June 8, 2000

EPA-SAB-RAC-00-010

Honorable Carol M. Browner
Administrator
U.S. Environmental Protection Agency
1200 Pennsylvania Avenue, NW
Washington, DC 20460

              Re:    An SAB Report: Assessment of Risks from Radon in Homes

Dear Ms. Browner:

       At the request of Mr. Stephen B. Page, Director of the Office of Radiation and Indoor Air
(ORIA), the Radiation Advisory Committee (RAC) of the Science Advisory Board (SAB) reviewed
ORIA's draft document titled "Assessment of Risks from Radon in Homes" (October, 1999). The
RAC previously reviewed ORIA's methodology described in an ORIA "White Paper". The RAC's
recommendations were transmitted to ORIA in a July 1999 SAB Advisory: Assessing Risks from
Indoor Radon (EPA-SAB-RAC-ADV-99-10).

       The RAC held a public meeting in Washington DC on November 16-18, 1999 at which it was
briefed by, and had technical discussions with, ORIA staff and conducted writing sessions, producing a
draft report.  The report addressed the charge questions as well as other issues beyond the charge
identified during the public meetings.

       The RAC found the ORIA draft document to be generally well-written and documented and
was pleased to note that ORIA took into account the advice contained in its July 1999 Advisory.  The
RAC commends the authors of the draft ORIA document for applying and extending the risk
assessment methodology contained in the National Academy of Sciences (NAS) Biological Effects of
Ionizing Radiation Committee report (BEIR VT) to produce a credible model for use by the
Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) in its efforts to inform and protect the public with regard to the
harmful effects of radon decay products indoors.

       The RAC responses to the specific charge questions posed by ORIA are as follows:

       a)     Question 1:  Are the methodology and overall approach for assessing risks from radon
              in homes adequate?

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              The RAC found that, in general, the EPA's methodology and overall approach for
              assessing risk from radon in homes is adequate.  The scaled concentration (SC) model
              derived by ORIA is a reasonable adaptation of the models developed by the BEIR VI
              Committee.  However, the document does not adequately describe the method and
              justification for the method used in deriving the SC model. These methods need to be
              transparent in order to be credible to the potential model users.

       b)     Question 2:  Are the assumptions behind the calculations appropriate?

              In general, the assumptions used by ORIA in the calculations are appropriate.
              However, ORIA's discussion regarding the effect of smoking on radon risk should be
              clarified.  ORIA should further consider the issues of changes in smoking prevalence
              and the impacts of other lung carcinogens  on risk.

       c)     Question 3:  Have the limitations and uncertainties in the assessment been adequately
              described?

              The RAC was pleased that ORIA expanded the uncertainty analysis as was
              recommended in the "RAC White Paper"  Advisory. However, the ORIA assessment
              did not adequately take into account the model uncertainties.  In addition, the
              assessment should discuss biologically based models as well as other statistical methods
              that could be applied to the epidemiologic data to evaluate risks.

       The RAC also addressed some issues beyond the charge, related primarily to enhancing the
potential usefulness of the ORIA risk assessments for a wide variety  of applications. The RAC
continues to urge ORIA to make the model more accessible and transparent through an expanded
discussion of the derivation of the SC model. A discussion of alternative models would improve the
risk assessment document.

       The RAC compliments ORIA for its efforts in adapting and enhancing the BEIR VI models for
use in estimating risks from radon and its decay products.  This is a very complex issue and EPA's
methodology is likely to receive careful scrutiny particularly since the lung cancer risk estimates derived
using the SC model are approximately double the previous estimates. The ORIA document is credible
and, in general, well done.

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       The RAC appreciates the opportunity to provide this review to you and we hope that it will be
helpful.  We look forward to the response of the Assistant Administrator for Air and Radiation to the
comments and recommendations in this report.

                            Sincerely,

       /s/                                       /s/

Dr. Morton Lippman, Interim Chair           Dr. Janet A. Johnson, Chair
Science Advisory Board                    Radiation Advisory Committee
                                          Science Advisory Board

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                                      ABSTRACT
       Since radon is the principal contributor to effective dose to members of the general public from
background radiation, the U. S. Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) has devoted substantial
consideration to quantifying the risks from radon in homes.  EPA has commissioned several studies to
develop models and risk estimates based on epidemiologic data from underground miners.

       The Office of Radiation and Indoor Air (ORIA) derived a risk model for residential exposures
based on the models developed by the National Academy of Sciences (NAS) Biological Effects of
Ionizing Radiation (BEIR) Committee. The Radiation Advisory Committee (RAC) of the Science
Advisory Board (SAB) reviewed the EPA model and the methods of estimating lung cancer risk from
exposure to radon indoors.  The RAC agrees with ORIA's methodology in general. However, ORIA
did not adequately address the uncertainties in the risk estimates, in particular, model uncertainty.

       The RAC recommends that ORIA address, at least qualitatively, biologically-based models and
models which would result from application of alternate statistical methodology to the miner data. In
addition, since a wide variety of users will apply the ORIA point risk estimates to specific situations,
ORIA needs to make sure its methodology, assumptions, and the limitations of the model used are
transparent. Lack of understanding of the uncertainties in the assessment could result in misuse of the
risk estimates.
KEYWORDS: Cancer Risks, Indoor Radon Exposures, Radon Models, Radon Risk

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                   U.S. ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION AGENCY
                             SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD
                        RADIATION ADVISORY COMMITTEE
                                     FYOO ROSTER
CHAIR
Dr. Janet Johnson, Shepherd Miller, Inc., Ft. Collins, CO

MEMBERS
Dr. Lynn R. Anspaugh, University of Utah, Salt Lake City, UT1

Dr. Vicki M. Bier, University of Wisconsin, Madison, WI

Dr. Bruce Boecker, Lovelace Respiratory Research Institute, Albuquerque, NM2

Dr. Stephen L. Brown ,R2C2 Risks of Radiation & Chemical Compounds, Oakland, CA

Dr. Gilles Bussod, Los Alamos National Laboratory, Los Alamos, NM

Dr. Thomas F. Gesell,  Idaho State University, Pocatello, ID

Dr. Jill Lipoti, New Jersey Dept. Of Environmental Protection,  Trenton, NJ

Dr. Ellen Mangione, Colorado Department of Public Health and Environment, Denver, CO

Dr. John W. Poston, Sr., Texas A&M University, College Station, TX3

Dr. Genevieve S. Roessler, Radiation Consultant, Elysian, MN

Environmental Health  Committee Liaison
Dr. David G. Hoel, Medical University of South Carolina, Charleston, SC

CONSULTANTS
Dr. Richard W. Hornung, Institute for Health Policy and Health Services Research, University of
       Cincinnati, Cincinnati, OH1
             Did not attend the meeting of November 14-16, 1999, but participated in the review.

             Did not attend meeting of November 14-16, 1999, due to a schedule conflict.

             Did not attend the meeting of November 14-16, 1999, due to illness.
                                           Ill

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Dr. Bobby R. Scott, Lovelace Respiratory Research Institute, Albuquerque, NM
SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD STAFF
Dr. K. Jack Kooyoomjian, Designated Federal Officer, Science Advisory Board (1400A), US EPA,
       1200 Pennsylvania Avenue, NW, Washington, DC 20460

Ms. Melanie Medina-Metzger, Designated Federal Officer, Science Advisory Board (1400A), US
       EPA, 1200 Pennsylvania Avenue, NW, Washington, DC 20460

Ms. Diana L. Pozun, Management Assistant, Science Advisory Board, USEPA (1400A), US EPA,
       1200 Pennsylvania Avenue, NW, Washington, DC 20460
                                         IV

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                             TABLE OF CONTENTS
1.  EXECUTIVE SUMMARY  	1
       1.1    Question #1:  Are the methodology and overall approach for assessing risks
             from radon in homes adequate?  	2
       1.2    Question #2:  Are the assumptions behind the calculations appropriate?	2
       1.3    Question #3:  Have the limitations and uncertainties in the assessment been adequately
             described?	2
       1.4    Issues beyond the charge	2

2.  INTRODUCTION	4
       2.1 Background 	5
       2.2 Charge	5

3.  RESPONSE TO THE CHARGE	6
       3.1 Charge Question #1  	6
             3.1.1   Modification of the BEIR VI Model	6
             3.1.2   Alternative Models	7
       3.2 Charge Question #2  	8
             3.2.1   Smoking and Other Exposures	8
             3.2.2   Comparisons Between Mine and Home Environments	8
       3.3 Charge Question #3	9
             3.3.1   Model Uncertainty	10
                    3.3.1.1 Evaluation of Model Uncertainty	11
                    3.3.1.2 Specific Recommendations for ORIA 	12
             3.3.2   Sensitivity Analysis	12
             3.3.3   Uncertainty in Estimates of Parameter Values	13
             3.3.4   Impact of Background Radon Exposures on Risk Estimates 	13
       3.4    Model and Parameter Uncertainty 	14

4.  COMMENTS BEYOND THE CHARGE	15
       4.1 Potential Use of the Radon Risk Assessment Document	15
       4.2 Consideration of 220Rn	16
       4.3 Use of Incidence Versus Mortality Data	17
       4.4 Validation of Radon Risk Models  	17
       4.5 Exposition	17
             4.5.1   Derivation of Equations  	17
             4.5.2   Specific Text Concerns  	18

REFERENCES	R-l

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APPENDIX A - EDITORIAL AND TECHNICAL COMMENTS	 A-l
      A. 1 General Comments	 A-l
      A.2 Specific Comments on Model Uncertainty	 A-l

APPENDIX B - ACRONYMS  	B-l
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                           1. EXECUTIVE SUMMARY
       Radon is the principal contributor to effective dose to members of the general public from
background radiation.  Therefore, EPA has devoted substantial consideration to the subject of risk from
radon in homes. EPA commissioned a study by the National Academy of Sciences (NAS) National
Research Council (NRC), Biological Effects of Ionizing Radiation (BEIR) Committee which resulted in
publication of the BEIR IV Report, Health Risks of Radon and Other Internally Deposited Alpha
Emitters (NAS 1988). In 1994, the EPA asked the NAS to revisit the risk assessment for indoor
radon based on an expanded analysis of data on cancer risk to uranium miners and incorporation of the
information available from indoor radon epidemiologic studies. The NAS published its revised risk
models in early 1999 in its BEIR VI Report, Health Effects of Exposure to Radon (NAS, 1999).

       EPA is now revising its assessment of risks of indoor radon in light of the BEIR VT Committee
Report (NAS, 1999). The EPA Office of Radiation and Indoor Air (ORIA), in an extension of BEIR
VI methodology, estimated specific risk coefficients and modified the estimate of the numbers of lung
cancer deaths attributable to radon in its Draft Assessment of Risk from Radon in Homes (EPA, 1999).

       ORIA requested that the Radiation Advisory Committee (RAC) of the Science Advisory
Board (SAB) review its methodology for estimating cancer risks from exposure to radon in homes.  In
March  1999, the RAC engaged in an initial advisory on this subject. Although the RAC found the
methodology to be acceptable in general, the RAC Advisory, finalized in July 1999 (SAB, 1999),
included recommendations for some adjustments to the ORIA methodology. ORIA responded to
those recommendations in its Draft Assessment of Risks from Radon in Homes (EPA, 1999).

       The RAC met in Washington DC on November 16, 17, and 18, 1999 for a review of the
revised ORIA radon risk assessment methodology. A draft RAC review report was prepared at the
November meeting, with a technical editing session conducted by a telephone conference on December
10,  1999. The RAC's responses to the specific charge questions from the Agency are summarized
below and discussed in detail in Section 3 of this report. The RAC also addressed issues beyond the
charge, as presented in Section 4.

       In general, the RAC found that ORIA has produced a credible risk assessment and has
responded well to the recommendations provided by the RAC in its Advisory (SAB,  1999). The Draft
ORIA document is, for the most part, well-written and documented and will be useful guidance for
conducting radon risk assessments.

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1.1    Question #1: Are the methodology and overall approach for assessing risks from
radon in homes adequate?

       The RAC found that, in general, ORIA's methodology and overall approach for assessing risk
from radon in homes is adequate. Two models were derived by the BEIR VI Committee, one
dependent on radon decay product concentration, and one dependent on duration of exposure. The
BEIR VI Committee did not select a preferred model. The RAC, in its Advisory (SAB, 1999),
recommended that ORIA derive a model intermediate between the two BEIR VT models.  In response
to that advice, ORIA scaled the BEIR VI concentration model (SC model) to give risk estimates
intermediate between the estimates based on the BEIR VI concentration and duration models.  The
RAC agrees that the scaled (intermediate) model, while not the only choice, is reasonable; however, the
draft ORIA document is not completely clear on how the intermediate model was derived and does not
fully justify its use. Although ORIA's use of the BEIR VI model as a basis for the risk assessment is
reasonable, the risk assessment should also include a discussion of biologically-based models as well as
other credible models which could be applied to the epidemiologic data to assess risks.  These
additional models should be included in the characterization of model uncertainty.

       The RAC supports the decisions by ORIA to derive estimates of etiologic risk, expand the
treatment of smoking prevalence by age,  and delete a proposed baseline adjustment.

1.2    Question #2: Are the assumptions behind the  calculations appropriate?

       The RAC found that, in general, the assumptions used by ORIA in the calculations are
appropriate.  ORIA's discussion of the assumptions about the effect of smoking on radon risk should be
clarified and ORIA should further consider the issues of changes in smoking prevalence and the impacts
of other lung carcinogens on risk. ORIA should also provide more focus  on the factor, K, which
relates the radiation dose per unit exposure in homes to the dose per unit exposure in mines. In
particular, ORIA should consider how the K factor would change under specific exposure conditions.
The BEIR VI Committee assumed that the K factor is equal to 1.

1.3    Question #3: Have the limitations and uncertainties in the assessment been
adequately described?

       The RAC was pleased with the expansion of the uncertainty analysis from the initial treatment in
the White Paper. However, the RAC is concerned that EPA limited the analysis to the more easily
quantifiable uncertainties and did not provide a strong sense of the overall uncertainties, which would
include model uncertainty and other unquantified uncertainties. Specifically, model uncertainty is not
adequately addressed in the draft risk assessment.  The RAC recommends that model uncertainty be
addressed in more detail in the risk assessment document and that ORIA  include a discussion of
uncertainties in radon risk estimates in any document based on the risk assessment.

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1.4    Issues beyond the charge

       The RAC has several recommendations related to the draft risk assessment document that do
not strictly apply to the three main charge questions.  These recommendations, related primarily to
enhancing the potential usefulness of the ORIA risk assessments for a wide variety of applications,
include the following:

       a)     The potential use of the document by various disparate groups (e.g., state regulators,
              home builders, educators, and public health officials) should be taken into account;

       b)     risks from220Rn should be given some additional consideration in the risk assessment;

       c)     while the RAC recognizes that the information available for the miners is limited to
              mortality data, for future risk assessments ORIA should use incidence data whenever
              possible, consistent with EPA's treatment of chemical carcinogens;

       d)     in the future, ORIA should seek further opportunities to validate its radon model against
              observations in residential populations; and

       e)     the document should be expanded to render the methodology more transparent by
              including complete derivations of equations and explaining terms in text as well as
              defining them in mathematical form.

       The model should be readily adaptable to populations that do not match the characteristics of
the stationary U.S. population used and the assumed constant lifetime exposure inherent in deriving the
average risk coefficients and etiologic fractions that appear to be the principal outputs of the current
effort.

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                                 2. INTRODUCTION
        Radon, through its decay products, is effectively the largest contributor of natural background
 radiation exposure to humans.  The effective radiation dose from this source generally exceeds the limits
 for radiation exposure for the general public from nonbackground sources.  It is appropriate that the
 EPA give adequate consideration to the subject of risk from radon exposure in homes.  (Note:  For
 clarity in this report, references to radon are assumed to include its short-lived decay products.)

       The Environmental Protection Agency's (EPA) Office of Radiation and Indoor Air (ORIA) has
revised its methodology for estimating cancer risks from exposure to radon in homes in accordance with
the recently published National Academy of Sciences (NAS) report, Health Effects of Exposure to
Radon: BEIR VI (NAS,  1999).  At the request of ORIA, the Radiation Advisory Committee (RAC) of
the Science Advisory Board (SAB) reviewed ORIA's methodology as described in its Draft
Assessment of Risks from Radon in Homes (EPA, 1999).

        In March 1999, the RAC engaged in an initial advisory regarding ORIA's methodology for
 assessing risks of radon in homes, based on a white paper submitted to the RAC. In this Advisory,
 published in July  1999 (SAB, 1999), the RAC provided guidance during the development of the risk
 assessment methodology.

        The RAC met in Washington DC on November 16, 17, and 18, 1999 for a briefing and
 discussion of ORIA's radon risk assessment methodology presented in the draft Assessment of Risks
from Radon in Homes (EPA, 1999). A draft RAC review report was prepared at the November
 meeting based on face-to-face discussions and incorporating written comments submitted in advance of
 the meeting.  The draft RAC report, Review of Assessment of Risks from Radon in Homes., was
 edited and distributed to the RAC on November 23, 1999. A second draft was prepared on
 December 5,  1999 and distributed to the RAC M/C for their review at the technical editing
 teleconference of December 10, 1999.

        The RAC review focused on specific questions posed by ORIA in its charge to the RAC
 (Section 2.2), including the appropriateness of the models and assumptions used, as well as the
 adequacy of the evaluation of uncertainty in the assessment of risk. The RAC also addressed issues
 beyond the charge in its review.

        In general, the RAC found that ORIA's Draft Assessment of Risk from Radon in Homes
 (EPA, 1999) is well done and is a very useful extension of the BEIR VT Committee Report (NAS,
 1999).  The subject is complex, but the ORIA staff has done an excellent job in dealing with this task.
 The RAC notes that ORIA took into account the recommendations provided in its Advisory (SAB,
 1999).

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       It is likely that the ORIA document will be very carefully scrutinized, thus it must have a high
degree of credibility, and the methods by which the risks are derived must be transparent.  ORIA's risk
assessment will provide a strong basis for estimating risks in support of rulemaking and public
information programs. Some issues that remain to be addressed are presented in Section 3 in response
to specific questions in the charge, and in Section 4, which deals with issues beyond the charge.

2.1 Background

       EPA's guidance on risks associated with radon in homes has been developed based on the risk
assessment models published in two National Academy of Sciences (NAS) reports.  The first, Health
Effects of Exposure to Radon and Other Internally Deposited Alpha-Emitters:  BEIRIV (NAS,
1988), developed empirical models for estimating risk from inhalation of radon and its decay products
based on four sets of underground miner epidemiological data; the second, Comparative Dosimetry
of Radon in Mines and Homes (NAS, 1991), provided modifications to the BEIR IV models to
account for differences between occupational and residential exposures. A third NAS report,
published in 1994, Health Effects of Exposure to Radon: Time for Reassessment? (NAS,  1994),
reviewed the new information available and suggested that the BEIR IV assessment be revisited and
updated to take into account additional miner data and the data developed from residential studies. As
a consequence, the NAS published a new, EPA-sponsored report on health risks associated with
residential radon exposure, Health Effects of Exposure to Radon: BEIR F7(NAS, 1999).  EPA is
revising its assessment of risks from indoor radon based on the recommendations and models in the
BEIR VI Report.

2.2 Charge

       The specific charge to the RAC for this review was to respond to the following questions:

       a)      Are the methodology and the overall approach for assessing risks from radon in homes
              adequate?

       b)     Are the assumptions behind the calculations appropriate?

       c)      Have the limitations and uncertainties in the assessment been adequately described?

       The RAC's response to the charge and a discussion of issues beyond the charge are contained
in the following sections of this report.

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                        3.  RESPONSE TO THE CHARGE
       In general, ORIA has produced a credible risk assessment and has responded well to RAC
comments presented in its Advisory on Assessing Risks from Indoor Radon (SAB, 1999).  The draft
ORIA document is, with some exceptions described in detail below, well-written and documented and
will be useful guidance for conducting radon risk assessments. The RAC recognizes additional areas
where the document could be improved, as explained in the responses to the specific questions in the
charge.

3.1 Charge Question #1

Are the methodology and overall approach for assessing risks from radon in homes adequate?

       In general, ORIA's methodology and overall approach for assessing risks from radon in homes
is adequate.  ORIA's risk assessment is an extension of the methodology developed by the NAS BEIR
VT Committee (NAS, 1999). The extension was necessary in order to produce a document that would
be useful in assessing risks from residential radon for individuals and populations.

3.1.1   Modification of the BEIR VI Model

       The BEIR VT Committee proposed two models for residential radon risks: one which included
an "effect-modification factor" dependent on radon decay product concentration (concentration model)
and a second model with an "effect-modification factor" dependent on exposure duration (duration
model).  These factors account for a dose-rate effect.  The BEIR VT Committee did not select a
preferred model stating only that the "models were equally preferred by the Committee" (NAS, 1999).
ORIA's use of a model that is intermediate between the BEIR VI concentration and duration models is
responsive to the advice contained in the RAC Advisory.  However, the method and justification of the
method of deriving the intermediate model should be clearer. The derivation should be more explicit in
the text or should be included as an appendix to the document showing more detailed calculations.

       The RAC supports ORIA's selection of a scaled BEIR VT concentration (SC) model as a
practical choice, given the calculational difficulties of developing a model that is free from bias imposed
by the selection of cut points for concentration or duration of exposure intervals. The RAC also
supports the other adjustments made to the BEIR VI concentration model to derive estimates of the
etiologic risk1 and to expand the treatment of smoking prevalence by age.  In addition, the RAC
supports ORIA's decision to drop its previously proposed baseline adjustment, with a recommendation
       1 Etiologic risk, as used in this Report, is defined as the probability of dying prematurely from a
radon-induced lung cancer.

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that the explanation of this decision given in Appendix B be strengthened. Finally, the RAC strongly
supports the estimation of etiologic fraction2 and average years of life lost per radon-induced lung
cancer death as a supplement to the estimates of lifetime risk per working level month (WLM) and the
estimation of the annual number of lung cancer deaths attributable to radon in homes. All of these
estimates are useful for evaluating risks to subsets of the population, such as those in a particular
geographic region or with a particular pattern of exposure.

       ORIA's use of age-specific smoking prevalence data is a significant improvement over the
BEIR VI analysis. This modification will allow the model to be adjusted as smoking patterns change in
the general population. Even a small reduction in risk, due to a decrease in smoking prevalence, could
be an incentive to promote the trend.

3.1.2  Alternative Models

       The BEIR VT Committee estimated lung cancer risks from radon exposures in the home using
empirical regression models based on uranium miner lung cancer mortality data. However, there are
reports in the most recent literature and active research in the construction and application of
biologically-based cancer models. Several researchers studying radon cancer risks have specifically
applied the two-stage clonal expansion model of cancer that has been shown to describe, generally,
both epidemiological and experimental cancer data (Luebeck et al., 1999; Leenhouts, 1999;
Moolgavkar, 1993).  This model considers the effect of the carcinogen on the initiation, transformation
and proliferation of cells in the multistage development of cancer. As such it allows the interpretation of
data in terms of relevant biological events in the cancer process.

       In applications to the Colorado uranium miners, detailed modeling has incorporated data on
both smoking rates and radon exposures (Leenhouts, 1999; Moolgavkar, 1993). The fitted two-stage
model showed an inverse dose-rate effect at higher doses as well as sub-multiplicative effects of
smoking and radon exposure. The risks, however, differed from those obtained by BEIR VT using
empirical regression descriptions of the miner cohorts. ORIA should include a discussion of the
biologically-based models and especially take into account model specification in its uncertainty analysis
that may actually be the greatest source of uncertainty in risk estimation.

       With the publication of Federal Guidance Report No. 11 (EPA, 1988) and the prior statement
signed by President Reagan and published in the Federal Register, the Federal Radiation Council
(EPA/FRC) had essentially endorsed the risk assessment and radiation protection concepts of the
International Commission on Radiological Protection (ICRP).  However, the ICRP, in its Publication
65 (ICRP, 1993) has adopted a quite different approach in its assessment of risk from radon. The
       2 Etiologic fraction is defined as the fraction of lung cancer deaths in the exposed population in
which radon played some causative role.

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ORIA document should discuss how the application of these two approaches differs in terms of the
result.

       Developing scientifically valid risk estimates for cancer induction via residential radon exposure
is a significant undertaking.  ORIA is making good progress toward developing acceptable risk
estimates for lung cancer induction based on the BEIR VI models.  Significant challenges still remain,
especially related to evaluating alternative models in the context of their associated uncertainties.
ORIA's treatment of uncertainty is discussed in detail in Section 3.3 of this report.

3.2 Charge Question #2

Are the assumptions behind the calculations appropriate?

       The assumptions ORIA used in the calculations are, in general,  appropriate. Obviously, the
assumptions made in applying the models are crucial in determining the risks from residential radon.  In
some cases, specific parameter values were determined by EPA risk assessment guidance. The RAC
concerns regarding some of the assumptions used in the ORIA radon risk assessment are described
below.

3.2.1  Smoking and Other Exposures

       As  suggested in the response to the first part of the charge, assumptions about the composition
of the U.S.  population and its patterns of exposure are  necessary to estimate overall risk coefficients
and etiologic fractions. ORIA's choices are reasonable. However, ORIA's discussion of the
assumptions about the effects of smoking on radon risk needs to be clarified.  The text is not clear
about the difference between the relative risks of lung cancer deaths cited for ever smokers versus
never smokers (p.  36) and the relative risks cited for current smokers versus nonsmokers (p. 35). The
assumptions that underlie the relative risk model are unclear, specifically, regarding exposures other
than radon and tobacco smoke.  Agents that could affect lung cancer risk include asbestos, heavy
metals, polyaromatic hydrocarbons (PAHs), crystalline silica, and radionuclides other than radon decay
products.

       Recent data show that smoking rates among young people are stable or increasing. ORIA
should consider  how this trend might affect the comparisons among never smokers, ever smokers,
former smokers, and individuals exposed to second-hand smoke. The implications of changes in
smoking rates for young people could be examined on  the basis of gender, similarly to the discussion on
pages 13-14 of the assessment about the male ever-smoking prevalence reaching 74 percent at age 70
years, compared to 58 percent for all adult males.

3.2.2  Comparisons Between Mine and Home Environments

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       The variability and uncertainty in the "K" factor that is key to the risk assessment should be
addressed.  K adjusts the  dose of alpha energy per unit exposure for miners to a projected  dose to
other population groups (NAS, 1999), taking into account exposure factors such as

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aerosol size distribution, bronchial morphometry, depositional pattern and clearance rate, and dose-
response factors such as exposure rate, age at exposure and at risk, sex, and smoking.

              K = [Dose(home)/Exposure(home)]/[Dose(mine)/Exposure(mine)]

       The BEIRIV Committee initially assumed that the dose per working level month (WLM) is the
same for occupational and environmental settings (NAS, 1988).  In 1991, the NAS published a
comparative assessment of radon in homes and mines (NAS, 1991) that proposed an adjustment
factor, K, of 0.7; that is, radon was presumed to be less effective in producing lung cancer in residential
exposure situations than in the mine environment. This resulted in a downward revision of the EPA risk
estimates derived from the BEIR IV Report. However the BEIR VI Committee reviewed the data and
determined that a value of 1 for K is reasonable (NAS, 1999).

       The ORIA assessment should provide more focus on the components of K.  If some of the
considerations do or do not apply, depending on the situation, then a more situation-specific value of K
might be appropriate.  For example, ORIA should consider how K would be affected if breathing rates
differ for various levels of activity, based on indoor vs. outdoor work, health profile,  or even altitude or
climate.

3.3 Charge  Question #3

Have the limitations and uncertainties in the assessment been adequately described?

       The Committee applauds the expansion of the uncertainty analysis from the initial treatment in
the white paper and the addition of 90% uncertainty interval estimates on the estimates of risk per
WLM, etiologic fraction, and years of life lost per radon-induced (cancer) death (Table 18, page 46).
However, the RAC remains concerned that ORIA has limited the analysis to the more easily
quantifiable uncertainties and has not afforded the reader a good sense of the overall  uncertainties that
include model uncertainty and other uncertainties mentioned but not quantified.

       The RAC notes several specific issues in regard to the limitations and uncertainties in ORIA's
risk assessment. In particular, model uncertainties are not adequately addressed. When ORIA issues
guidance documents or other information on radon risks based on the draft risk assessment, it should be
sure to include an appropriate discussion of the uncertainties in the risk estimates in addition to the point
central risk estimates.  The choice of the SC model, although responsive to the RAC's previous
recommendations, could appear arbitrary without a comprehensive discussion of the other models. The
RAC recognizes that a quantitative resolution of this issue could require substantial work by ORIA. An
alternative approach would be to descriptively compare models rather than perform full-blown
mathematical comparisons.
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3.3.1  Model Uncertainty

       ORIA has done commendable work in producing risk estimates that for the first time account
for changes in smoking status with age, etiologic fraction, and average years of life lost per radon-
induced lung cancer death. The uncertainties associated with various data sets and the quality and
biases of their sources are adequately addressed although the choice of scaled concentration (SC) is
not.  This is important since that model is the basis for the Monte Carlo analyses used to quantify the
uncertainties in the risk determinations. Standard statistical theory can be used to assess the various
uncertainties associated with parameter values and sampling variations.  However, the analysis using a
single model does not capture the uncertainty in our state of knowledge of the problem. In addition to
an overall assessment of the combined uncertainties from various data sources, uncertainties in the
choice of a model need to be addressed.
       The ORIA draft document makes the case for using the SC model in lieu of a Constant Relative
Risk (CRR) model or other models proposed by the BEIR VI committee to describe risks from radon
in homes.  The RAC Advisory on the ORIA White Paper recommended that the EPA consider
developing a model that would yield point risk estimates intermediate between those derived using the
concentration and duration models.  The RAC based that recommendation on several factors:

       a)     the concentration model produced point risk estimates 40 percent higher than those
              estimated using the duration model;

       b)     the risk estimates, cited in the initial ORIA assessment were between the estimates
              derived using the two BEIR models; and

       c)     the lack of agreement in risk estimates derived using the two BEIR VI models may have
              been caused by the choice of arbitrary cutpoints for concentration and duration intervals
              that are required when using Poisson regression to fit the Excess Relative Risk (ERR)
              models.

       While the RAC recommended that ORIA consider an "intermediate" model, the choice of
which methodology to be use was left to ORIA. In response, ORIA used the geometric mean of the
estimated lung cancer fatality risks per working level month (WLM) calculated from the BEIR VI
models to back-calculate the exposure-response parameter value, or excess relative risk coefficient
(•), for its scaled concentration(SC) model. The SC model derived by ORIA was then used to
calculate point risk estimates in the assessment of risk from radon in homes.

       As expected, the excess lung cancer risk estimates derived using the SC model are intermediate
between those derived from the concentration and duration models of BEIR VI. Although the choice
of the SC model to derive the risk estimates is reasonable, it is still arbitrary.  The real risk may, in fact
be much closer to that derived using one of the original BEIR VI models, or may even be outside the
range of risks defined by those models. Therefore, the basis on which ORIA dismissed the reduction in

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the lower bound estimate of the risk, derived using the BEIR VICRR approach (i.e., as a consequence
of sampling error), was subjective and should be further justified.

3.3.1.1  Evaluation of Model Uncertainty

       Model uncertainty represents a lack of confidence that a specified model is a valid formulation
of a given assessment problem (NCRP, 1996).  The term model is used to indicate a functional
relationship for the assessment endpoint, in this case lung cancer risk, that may be  empirical (e.g., BEIR
VI concentration and duration models, ORIA's  SC model) or mechanistic (e.g., multiple-mutation
models, genomic-instability models, multistage models, etc.)

       The degree to which model uncertainties can be determined depends on the field of interest and
the availability of computational models available to that discipline. Ideally, the model user should
address the following issues:

       a)     Are the models to be used in the risk assessment applicable and appropriate? Do the
              models capture  all of the requirements needed to assess the risk?

       b)     What are the ranges in the results obtained using the models?  This involves performing
              sensitivity analyses on each model using identical parameter and input data and
              boundary conditions.  This is not always feasible as different models may require
              different inputs for the same problem. Logic and transparency of choice of inputs is
              critical to this analysis.

       c)     If certain models produce extreme results, is there any evidence that these models do
              not properly capture the basic factors involved in the assessment?  Are the models
              outdated?

       The best method for demonstrating model  uncertainty is through model validation procedures.
A model invalidated by data clearly has model uncertainty.  For example, a model may  predict a
monotonic increasing trend when reliable data demonstrate a monotonic decreasing trend. Model
validation requires that data not used to develop the model be used for model validation. Such data are
not always available for model testing. In the case of lung cancer risk from indoor exposures, the
results of epidemiological  studies, recently completed and in progress, may, to some degree, provide
that data.  Additional comments on model uncertainties are provided in Appendix  A.2

       For more information about these quantitative methods and discussion of various Monte Carlo
simulation tools, ORIA can refer to NCRP Commentary No. 14, A Guide for Uncertainty Analysis
in dose and Risk Assessments Related to Environmental Contamination (NCRP, 1996) and
NCRP Report No. 126, Uncertainties in Fatal Cancer Risk Estimates Used in Radiation
Protection (NCRP, 1997).

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3.3.1.2 Specific Recommendations for ORIA

       The empirical BEIR VT models from which the ORIA SC model was derived are based on
data from epidemiologic studies of miners. The primary issue of whether the extrapolation of the miner
data to low doses and low dose rates is appropriate, has been the subject of considerable debate and
affects the credibility of ORIA's lung cancer risk estimates. In general, this extrapolation is consistent
with the majority of data on residential exposure, although the negative results reported by B. Cohen
(1990; 1995) have received much attention.  A note in the May 1999 issue of Health Physics by John
Goldsmith (1999), in which he discusses the confounding effects of the known correlation of cancer
incidence with population density, is an important addition to this debate. Goldsmith notes that this may
explain the anomalous results reported by Cohen (1990; 1995) and concludes that counties are not
appropriate population units for such a study.  ORIA's discussion of the data reported by Cohen
(1990; 1995) should refer to the conclusions of Goldsmith (1999).

       Other computer simulations and/or analytical solutions should be used when possible to
evaluate the preferred model results even if it is necessary to use less rigorous methods and subjective
judgement.  The RAC believes that comparison to other models would lend credibility to the ORIA risk
estimates derived from the SC model. ORIA should consider fitting the BEIR VT model using Cox
proportional hazards methodology which does not require categorization of exposure (WLM),
duration, or concentration (WL) but can use individual exposure history or cumulative exposure. The
Cox model and Poisson regression would yield essentially identical results if the intervals used in the
Poisson regression were sufficiently small. Alternatively, ORIA could use Poisson regression,  but with
different, and smaller, exposure, duration, or concentration intervals. Either of these approaches would
produce excess relative risk coefficients that should result in risk estimates intermediate between those
derived using the concentration and duration BEIR VI models.

       The data from on-going and recently completed epidemiologic studies of lung cancer incidence
and indoor radon exposures should be used to validate ORIA's models. These data may provide a
measure of model uncertainty and lend credibility to the analysis.

       The RAC recognizes the time resource limitations on ORIA. However, quantitative and
qualitative approaches to addressing model uncertainty, such as those described above, should be
considered for ORIA's future modifications to the risk assessment. Any  and all information that can be
used in the evaluation of uncertainty in model choice should be presented, even if in a qualitative
discussion.

3.3.2  Sensitivity Analysis

       We commend ORIA for its use of model sensitivity analysis.  ORIA employed the sensitivity
analysis to estimate model robustness by exploring the effect of parameter uncertainty and/or variability
on the Monte Carlo predictions. However, though convenient and easy  to use, the Monte Carlo

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methods need to be carefully monitored and baselined to ensure the integrity of the results and their
connection to physical reality. Uncertainty does not reside solely in the degree of ignorance about the
precise value of a particular parameter but also the degree of ignorance associated with the choice of a
particular model used to describe the data and make extrapolated risk predictions. Even if it is not
feasible to evaluate quantitatively the combined effects of all sources of uncertainty affecting radon risk
estimates, a  semiquantitative or, as a last resort, a qualitative evaluation of the model choice should be
presented. This would help clarify the robustness of the proposed risk assessment.

        Simulation exercises that employ algorithms which use error estimation inputs (e.g., K-factor)
demonstrate that several acceptable solutions can be obtained without any bearing on "reality".  For
example, the K-factor can be used to account for differences in risk estimates due to varying
environmental conditions, but an exact uncertainty cannot be assigned to a unique K value. As the
mathematical formulation is undetermined, no degree of refinement can offset this result. Key
uncertainties in the estimates and models could be reduced by considering a broader range of model
simulations and their consequences for extrapolating radon-induced effects to lower dose rates.

        More recent and ongoing epidemiologic and experimental research (e.g., in Germany and The
Netherlands) could be considered for use in the evaluation of the BEIR VI predictions. There may also
be advantages in using other more mechanistic models for comparison with the SC model (i.e.,
biologically-based models).  Some discussion of in vitro and related studies showing inverse dose rate
effects would be appropriate. References for such a discussion include Bettega et al. (1992), Elkind
(1994),  Hall et al. (1991),  and Scott (1997).

3.3.3   Uncertainty in Estimates of Parameter Values

        Quantitative risk estimates based on extrapolated epidemiological data require measures of
uncertainty.  Early on in the ORIA document, readers should be warned that use of point risk estimates
without considering the associated uncertainties could result in misleading risk estimates.

        One of the largest measures of uncertainty involves the estimation of the cohort member's
exposure to the carcinogen of interest, i.e., radon decay  products. This clearly is the case with the
uranium miner cohorts and should be included in any formulation of total risk estimation precision
involving the use  of these radon exposed workers.

3.3.4   Impact of Background Radon Exposures on Risk Estimates

        As requested by the RAC in its July 1999 Advisory (SAB, 1999), ORIA included a discussion
of the impact of background radon exposure on the miner-based risk estimates.  The method by which
ORIA quantified this impact resulted in negative values for excess risk and the discussion of the impact
was less than transparent. The problem may stem from a mis-specification of the model. For example,
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an exponential model might have fewer specification problems than a linear model, and describe the
impact of background radon exposure on risk estimates  from empirical models more realistically.

       ORIA should explain the implications of the negative risk numbers obtained when the baseline
(or radon equal to zero case) is subtracted. Is it merely that there are so few cases of radon-induced
lung cancer at the low end of the age spectrum that the uncertainty encompassing the baseline includes
negative numbers,  or is there a condition for which the model is not valid? This is not simply a matter
of proper derivation. A clear verbal description of why the baseline does not need to be subtracted is
needed.

3.4    Model and Parameter Uncertainty

       Based on these observations regarding model uncertainty and parameter uncertainties, it is
important that risk predictions include the uncertainty in the choice of model used to describe the data
and quantify the predictive analysis as well as the uncertainty in the epidemiologic data and parameter
values.  For context, the assessment might discuss briefly uncertainties surrounding other causes of
lung cancer (e.g., smoking alone or asbestos) compared to the uncertainties in radon-related lung
cancer risk estimates.
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                    4.  COMMENTS BEYOND THE CHARGE
       The RAC offers a few comments that do not strictly apply to the three main charge questions.
The RAC's concerns are related primarily to enhancing the potential usefulness of the ORIA risk
assessments for a wide variety of applications.

4.1 Potential Use of the Radon Risk Assessment Document

       As noted by the RAC in its Advisory, the foremost potential use of the risk assessment
document may be to revise national estimates of radon risk for risk communication purposes (e.g., as in
the 1992 Citizens Guide to Radon).  From the assessment narrative, it appears that the uncertainties
related to the choice of the risk model  (i.e.,  concentration, duration, or an intermediate models) do not
allow for  more exact risk estimates  at this time. Any estimate of lung cancer risk related to residential
radon exposure is likely to be associated with large  errors. The net result may involve bracketing a
risk range as was done previously.

       The RAC continues to urge ORIA to make the model more accessible and transparent to those
who wish to make risk calculations for defined populations and exposure patterns.  In particular, the
model should be readily adaptable to populations that do not match the characteristics of the stationary
U.S. population and the assumed constant lifetime exposures that are inherent in deriving the average
risk coefficients and etiologic fractions that appear to be the principal outputs of the current effort.

       Although the  section in the document on uncertainty is essential and (as discussed in Section
3.3) needs strengthening, to some audiences  it may suggest that the evidence for the carcinogenicity of
radon is poorer than for other environmental factors treated as carcinogens, which is not the case.
However, failure to adequately discuss uncertainties could encourage users of the document to give
more weight than can be justified to central risk estimates, leading to misuse of these estimates.
Perhaps some of the details of the uncertainty analysis could be moved to an appendix, with the
uncertainty section focusing on the overall reliability of the risk estimates.

       While the purpose of ORIA's risk assessment document is to provide a scientific basis for
policy decisions, the audience has to be very carefully considered. The types of audiences that are
likely to use the document include:

       a)      radon  testers and mitigators, as a tool to communicate risk to their clients,

       b)      real estate agents / attorneys involved in the sale of a home,

       c)      physicians,
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       d)     public health officials, in setting priorities for their agencies,

       e)     federal and state regulators, in setting NEPPS goals,

       f)     Department of Energy, in determining appropriate clean-up levels for contaminated
              sites,

       g)     lawyers in dealing with compensation claims for uranium miners,

       h)     regulators, in setting Multimedia Mitigation (MMM) Program priorities to comply with
              the radon in water alternate maximum contaminant limit (AMCL), and

       i)     tobacco companies, to  demonstrate that their stand alone product is  safe for use.

       ORIA should also consider how these audiences may misinterpret the document and what
advice it can give these users about the  model, its strengths and its limitations, and what would be a fair
use of the model.  This goes beyond uncertainty or sensitivity to what the model represents and how
accurately it can be assumed to represent risks.  ORIA should  also consider how the model users  can
help improve the model, perhaps by data gathering and reporting.  Although not necessarily a part of
the ORIA mandate, the Agency should be encouraged to consider developing models that are user
friendly and readily available, via the internet, to potential users in the field as well as in the general
public.

       It is difficult to know what decisions might be made differently at the state level based on the
results of the assessment. For  example, if EPA eventually develops a different basis for setting cleanup
levels for radium in soils (p.2)  using indoor radon risk pathways, numerous uranium-related soil cleanup
decisions will be affected.

       Some states have a constituency of concerned uranium miners.  With the Senate Judiciary
Committee having approved a bill to expand the Radiation Exposure Compensation Act to include
uranium millers, there may be  increased interest in affected areas in how EPA is  comparing miner/miller
risk to residential radon risk. This reinforces the RAC's suggestion in its Advisory that ORIA be clear
about how the final risk model relates to situation-specific mixes of sex, age, and smoking behavior.

       Some of the assumptions should be refined as new information becomes available from 2000
census data, from new smoking prevalence  data, or from published indoor radon studies currently  near
completion. Rather than present a static model, ORIA should consider how the model can be modified
or adapted to take advantage of the emergence of new data regarding factors such as equilibrium
fractions or the impacts of radon mitigation in homes.

4.2 Consideration of 220Rn

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       Nearly all of the draft ORIA document is devoted to 222Rn with 220Rn mentioned only briefly.
Given the widespread distribution of 232Th and its decay products and their substantially high
concentrations in some locations, it would seem appropriate to devote some discussion to 220Rn. The
RAC recognizes that there are fewer available measurements and there are essentially no
epidemiological studies of exposure to 220Rn, however, it would be useful to summarize the existing
information and to discuss, at least qualitatively, the potential risk from 220Rn.

       In justifying the exclusion of 220Rn from consideration in its risk assessment, ORIA states that
"...a lower fraction of the released alpha particle energy is absorbed within target cells in the bronchial
epithelium than in the case of radon-222."  While this statement, and a similar one made in ICRP
Publication No. 50 (ICRP, 1987), may well be true, the reason is not obvious.  ORIA should, at a
minimum, consider a more comprehensive discussion of 220Rn risks.

4.3 Use of Incidence Versus Mortality Data

       There would be less uncertainty in the models and the derived risk estimates if lung cancer
incidence data could be used in the analysis rather than lung cancer mortality.  In general, a diagnosis of
lung cancer (incidence) is more accurately counted than a lung cancer death that the death certificate
might attribute to contributing factors rather than lung cancer.  The EPA evaluates the risks for nearly
all other environmental factors based on the incidence of adverse health effects rather than mortality.
The RAC recognizes that the epidemiologic data available on the underground miners is limited to lung
cancer mortality; thus estimation of radon risk in terms of lung cancer incidence, based on the miner
data, is not practical. However, for future assessments where both incidence and mortality data are
available, the RAC strongly supports use of incidence data in developing radiation risk estimates.

4.4 Validation of Radon Risk Models

       The Committee notes that disagreements persist about the degree to which model
extrapolations from observations in miners have been, or even can be, validated by comparison with
available data on residential radon exposures and risks. Although ORIA should not be expected to
resolve this issue in the current assessment, it should aggressively seek opportunities for model
validation in the future. Otherwise, controversy among scientists will continue and public confidence in
the models will suffer.

4.5 Exposition

       Although the exposition is for the most part quite clear to those familiar with the radon risk
literature, and although ORIA has added less technical text to help readers who are not experts, the
Committee found several specific areas in which improvements in exposition would be valuable. The
more important ones follow.
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4.5.1  Derivation of Equations

       A major concern with the ORIA draft risk assessment document is the difficulty in following the
calculations.  In several cases, the derivations are not included in the report. For example, the
equations used to calculate the etiologic fraction and the average years of lost life expectancy per
radon-induced lung cancer death are based on a quantity, S'(a), which is defined somewhat
ambiguously as the survival function adjusted for an incremental increase in radon exposure. No
equations for calculating S'(a) are included.  As a result, it is difficult to determine whether the
methodology is reasonable.  The adjustment in the survival function should be more clearly explained
and the method of adjustment described either in the text or in an appendix.

       The equation for determining the lung cancer death rates for never smokers is given without a
derivation (page 13). The illustrations given (page 14) are also confusing in that a parameter value
obtained  in the first calculation is rounded to 2 significant figures but expressed using 3 significant figures
in the second calculation:

        0.00052= 0.0044/[0.42 + 14(0.58)]
       0.0072=14x0.000515

       Adding to the confusion, is a typographical error in the second set of calculations: 0.00414
should be 0.000414.

       In addition to including derivations of the equations in an appendix, all notation in the text should
be defined in English as well as in mathematical form.  For example:

       w* = effective cumulative exposure
       • * = effective dose response (or effective excess risk/WLM)

       The ORIA risk assessment document will be read and critiqued by a large number of
individuals with varying levels of experience with radon risk calculations and epidemiology.  The
methodology used must be transparent in order to minimize unwarranted criticism. It was helpful to
include the derivation of the equations used in determining that the exclusion of miners' residential
exposures would not significantly affect the calculated risks for indoor radon (Appendix B); however,
even in this case, several steps were omitted in the derivation making it difficult to follow. The
appendices should be expanded to include derivations of all unique equations used in the risk
assessment. It will not be necessary to include derivations of equations obtained from BEIR VT;
however, the methodology for adjusting the BEIR VT concentration model should be explicitly
described in an appendix.

4.5.2  Specific Text Concerns
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       Specific substantive concerns with the text are given below.

       Page 7. second paragraph under IVA: The inverse dose rate effect will seem counterintuitive to
many people not familiar with the literature. Some discussion of mechanisms that might lead to such a
behavior would be valuable.

       Page 11. third paragraph: This draft continues to note the "biological implausibility" of the
Cohen study. Although probably in the minority, a substantial number of credible scientists do not
share this view. Moreover, no explanation is given for the speculation that radon levels might be
inversely correlated with smoking, and it is certainly not an intuitively compelling conclusion.  Although
the meta-analysis of case-control studies does provide support for the extrapolation from the miner
studies, it too can be criticized, and more explanation is required on why ORIA assigns essentially zero
probability to the threshold/hormesis hypothesis.

       The BEIR VI models are based on a linear-multiplicative relationship between radon exposure
and risk with no threshold. That is, the risk per unit exposure is constant within specific smoking,
exposure, and age categories, with a multiplier used to adjust risk among categories. However, the
BEIR VI Committee also noted that "alternative exposure-risk relations, including relations with a
threshold, may be operative at the lowest exposures" (NAS,  1999). The potential for a threshold for
radon-induced lung cancer should be discussed in the ORIA uncertainty analysis.

       Page 42. end of Section 1:  The nominal value for the average residential radon concentration
and the mean value for its distribution are different.  ORIA should, at a minimum, better explain this
difference and perhaps rethink its decision. The same is true for some of the other quantified
uncertainties.

       Page 50. Section 4:  Because all of ORIA's quantitative estimates  are for lifetime exposure to  a
constant concentration, it seems inappropriate to refer to the uncertainty due to age at first exposure.
Moreover, even if ORIA is intending for the uncertainty to apply to age-specific risk estimates, if the
Chinese tin miners showed a factor of two difference between children and adults, perhaps the median
should be adjusted downward before applying a distribution with geometric standard deviation (gsd) of
2.
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       APPENDIX A - EDITORIAL AND TECHNICAL COMMENTS
A.1  General Comments:

a.      Should Systeme Internationale (SI) units be used?  The risk coefficients given in Federal
       Guidance Report No. 13 (FGR-13) are in SI units. There are only a few places where
       traditional units would be appropriate, e.g., where  reference is made to BEIR VT, it would be
       necessary to use pCi L"1. Radon decay product concentrations are commonly expressed in
       units of working levels (WL) in the U.S. In the rest of the world, the quantity is potential alpha
       energy concentration (PAEC) expressed  in joules per m3 (J m"3) of air.

b.      Use negative exponents, e.g., Bq ~3 instead of Bq/m3.

c.      Should first person, which is used only seldom, be replaced by third person?

d.      In the entire document there is no consistency concerning when an acronym is defined and then
       used, e.g., ever smoking (ES). Once it is defined the acronym should be used consistently.

e.      Radon decay products should be referred to consistently throughout the document, i.e., either
       radon decay products (RDP), radon daughters, or  radon progeny.  Using these three terms
       interchangeably could cause confusion, particularly for individuals who have only a small degree
       of expertise in this field. The consistent use of the term radon decay products is preferred.

f      The term working level (WL) is defined as the concentration of radon decay products in air.  It
       is not a unit of exposure rate.  It only becomes a measure of exposure rate when the conditions
       of exposure are specified.  Table 3 on page 8 was  taken directly from Table A-4 of BEIR VT
       which does express exposure rate as WL.  However,  at the very least, Table 3 in the EPA risk
       document should include an explanatory footnote acknowledging that WL is not a unit of
       exposure rate, but under a specific condition,  such as residential exposure, WL is a measure of
       exposure rate.

g.      Equations should be numbered throughout the text as they are up to page 13.

h.      Some of age axes of graphs extend to 100 y and some to 120 y. It would be desirable to be
       consistent to facilitate comparisons.

i.      The axes in Figures 2 through 7 are hard to see. They should be redrawn.

A.2  Specific Comments on Model Uncertainty

       Rarely, if ever, can alternative empirical models be considered to represent "true" models
(NCRP, 1996). However, if among the alternative empirical models there is a preferred model (e.g.,
BEIR VT CM or ORIA SC model), then expert-based correction terms can be used on the model

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output, thereby modifying the output to account for model uncertainty subjectively (NCRP, 1996).  The
quantification of the state of knowledge of the correction terms may be a function of the model output
or its input. Generally, the set of alternative models is only an approximate characterization of the state
of knowledge, since the selected set is only a small subset of the full set of all possible alternative
models. However, no one ever attempts to find a full set of all possible alternatives for epidemiological
models. One lifetime may be insufficient for such an adventure.

       Occasionally, uncertainties about model structure are combined with uncertainties about model
parameters. In such cases, two approaches can be used (NCRP, 1996).

       1)     In cases where the model uncertainty is not assumed to be the dominant uncertainty, the
              subjective probability distributions that are specified for the uncertain parameters can be
              modified by expert judgement and made sufficiently wide to include the effects of model
              uncertainty. When model uncertainty is dominant, it would be difficult to contain it
              within the uncertainty assigned to model parameters.  An example of a case where the
              model uncertainty was not the dominant factor is described in the National Council on
              Radiation Protection and Measurements (NCRP) Report 126 (NCRP, 1997).  For
              low doses of low-LET radiation, the uncertainty range for the dose and dose rate
              effectiveness factor (DDREF) was expanded to account (subjectively) for model
              uncertainty.  The expanded uncertainty range was intended to account for all
              reasonable linear and sublinear models for atomic bomb survivor data. A threshold
              model was ruled out based on the data.

       2)     Subjective probability distributions that quantify uncertainty in model output can be
              obtained via expert judgement.  These distributions can then be used to adjust the
              distribution for model parameters through model fitting procedures (Cooke and Vogt,
              1990; NCRP 1996). In the past, this approach has been limited to relatively simple
              models (NCRP,  1996).
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                              APPENDIX B-ACRONYMS
AMCL       Alternate Maximum Contamination Limit

BEIRIV      BiologicalEffects of Ionizing Radiation Committee Report IV. Health Risks of Radon
              and other Internally Deposited Alpha-Emitters

BEIR VT      Biological Effects of Ionizing Radiation Committee Report VI. Health Effects of
              Exposure to Radon

Bq           Becquerel [The special name for the SI (Systeme Internationale of units) unit of
              radioactivity (1 Bq = 1 disintegration per second)]

• *            Effective Dose Response (or effective excess risk/WLM)

Ci            Curies [Nuclear transformations (disintegrations). The special unit of activity: One curie
              equals 3.7X1010 disintegrations per second.]

CRR         Constant Relative Risk (model)

EPA         Environmental Protection Agency (U.S. EPA, or EPA)

ERAMS      Environmental Radiation Ambient Monitoring System

ERR         Excess Relative Risk

ES           Ever Smoker

FGR         Federal Guidance Report

GSD         Geometric Standard Deviation

ICRP         International Commission on Radiological Protection

K             The factor which relates the dose per unit exposure in homes to the dose per unit
              exposure in mines (BEIR VI assumed that the K factor is equal to 1)

L             Liter

m             Meter

m3            Cubic Meter

MMM        Multimedia Mitigation Program
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NAS         National Academy of Sciences



NEPPS             National Environmental Performance Partnership System




NRC         National Research Council




NS          Never Smoker




ORIA        Office ofRadiation and Indoor Air (U. S. EPA/ORIA)




PAEC        Potential Alpha Energy Concentration (expressed on joules per m3 of air)




p            pjco [10"12] in combination with specific units (e.g., pCi L"1 Pico Curie per Liter)




PAHs        Polynuclear Aeromatic Hydrocarbons




RAC         Radiation Advisory Committee (U. S. EPA/SAB/RAC)




RDP         Radon Decay Products




Rn          Radon, as an element, or as an isotope (e.g., 219Rn, 220Rn, 222Rn)




SC          Scaled Concentration (Model)




SAB         Science Advisory Board (U. S. EPA/SAB)




SI           Systeme Internationale Units




Th          Thorium, as an element or as an isotope (e.g., 228Th, 230Th, 232Th, 234Th)




w*          Effective Cumulative Exposure




W           Exposures (expressed as Wi and W2, etc.)




WL          Working Level (radon decay product concentration)




WLM        Working Level Month (radon decay product exposure)
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