-21   Richard N. Don.elson, CHP
          6825 Bianca Avenue
        •  Van Nuys, California  91406     •

 B.c-22 .  c'.R, Moxley •    •     .  .   •  ..'•
        . -Manager - Health, . Safety»  &. Env,. Affairs
';./•';. •-'..•;. 6ulfs Mineral. Resources :Company .    .
        •  1720'South Bellaire Street-
          Denver, .Colorado  80222

 B.c-23   C.E. Racster
          Radiation Safety Officer
          Schluraberger Well Services  (SWS)
          Houston, Texas
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C.  UNIONS
        C-l    .-Marshall M. Hicks
            ..   National .Secretary-Treasurer
            ... Utility ."Workers- Union of America
         ..- '..  :815-16th: Street, N.W.- •  .
        •     ." . Washington,. D.'C;. • 20006'  '  '

        C-2    :PauL Shoop     ';   ;      .  .' .  .-
               International  Representative
               International  Brotherhood of
               Electrical Workers
               1125-15th St.,  N.W.
               Washington., D.C.   20005

        C-4    Judith Berek,  Vice  Pres. and
               Director of Legislative and-
               Professional Programs
               District 1199
               National Union of  Hospital and
               Health Care Employees (A Div.
            :'•. of .RWDSU/AFL-CIO)   '•'"
        •..V.'. .:  3LO:WestNA3rd  Street..  .'. ...  ......
             '
        C-5    Nolan W.  Hancock,  Legislative
               Director
               Frank Collins,  Ph.D.

        C-6    Lorin E.  Kerr,  M.D.

        C-7-  'Allan Se-lby,  President
               Local Union  7-4200
               Oil, Chemical,  and Atomic Workers
                  International Union (OCAW)
               Monsanto  Chemical  Co.
               Miamisburg,  Ohio

        C-8    Tom Doyle
               Local Union  1-369 . (OCAW)
               Richland,  Washington
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D.  STATE GOVERNMENT
        D-l    Michael Odlang
               Radiation Control Section
               Dept.'of Social and Health  Services
              • 1409 Smith Tower, B17-9
       ;..     .  Seattle-,.. WA/ 98104  .  .  ,   ....      .    '.

        D-2; .  : John, A.' Beare, M.D. , M.P.H.
               'State-of Washington  •      • •
               Dept. of Social & Health;  Services
              ' Olympia, Washington  98504

        D-3    Antonio Hernandez, M.D., and
               David Saldana
               Commonwealth of Puerto Rico
               Department of Health
               San  Juan, Puerto Rico

        D-4    Karim Rimawi, P.h..D.        ...
               Director,.Bu. of Env. Radiation
         .. .  .  State.of'.New..York Dept.-of  Health
               Albany.,' NY   122;37

        D-5 ""  ". Re'ittffido ;A."  Ferrer,' M«D.
            •  'City of New  York., Commissioner of Health
               125  Worth Street
               New  York, NY- 10013

        D-6    Albert J. Hazle, Director
               Radiation and Hazardous
            ••  Wastes Control Division
               Colorado 'Dept. of Health
               4210 East 'llth Street
               Denver, Colorado  80220

        D-10   Blaine N. Howard
               Sec. Chief,  Radiological Health
               Utah Dept. of Health
               150 West North Temple
             • Salt Lake City, Utah  84110

        D-ll   Joanne E. Finley
               State Commissioner of Health
               New  Jersey Dept. of Health
               John Fitch Plaza
               Trenton, NJ  08625
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E.  FEDERAL GOVERNMENT   .

    a.  Executive Agencies.

        E.a-1  Walton L.  Jones,  M.D.
               Chief, NASA Occupational Health
        .-'.  .;.-..;..  National''-Aeronautics, and' Space Adnu   ;
        • '      Washington-;  D.-C.   20546    ' '      .   ' '   .
        *        *     '     '   . •   .'»•*••''       '.        -
        E.a-2  George Marienthal
               Deputy Ass't Secretary of Defense
               (Energy,  Environment,  and Safety)
               Office of the Assistant Secretary of Defense
               Washington,  D.C.   20301

        E.a-3  Cecil S.  Hoffmann
               Special  Assistant to
               Assistant Secretary of the Interior
               Office of the Secretary
               U.S.  Dept.  of the Interior
               Washington,  D.C.   20240          ..

        .E.aT4;  :John..C,...yillforth   .  .;.  "•, ;•.-.' •
        'v'-l.y: • '-pire'etor,--Bu-." of..Radiological Health;, and
             •  Chairman,  DHHS Subcommittee to
        •  •     Coordinate Radiation Activities
               Public Health'Service
               Food  and Drug Administration
               Rockville,  MD  20857

        E.a-5  Stephen  H.  Greenleigh
             :• Acting Deputy Assistant Secretary
            • •• for- Environment,  Safety, and. Health .
               Department of Energy
               Washington,  D.C.   20585

        E.a-6  Nunzio Palladino
               Chairman
               U.S.  Nuclear Regulatory Commission
               Washington,  D.C.   20555

        E.a-7  David E. Patterson, Director
               Operational and Environmental
               Safety Division,  DOE

               J.'W.  Healy - Los  Alamos
               Scientific Laboratory

               Jack  M.  Selby - Battelle
               Northwest Laboratories
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b.  National Laboratories

    E.b-1  John F.  Sommers
           EG&G- Idaho,  Inc.  •
           P.O. &ox 1625
   ....    -Idaho  Falls,  Idaho  83415.

    E.b-'2''. A.G. 'Croff.   "''
   .   .-'  .  . 'Chemical Technology.'Div.   . .   ;
           Oak-Ridge National Laboratory
           P.O. Box X
           Oak Ridge,  TN  37830

    E.b-3  R.A. Wynveen, et  al.
           Health Physicists
           Argonne  National  Laboratory
           9700 S.  Cass  Ave.
           Argonne,  IL  60439

    E.b-4  Patricia W.  Durbin
           Anthony  Greenhouse
           Charles  T. Schmidt
   .   ; ^. V:..Ralph.. H> .Thomas;-.'; .  .-   .„•..-;   .;
   •"''•  ''".. 'Jetisen;'Young''•;"• •  ' •'.".'.•:'-.' •''."•'•'":-'••
           Lawrence-Berkeley'Laboratory
           Univ.  of California
           Berkeley,. CA  94720

    E.b-5  H. Wade  Patterson, et al.
           Lawrence Livermore National LAB.
           University of California
       •    P.O.' Box 5505
    •   .  '  Livermore,  CA -94550

    E.b-6  Jack M.  Selby,  Manager
           Health Physics  Technology
           Battelle Northwest
           Laboratories  (BNL)

    E.b-8  Bryce  L.  Rich
           EG&G Idaho,  Inc.
           P.O. Box 1625
           Idaho  Falls,  Idaho  83415
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F.  INTERNATIONAL
        F-l    H.T. Daw
               Division of Nuclear Safety
               International Atomic Energy Agency
               Wagramerstrasse 5, P.O. Box 100
        -.,-;   _'A-1400.Vienna, Austria     _  ••

        F-2.   F. Morley, Secretary-and- Staff
        :'•  ' •   -of Board       •  ' .     '.....
               National Radiological Protection Board
               Chilton, Didcot
               Oxon. 0X11 ORQ
               United Kingdom

        F-3    R. Wilson, Director
               Health and Safety Services;
               Representing Ontario Hydro
               D.A. Watson, Manager; and
        ;       E. Koehl, Staff Member.     .  .
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