t,     UNITED STATES ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION AGENCY
                                  WASHINGTON D.C. 20460
                                                                       OFFICE OF THE ADMINISTRATOR
                                                                          SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD
                                         June 4, 2013
EPA-CASAC-13-005

The Honorable Bob Perciasepe
Acting Administrator
U.S. Environmental Protection Agency
1200 Pennsylvania Avenue, N.W.
Washington, D.C. 20460

       Subj ect:  CAS AC Review of the EPA' s Policy Assessment for the Review of the Lead National
                Ambient Air Quality Standards (External Review Draft - January 2013)

Dear Acting Administrator Perciasepe:

The Clean Air Scientific Advisory Committee (CAS AC) Lead Review Panel met on February 5-6,
2013, to peer review the EPA's Policy Assessment for the Review of the Lead National Ambient Air
Quality Standards (External Review Draft - January 2013), hereafter referred to as the PA. The
CAS AC's consensus responses to the agency's charge questions and the individual review comments
from the CASAC Lead Review Panel are enclosed. The CASAC's key points are highlighted below.

Overall, the CASAC concurs with the EPA that the current scientific literature does not support a
revision to the Primary Lead (Pb) National Ambient Air Quality Standard (NAAQS) nor the Secondary
Pb NAAQS. Although the current review incorporates a substantial body of new scientific literature, the
new literature does not justify a revision to the standards because it does not significantly reduce
substantial data gaps and uncertainties (e.g., air-blood Pb relationship at low levels; sources contributing
to current population blood Pb levels, especially in children; the relationship between Pb and childhood
neurocognitive function at current population exposure levels; the relationship between ambient air Pb
and outdoor dust and surface soil Pb concentrations). Further  details on these and other research needs
are provided in the consensus responses. The CASAC recommends that research be performed to
address these data gaps and uncertainties to inform future Pb NAAQS reviews.

The CASAC has additional comments and recommendations  on improving the document. With the
completion of the recommended revisions outlined below and in the consensus responses, the PA will
serve its intended purpose. Another CASAC review of the document is not needed.

The PA should include a discussion that Pb is a unique pollutant in many ways. Unlike other criteria air
pollutants, Pb is of concern from  a multimedia perspective. Millions of tons of Pb are present in the
environment from legacy sources. The distribution of this substantial reservoir of Pb is not known.  Thus,
the extent of current human exposure from this legacy cannot be reliably estimated.
The PA generally captures the key aspects of the health effects evidence presented in the Integrated
Science Assessment, but can be made more concise and clear by providing summary conclusions

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regarding the health effects evidence at the beginning of the sections. The risk and exposure information
from the previous Pb NAAQS review is adequately presented. The CASAC concurs that a new risk and
exposure assessment (REA) is not needed due the lack of sufficient new scientific information to
warrant revision of the prior REA data and methods.

The application of the evidence-based framework and the use of the health risk and exposure
information from the previous Pb NAAQS review seem appropriate and provide a sufficient rationale to
support retaining the current primary standard without revision. However, there should be more
description in the PA of the data and rationale behind the averaging time and form of the current primary
standard. Additionally, research is needed to address uncertainties and data gaps in the evidence-based
framework and in the health risk and exposure information for future Pb NAAQS reviews.

Given the existing scientific data, the CASAC concurs with retaining the current secondary standard
without revision. However, the CASAC also notes that important research gaps remain. For example
questions remain regarding the relevance of the primary standard's indicator, level, averaging time, and
form for the secondary standard. Other areas for additional research to address data gaps and uncertainty
include developing a critical loads approach for U.S. conditions and a multi-media approach to account
for legacy Pb and contributions from different sources. Addressing these gaps may require
reconsideration of the secondary standard in future assessments.

The CASAC also wishes to highlight the importance of a separate but related policy issue. The CASAC
notes that it has not considered this separate policy issue in providing advice on the NAAQS. The
decrease in childhood lead poisoning in the United States over the last three decades is a great public
health success  story. Concurrently, there is a trend of increased relocation of Pb production, recycling,
and recovery to other nations. One example is the export of spent lead acid batteries (SLAB) to Mexico.
As detailed in a report by the Secretariat of the Commission for Environmental Cooperation (CEC),
environmental and  health protections in the secondary lead industry in other countries are not
functionally equivalent to those in the United States. The CEC offers recommendations to avoid
development of pollution havens and for the United States to work with Mexico  and Canada to foster
adoption of best practices throughout North America. The CASAC recognizes the role of the EPA
Administrator as a member of the CEC Council and strongly urges the EPA to carefully consider the
recommendations of the CEC report, and to support decisive action that will enable the success of the Pb
NAAQS in the United States to be a role model for development of best practices internationally that
avoid adverse public health impacts abroad. For example, the considerable effort by the EPA to develop
the ISA and the PA could be  a valuable starting point for other countries to develop or revise their own
ambient standards for lead.

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The CAS AC appreciates the opportunity to provide advice and looks forward to receiving the EPA's
response.

                                  Sincerely,
                                  Dr. H. Christopher Frey, Chair
                                  Clean Air Scientific Advisory Committee
Enclosures

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                                          NOTICE

This report has been written as part of the activities of the EPA's Clean Air Scientific Advisory
Committee (CASAC), a federal advisory committee independently chartered to provide extramural
scientific information and advice to the Administrator and other officials of the EPA. The CASAC
provides balanced, expert assessment of scientific matters related to issues and problems facing the
agency. This report has not been reviewed for approval by the agency and, hence, the contents of this
report do not necessarily represent the views and policies of the EPA, nor of other agencies within the
Executive Branch of the federal government. In addition, any mention of trade names or commercial
products does not constitute a recommendation for use. The CASAC reports are posted on the EPA
website at: http://www.epa.gov/casac.

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                        U.S. Environmental Protection Agency
                       Clean Air Scientific Advisory Committee
                        CASAC Lead Review Panel (2010-2013)
CHAIR
Dr. H. Christopher Frey, Distinguished University Professor, Department of Civil, Construction and
Environmental Engineering, College of Engineering, North Carolina State University, Raleigh, NC
OTHER CASAC MEMBER
Mr. George A. Allen, Senior Scientist, Northeast States for Coordinated Air Use Management
(NESCAUM), Boston, MA
CONSULTANTS
Dr. Herbert Allen, Professor Emeritus, Department of Civil and Environmental Engineering,
University of Delaware, Newark, DE

Dr. Richard Canfield, Senior Research Associate, Division of Nutritional Sciences, Cornell University,
Ithaca, NY

Dr. Deborah Cory-Slechta, Professor, Department of Environmental Medicine, School of Medicine
and Dentistry, University of Rochester, Rochester, NY

Dr. Cliff Davidson, Professor, Civil and Environmental Engineering, Syracuse University, Syracuse,
NY

Dr. Philip E. Goodrum, Senior Consultant, Cardno ENTRIX, Syracuse, NY

Dr. Sean Hays, President, Summit Toxicology, Allenspark, CO

Dr. Philip Hopke, Bayard D. Clarkson Distinguished Professor, Department of Chemical and
Biomolecular Engineering, Clarkson University, Potsdam, NY

Dr. Chris  Johnson, Professor, Department of Civil and Environmental Engineering , Syracuse
University, Syracuse, NY

Dr. Susan Korrick, Assistant Professor of Medicine , Department of Medicine, Brigham and Women's
Hospital, Channing Laboratory, Harvard Medical School, Boston, MA

Dr. Michael Kosnett, Associate Clinical Professor, Division of Clinical Pharmacology and  Toxicology,
Department of Medicine, University of Colorado School of Medicine, Denver, CO
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Dr. Roman Lanno, Associate Professor and Associate Chair, Department of Evolution, Ecology, and
Organismal Biology, Ohio State University, Columbus, OH

Mr. Richard L. Poirot, Environmental Analyst, Air Pollution Control Division, Department of
Environmental Conservation, Vermont Agency of Natural Resources, Waterbury, VT

Dr. Joel G. Pounds, Laboratory Fellow, Cell Biology & Biochemistry, Biological Sciences Division,
Pacific Northwest National Laboratory, Richland, WA

Dr. Michael Rabinowitz, Geochemist, Marine Biological Laboratory, Newport, RI

Dr. William Stubblefield, Senior Research Professor, Department of Molecular and Environmental
Toxicology, Oregon State University, Corvallis, OR

Dr. Ian von Lindern, President, TerraGraphics Environmental Engineering, Inc., Moscow, ID

Dr. Gail Wasserman, Professor of Clinical Psychology in Child Psychiatry, Division of Child and
Adolescent Psychiatry, College of Physicians and Surgeons, Columbia University, New York, NY

Dr. Michael Weitzman, Professor, Pediatrics; Psychiatry, New York University School of Medicine,
New York, NY
SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD STAFF
Mr. Aaron Yeow, Designated Federal Officer, U.S. Environmental Protection Agency, Science
Advisory Board (1400R), 1200 Pennsylvania Avenue, NW, Washington, DC
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                        U.S. Environmental Protection Agency
                       Clean Air Scientific Advisory Committee
                                         CASAC
CHAIR
Dr. H. Christopher Frey, Distinguished University Professor, Department of Civil, Construction and
Environmental Engineering, College of Engineering, North Carolina State University, Raleigh, NC
MEMBERS
Mr. George A. Allen, Senior Scientist, Northeast States for Coordinated Air Use Management
(NESCAUM), Boston, MA

Dr. Ana Diez-Roux, Professor of Epidemiology, School of Public Health, University of Michigan, Ann
Arbor, MI

Dr. Jack Harkema, Professor, Department of Pathobiology, College of Veterinary Medicine, Michigan
State University, East Lansing, MI

Dr. Helen Suh, Associate Professor, Bouve School of Health Sciences, Northeastern University,
Boston, MA

Dr. Kathleen Weathers, Senior Scientist, Gary Institute of Ecosystem Studies, Millbrook, NY

Dr. Ronald Wyzga, Technical Executive, Air Quality Health and Risk, Electric Power Research
Institute, Palo Alto, CA
SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD STAFF
Dr. Holly Stallworth, Designated Federal Officer, U.S. Environmental Protection Agency, Science
Advisory Board (1400R), 1200 Pennsylvania Avenue, NW, Washington, DC
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                         Consensus Responses to Charge Questions on
  EPA's Policy Assessment for the Review of the Lead National Ambient Air Quality Standards
                            (External Review Draft - January 2013)
Chapter 1 - Introduction

This chapter provides context for the review, including the background of past reviews, as well as the
scope for the current review. This includes discussion of fate and multimedia pathways of ambient air
Pb and other nonair sources ofPb in the environment.

Does the Panel find the introductory and background material, including that pertaining to previous
reviews of the Pb standard and the scope of the current review to be appropriately characterized and
clearly communicated?

Chapter 1  of the Policy Assessment (PA) is reasonably well characterized and for the most part clearly
communicated, although there are several improvements that should be made (see below). The CASAC
concurs with the EPA that the current scientific evidence does not justify a change  to the current Lead
(Pb) National Ambient Air Quality Standards (NAAQS), with the caveats stated below.

Chapter 1  should emphasize Pb as a unique pollutant in many ways. Historically, anthropogenic
emissions of Pb to the air around the globe exceeded natural emissions by a huge margin, more than any
other trace metal. Natural emissions come from unpolluted soil, seaspray, and other natural sources.
Removal of Pb from gasoline, paint, solder, and other anthropogenic sources constitutes what is
arguably the biggest environmental success story for any pollutant to-date.  Unlike other criteria air
pollutants, Pb is of concern from a multimedia perspective; human exposure to Pb comes from
inhalation of air and also from ingestion of food, water, and dust. In addition, Pb may be the pollutant
with the biggest legacy problem: millions of tons of Pb are now present in the environment as a result of
discharges from years ago. The distribution of this huge reservoir of Pb is not known, and thus current
human exposure from this legacy cannot reliably be estimated. What is known, however, is that human
activities have on average substantially elevated the Pb content of soil at numerous locations around the
United States,  more so than other trace metals processed in large quantities. Although air Pb levels are
much lower because of reduced emissions, soil Pb can be expected to remain elevated for many years.
These unique aspects of Pb, especially the problem of not knowing the distribution of legacy Pb, should
be clearly discussed in the PA.

This chapter concludes that there is no information published in the last five years justifying
reconsideration of the current NAAQS. Although that is true, this conclusion should be conveyed with
an assessment of the adequacy of the old information. In particular, there were significant unknowns and
uncertainties associated with a lack of information five years ago; those unknowns  and uncertainties still
remain.

There are no statements in the PA that the Integrated Science Assessment (ISA) is limited only to
exposures and data sources considered currently relevant to the U.S. population, as opposed to
populations outside of the United States. Furthermore, the literature is considered only to assess how
new studies relate to conclusions drawn in the past review, and then only to studies in the peer-reviewed
literature.  This has resulted in an ISA that is dedicated predominately to toxicology, health effects,

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biokinetics, and causal determinations. These are areas that were data rich in the last review, and
continue to produce volumes of new peer-reviewed information. In contrast, in areas where the least is
known and EPA relies on past findings, uncertainty is becoming greater as the existing information
becomes outdated. Additionally, the current assessment excludes consideration of impacts on
populations outside of the United States.

There is considerable discussion dedicated to the reduction of Pb in air and other media in the United
States over the last four decades. Most of the reduction was achieved through the elimination of tetra-
ethyl Pb gasoline additives. Another major component of the reduction was substantial decreases in
emissions from primary and secondary smelters, and metals processing industries. In the case  of motor
vehicle gasoline-related emissions, these ceased and other  non-Pb products were substituted in
commerce. This resulted in decreased Pb emissions and health and environmental effects in both the
United States and globally. Within the United States, Pb continues to be used as an octane boosting fuel
additive for very high octane fuels used in general aviation for piston engine aircraft. In the case of Pb
production and secondary recovery, however, this production and recovery were exported overseas.
There is no mention of the impact of the "avoided emissions" in their new locales.

Thus, overall, there is no reason to change the current airborne Pb standard. However, although airborne
Pb is far more limited as a problem within the United States,  potential exposure to Pb in other
environmental media in the United States is likely to be more significant. Furthermore, there may be
increasing Pb exposures overseas (e.g., as described in CEC, 2013).

There are  a few areas that need revision for clarity and accuracy. On page ES-1, line 25, the following
sentence should be added to the end  of the paragraph: "This approach was taken to aid in the decision to
retain or revise the current standards." On page 1-13 line 35,  it states: "And we recognize that past Pb
emissions in many situations were well in excess of the current Pb standard." One cannot compare
emissions to an airborne standard. This sentence can be revised to state: "We recognize that past Pb
emissions in many situations caused airborne Pb concentrations far in excess  of the current Pb standard."
Chapter 2 - Ambient Air Lead

This chapter provides an overview of current information on air Pb emissions and monitoring data,
consideration of the current air Pb monitoring requirements and an overview of current information on
Pb in nonair media.

To what extent does the Panel agree that the most relevant information on emissions (section 2.1), air
quality (section 2.2.2), andPb concentrations in other media (section 2.3) is presented, and to what
extent is the information presented appropriately characterized and clearly communicated?

With a few minor exceptions (see specific individual panel member comments), the information on Pb
emissions, air quality and concentrations in other media is appropriately characterized and clearly
presented. Historical and recent (2008) emissions data are summarized quantitatively in clear charts and
tables, with additional detail on the 2008 National Emissions Inventory (NEI) data sources and
limitations provided in Appendix 2A. There are also qualitative discussions and an informative
Appendix 2B on recent regulatory actions, indicating that current emissions have declined since 2008,
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informative. To the extent that these or other historical controls of U.S. Pb source categories have
shifted Pb emissions to other countries, it would be informative to include discussion of those displaced
emissions.

The information on ambient air concentrations is clearly presented (for sites with 1 to 3 years of valid
data for 2009 to 2011) in maps, charts and in a detailed appendix (Appendix 2D). More recent
measurements from sites (including near airports) initiated since the previous Pb NAAQS review would
help inform the current Pb NAAQS review, as well as the separate Section 231 aviation gasoline
("avgas") review.

Given the "not to be exceeded" 3-month rolling average form of the Pb NAAQS, an exceedance could
be determined with as few as 3 months of new data. Therefore, it would be useful if more recent data are
summarized in the next Pb PA, without being limited to sites with multiple years of valid data.

The information on Pb concentrations in other media is clearly presented. The sections (2.3.2.1  and
2.3.2.2) on indoor and outdoor dust are highly relevant to  exposure assessments and would benefit from
some added discussion of how dust Pb concentration, loading, and loading rates are measured. In
particular, information relating to the differences in particle sizes in dust samples and ambient air
samples would be helpful. More information on changes, if any, over time in the availability of
historically deposited soil Pb for resuspension to  the air or for  direct uptake through ingestion could help
clarify the significance of this potentially important source category.

 With regard to information on ambient Pb monitoring (section 2.2.1), to what extent is this information
appropriately characterized and clearly communicated?

The information on ambient Pb monitoring is appropriately characterized and clearly communicated. It
is understood that the high-volume (Hi-Vol) Total Suspended Particulates (TSP) sampler is an imperfect
historical artifact, and that there is not time for this review cycle of the Pb NAAQS to develop, fully test,
and deploy alternative samplers that would consistently capture particles (less than and) greater than 10
microns with appropriate collection efficiencies and size ranges under varying wind speeds and
directions. The draft PA notes that the EPA expects a new, improved sampler to be "available for
consideration in a future review." Toward this goal, discussion is needed regarding the desirable cut size
characteristics of, and practical constraints on, an alternative sampler.  Information from the ISA could
be cited here, such as material currently on page 3-67 of the 3r  external draft of the ISA that may be
revised for the final ISA regarding discussion of the desirable cut size.

If an alternative low-volume sampler could be developed with an upper 50% particle cut size in the
range of 15 to 20 microns, and without the wind speed and direction biases of the Hi-Vol TSP sampler,
it seems likely that such a sampler would typically capture as much (or occasionally more) Pb as the Hi-
Vol TSP sampler. The CAS AC has  previously recommended the development of a new air Pb sampler
that collects larger particle sizes, that could improve the quality of sampling in the National Air Toxics
Trends Station (NATTS) network, and that could serve as an Federal Reference Method (FRM) or
Federal Equivalent Method (FEM) for Pb. Filters collected by  this sampler also would be amenable to
multi-elemental analyses by lower-cost analytical methods and could be useful for more accurate and
precise assessments of other paniculate pollutants with  significant coarse mode concentrations,
including chemical contaminants (like hexavalent chromium, silica, and cadmium) and biological
components like pollen, fungi, and endotoxins.

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Chapter 3 - Health Effects and Exposure/Risk Information

This chapter discusses key policy relevant aspects of the health effects evidence and exposure/risk
information.

 To what extent does the information in sections 3.1 (Internal Disposition andBiomarkers of Exposure
and Dose), 3.2 (Nature of Effects) and 3.3 (Public Health Implications and At-Risk Populations) capture
and appropriately characterize the key aspects of the evidence assessed and integrated in the ISA?

Chapter 3 of the draft PA generally captures the key aspects of the evidence presented in the ISA;
therefore, concerns about content stem from the content of the ISA and not its condensation in the PA.

Recognizing the degree of condensation needed to summarize the ISA in only a few pages, this format
presents a great writing challenge, and the writing in the chapter lacks clarity. Wordiness should be
reduced to directly and efficiently convey the meaning. For example, sentences such as the following
could be shortened and recast in a more active voice: "The results from the various case studies
assessed, with consideration of the context in which they were derived (e.g., the extent to which the
range of air-related pathways were simulated, and limitations associated with those simulations), and the
multiple sources of uncertainty (see section 3.4.7 below) are also informative to our understanding of
air-to-blood ratios." (Please refer to Dr. Canfield's individual comments for details on the sentences in
need of streamlining and clarification.)

In addition, there are a few places where legacy text from the previous PA remains, so extraneous words
need to be deleted and tenses updated. What needs the most attention is the length and complexity of
some sentences.

 To what extent is the newly available evidence on air-to-blood ratios appropriately characterized and
considered in light of information previously available in past reviews?

The new information on air-to-blood ratios is presented in context of previous information and no
change in the estimate is justified at this time.

When revising this section (3.1) it would be helpful to first read the last (summary paragraph) on page 3-
14. Those conclusions should be included in the first paragraph of the section and then restated  at the
end of the section when the reader will be in a position to understand the context.

 To what extent is the newly available evidence on concentration-response functions for IQ decrements
in young children appropriately characterized and considered in light of information previously
available in past reviews?

The newly available evidence is appropriately characterized. Parametric information could be extracted
from these data to produce quantitative results for blood Pb subgroups, but the quality of the data would
not likely provide a useful basis for altering the conclusions reached from the data available prior to
2008.

There is a critical  need for more information about effects of Pb at levels in the 0-5 |ig/dL range. Studies
about effects of Pb at these low levels are a future research need.

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With regard to the exposure and risk information, to what extent is the information drawn from the
human exposure and health risk assessment in the last review sufficiently characterized and clearly
communicated? To what extent is the information appropriately interpreted in light of the currently
available information and for the purpose of assessing the adequacy of the now current standard?

Information from the last review is well-characterized and appropriately interpreted, but the clarity of
communication should be improved. Putting the conclusion in the first paragraph of the section was very
helpful. The CAS AC concurs that a new risk and exposure assessment (RE A) is not warranted at this
time.

Are the limitations and uncertainties in the exposure/risk information appropriately characterized and
considered in our interpretation of the information in the context of this current review?

The limitations and uncertainties in the exposure/risk information are well  characterized.
Epidemiological data are inherently limited; there is a lack of data on the effects of Pb exposure at the
levels that are common today and thus concentration-response (C-R) estimates require extrapolation.
Parameter choices for biokinetic models typically require restrictive assumptions. No  single air quality
scenario is adequate.

There are specific areas of the chapter that should be revised for clarity:

    •   Page 3-2, Line 15, referring to distribution of Pb from bone to blood, includes the sentence:
       "Changes in Pb exposure circumstances also can influence these  exchanges, e.g.,  substantial
       reductions in exposure levels contribute to increased release of Pb from the bone into the blood
       (ISA, section 4.3.5)." This sentence should be revised, as it appears to incorrectly characterize
       the information in section 4.3.5 of the ISA. A reduction in external  Pb exposure does not, from a
       pharmacodynamic standpoint, induce an increase in the release of Pb from bone. In the context
       of the paragraph, the intended point could be expressed as follows:  "When there are substantial
       reductions in external Pb exposure, the relative contribution of Pb from bone to the  concentration
       of Pb in blood increases."

    •   Page 3-5, line 29  to Page 3-6, line 9: The italicized sentence in this paragraph, reproduced
       below,  should be revised to improve clarity:

       "The response of adult blood Pb levels to appreciable  changes in exposure circumstances is
       generally slower than that of blood Pb levels in young children. For example, simulations using
       biokinetic models indicate that blood Pb levels in adults achieve a new quasi-steady state within
       75-100 days (approximately 3-4 times the blood elimination half-life) subsequent to abrupt
       increases in Pb intake (ISA, section 4.3.5.2); similar models indicate a much quicker response of
       blood Pb levels in children both with regard to abrupt  increases and reductions in Pb exposure
       (ISA, section 4.3.5.1). The response in young children may reflect their much more labile bone
       pool associated with the rapid turnover of bone mineral in response to their rapid growth rates
       (ISA, section 4.3.5). As a result of these physiological  processes in young children, their blood
       Pb levels tend to more quickly reflect changes in their total body burden (associated with their
       shorter exposure history), and also can reflect changes in recent exposures  (ISA, section 4.3.5)."

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       Instead of the italicized sentence above, substitution of a sentence such as the following might
       enhance clarity: "Because the skeletal compartment of Pb is relatively smaller and subject to
       more rapid turnover in children compared to adults, the blood Pb concentration of children is
       more reflective of their recent external exposure."

       Page 3-19 lines 23-24: It might be clearer to use the phrase "qualitatively change" rather than
       "appreciably change" to allow for appreciable strengthening of the previous conclusion but no
       change of consequence.

       Page 3-22 lines 17-23: This is a helpful discussion of the problem with unknown earlier
       exposures in adults and older children. The topic comes up multiple times throughout this
       document and becomes redundant. Maybe this should be covered fully (including this as a
       general critique of cross-sectional studies), early in the chapter and then simply referred back to
       when the context warrants.
Chapter 4 - Review of the Primary Standard for Lead

This chapter describes the basis for the current primary standard and consideration of the current
evidence and exposure/risk-based information with regard to reaching preliminary staff conclusions
about the adequacy of the current standard.

In this chapter, staff applies the same evidence-based air-related IQ loss framework as developed and
used in the last review, which has fundamentally two key inputs: an air-to-blood ratio and the slope of a
concentration-response (C-R) function for IQ decrements in young children.

This draft PA is constrained by the absence of new observational and experimental data that address, at
least in part, limitations and uncertainties in the evidence that was present at the time of the last update
of the Pb NAAQS. Until evidence is available to assess Pb exposure and health risks related to air Pb
levels reflecting the current standard, a substantive refinement and update of the PA will not be possible.
The obvious uncertainty underlying evaluation of this PA is whether lowering the standard would (or
would not) impact exposure and thus risk. The CASAC agrees with the EPA conclusion that "there is
appreciable uncertainty associated with drawing conclusions regarding whether there would be
reductions in blood Pb levels from alternative lower levels as compared  to the level of the current
standard." If lowering the primary standard would lower blood Pb levels amongst the U.S. population,
then there would be potential public  health benefits from a lower standard. Research priorities discussed
below are designed to help inform these uncertainties.

To what extent does the Panel agree with application of the evidence-based framework from the last
review, particularly with regard to consideration of the currently available information, and related
limitations and uncertainties, for air-to-blood ratios and C-R functions for IQ decrements in young
children?

The application of the evidence-based framework from the previous Pb NAAQS review seems
appropriate. The new literature published since the previous review provides further support for the
health effect conclusions presented in that review. Additionally,  the new studies do not fundamentally
alter the uncertainties for air-to-blood ratios or C-R functions for IQ decrements in young children.

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 As previously discussed with CASAC, staff concluded that the current information does not warrant
development of a new REA in this review. Thus, exposure/risk information was drawn from the REA
conducted in the last review.

What are the Panel's views on staff's interpretation of the exposure/risk information, and on staff's
conclusions that the information is generally supportive of conclusions drawn from the evidence-based
framework as to the adequacy of the current standard?

The use of exposure/risk information from the previous Pb NAAQS review appears appropriate given
the absence of significant new information that could fundamentally change the interpretation of the
exposure/risk information. This interpretation is reasonable given that information supporting the current
standard is largely unchanged since the current standard was issued.

The CASAC agrees that the adverse impact of low levels of Pb exposure on neurocognitive function and
development in children remains the most sensitive health endpoint, and that a primary Pb NAAQS
designed to protect against that effect will offer satisfactory protection against the many other health
impacts associated with Pb exposure.

The CASAC concurs with the draft PA that the scientific findings pertaining to air-to-blood Pb ratios
and the C-R relationships between blood Pb and childhood IQ decrements that formed the basis of the
current Pb NAAQS remain valid and are consistent with current data.

 In reaching preliminary staff conclusions, staff notes that, like any NAAQS review, this Pb NAAQS
review requires public health policy judgments. The public health policy judgments for this review
include the public health significance of a given magnitude oflQ loss in a small subset of highly exposed
children (i.e., those likely to experience air-related Pb exposures at the level of the standard), as well as
how to consider the nature and magnitude of the array of uncertainties that are inherent in the evidence
and in the application of this specific framework.

What are the Panel's views on public health policy judgments that inform staff's preliminary
conclusions with regard to the adequacy of current standard and a lack of support for consideration of
potential alternative standards?

The PA states repeatedly that no threshold for Pb  effects on IQ can be identified. In some respects, the
ability to define a threshold may already be a moot issue. Reductions in IQ in children are being
reported at blood Pb values as low as 2 |ig/dL. In  essence, these effects are being reported at the lowest
levels of Pb in blood that can be reliably measured by most laboratories doing such analyses.
Child IQ is the Pb-sensitive health endpoint on which this PA (and the previous one) is based. Thus, the
discussion of health policy judgment needs to be carefully considered in light of the far-reaching public
health value of childhood cognitive and neurobehavioral health. For example, the 2012 Centers for
Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) update of recommendations regarding childhood Pb poisoning
acknowledges that there is no blood Pb level in childhood that has been shown to be without deleterious
effects. In this context, defining the threshold for  "unacceptable risks to public health" or "sufficient
public health protection" is difficult. Indeed, such language - with its implicit use of a threshold
approach to a process that presumably has no threshold - may no longer be appropriate. Although there
is evidence that even very  low Pb  levels are related to measurable reductions in IQ in children, the
extent to which the blood Pb levels observed in children are linked to ambient air Pb levels below the

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current standard (as opposed to other sources of Pb in the environment) has not been established.
Therefore there is not justification for modifying the current standard based on these data at this point in
time. However additional research on air to blood Pb at low levels may require reconsideration of this
decision in the future.

In the Panel's view, does the discussion in section 4.3 provide an appropriate and sufficient rationale to
support staff's preliminary conclusion that it is appropriate to consider retaining the current standard
(including the indicator, level, averaging time, and form) without revision?

Given the evidence-based framework, the discussion in section 4.3 provides an appropriate and
sufficient rationale to support retaining the current standard without revision. For example, there is
discussion in the PA regarding the choice of indicator level. However,  there should be more description
of supporting data and rationale behind the recommendation for the averaging time and form of the
current standard.

The CASAC concurs that the new science does not support lowering the Pb NAAQS from its current
level (0.15 |ig/m3). Additionally, the CASAC concurs with the caveats provided about the uncertainty in
the science behind the NAAQS for Pb. In particular it appreciates and affirms a key point on page 4-28,
lines 2-3: "We also recognize increased uncertainty in projecting the magnitude of blood Pb response to
ambient air Pb concentrations at and below the level of the current standard." Likewise, the key idea on
page 4-32, lines 32-35 is important, but a clarifying revision is recommended as follows:

       Page 4-32, lines 32-35, current text: "In staffs view, based on current evidence there is
       appreciable uncertainty associated with drawing conclusions regarding whether there would be
       reductions in risk to public health from alternative lower levels as compared to the level of the
       current standard." This should be re-written to read "In staffs view, based on current evidence
       there is appreciable uncertainty associated with drawing conclusions regarding whether there
       would be reductions in blood lead levels from alternative lower levels as compared to the level of
       the current standard."

Does the Panel have any recommendations  regarding additional interpretations and conclusions based
on the available information that would be appropriate for consideration beyond those discussed in this
chapter?

As noted above, repeated statements about a threshold do not  seem warranted given that IQ reductions
now occur at the lowest blood Pb levels that can be reliably measured in most laboratories. It is for this
reason that the Advisory Committee on Childhood Lead Poisoning Prevention recommended to CDC a
complete elimination of the phrase 'level of concern' and stated that no blood Pb level in children has
been shown to be without deleterious effects.

The EPA should encourage development of  research programs to address those limitations and
uncertainties in currently available evidence (and exposure/risk information) that are critical to the
identification of "sufficiently health protective" air Pb standards in the future.

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There are some areas that need revision for clarity:

   •   Page 4-34, line 13: The statement should be edited to: "Factors affecting relationships between
       Pb in ambient air and Pb in blood at low exposures experienced in the general population
       today"
   •   Page 4-34, lines  19-21: This research need is profound, but as written is too vague to be
       appreciated by the average reader. This research need should be revised to: "Apportionment of
       blood Pb levels with regard to exposure pathways, with particular focus on understanding
       exposure pathways and sources that cause the more elevated blood Pb levels among children
       today."

Research Needs

Several areas of research that could assist in further refinement of the Pb NAAQS include:

   1.  For the purposes of policy and decision making, key research priorities should be studies that
       elucidate: (1) the air-blood Pb relationship at low levels; (2) sources (exposure pathways)
       contributing to current population blood Pb levels, especially in children; (3) the relationship
       between Pb and childhood neurocognitive function at current population exposure levels; and (4)
       the relationship between ambient air Pb and outdoor dust and surface soil Pb concentrations,
       including the temporal dynamics of that relationship. These research priorities are of particular
       interest because of the prominent contribution of past (as opposed to recent) Pb emissions to Pb
       in soil and dust, and the significant contribution of dust and soil matrices to the Pb exposure of
       children.

   2.  For the typical American adult not subject to current  or past point sources or occupational Pb
       exposure, Pb in the diet is likely to constitute the largest fraction of daily Pb exposure. Therefore,
       another  research need of considerable interest is to determine the source of contemporary dietary
       Pb,  including the indirect contribution of historical air Pb emissions (i.e.  "legacy Pb"). Further,
       there remains a need to determine how much of dietary Pb is from legacy and how much can be
       amenable to interventions.

   3.  The shape of the C-R curve for IQ reductions at extremely low levels requires further
       clarification. In addition,  studies on more sensitive endpoints in the domain of emotion and
       behavior regulation are warranted, given that they may yield specific and sensitive measures and
       thereby  assist in  defining appropriate intervention strategies for children.

   4.  There has been a long-term reliance on the Integrated Exposure Uptake Biokinetic (IEUBK)
       model. However, greater understanding of inter-individual variability, as quantified in the
       Geometric Standard Deviation (GSD) input parameter, is needed. Information about
       toxicokinetics during adolescence remains limited. The All Ages Lead Model could be utilized to
       improve this understanding. There is also the need to know more about gene-environment
       interactions, particularly in driving inter-individual susceptibility and vulnerability.

   5.  Characterization and better understanding of Pb exposure hotspots/sources will give better
       representation of significant exposure risks.

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   6.  Understanding of the impacts of Pb exposures during critical developmental windows and their
       contribution to adverse outcomes; e.g., little is known about the specific effects of prenatal
       exposure.

   7.  The effect of contemporary Pb exposure (i.e., that resulting in blood Pb concentrations on the
       order of 5  |ig/dL or lower) on the future risk of hypertension and cardiovascular morbidity and
       mortality,  and on age-related neurodegeneration, as these could lead to additional information
       related to most sensitive health outcomes.

   8.  A further understanding of the role of "reverse causation" in the inverse association observed in
       some studies between low blood Pb concentration and renal function (e.g., glomerular filtration
       rate).

   9.  The extent to which product substitution, i.e., replacement of Pb with less hazardous alternative
       substances in contemporary commerce, may result in reduction of human Pb exposure. The EPA
       might consider supporting studies on Pb potentially undertaken by programs such as the Toxic
       Use Reduction Program in Massachusetts, and the Green Chemistry Initiative in California.

   10. As yet, the extent to which global warming will influence exposure to Pb (e.g., through soil
       erosion, resuspension) has not been evaluated.
Chapter 5 - Welfare Effects and Exposure/Risk Information

This chapter discusses key policy relevant aspects of the environmental evidence and exposure/risk
information.

Chapter 5 of the PA is a well-written synthesis of the findings related to ecological effects in the ISA.
The ISA supports the conclusion that recent research has not changed our fundamental understanding of
Pb fate, transport and toxicity in the environment.

 To what extent does the information in section 5.1 (Welfare Effects Information) capture and
appropriately characterize the key aspects of the evidence assessed and integrated in the ISA?

Section 5.1 does a good job of summarizing the evidence for ecological effects from the ISA. The
general conclusion is that recent research has added depth and nuance to the understanding of the fate
and transport of Pb in ecological systems, and to the understanding of effects on organisms in terrestrial
and aquatic ecosystems, but has not changed the understanding in a way that merits reconsideration of
the relationships used to assess risk.

A persistent theme in the ecological effects sections of the ISA and this PA document is that it is
difficult to isolate the effects of air Pb on ecosystems from other Pb sources, including "legacy" Pb
accumulated in soils and sediments. The threat of release of legacy Pb in soils and sediments, whatever
the original source, may necessitate a lower secondary air quality standard than would be warranted in
the absence of the legacy Pb. With respect to critical loads, it is recommended that Chapter 5
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receptors most heavily exposed to Pb, and thus potentially the most susceptible to the incremental
contribution of Pb in air.

With regard to the exposure and risk information in section 5.2 (Exposure and Risk Information), to
what extent is the information drawn from the screening-level risk assessment in the last review
sufficiently characterized and clearly communicated? To what extent is the information appropriately
interpreted in light of the currently available information and for the purpose of assessing the adequacy
of the current standard?

The results of the 2006 REA are summarized in section 5.2. The summary is concise and clear, both in
the explanation of the model employed and in the descriptions of the case studies used in the assessment.

The interpretation of the results from the 2006 REA is appropriate insofar as it re-states the conclusions
from that document, and there have been no fundamental changes to our understanding of key thresholds
or ecological receptors in the intervening years. Of four terrestrial case studies employed, the results
from two (the primary and secondary smelter cases) are judged to be "not informative." The relevance
of a third case study (non-urban near-roadway conditions)  is deemed "highly uncertain" due to the
presence of legacy Pb in roadside soils. The only terrestrial case study that is deemed relevant is the
Hubbard Brook case, where ambient Pb concentrations are far below the current (and proposed)
standard. Results from analysis of surface water and sediment data are judged to be inconclusive
because of possible non-air sources to waters and legacy Pb in sediments. Therefore, overall, four of the
five major efforts in the 2006 REA are judged to be of limited or no value for the purposes of this PA.
Given that there is little field research underway on Pb in U.S. ecosystems that are not impacted by point
sources, it would appear to be unlikely that data for new REA case studies is forthcoming. A robust
critical loads approach, which is a research priority to support a future review, is needed to fill this gap.

Are the limitations and uncertainties in the exposure/risk information appropriately characterized and
considered in our interpretation of the information in the context of this current review?

The discussion of limitations and uncertainties is generally good. Issues such as legacy Pb, multi-
stressor effects, and lab-to-field applicability create considerable uncertainty. The use of conservative
screening levels in the calculation of hazard quotients is  particularly useful because the calculated risks
are overstated.
Chapter 6 - Review of the Secondary Standard for Lead

This chapter describes the basis for the current secondary standard and consideration of the current
evidence and exposure/risk-based information with regard to reaching preliminary staff conclusions
about the adequacy of the current standard.

Does the Panel agree with preliminary staff conclusions about the evidence and previous risk
assessment in light of current standards as presented in section 6.2 (Adequacy of the Current
Standard)?
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The preliminary staff conclusions provide a good assessment of the available evidence and the previous
risk assessment in light of the current secondary standard. The CAS AC notes, however, the concerns
raised in the response to the chapter 5 charge questions regarding the previous risk assessment.

In the Panel's view, does the discussion in this chapter provide an appropriate and sufficient rationale
to support preliminary staff conclusions that it is appropriate to consider retaining the current standard
(including the indicator, level, averaging time, and form) without revision?

The discussion provides appropriate and sufficient rationale to support retaining the current secondary
standard without revision. A general lack of new data that would indicate the appropriate level of Pb in
environmental media that may be associated with adverse effects suggests that the secondary standard
should be retained. Questions remain regarding the relevance of the indicator, level, averaging time and
form to the secondary standard (ecological context). A multi-media approach may be necessary to
account for legacy Pb and contributions from different sources for a secondary standard.

Does the Panel have any recommendations regarding additional interpretations and conclusions based
on the available information that would be appropriate for consideration beyond those discussed in this
chapter?

The CASAC does not have any recommendations regarding additional interpretations and conclusions
beyond what is  contained in the chapter. Developing a critical loads approach for U.S. conditions would
be an important area for additional research. The discussion of uncertainties at the end of the chapter is
excellent. It should include mention of the use and/or relevance of toxicity data that are generated in test
systems that deploy exposures to media other than soil or water for appropriate organisms (e.g., plants in
hydroponic systems,  soil nematodes in agar or culture medium).

Research Needs

Application of a critical  loads approach with sensitivity analysis will help to determine which processes
are most important in determining Pb exposure to ecological receptors. This would be an integrated,
holistic, multi-media approach that could be used to examine the contributions of current aerial Pb
deposition to historical aerial deposition as well as Pb from other sources. Current critical loads models
are largely qualitative and empirical. Mechanistic sub-models need to be incorporated into the critical
loads model to provide an adequate means to predict Pb bioavailability, exposure, and toxicity.  This
critical loads approach could be integrated to include other aerial pollutants such as oxides of nitrogen
and oxides of sulfur.
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Reference

Secretariat of the Commission for Environmental Cooperation (CEC), (2013), Hazardous Trade? An
      Examination of US-generated Spent Lead-acid Battery Exports and Secondary Lead Recycling in
      Mexico, the United States and Canada, Final Report, 15 April.
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                                               A
       Compendium of Individual Comments by CASAC Lead Review Panel Members on
  EPA's Policy Assessment for the Review of the Lead National Ambient Air Quality Standards
                         (External Review Draft - January 2013)
Mr. George A. Allen	A-2
Dr. Herbert Allen	A-3
Dr. Richard Canfield	A-4
Dr. Deborah Cory-Slechta	A-6
Dr. Cliff Davidson	A-8
Dr. Sean Hays	A-9
Dr. Philip Hopke	A-10
Dr. Chris E. Johnson	A-ll
Dr. Susan Korrick	A-13
Dr. Michael Kosnett	A-15
Dr. Roman Lanno	A-18
Mr. Richard L. Poirot	A-20
Dr. Michael Rabinowitz	A-25
Dr. Ian von Lindern	A-26
Dr. Gail Wasserman	A-29
Dr. Michael Weitzman	A-30
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                                    Mr. George A. Allen


Comments on Chapter 2

Response to specific Charge Questions:

1. To what extent does the Panel agree that the most relevant information on emissions (section
2.1), air quality (section 2.2.2), andPb concentrations in other media (section 2.3) is presented,
and to what extent is the information presented appropriately characterized and clearly
communicated?

Overall, Chapter 2 provides a concise and well-organized summary of the relevant material from the
ISA. Minor note: the boxplots in section 2.2.2 need to have the whisker defined - is it 95th percentile?
2.  With regard to information on ambient Pb monitoring (section 2.2.1), to what extent is this
information appropriately characterized and clearly communicated?

2.2.1.3.1, pg 2-20, lines 4-9: this paragraph is a well written description of the process being taken
towards a better FRM sampler. It states that known limitations in wind-tunnel aerosol generation and
particle sampling of ultra-coarse particles will limit the upper range of any new FRM to 18-20 microns. I
would suggest that EPA consider the practical aspects of sampler design and testing, and (at least
initially) constrain the project goals to an upper limit of 15 microns, a size noted in the ISA as being
appropriate (sufficiently large enough) for exposure assessment in aNAAQS context.

2.2.1.3.3, Pg. 2-22, lines 17-18:  The Pb NAAQS form is "never to be exceeded" - a unique form. How
is the Pb design value calculated - is it the highest 3-month running average over the 3-year period?
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Comments on Chapter 5

Generally this Chapter is well-written and follows the important information in the ISA. There are
several places that need attention.

Page 5-5 lines 27-30. This sentence references section 7.4.24 of the ISA. However, the ISA does not
contain a section 7.4.24. The statement that "dissolved organic carbon and DOM [i.e., dissolved organic
matter] do not have the same effect on free lead ions" is very misleading. Dissolved organic carbon is
not a substance. It is means of expressing the concentration of the carbon contained dissolved organic
matter and is typically used to express the results of instrumental carbon analysis.

Page 5-6 line 35 - page 5.7 line 2.  The lead concentration of 2.5 jiM is not a concentration in soil, but
the concentration in a solution to which the nematodes were exposed.

Page 5-19 line 15. Rather than "from 5 ppb to about 5 ppt" it would be more appropriate to write "from
5 |ig/Lto5ng/L".
Comments on Chapter 6

I believe this Chapter is acceptable as written. The conclusions are clearly stated and justified.
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                                   Dr. Richard Canfield

Comments on Chapter 3: Health Effects and Exposure/Risk Information

   1.  To what extent does the information in sections 3.1 (Internal Disposition and Biomarkers of
       Exposure and Dose), 3.2 (Nature of Effects) and 3.3 (Public Health Implications andAt-Risk
       Populations) capture and appropriately characterize the key aspects of the evidence assessed
       and integrated in the ISA ?
          a.   This draft PA generally captures the key aspects of the evidence presented in the ISA and
              so any concerns about content are related to the content of the ISA and not its
              condensation in the PA.
          b.   Recognizing the degree of condensation needed to summarize the ISA in only a few
              pages, this format presents a great writing challenge, and the clarity of writing in this
              chapter betrays its status as a "draft." During revision it will be important to reduce
              wordiness in order to convey the meaning more directly and efficiently. For example,
              sentences such as the following could be shortened and recast in a more active voice:
              "The results from the various case studies assessed, with consideration of the context in
              which they were derived (e.g., the extent to which the range of air-related pathways were
              simulated, and limitations associated with those simulations), and the multiple sources of
              uncertainty (see section 3.4.7 below) are also informative to our understanding of air-to-
              blood ratios." I will note in my specific comments below the sentences I found most in
              need of streamlining and clarification.
          c.   In addition, there are a few places where legacy text from the previous PA remains and so
              extraneous words need to be deleted and tenses updated. What needs the most attention is
              the length and complexity of some sentences

   2.  To what extent is the newly available evidence on air-to-blood ratios appropriately
       characterized and considered in light of information previously available in past reviews?
          a.   The new information on air-to-blood ratios is presented in context of previous
              information and it is  evident why no change in the estimate is justified at this time.
          b.   When revising this section (3.1) it would be helpful to first read the last (summary
              paragraph) on page 3-14. Those conclusions should be included in the first paragraph of
              the section and then restated at the end of the section when the reader will be in a position
              to understand the context.

   3.  To what extent is the newly available evidence on concentration-response functions for IQ
       decrements in young children appropriately characterized and considered in light of information
       previously available in past reviews?
          a.   The newly-available  evidence  is appropriately characterized. Parametric information
              could be extracted from these data to produce quantitative results for blood Pb subgroups,

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              but I do not believe the quality of the data would provide a useful basis for altering the
              conclusions reached from the data available prior to 2008.
          b.  EPA has correctly identified the lack of information about effects of Pb at levels in the 0-
              5 ug/dL range. Such a study should be done.

   4.  With regard to the exposure and risk information, to what extent is the information drawn from
       the human exposure and health risk assessment in the last review sufficiently characterized and
       clearly communicated? To what extent is the information appropriately interpreted in light of the
       currently available information and for the purpose of assessing the adequacy of the now current
       standard?
          a.  Information from the last review is well-characterized and appropriately interpreted.
              Clarity of communication can be improved.
          b.  Putting the conclusion in the first paragraph of the section was very helpful. I concur that
              a new REA is not warranted at this time.

   5.  Are the limitations and uncertainties in the exposure/risk information appropriately
       characterized and considered in our interpretation of the information in the context of this
       current review ?
          a.  Limitations and uncertainties are well characterized.
                  /'.  Epidemiological data are inherently limited; viz., there is a lack of data on the
                     effects of Pb exposure at the levels that are common today and thus C-R estimates
                    require excessive extrapolation.
                 /'/'.  Parameter choices for biokinetic models typically require restrictive assumption.
                 /'/'/'.  No single air quality scenario is adequate.

Other comments:

3-19 lines 23-24:  It might be clearer to use the phrase "qualitatively change" rather than "appreciably
change" to allow for  appreciable strengthening of the previous conclusion but no change of
consequence.

3-21 Table 3-2 and elsewhere: I suggest reconsidering whether 24-month Bayley data are sufficiently
strong to mention in this high-level review, [note that the table includes lots of measures besides IQ

3-22 lines 17-23:  This is a nice discussion of the problem with unknown earlier exposures in adults and
older children. It comes up multiple times throughout this document and becomes redundant. Maybe this
should be covered fully (including this as a general critique of cross-sectional studies), early in the
chapter and then simply referred back to when the context warrants.
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Comments on Chapter 4 - Primary Standard for Lead

To what extent does the Panel agree with the application of the evidence-based framework from the last
review, particularly with regard to consideration of the currently available information, and related
limitations with uncertainties, for air-to-blood ratios and C-R functions for IQ decrements in young
children?

The application of the evidence-based framework from the last review seems appropriate, particularly
given that new literature since the prior 2006 review provides further support for the health effect
conclusions presented in the prior review. Additionally, new studies do not fundamentally alter the
uncertainties for air-to-blood ratios or C-R functions for IQ decrements in young children.

What are the Panel's views on staff's interpretation of the exposure/risk information, and on staff's
conclusions that the information is generally supportive of conclusions drawn from the evidence-based
framework as to the adequacy of the current standard?

The use of exposure-risk information from the prior review appears appropriate given the absence of
significant new information that could fundamentally change the interpretation.

What are the Panel's views on public health policy judgments that inform staffs 'preliminary
conclusions with regard to the adequacy of the current standard and a lack of support for consideration
of potential alternative standards?

The document states repeatedly that no threshold for lead effects on IQ can be identified. In some
respects, the ability to define a threshold may already be a moot issue. Reductions in IQ in children are
being reported at blood lead values as low as 2 ug/dl. In essence, these effects are being reported at the
lowest levels of lead in blood that can be reliably measured by most laboratories doing such analyses.

While the regulations do not require that zero risk be achieved, neither does it prevent it. Given the
above statement, and the fact that the supra-linear C-R curve has now been demonstrated in several
studies, it becomes increasingly difficult to support a standard based on 1-2 IQ  point loss. From a
biological perspective,  a standard based on some degeneration of function does not seem appropriate.
From a public health perspective, communicating to the public that a regulatory standard is based on
exposures that provide no  more than a 1-3 point IQ reduction would seem less than ideal and
contradictory to their expectations.
In the Panel's view, does the discussion in section 4.3 provide an appropriate and sufficient rationale to
support staff's preliminary conclusion that it is appropriate to consider retaining the current standard
(including the indicator, level, averaging time, and form) without revision?
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Yes, given the evidence-based framework. However, given that we are now down to the lowest blood
lead levels that can be reliably measured, it is not clear that all of these arguments are in fact requisite.

Does the Panel have any recommendations regarding additional interpretations and conclusions based
on the available information that would be appropriate for consideration beyond those discussed in this
chapter?

As noted above, statements about the threshold do not seem warranted given that IQ reductions now
occur at the lowest blood lead levels that can be reliably measured in most laboratories. It was for this
reason that the ACCLPP committee recommended to CDC a complete elimination of the phrase 'level
of concern' and stated that no safe level of blood lead can be identified.
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Comments on Chapter 1

Chapter 1 of the PA is generally well written and easy to follow. It is a reasonable introduction to the
rest of the PA document.

Page 1-2, lines 21-24 state that a new Risk and Exposure Assessment was found to be unnecessary at
this time, and hence the health and welfare REAs developed for the 2006 review are adequate for use
with current environmental concentration and exposure data. This is clearly presented and is justified
based on our prior committee reviews.

Section 1.3.2 discusses considerations related to the history of Pb emissions during the days of leaded
gasoline and high stationary source emissions. The section correctly points out that the current task is to
assess the adequacy of the current airborne Pb standard, while recognizing that there is a history of high
Pb emissions. But what is missing from this section is an appreciation for the magnitude of the past Pb
emissions.

A simple calculation illustrates the point. Figure 3-1 in the ISA (page 3-3) which is repeated as Figure 2-
1 in the PA (page 2-3) shows that total Pb emissions in the year 1970 were over 200,000 tons of Pb. The
PA should put this value into perspective. If we conservatively pick 10 years of emissions at this level,
we obtain about 2 million tons of Pb emitted.  Clearly, the total Pb emissions are more than this value.
But some of this Pb was carried out of the U.S., where it eventually deposited in the oceans or
elsewhere. It is not unreasonable to assume that about 2 million tons of Pb deposited within the
boundaries of the U.S. as a very rough value. If this Pb deposited uniformly over the entire land area of
continental U.S., around 25 micrograms of Pb would have deposited per cm2 of surface. This is roughly
equal to the natural amount of Pb in the top 1  cm of soil (12.5 ppm = 12.5 micrograms of Pb per gram of
soil, or about 25 micrograms per cm3 assuming a soil  density of 2 grams per cm3). We have thus
approximately doubled the amount of Pb in the top cm of soil throughout the continental U.S. It is
apparent that soil in some areas,  especially urban areas, will contain much more than this, while larger
remote areas will contain less.

The point of this calculation is that we do not know the ultimate fate of roughly 2 million tons of Pb
deposited during the days of leaded gasoline, a value that dwarfs current emissions.  We suspect that
most of this huge amount of Pb is now stored in the environment, with significant amounts in U.S. urban
areas where population densities are greatest.  The fact that we cannot account for this  lead constitutes a
major uncertainty in our understanding, and it merits a discussion to that effect in the PA.

There is one sentence in need of revision for accuracy, namely on page 1-13 line 35:

"And we recognize that past lead emissions in many situations were well in excess of the current Pb
standard." One cannot compare emissions to an airborne standard. One way to fix this sentence is to
write: "And we recognize that past lead emissions in many situations caused airborne  lead
concentrations far in excess of the current Pb standard."
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General Comments on Chapter 4
   •   I agree with the caveats provided about the uncertainty in the science behind the NAAQS for
       lead. In particular I agree with, and appreciate EPA adding, the following statements.
          o  Page 4-28,  line 2-3:  "We also recognize increased uncertainty in projecting the
             magnitude  of blood  Pb response to ambient air Pb concentrations at and below the level
             of the current standard"
          o  Page 4-32,  lines 33-35: "In staffs view, based on current evidence there is appreciable
             uncertainty associated with drawing conclusions regarding whether there would be
             reductions  in risk to public health from alternative lower levels as compared to the level
             of the current standard". This should perhaps be re-written to read "In staffs view, based
             on current evidence  there is appreciable uncertainty associated with drawing conclusions
             regarding whether there would be reductions in blood lead levels from alternative lower
             levels as compared to the level of the current standard
   •   I agree that the new science does not support lowering the NAAQS any lower than its current
       level(0.15ug/m3).

Specific comments on Chapter 4

   •   Page 4-34, line 13: The following statement should be edited to; "Factors affecting relationships
       between Pb in ambient air and Pb in blood at low exposures experienced in the general
       population today"
   •   Page 4-34, lines 19-21: This statement is profound, but as written is too vague to be appreciated
       by the average reader. I would recommend editing to be something along the lines of;
       "Apportionment of blood Pb levels with regard to exposure pathways, with particular focus on
       understanding exposure pathways and sources that cause the more elevated blood lead levels
       among children today. "
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I would like to start with a broad comment. I would hope we could see the United States moving to
eliminate a NAAQS for airborne lead. Now is not yet the time, but this should be part of the discussion
in the next round of review. If we eliminate lead in aviation gas and in wheel weights, we will have
removed the remaining major dispersed sources of lead other than resuspended soil. All of the remaining
point sources whether lead or other metal processing could be handled under HAPs rules. We will need
to eliminate these final  sources (aviation gasoline in particular), but then it is time for a serious
discussion of the further need for a lead NAAQS or whether the resources that currently go into this
process would be better used to address other widely dispersed pollutants from multiple sources such as
benzene or mercury.

Comments on Chapter 2

1. To what extent does the Panel agree that the most relevant information on emissions (section 2.1), air
quality (section 2.2.2), andPb concentrations in other media (section 2.3) is presented, and to what
extent is the information presented appropriately characterized and clearly communicated?

Staff has done a good job of summarizing the information from the ISA. The chapter provides a good
background to the discussions in the following chapters.

2. With regard to information on ambient Pb monitoring (section 2.2.1), to what extent is this
information appropriately characterized and clearly communicated?

The statistical justification for a never to be exceeded standard has never been presented. It is a hangover
from prior standards that does not  seem to have been adequately considered and reviewed. Given the
natural variability of the environment, this form of the standard represents a poor coupling of science to
reality and it would be much better if the form of the standard better reflected that control should be
based on the distribution of lead concentrations. Other forms of the standard can be set to be highly
restrictive on the range  of concentrations so as to provide the requisite protection of public health while
still recognizing the variable nature of the system. It would be useful to see an adequate statistical
discussion of the standard form and a justification that this form is appropriate to provide the protection
required.
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Comments on Chapter 5: Welfare Effects and Exposure/Risk Information

To what extent does the information in section 5.1 (Welfare Effects Information) capture and
appropriately characterize the key aspects of the evidence assessed and integrated in the ISA?

Section 5.1 does a good job of summarizing the evidence for ecological effects from the Third Draft
ISA. Each sub-section includes a brief description of our understanding in the 2006 Air Quality Control
Document, and commentary on how research undertaken since then has (or has not) changed our
understanding. The general conclusion is that recent research has added depth and nuance to our
understanding of the fate and transport of Pb in ecological systems, and to our understanding of effects
on organisms in terrestrial and aquatic ecosystems, but has not changed our understanding in a way that
merits reconsideration of relationships used to assess risk.

Two persistent themes in the ecological effects sections of the ISA and this PA document are: (1) it is
difficult to isolate the effects of air Pb on ecosystems from other sources, including "legacy" Pb
accumulated in soils and sediments; and (2) it is difficult to isolate the effects of Pb from other metals
and stressors. It is distressing to see the degree to which these explanations are used to justify no-action
conclusions. The threat of release of legacy Pb in soils and sediments, for example, whatever the source
(atmospheric or geologic), may necessitate a lower secondary air quality standard than would be
warranted in the absence of the legacy Pb.

The overall impression left in reading section 5.1 is that the authors are working very hard to justify a
no-action conclusion, even if that means forcing some round pegs into square holes.

With regard to the exposure and risk information in section 5.2 (Exposure and Risk Information), to
what extent is the information drawn from  the screening-level risk assessment in the last review
sufficiently characterized and clearly communicated? To what extent is the information appropriately
interpreted in light of the currently available information and for the purpose of assessing the adequacy
of the current standard?

The results of the 2006 risk and exposure assessment (REA) are summarized in section 5.2. The
summary is concise and clear, both in the explanation of the model employed and in the case studies
used in the assessment.

The interpretation of the results from the 2006 REA is appropriate insofar as  it re-states the conclusions
from that document, and there have been no fundamental changes to our understanding of key thresholds
or ecological receptors in the intervening years. However, after reading section 5.2 of the draft PA, one
is left with serious doubts about the value of the original work for the purpose of establishing a
secondary standard. Of four case studies employed, the results from two (the primary and secondary
smelter cases) are judged to me "not informative." The relevance of a third case study (non-urban near-
roadway conditions) is deemed "highly uncertain" due to the presence of legacy Pb in roadside soils.
The only case study that is  deemed relevant is the Hubbard Brook case, where ambient Pb
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and sediment data are judged to be inconclusive because of possible non-air sources to waters and
legacy Pb in sediments.

Overall, four of the five major efforts in the 2006 REA are judged to be of limited or no value for the
purposes of this policy assessment. Yet the Agency considers another REA unnecessary. Perhaps new
information since the 2006 REA does not warrant a new REA, but the apparent inadequacy of the 2006
REA would certainly seem to warrant another try.

Are the limitations and uncertainties in the exposure/risk information appropriately characterized and
considered in our interpretation of the information in the context of this current review?

As discussed above in my comments to the other charge questions, I believe that the limitations and
uncertainties presented in chapter 5 of the Draft PA are  somewhat overstated. Issues such as legacy Pb,
multi-stressor effects, and lab-to-field applicability do create uncertainty, but do not make data
uninformative.
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                                     Dr. Susan Korrick
Comments on Chapter 4

General Comment:

This Draft Policy Assessment (PA) is constrained by the absence of appreciable new observational and
experimental data that addresses, at least in part, limitations and uncertainties in the evidence that were
present at the time of the last update of the NAAQS for Pb. Assuming the approach used in the previous
PA was appropriate at the time, by default, it is reasonable to extend it now. However, this circumstance
underscores a fundamental dilemma. That is, until evidence is available to assess Pb exposure and health
risks related to air Pb levels reflecting the current standard, a substantive refinement and update of the
PA will not be possible. The obvious and most fundamental uncertainty underlying evaluation of this PA
is whether lowering the standard would (or would not) impact exposure risk. If lowering the standard
would be beneficial to BPb levels, then there would be potential for additional public health benefit from
a lower standard. However, such information is currently unknown.

1. "To what extent does the Panel agree with application of the evidence-based framework from the last
review, particularly with regard to consideration of the currently available information, and related
limitations and uncertainties, for air-to-blood ratios and C-R functions for IQ decrements in young
children?"

Application of the evidence-based framework from the last review is reasonable given that there is no
new information available since the last review that would improve our understanding of air-to-blood
ratios or C-R functions for IQ at low-level exposures nor that would address previously  identified
limitations and uncertainties in the available evidence. (See  my general comment above).

Uncertainties in evidence-based information (and exposure/risk estimates) are emphasized and
enumerated repeatedly throughout this Chapter. However, there are information sources that could be
used to address, at least qualitatively, some of these uncertainties. For example, elevated air lead levels
in the workplace result in relatively rapid increases in blood Pb levels. (Admittedly, extrapolation of the
occupational setting to low level exposures in pregnant women and children is uncertain and the timing
of achieving steady state Pb levels may be uncertain). Still, human epidemiologic data, in turn, support
Pb exposure over a trimester of pregnancy as being a potentially important determinant of subsequent
neurocognitive development. With such information, one could estimate that exposures  occurring over a
period of months, if not an even shorter period, are likely relevant for certain critical windows of child
development.

2. "What are the Panel's views on staffs interpretation of the exposure/risk information, and on staffs
conclusions that the information is generally supportive of conclusions drawn from the evidence-based
framework as to the adequacy of the current standard?" (no new REA, use REAfrom last review)

This interpretation is reasonable given that information  supporting the current standard is largely
unchanged since the current standard was issued. (See my general comment above).
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3. "What are the Panel's views on public health policy judgements that inform staffs preliminary
conclusions with regard to the adequacy of current standard and a lack of support for consideration of
potential alternative standards?"

Child IQ is the Pb-sensitive health endpoint on which this PA (and the previous one) is based. Thus, the
discussion of health policy judgements needs to be carefully considered in light of the fundamental and
far reaching public health value of childhood cognitive and neurobehavioral health. For example, the
2012 CDC update of recommendations regarding childhood lead poisoning includes acknowledgement
that there is no blood Pb level in childhood that is safe from potential neurocognitive toxicity. In this
context, defining the threshold for "unacceptable risks to public health" or "sufficient  public health
protection" is difficult. Indeed, such language with its implicit use of a threshold approach to a process
that presumably has no threshold may no longer be appropriate.

4. "In the Panel's view, does the discussion in section 4.3 provide an appropriate and sufficient rationale
to support staff s preliminary conclusion that it is appropriate to consider retaining the current standard
(including the indicator level, averaging time, and form) without revision?"

The short answer is "yes". However, it would be helpful if there was more description in the PA of the
data and rationale behind the averaging time and form of the current standard. In contrast, there is some
discussion in the PA regarding the choice of indicator level. (Also, see my general comment above).

5. "Does the Panel have any recommendations regarding additional interpretations and conclusions
based on the available information that would be appropriate for consideration beyond those discussed
in this chapter?"

I have no recommendations except to encourage development of research programs to address those
limitations and uncertainties in currently available evidence (and exposure/risk information) that are
critical to the identification of "sufficiently health protective" air Pb standards in the future.

For the purposes of policy and decision making, I recommend that key research priorities include studies
to elucidate: (1) the air-blood Pb relationship at low levels,  (2) sources (exposure pathways) contributing
to current population blood Pb levels,  especially in children, and (3) the relationship of Pb with
childhood neurocognitive function at current population exposure levels.
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                                    Dr. Michael Kosnett
1.1 concur with the key finding of draft Policy Assessment (PA) that the currently available information
supports a primary standard as protective as the current standard, and that it is appropriate to retain the
current standard without revision at this time.

2.1 agree that the adverse impact of low doses of lead on neurocognitive function and development in
children remains the most sensitive health endpoint, and that a NAAQS designed to protect against that
effect will offer satisfactory protection against the many other health impacts associated with lead
exposure. I agree with the findings in the draft PA that the scientific findings pertaining to air-to-blood
lead ratios and the concentration-response relationships between blood lead and childhood IQ that
formed the basis of the current NAAQS remain valid and are  consistent with current data. I further agree
with EPA's prior assessment that from a public health standpoint, "an IQ loss on the order of one to two
IQ points [should] be prevented in all but a small percentile of the population."

3.1 concur with the recommendations suggested in Section 4.4 "Key Uncertainties and Areas for Future
Research and Data Collection." I particularly agree with the recommendation in the last bulleted section
on page 4-35 that reads:

       An important aspect to this review is the relationship between ambient air Pb and outdoor dust
       and surface soil Pb concentrations, including the temporal dynamics of that relationship ....
       [emphasis added].

This research point is of particular interest because of the prominent contribution of past (as opposed to
recent) lead emissions to lead in soil and dust, and the significant contribution of dust and soil matrices
to the lead exposure of children.

For the typical American adult not subject to current or past point sources or to occupational lead
exposure, lead in the diet constitutes the largest fraction of daily lead exposure. Therefore, another
research question of considerable interest would investigate the source of contemporary dietary lead,
including the indirect contribution of historical air lead emissions (i.e. "legacy lead").

Additional research questions of considerable  importance include the following:

• The effect of contemporary lead exposure  (i.e. that resulting in blood lead concentrations on the order
of 5 ug/dL or lower) on the future risk of hypertension and cardiovascular morbidity and mortality, and
on age-related neurodegeneration.

• The role of "reverse causation" in the inverse association observed in some studies between low blood
lead concentration and  renal function (glomerular filtration rate).

• The extent to which product substitution, i.e. replacement of lead with less hazardous alternative
substances in contemporary commerce, may result in reduction of human lead exposure. EPA might
consider supporting studies on lead potentially undertaken by programs such as the Toxic Use Reduction
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4. The PA, particularly in Chapter 5, should acknowledge the contribution of lead in spent ammunition
to the critical load of lead in certain ecosystems, and the important contribution that this source has on
certain ecological receptors such as raptors and other large birds. Recent evidence confirms that these
species are among the most heavily lead poisoned, sometimes to the point of death (Watson RT, Fuller
M, Pokras M et al [eds] Ingestion of Lead from Spent Ammunition: Implications for Wildlife and
Humans. Peregrine Fund: Boise, ID, 2009). The incremental contribution of air Pb to the food chain and
ecosystem of fauna impacted by spent Pb ammunition therefore takes on considerable importance.

5. The following statements in the draft PA should be subject to revision:

Page 3-2, Line 15 referring to distribution of lead from bone to blood, includes the sentence: "Changes
in Pb exposure circumstances can also influence these exchanges, e.g., substantial reductions in
exposure levels contribute to increased release of Pb from the bone into the blood (ISA, section 4.3.5)."
This sentence should be revised, as it  appears to incorrectly characterize the information in section 4.3.5
of the ISA. A reduction in external lead exposure  does not, from a pharmacodynamic standpoint, induce
an increase in the release of lead from bone. In the context of the paragraph, the intended point could be
expressed as follows: "When there are substantial reductions in external Pb exposure, the relative
contribution of Pb from bone to the concentration of Pb in blood increases."

Page 3-5, line 29 to Page 3-6, line 9: The italicized sentence in this paragraph, reproduced  below, should
be revised to improve  clarity:

       The response of adult blood Pb levels to appreciable changes in exposure circumstances is
       generally slower than that of blood Pb levels in young children. For example, simulations using
       biokinetic models indicate that blood Pb levels in adults achieve a new quasi-steady state within
       75-100 days (approximately 3-4 times the blood elimination half-life) subsequent to abrupt
       increases in Pb intake (ISA, section 4.3.5.2); similar models indicate a much quicker response of
       blood Pb levels in children both with regard to abrupt increases and reductions in Pb  exposure
       (ISA,  section 4.3.5.1). The response in young children may reflect their  much more labile bone
      pool associated with the rapid turnover of bone mineral in response to their rapid growth rates
       (ISA, section 4.3.5). As a result of these physiological processes in young children, their blood
       Pb levels tend to more quickly reflect changes in their total body burden (associated with their
       shorter exposure history), and  can also reflect changes in recent exposures (ISA, section 4.3.5).

Instead of the italicized sentence above, substitution of a sentence such as the following might enhance
clarity: "Because the skeletal compartment of Pb is relatively smaller and subject to more rapid turnover
in children compared to adults, the blood Pb concentration of children is more reflective of their recent
external exposure."
Page 3-24, footnote 22. The units for blood lead cited here should be "ug/dL", not "ug/m3".

Page 4-24, footnote 9. This footnote, reproduced below in its current form, could be editorially revised
to improve clarity. This might be accomplished by rewriting it  as two shorter sentences, instead of the
current long sentence:

       "We note that the value of the upper bound is influenced by risk associated with exposure
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potential to contribute to overestimation of the upper bound with air quality scenarios involving
air Pb levels below current conditions for the study area (see sections 3.4.4 and 3.4.7 above)."
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                                     Dr. Roman Lanno
The Policy Assessment document (did not read chapters 3 and 4) is well written and summarizes
evidence justifying retaining the current secondary standard without revision. Retaining the current
standard is warranted given the lack of significant additional data that has become available since the
last AQCD. The US EPA nicely describes that the new data adds to an existing database, refines some
key concepts (e.g., bioavailability, critical loads), but is not yet ready for application in the development
and revision of a new secondary standard. Additionally, uncertainties in Pb exposure/risk are addressed.
The magnitude of the contribution of Pb from air to the total environmental Pb load and the fate and
distribution of airborne Pb to other environmental media is discussed. Figure 1-1 provides a nice
backdrop for discussing these issues. The confounding effects of other sources of Pb (e.g., surface runoff
to waters near industries) and the "challenge of disentangling of atmospheric deposition contributions
from those associated with surface runoff are discussed. Uncertainties related to screening values used
in the risk assessment are also discussed.

Page 2-1, line 11 - change "depending on their size" to "depending on particle size"
Page 2-20, lines 26 and 27 - change "adsorption" to "absorption"
Page 2-38, line 5 - What is meant by "substantially"? Is this a statistically significant decrease and if so,
by how much? Half, ten-fold? Specifics would help here.
Page 2-40, line 7 - remove underscore in 20 ug/kg
Page 2-40, line 12 - Should this be Figure 2-14, not 2-16?
Page 2-41 - Figure 2-14 shows very nicely the drop in environmental Pb due to the phasing out of
leaded gasoline

Chapter 2 provides an excellent summary of temporal trends in Pb exposure, especially the influence of
removing Pb from automotive gasoline.
Comments on Chapter 5 - Welfare Effects and Exposure/Risk Information

To what extent does the information in section 5.1 (Welfare Effects Information) capture and
appropriately characterize the key aspects of the evidence assessed and integrated in the ISA?

Section 5.1 adequately summarizes the key aspects of evidence assessed and integrated in the ISA.

With regard to the exposure and risk information in section 5.2 (Exposure and Risk Information), to
what extent is the information drawn from the screening-level risk assessment in the last review
sufficiently characterized and clearly communicated? To what extent is the information appropriately
interpreted in light of the currently available information and for the purpose of assessing the adequacy
of the current standard?

The information in section 5.2 adequately integrates and communicates the information from the
screening-level risk assessment and provides an appropriate interpretation and decision on the adequacy
of the current secondary standard.
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Are the limitations and uncertainties in the exposure/risk information appropriately characterized and
considered in our interpretation of the information in the context of this current review?

The limitations and uncertainties of both the data and the screening levels used in risk assessment of
case studies are adequately discussed.

Page 5-2, lines 28-31 - another major issue is that Pb rarely occurs alone but in mixtures with other
metals
Pages 5-8 and 5-9, lines 35 and 1 - in addition to the issue of single species toxicity tests not capturing
the complexity of bioavailability in natural systems, there is a lack to models that integrate
bioavailability information that would allow prediction of toxicity among soils varying in physical and
chemical characteristics
Page 5-10, line 7 - If this data is based only upon nominal concentrations, then it should only be
considered as secondary data and should be used very cautiously in a PA document. I would suggest
omitting it, unless there are actual measurements of Pb in the test medium.
Page 5-15, line 5, end of line - change "summarizes" to "summarizing"
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                                   Mr. Richard L. Poirot
Comments on Chapter 2

To what extent does the Panel agree that the most relevant information on emissions (section 2.1), air
quality (section 2.2.2), andPb concentrations in other media (section 2.3) is presented, and to what
extent is the information presented appropriately characterized and clearly communicated?

With a few minor exceptions (see specific comments) the information on Pb emissions, air quality and
concentrations in other media is appropriately characterized and clearly presented. Historical  and recent
(2008) emissions data are summarized quantitatively in clear charts and tables, with additional detail on
the 2008 NEI inventory data sources and limitations provided in Appendix 2A. There are also some
(qualitative) discussions and an informative Appendix (2B) on recent regulatory actions, indicating that
current emissions have declined since 2008, with additional reductions pending. In a future PAD, it
would be useful if quantitative estimates of some of these emissions reductions could be presented.

The Information on ambient air concentrations (through 2011) is also clearly presented in maps, charts
and in a detailed appendix (2D). There are more recent data (including near airports) that were initiated
following the previous Pb NAAQS review, and which would be informative for the current Pb NAAQS
review, as well as for the separate Section 231  avgas review. It would be useful if some of these more
recent data can be presented in (or as a supplement to) the next Pb PAD. While it may take 3-years of
data to calculate an official design value, an exceedance of the Pb NAAQS and other potentially useful
information can be provided by as few as 3 months of new data.

The Information on Pb concentrations in other media is clearly presented. The sections (2.3.2.1 and
2.3.2.2) on indoor and outdoor dust (and air contributions to) are highly relevant to exposure
assessments and would benefit from some added discussion (also missing in the ISA) of how dust Pb
concentration, loading, and loading rates are measured. In particular, information relating to the
differences in particle sizes in dust samples and ambient air samples would be helpful. Information on
spatial gradients of Pb concentrations in soil, sediments or biota in the vicinity of large (current or
former) sources could also be informative for conducting exposure assessments or for siting monitors.

With regard to information on ambient Pb monitoring (section 2.2.1), to what extent is this information
appropriately characterized and clearly communicated?

The information on ambient Pb monitoring is appropriately characterized and clearly communicated. It
is understood that we are "stuck" with the Hi-Vol  TSP sampler as an imperfect historical artifact, and
that there is not time to develop and fully test alternative samplers that would consistently capture
particles greater than 10 microns with appropriate collection efficiencies and size ranges under varying
wind speeds and directions.  The draft PAD notes that the Agency expects a new, improved sampler to
be "available for consideration in a future review". Given that the Agency had also expressed an interest
in developing an alternative "TSP" sampler (low-volume TSP FRM) in the previous 2008 NAAQS
revision, it would be desirable at some point to see a commitment to expend the resources needed to
have an alternative sampler  "available for consideration in the next Pb NAAQS review".
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Toward this goal, it would also be useful to see some discussion indicating what the desirable cut size
characteristics of an alternative sampler might be. Information provided in the 3r  draft ISA could be
cited here, for example (page 3-67) of the ISA: "The relevant particle size distribution for ambient
sampling is smaller than the size distribution of the settled dust. Particles  larger than about 20 um are
generally considered too large to be transported for more than a few seconds under typical conditions...
It follows that 15 to 20 um may be a practical limit for both good sampling data quality and
representative sampling in a limited area."

Along similar lines, the term TSP is used broadly and imprecisely to mean several different things -
including what the  Hi-Vol collects, what other currently available so-called TSP samplers collect, and
what a future alternative TSP sampler might collect (all of which differ from each other). Development
and usage of more precise terminology could be helpful. No wonder our sampling technology remains
so imprecise...

Specific Comments

P 2-1, line 11: Change "their" to "particle", or add "particles" after "Pb" in line 10.

P 2-2, lines 13,14: It might be helpful to provide a few examples here of the recent or pending Pb
emissions reductions, or at least a pointer to Appendix 2B.

P 2-3, lines 13 and  generally in this paragraph: Since you have previously emphasized the considerable
emissions reductions since the 2008 NEI, why not use the past tense consistently (as in the last sentence
of this paragraph)., or ".. .largest source sector emitting Pb  into the atmosphere in 2008 was aviation
gasoline...", etc.

P 2-3, line 14: A minor point, but combining mining and metal working into a single category seems a
bit odd, and makes for an  awkward following sentence, in which fuel combustion is identified as the
second largest source category. I wonder if you might instead say  something like "Following avgas,
which accounted for almost 60% of 2008 Pb emissions, the general metal working and mining, fuel
combustion and miscellaneous  source categories  each contributed 10% to 15% of the 2008 total."

P 2-5, line 13: Would it be possible to provide some indication of how large these pending emissions
reductions will be?

P 2-6, lines 15-28:  This separate CAA Section 231  review process is interesting and unusual, and would
seem to emphasize the importance of the recently initiated airport Pb monitoring. If any exceedances
were observed in that monitoring (and/or given the results of the recent Miranda et al. (2011) study), it
would seem impossible for EPA to conclude that avgas could not be reasonably anticipated to endanger
public health. Hopefully it will be possible for EPA to report any available results from the recent airport
monitoring in a subsequent PAD.

       Miranda, M.L., R. Anthopolos, and  D. Hastings (2011) A Geospatial Analysis of the Effects of
       Aviation Gasoline on Childhood Blood Lead Levels, Environmental Health Perspectives  119: #
       10,  1513-1516.
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P 2-7: lines 3-8: Could you provide a quantitative indication of the reduction (in tons or %) of NASCAR
Pb emissions that have resulted from switching to unleaded fuels in the "major" race series? Is there
some schedule for elimination of Pb fuels for the remaining "minor" race series?

P 2-7, lines 21  and 28: Can you provide averaging times for these concentrations?

P 2-7, line 33: You could add "historical" before "sources".

P 2-11: There seems to be a slight discrepancy (airport monitoring sites in TX) between the airport
monitors indicated in Figure 2-2 and in Figure 2.4. Remind me why airport monitoring is not required at
airports emitting > 1 ton?

P 2-12, line 15: Seeing the words "accessible" and "AQS" in the same sentence always brings a smile.

P 2-13, line 20: Has any  such additional monitoring been required by the Regional Administrators?

P 2-16, lines 1-3: But presumably some airport sites were operational on or before 12/27/11 and have
now collected a year - or at least multiple 3-month periods - of data, which would be of great interest to
see in the next PAD.

P 2-16, Figure 2-4: As noted previously, the airport monitor in eastern TX in Fig. 2-4 is not indicated in
Fig. 2-2,  and a northern TX airport monitor in Fig 2-2 is not indicated in Fig. 2-4.

P 2-18, line 3: You could add "currently" before "quantified"  since IMPROVE Pb analysis was
conducted by PIXE prior to 6/1/92.

P 2-18, lines 4-5: The VIEWS reference is currently functional.  However VIEWS is no longer funded or
updated (except for the IMPROVE database).  To assure future functionality, you could change "VIEWS
website" and link to "FED website (http://views.cira.colostate.edu/fed/)".

P 2-18, line 5: You could add "currently" before "operated" since IMPROVE did not operate on a l-in-3
day schedule prior to 2000.

P 2-18, lines 7-13: To fix several small inaccuracies, I suggest replacing these 3 sentences with: "The
original IMPROVE network began sampling in 1988, with 36 monitors located  in or near "Class I"
federal areas (including National Parks and Wilderness Areas, which are afforded special visibility
protection under the Clean Air Act). The network underwent major expansions in in the early 1990s and
2000s,  and currently includes 110 sites located in or near Class I visibility areas, virtually all of these
being rural. Approximately 60 additional "IMPROVE protocol" sites at various urban and rural
locations, requested and funded by various parties, have also been included as part of the IMPROVE
network (Figure 2-6)."

P 2-19, line 17: As noted in comments on the 3rd draft ISA, I think the  term "TSP" is vaguely defined,
and used to mean many different things. In this case an "alternative TSP" sampler would not collect the
same TSP as the current "Pb-TSP" FRM sampler. If it did there would be no need for it.  To clarify the
intended meaning, I suggest adding a text box with wording something like: TSP is an acronym for
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term TSP to mean "particles with the size characteristics of those collected by the high volume (Hi Vol)
TSP sampler" and Pb-TSP to mean "Pb in particles collected by the Hi Vol TSP sampler". When
referring to alternative existing or future samplers with an upper 50% particle cut size larger than 10
microns, but not identical to the Hi Vol TSP sampler, we use the term "TSP" in quotes.
P 2-20, line 7, or elsewhere: This might be an appropriate place to add discussion similar to that recently
added to the ISA suggesting that there is some convergence between the practical limits on largest
particle cut sizes for size-selective sample technologies and the upper size limits for spatially
representative sampling of "airborne" particles that remain suspended for more than a few seconds. For
example on page 3-67 of the ISA:

       The relevant particle size distribution for ambient sampling is smaller than the size distribution
       of the settled dust. Particles larger than about 20 um are generally considered too large to be
       transported for more than a few seconds  under typical conditions... It follows that 15 to 20 um
       may be a practical limit for both good sampling data quality and representative sampling in a
       limited area.

P 2-22, lines 18-21 and 32-33: Hopefully some of this new data can be presented in the next PAD.
While 3 years of data may be needed to develop complete design values for the new monitors,
exceedances of the NAAQS could be observed with as few as 3 months of data - and would be
informative to see as (or if) they occur.

P 2-24, Figure 2-8: Use of a lower scale (max of 1 ug/m3) would help, if feasible.

P 2-28, lines 6, 7, and Figures 2-11 to 2-13: Could "previous source-oriented sites" be defined?
Assuming this means "sites near sources which have shut down", the implication is that this second
highest concentration category (where it appears some sites are approaching the NAAQS) would seem
to be heavily influenced by fugitive emissions of historically deposited Pb. Or is it possible this category
includes Pb sources that have changed  operations  or controlled emissions below some threshold level?
Could the category include sources that were shut down during the 2009-2011 period?

Assuming this category does represent sites where former Pb sources have shut down - and that
therefore resuspension of historically deposited Pb is a likely cause of the relatively high concentrations
- it could be informative to report any observed changes over time for sites in this category. It would be
important to know if the availability of historically deposited Pb remains constant or diminishes over
time.

P 2-28, line 9: Switch "additional" and "indicate".

P 2-28, line 15:  Change "Pb" to "Pb-TSP".

P 3-34, line 1: Delete the "0" before "air".

P 3-34, line 2: Change "at" to "near".

P 3-34, line 5: Maybe change "arises" to "originates" to make it clear you're not necessarily talking
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P 3-35, line 1: I must be missing something, but can't understand how controls could reduce ambient
concentrations by 75%, but only reduce outdoor dust concentrations and loading rate by 50% - unless
maybe dust concentration and loading rate were "measured" by methods that included larger particles
(from resuspension of historical Pb deposits) than the ambient air sampling measured.

P 3-36. Line 4: Add "Pb" before "occurring".

P 2-36, line 9: You could add "spatial patterns and" before "documented reductions".

P 2-37, lines 5-27: This is a nice summary, but the little bit of discussion of rates of soil Pb decline as a
function of distance from sources like roadways or smelters reminds me that the general topic of Pb
gradients (soil, dust, or ambient air concentration) near sources, is not much discussed in the PAD or
ISA - but could be useful in terms of exposure assessments, monitor siting, etc. This is also a subject
area where some modeling - evaluating concentration and deposition patterns of different particle sizes
- could be informative. Maybe next review cycle...

P 2-38, line 12:  Can you report how far from the road this "greater distance" was?
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Comments on Executive Summary and Chapter 1 (Introduction)

Does the Panel find the introductory and background material, including that pertaining to previous
reviews of the Pb standard and the scope of the current review to be appropriately characterized and
clearly communicated?

Yes, this text adequately provides the reader with a clear, stand-alone basis to make the decision to
retain or revise the current standard. The regulatory background material and the review of the lead
pathways in Chapter 1 are satisfactory and sufficient.

Some small additional comments:

On page ES-1 line 25, why not add for emphasis ...This approach was taken to aid in the decision to
retain or revise the current standards.

              line 311 concur that retaining the current air standard makes sense, because air lead is
not the problem now. Even if we were to move the standard to zero, the response in blood lead levels
would be very small, given the other sources of lead exposure.

In Chapter 2 page 2-8 line 22 perhaps add....and these are expected to decrease further with the passage
of time.
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                                   Dr. Ian von Lindern
Comments on the Introduction (Chapter 1)

This chapter provides context for the review, including the background of past reviews, as well as the
scope for the current review. This includes discussion of fate and multimedia pathways of ambient air
Pb and other nonair sources ofPb in the environment.

Does the Panel find the introductory and background material, including that pertaining to previous
reviews of the Pb standard and the scope of the current review to be appropriately characterized and
clearly communicated?

The Introduction provides a clear and concise description of the new Integrated Science
Assessment/Risk and Exposure Assessment/Policy Assessment (ISA/REA/PA) process; providing the
purpose, background, history, and scope of the review and summary of the document's organization and
structure. It is well written and does  avoid excessive jargon, so as to be readable and understandable to a
general audience.

However, I believe it overdoes the conclusion that no information justifying reconsideration of the
NAAQS has accumulated in the last five years, without caveats to convey the  level of uncertainty and
lack of information in some areas important to consider in the formulation of US lead regulatory policy.

PURPOSE AND SCOPE: The PA does indicate one purpose is to "bridge the  gap" between the
scientific assessments in the ISA and REA, but a concise description and purpose and scope of the ISA
and REA would be helpful. With regard to purpose, my understanding in reading the PA, is that analysis
and synthesis are limited to the question as to whether any information has accumulated in the previous
5 years that would prompt reconsideration of the primary and secondary NAAQS; and that, in turn,  is
limited to indicator, averaging time,  form and level.

The general conclusion is that no new information has surfaced through the ISA process that would
prompt reconsideration of the indicator, averaging time, form and level. I would generally agree with
that conclusion.

However, this conclusion should be  conveyed with an assessment of the adequacy of the old
information. With respect to health effects, large volumes of new information  have come forward to
supplement an already rich database. However, for other areas there are significant unknowns and
uncertainties associated with the lack of information available for the last review. Those inadequacies
and uncertainties should be conveyed to policy makers. A finding that no new data have come forward
to assist in reviewing the previous decision based on a paucity of information - sends a different
message to policy evaluators, than stating that the new studies don't refute the analysis of the existing
database.

With regard to scope, the PA uses the term to accentuate that lead is a multimedia contaminant and the
scope of the document goes beyond  air. The ISA and REA extend to other media that are impacted by or
impact air lead, and project and integrate the effect of lead exposures from other media on human and
ecological receptors. This is appropriate and necessary to effectively evaluate the role and impact of air

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lead regulation and is accomplished in the context of the other media. Apparently, this is in contrast to
other priority pollutants as the PA notes.

However, with respect to subject area and geography, the ISA and PA are limited in scope, both in
contrast to the former CD/ Staff Paper process; and with respect to the potential impacts of policy
decisions to other components of the environment and beyond the US. These limitations are not
conveyed in the PA.

With regard to the ISA, it is not clear in the PA that the  ISA is limited only to exposures and data
sources considered currently relevant to the US population. And that the significance of new studies is
assessed only as to how these relate to conclusions drawn in the past review; and then only to studies in
the peer reviewed literature. This has resulted in an ISA that is more than 70% dedicated to toxicology,
health effects, bio-kinetics, and causal determinations. These are areas that were data rich in the last
review, and continue to produce volumes of new peer reviewed information. In contrast, in areas where
the least is known and EPA relies on past findings, uncertainty is becoming greater as the existing
information becomes outdated; and some areas important to policy determinations have been eliminated
from the review and no information is assessed or conveyed.

The areas of great uncertainty include any consideration of information relative to the production, use,
and disposition of lead in the US. The last CD noted that lead use in the US by 2006 was nearing the
record levels observed during the tetra-ethyl lead gasoline-additive years. Demand for lead for in
batteries and electronics is ever increasing. Lead prices have been at record highs despite the global
recession. Where the previous CD contained and acknowledged inadequate data on production, use, and
disposition of lead in the US - the ISA doesn't mention it, not even  as background discussion.

With regard to the REA, the purpose is not described in the PA; but  there is an indication that both the
staff and CASAC felt a new REA was not warranted. However, the PA fails to note that the 2006-8
REA was less than ideal. The 2006-8 REA was based on modeling exercises; that necessarily had high
levels of uncertainty, due to the paucity of production, monitoring and emissions data. As no potentially
useful new model input data were identified in the staff literature search in 2010-11, attempting a new
REA would have been superfluous. The policy-makers and evaluators should be informed of this lack of
data, levels of uncertainty, and decreasing confidence that the REA is reflective of current conditions.
Failure to distinguish between no data and supportive data in these decisions could perpetuate the use of
these outdated analyses 5, 10, 15 etc. years in future reviews.

In the previous ISA Draft review, I offered comments regarding the  change in procedures from
developing CDs and Staff Papers to the current ISA/REA/PA. My opinion was, and remains, that this
results  in insular and less comprehensive review process. In that regard, the historic discussion fails to
note that previous reviews were not so limited, and that EPA policy  makers and policy  critics were
provided with scientifically vetted information regarding the role of lead in US commerce, and data
obtained and analyzed from other EPA Offices to use in effecting more comprehensive and holistic
policy. A 1990 Staff Paper reviewed by CASAC specifically addressed the consistency and impacts of
lead regulation across the EPA and other agencies, resulting in a comprehensive inter-agency policy. No
such communication is evident in the new process.

The failure to collect and or assess information relative to the production, use and disposition of lead in
US commerce, and the decision to exclude globally representative exposures, precludes the Agency

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from considering the effects of policy decisions in media other than air, and beyond the boundaries of
the US.

As a result, it is inaccurate to indicate that no new information has accrued relevant to the impact of US
air lead policy on exposures, health effects, and health and economic damage outside the US. It is more
accurate to say that new ISA/PA process excludes consideration of impacts on populations outside the
US: that these studies, databases, and other potentially pertinent information was not sought assessed,
nor reported on by the Agency; and that this is a significant change from previous NAAQS reviews.

It would be more comforting to know that information relevant to consideration of the potential harm
done overseas by US policy with regard to lead in the air, other media and commerce regulated by the
EPA is being vetted, and used somewhere within the Agency to acknowledge or alleviate global
suffering.

Historically Emitted Lead is given special consideration in both the ISA and the PA as a residual
contaminant in various media, a source of potential emissions, a potential steady-state component of
different ecosystems, and a continuing exposure to humans. There is considerable discussion dedicated
to the reduction of lead in air and other media in the US over the last four decades.

The analysis notes significant reductions and attributes the decline to various factors. Most of the decline
in emissions and ambient air exposures was achieved through the elimination of tetra-ethyl lead gasoline
additives. Another major component was substantial decreases in emissions from primary and secondary
smelters, and metals processing industries. In the case of gasoline-related emissions, these ceased and
other non-lead products were substituted in commerce. This resulted in decreased lead emissions and
health and environmental effects in both the US and globally.

In the case of lead production and secondary recovery, however, this production and recovery were
exported overseas. The ISA analyses extensively noted the declines in air lead concentrations and past
accumulations in soils, sediments and other sinks. However, there is no mention, consideration or
assessment of the impact of the "avoided emissions" in their new locales, much of which may be
sequestered in repositories in the US, or exported and released in other countries. The ISA and PA did
note that these excessive emissions in Asia are detectable in the US, and that contaminated cocoa beans
have been observed from Africa, but not at health significant concentrations.

However, in the developing world, these emissions are of considerable significance and, too often, have
tragic health consequences. Much of the lead produced in these countries, finds its way to US
consumers, is eventually disposed of back to the developing countries: setting up a recycling of
exposure. It seems that EPA policy makers should be made aware that these conditions result from the
same policy decisions so favorable to US population and the environment if for no other reason than to
convey the findings to other regulatory or legislative functionaries.
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                                   Dr. Gail Wasserman


Comments on Chapter 3

How well do sections here map onto conclusions and evidence of ISA?

Sections on both "Public Health Implications and At-Risk Populations" and "Concentration response
functions for child IQ decrements" are clearly written, and these sections maps well onto the information
presented in the ISA.

Smaller edits

P3-28 L 22 "behavioral [and] physiological factors"
P 3-31 L 19. Differences between black and white individual betoken racial, and not ethnic
backgrounds. Differences across subgroups of Hispanics would be "ethnic" differences. The most
general way to aggregate these comparisons would be to refer to "different racial or ethnic groups" in L
19.
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                                  Dr. Michael Weitzman


Comments on Chapter 3 - Health Effects and Exposure/Risk Information

In my opinion this is an extremely good chapter, and my comments and suggestions are largely editorial
or minor in nature.

3-1, line 17 and 18: should the order be changed to "gastrointestinal tract and the respiratory system" as
most absorption is via the GI tract although the focus of our work is on ambient air lead?

3-1, line 19-21: This sentence, I believe, is unclear.

3-2, line 19: substitute "one" for "a"

3-2, line 28: I suggest changing "current maternal exposure" to ".. .to exogenous sources of lead during
pregnancy."

3-2, line 31: after "umbilical cord" change wording to "which is representative of newborn blood lead
levels"

3-3, line 16: do we know when blood lead levels begin to rise in infancy.. .1 believe it is usually stated
that they begin to rise around age 6 months but I am not sure of this.

3-3, line 24: can we  cite specific national, i.e. CDC, HUD, EPA, and international health agencies ?

3-41 have difficulty understanding Figure 3-1

3-5, line 21:1 suggest adding "or lead contaminated soil"

3-8, line 14:1 suggest adding "their more rapid respiratory rates

3-8, line 27: Mention is made of Table 3-1,1 believe the Table should be moved up several pages.

3-14, line 10: Is it possible to estimate the % of blood lead from air by age or to mention that this is not
possible to do because of multiple variables, including the intensity of exposure to other sources?

3-14, line 27: I suggest adding "strengthens and extends" conclusions	

3-16, line 13: do we intentionally mean "is associated with" here or should it be "causes?"

3-21 Under Measure some are bolded and others are not bolded—it is unclear to me is this  is due to
footnote C Studies discussed in ISA....
3-23, line 16:1 suggest changing "One exception" to "In addition, one..."

3-27, line 5:1 suggest adding after population IQ "and neurocognitive and behavioral"


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3-27, line 19: do we mean to say "associated with" or should it be "causes?"

3-29: should we mention very low birth weight, in utero cocaine, heroin, alcohol or tobacco exposure, or
head trauma as examples of potentially vulnerable populations, or populations for which we currently
have no data regarding the possibility of heightened vulnerability?
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