UNITED STATES ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION AGENCY
                              WASHINGTON, o.c,  204SO
March  23, 1987*                                       SAB-1C-87-025
Honorable Lee M. Thcnes                     .                       ™e *O*"N'*TB*T«>B
Administrator
U. S. Environmental Protection Agency
401 M Street, S.'W.
Washington, D. C.  20460

Dear Mr. Thomas: '

     The Science Advisory Board's Stratospheric Ozone Subcommittee has
completed its review of EPA's risk assessment document entitled An Assess-
ment of the Risks of Stratospheric Modification and  is pleased to transmit  its
final report to you.

     The Subcommittee carried out an independent evaluation of the assumptions,
conclusions and interpretations used by EPA in assessing the existing scientific
information related to stratospheric ozone  modification*  The Subcommittee
also advised EPA on the thoroughness and balance of  its treatment of particular
scientific issues, noting areas of omission as well  as areas emphasized  in
the assessment document, and reviewing EPA's characterization of scientific
uncertainties.

     EPA'S draft assessment document represents an extensive effort to develop
an integrated risk assessment, based upon currently  available scientific
information, to ascertain the potential, threat to the stratosphere posed by a
continued growth world-wide of emissions of chlorofluorocarbon compounds
(CFCs).  The Subcommittee generally finds that EPA had done a commendable job
in the body of the report of assembling the relevant scientific information,
although the Subcommittee has many recommendations tor improving the document.
The uncertainty in future-CFC ©missions has been characterized in the EPA
draft as encompassing 3 range of 0 to 5% for annual  emissions growth, with
1-41 as the most likely portion of the range.  The Subcommittee recommends  that
EPA present the 2.5% growth rate as one of  a series  of illustrative "what*if"
scenarios, rather than as a nost likely case.  The revised Executive Summary
adopts this advice,

     Depletion of the ozone column can increase ultraviolet radiation (UVB),
resulting in an increase in nonmelanoraa skin cancer.  Available scientific
.evidence suggests that nel^ncrta m<^y also increase as a result of increased
ultraviolet radiation.'  Thf-re nay bp other  significant health effects* in
addition to adverse impacts on plants *nd aguatic organisms.  Information
on the impacts 'Of increase'"1 ultraviolet radiation on plants and aquatic
organisms is extremely limu^.  The Subcommittee believes that the potential
for adverse impacts on plants and aquatic organisms  is sufficiently large to
warrant high priority for furt'.it*r investigation.

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     The Subcowittee believes that the information summarized in the draft
risk assessnent supports the conclusion''that the possible impact of CFCs on
the stratoephara should be considered a high priority issue for further
investigation and analysis by EPA and other Federal agencies, and provides a
scientific basis for the recently initiated international efforts to address
this problan.

     The Subcommittee reviewed the first draft of the entire assessment
document during its initial meeting.  Following that session, using comments
received frcro members of the Subcamiittee and the public( EPA staff rewrote
the Executive Surnnary.  This revision was resubmitted in time for the
Subcemmit tee's second meeting.  The Subcartmittee's report, therefore, provides
scientific advice on the revised Executive Summary and the first draft of the
individual chapters of the assessment document.  The Subcommittee members
have not seen revisions to the individual chapters and request that EPA staff
transmit the revised chapters and any further revision of the Executive
Sumtiary for their individual review once this task is completed.  Following
this individual member cycle of review, the Chair and Vice Chair will transmit
a letter to EPA noting the extent to which the Agency has responded to its
scientific advice.

     We appreciate the opportunity to participate in the evaluation of this
important public health and environmental issue.  We request that the Agency
formally respond to the scientific advice provided in the attached report.

                                 Sincerely,
                                 Margaret KripRe
                                 Chair
                                 Stratospheric Ozone Subccmriittee
                                 Science .Advisory Board
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                                   V\  W u-> A v  ^
                                 Norton Nelson
                                 Chair
                                 Executive Committee
                                 Science Advisory Board
cc:  A. James Barnes
     Jack Campbell
     Vaun Newill
     Craig Potter
     Terry F. Yosie

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                                           SAB-EC-87-Q25
                    REVIEW OF EPA'S
AN ASSESSMENT OF THE RISKS OF STRATOSPHERIC IWDIFICATIQN
                         BY THE
            STRATOSPHERIC OZONE SUBCOMMITTEE
                 SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD
         U, S. ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION .AGENCY
                     March, 1987

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              U. S, EWIRDNMENTAL PROTECTION /CENCY
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                              NOTICE
     This report has been written as a part of the activities of
the Science Advisory Board, a public advisory group providing
extramural scientific information and advice to the Administrator
and other officials of the Environmental Protection Agency.  The
Board is structured to provide a balanced expert assessment of
scientific matters related to problems facing the Agency.  This
report has not been reviewed for approval by the Agency, and
hence the contents of this report do not necessarily represent
the views and policies of the Bnvirorrnental Protection Agency,
nor of other agencies in the Executive Branch of the Federal
government, nor does mention of trade names or coimercial products
constitute endorsement of recommendation for use.

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                    U. S. ENVIROWENTAL PROTECTION AGENCY
                            SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD
                       STRATOSPHERIC O20NE SUBCOMMITTEE
 Dr. Margaret Kripke, Chair
 Anderson Hospital and
  Tumor Institute
 Box 178
 6723 Bertner Street
 Houston, Texas  77030

 Dr. Martyn Caldwell
 Department of iange Science
 Utah State University
 Logan, Utah  84322-5230

 Dr. Robert Dean
 3218 Northwest 31st Street
 Gainesville, Florida  32605
Dr. Janes Friend
Department of Chemistry
Drexel University
Philadelphia, Pa.  19104
                         Dr. Terry P. Yosie, Director
                         Science Advisory Board
                         U. S* Environmental Protection Agency
                         401 M Street, S. w. Roan 1145
                         Washington, D. C. 20460
                         Dr. Leo T, Chylaek, Jr*
                         Center for Clinical Cataract Research
                         1 Charles Circle
                         Boston, Mass.  02114

                         Dr. Thomas Fitzpatrick
                         Department of Dermatology
                         Warren-5
                         Massachusetts General Hospital
                         Boston, Massachusetts 02114

                         Dr. Donald Hunten
                         Lunar and Planetary Laboratory
                         University of Arizona
                         Tucson, Arizona  85721
Dr. Warren Johnson
Manager, Research Aviation
  Facility
National Center for Atmospheric
  Research
Jefferson County Airport
10800 West 120th Street
Broorafield, CO.  80020

Dr. Irving Mintzer
Director, Energy and Climate
World Resources Institute
1735 New York Avenue, N. w.
Washington, D. C.  20006
Dr. Nien Dak Sze
A.E.R., Inc.
840 Memorial Drive
Cambridge, Mass.  0213^
Dr. Charles Yentsch
Bigelow Laboratory
McKown Point
West Bootnbay Harbor,
                         Dr. Lester Lave
                         Graduate School of
                           Industrial Administration
                         Carnegie Mellon University
                         5000 Forbes Avenue
                         Pittsburgh, Pa*  15213
                         Dr. Warner North, Vice Chair
                         Principal, Decision Focus, inc,
                         Los Altos Office Center
                         Suite 200
                         4984 El Camino.Real
                         Los Altos, California  94022

                         Dr. Robert Watson
                         National Aeronautics and
                           Space Administration
                         600 Independence Avenue
                         Mail Code EE4
                         Washington, D. C.  20546
Maine 04575

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                            TABLE OF COOTHNTS

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I.     Introduction                                         1

       A.  -Scope and Charge of the Subcommittee's           1
           Review

       B.  Subcommittee Review Procedures                   2


II.    General Comments and Conclusions                     3


III.   Specific Comiwnts; Executive Surtmary                 6


IV,    Specific Comments on Individual Chapters             9

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I.   Introduction
     A.  Scope and Charge o£ the Subconroittee's Review
     On January 9» 1986 EP&'s Assistant Administrator for Air requested
the Science Advisory Board to evaluate the Agency's assessment of the
risks of stratospheric modification.  Specific questions posed to the
Board included reviewing and assessing EPA's treatment of the scientific
issues of concern (e*g., long term trends in trace gases, atmospheric
science, and health and ecological effects from ozone depletion).
     On January 31, 1986 the Science Advisory Board Executive Ocnroittee
accepted this request and authorized the formation of a Stratospheric
Ozone Subecninittee to conduct the review.  The Subcommittee's role was to
carry out an independent evaluation of the assumptions, conclusions and
interpretations developed or used by EPA in assessing the existing scientific
information related to stratospheric ozone modification.  The Subeotroittee
also advised EPA on the thoroughness and 'balance of its treatment of
particular scientific issues, noting areas of omission as well-as areas
emphasized in the assessment document, and reviewing EPA*s characterization
of scientific uncertainties.
     The Subcommittee's primary effort was directed.at examining the
scientific logic used by FPA in its efforts to synthesize the available
scientific literature.  Wiile it conducted a chapter-by-chapter review of
the assessment document, th« Subcommittee recognizes that not all -of the
issues discussed in each ohaptt»r are of equal public; health or environmental
importance.  ,
     At no time <1id thf ^^C'-jnmit'-t^e believe that  it,? role was to assist
EPA in writing the asfios^n.-fit document.  Instead,  it has offered specific
technical advice for v\-r >vinq the scientific quality of the document.  EPA

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trust then decide whether to accept or not accept this advice.  The sub-


committee also construed its role as an advisor rather than as a final


approval body that would supervise detailed editorial and factual changes


to all sections of the document.  The latter role was beyond the Subcom-
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mlttee's resource capability and was also inconsistent with the role of


an advisor performing a timely review,


      B.  Subcommittee Review Procedures


      The Suoccnmittee met twice in public session in Washington, D. C»,


on November 24-25, 1986 and January 26-27, 1987,  Notice of each meeting


was published in the Federal Register.  During its meetings the Subccmnittee


heard presentations from EPA staff and had the opportunity to provide


both verbal and written criticisms of the material submitted for review.


In addition, the Subcommittee made time available for members of the


public to present'verbal and written comments on the scientific adequacy


of EPA's assessment document.  Participating organizations included the


Alliance for a Responsible CPC Policy, Chanical Manufacturers Association,


Dupont Corporation, Environmental Defense Fund and Natural Resources


Defense Council, as well as individual members of the scientific community.


These presentations, and the interactions between the Subcommittee and


EPA staff, resulted in a wide ranging scientific dialogue whose aim was


to solicit information and facilitate the Subcommittee's effort to achieve


consensus on the major issues for which it was advising EPA.


     The Subccimittee reviewed the first draft of the entire assessment


document during its initial seeing.  Following that session, using


comments received from ntni>ers of the Subcommittee and the public,


EPA staff rewrote the rx^cutive Summary.  This revision was resubmitted

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 in time for the Subecwnittee's second meeting.  The Subcommittee's report,



 therefore, provides scientific advice on the revised Executive Summary



 and the fii»t draft of the  individual, chapters of the assessment document,



     Following its first meeting, the Subcomittee drafted an interim



 report that summarized its  major thoughts at that stage of the review,



 This was expanded and updated at the second meeting,  Final editing of



 the report was carried out  by mail and telephone conversations*  The Science



 Advisory Board's Executive  Committee approved the report by mail on



 February 25, 1987,           .



     The Subcommittee members have not seen revisions to the individual



 chapters and request that SPA staff transmit the revised chapters and any



 further revision of the Executive Summary for their individual review



 once this task is completed.  Following this individual member cycle of-



 review, the Subcatmittee Chair and Vice-Chair will transmit a letter to



"EPA noting the extent to which the Agency has responded to its scientific



 advice.



 II.  General Comments and Conclusions



     EPA's draft document 'represents an extensive effort to develop an



 integrated risk assessment  based upon currently available scientific



 information to ascertain the potential threat to the stratosphere posed



 by a continued growth ..world-wide of emissions of chlorofluorocarbon  (CFCs)



 compounds.  The Subcotmittee generally finds that EPA has"done a commendable



 job of assembling the relevant scientific, information in the body of the



 document, although the Subcormittee has nany specific recommendations for



 improving the treatnent of  particular scientific issues and characterizing



 scientific uncertainties,



     EPA'states the uncertainty  in-future CFC emissions as encompassing  a



 range of 0 to Si for annual emissions growth, with  1-4% as the most



 likely scenario within the  range.  The Subcommittee recommended  that EPA

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present  the  2.5% growth rate as one  of a series of  illustrative  "what-if"


scenarios, rather  than as  a frost  likely case.  The  revised Executive


Summary  adapts this advice.        •-*-,


     Calculations with one and two dimensional atmospheric models  indicate

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that continued CFC annual  emissions  growth of 2.5% or above could  lead to


depletion of global column ozone  by  several percent within the next forty

years and much higher reductions  in  subsequent decades  if this rate of


CFC emissions growth continues.   Ozone reduction will continue,  albeit at


a slower rate even if the  rate of emissions becones constant.  The retention


time of  CFC gases  in the atmospheric is decades to centuries, so that the


CFC buildup cannot be quickly reversed once it has occurred.  The  impacts


of O2one depletion will be largest at high latitudes and at high elevations


of the stratosphere, although changes in ultraviolet radiation will be .


determined by column ozone (total ozone in a column through all  levels of


the atmosphere),


     Changes in CFC gases  interact with changes in  jreenhouse gases (CC»2*


NjO, CH4) in determining changes  in  ozone concentrations.  Ihe impact of


CPC emissions on ozone concentrations may be even larger if growth in


these greenhouse gases is  reduced from current trends.  In addition, CFC


gases have a potential impact on  global climate, although this impact


appears  to be only about 20 percent  of that anticipated from changes in


CO2' ^2Of and CH4«  The impact on climate of changes in ozone concentration


appears  to be small by comparison.


     Depletion of the ozoric> column can increase ultraviolet radiation


(UVB), resulting in an increase in non-melanoma skin cancer.  Available


scientific evidence su;jj*-^rs that melanoma may also increase as  a  result


of increased ultraviolet radiation.  There may be other significant health

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effects, in addition to adverse inpacts on plants and aquatic organisms.


Information on the' impacts of increased ultraviolet radiation on plants


and aquatic organisms is extremely limited.  The 'subcommittee believes


that the potential for adverse iupacts on plants and aquatic organises is
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sufficiently large so that further research of these areas should receive


high priority,


     'The Subconndttee believes that the information sunnerized in the


draft risk assessment supports a conclusion that the possible inpact of CFCs


on the stratosphere should be considered a high priority issue for further


investigation and analysis by EPA and other Federal agencies, and provides


a scientific basis for the recently initiated international efforts to


address this problem.


     The draft document represents a useful step toward conminicating the


applicable scientific information to decision makers, but decisions on


CFC regulations will require further analysis of the regulatory options


beyond the analyses presented in the draft risk assessment.


     The Subcommittee has reviewed, but has not evaluated in detail, the


quantitative projections of health and other iinpaets associated with growth


in CFC emissions that are contained in the draft risk assessnent.  The


integrating model.appears 'to be a useful vehicle for summarizing the


implications of alternative assumptions regarding emissions, atmospheric


response to CFCs and other trace gases, iirplications for changes in


ultraviolet radiation, and consequent changes in the incidence of skin


cancer in the U. S. population during the lifetimes of the current


population anci those Individuals born during the next century.  Some


other impacts (e.g., ^eononic costs of damage to polymeric materials,


soybeans as an example ;>t crop loss, and anchovy loss as an exainple of

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population  inpact  for a sensitive aquatic species)  are  included in the


quantitative analysis using  the  integrating model.   Mary potentially
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iiffjortant tracts  are not  included since the  information to support
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quantitative projections of  these inlets is  not yet available,


     "Itie draft document makes a  reasonable attenpt  to characterize


uncertainties in scientific  knowledge and in  the assumptions for growth


of CFC emissions.  The Subcommittee  recommends  further  efforts  to state


assumptions more explicitly  and  to more clearly characterize the limits


of currently available information,


     The draft document is long  and  repetitive  and,  yet,  sane critical


information is not readily available.  As an  example, much of the discussion


of CFC emissions' projections in Chapter 3 -presents results with little


information on underlying assumptions and data.  EPA has taken  these


results from contractor reports  that are not  available  in the peer reviewed


literature.  It is highly desirable  that the  final  tiocument, with its


appendices, be self-contained and reasonably  ecmple^.   Additional appendices


summarizing contractor work  and  documenting more fully  the integrating


model of Chapter 17 may, therefore,  be needed.


     In summary, the entire  draft document represents a good first effort


to summarize an exceedingly  complex  set of  issues,  and  the Subcommittee


cenmends EPA for the progress achieved to date.


III. Specific Comments on  trw Revised Executive Sunrocy


     The Subccwmittee l>»l1"•.'<>? the Executive  Summary is extreinely Important


because it  is likely r - r.%>-r.v'  the  most attention  and  will be  used for a


variety of purposes, ir.-'I , ii'v; dorv^tic regulatory  decision making and


international negotiat >.. ••',<.  "or this reason,  the Executive Summary needs


to be accurate and ex; I1 '\' ,  m-,1 provide a balanced overview of the

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content and conclusions of the entire assessment document,  the Subcomnittee



spent cost o€  the time at its second meeting reviewing and discussing

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this portion- o£ the document.  It reached the following 'conclusions and



recommendations:
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     1.  The revised Executive Surarary represents a marked improvement



over the original version.  Our major criticism of the original Executive



Summary was its failure to reflect accurately and objectively the content



of the individual chapters in the report.  EPA staff have made significant



progress in correcting this problem.



     2.  Additional revisions are still needed to reach the necessary level



of accuracy, balance and clarity,  the Subcomnittee recomends that both



the findings summary and the chapter summaries be organized into subsections



to facilitate their presentation.  All long headings in the chapter



sunraries should be shortened to a brief sentence.  The document should



also present an outline or diagram illustrating the atmospheric processes



involved in the creation and destruction of ozone.  Many specific suggestions



for improvement of the Executive Summary were discussed with or submitted



in writing to Mr. John Hoffman for incorporation into a second revision



of the Executive Summary.



     3,  Although the Executive Summary is now more accurate and objective



in describing the information and conclusions of the•entire document,



statements interpreting the results for non-scientists, and indications



of the relative importance of the  issues considered, need to be provided.



For example* each point made in the Executive Summary appears to be given



equal weight, when clearly, the issues differ widely in terms of their



potential significance,  specific  recommendations for addressing this



problem include:



     a) EPA should clearly and forcefully state that, by the time  it  is

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possible to detect decreases in ozone concentration with a high degree of

confidence, it may be too  late to  institute corrective measures that
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would reverse this trend*

     b) Predictions of ozone depletion derived from atmospheric models

are consistent, in most instances, with actual measurements of ozone

concentration, even though these measurements are subject to considerable

uncertainty.

     c) Both the relative state of knowledge, arid our ability to obtain

new information in the irrmediate future are different for each area

summarized in the document.  For some issues, it will take decades to

obtain missing information whereas, on others, rapid progress can be

predicted.  However, this variation in the information base should not

preclude recognition of the potential problem of ozone depletion or

making decisions that address the  problem.  Decisions can and should be

made, even in the face of current  uncertainties,

     d) The Executive Suntnary should provide a sense of proportion and

balance arong the scientific issues evaluated, particularly in presenting

the findings of the document.  Clearly, the consequences of ozone depletion

could be major for some effects, even though the amount of information

available is small.  A large amount of information does not necessarily

inply greater importance compared  to the effects on which little information

is available.  EPA should attempt  to prioritize the effects that night

result from ozone depletion and to distinguish between effects that are

of greater or lens^r consequence on a global scale*  The following table

is provided to illustrate th^ '^ubccwnittee's view of the relative significance

and state of knowledge t ir each of the effects summarized  in  the report;

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Etfect
Skin Cancer
Irwune System •
Cataracts <.
Plant Lite
Aquatic Life
Cl irate Infsacts*
Tropospheric 03
and H2^2
Polymers
fitat£ or Knowledge
Vx \i ra t«= t^ Kiqh
Low
' Motieratp
Lo?
Lrv
Ntodt'rattt
Moderate
Moderate
Potential Global Iitpact
Moderate
High
LOW
High
High
Moderate
LOW
LOW
* Contribution of 03 to climate changes, including sea level rise



     A principal use of this table could be as a guide to research planning,



especially in conducting research for effects where current knowledge is



low and potential global impacts are high.  Such a table is, however* an



iitperfect guide for allocating research dollars, ann is subject to change



as new information becomes available.



     The Subccrranittee does not know, based on current knowledge, whether



effects with a potential global'inpact designated as "high" with a state of



knowledge designated as low will occur but, if such effects are experienced,



they could be significant.



     e) The Executive Sunroary should devote less snphasis to climate change



and its effects, such as sea level rise.  It should focus, instead, on



the contribution of changes  in ozone concentration to climate modification,



rather than reviewing all the radiative ly*-aetive gases that affect cliirate*



We recognize that the ozone depletion and global warning (greenhouse)



issues are linked; nonetheless, the enphasis in this document should be



placed on stratospheric, rather than trcpospheric processes.



iv.  Specific Comments on Individual Chapters



     Chapter !_:_ Goals _and_ j^>proaph



     This short introductory chapter was not formally reviewed.  The

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 Subccwnittee  endorses  the  statement  of  purpose  for the  risk  assessment.

      Chapter  2j_  Stratospheric  _Pgrturbants;_ Past Changes^ in Concentrations

      This  chapter on past  changes  in- Concent rat i-oti of stratospheric  perturbant

 gases is generally  acceptable  as written.   The  discussion of CD should be
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 strengthened, and additional discussion of  volcanic gases and  trace  gas

 lifetime may  be  appropriate.   The  more  accurate term "steady-state"  should

 be used instead  of  "equilibrium,"  EPA may wish  to move  the discussion of

 atmospheric response dynamics  (page  2-21 to page 2-25)  into  Chapter  5, or

 elsewhere, as a  part of  the discussion  on modeling stratospheric response

 to perturbant gases.

      ChagterJ?;_Bmissions	of Ozone Modi fiers

      At the Subconmittee's request,  EPA developed a set of "what-i£"

 scenarios  to explore the range of  reasonable outcomes for future CFC

 world production.   In Addition to  cases with constant growth rates in the

 range of 0-51 annually,  EPA considered  cases with near-term  growth followed

 by a  leveling off and decrease in  production levels.  EPA should seek

 assumptions and  additional insights  to  characterize the CFC  uses that may

 cause high future demand for CFCs, such as  widespread use of air conditioning

 and refrigeration in developing nations, as opposed to  describing scenarios

 only  in terms of annual growth rate.  Characterization  of the  potential

 for substituting in various CFC uses may provide  a means of  developing

 insight on the relative  likelihood of the production scenarios.   Given

 the importance of the uncertainty  in future world CFC production levels

on the projected tining *rv1 magnitude of stratospheric  ozone changes,

 further research on CFC uses and their  alternatives is  highly  desirable.

     Chapter 4^ Future £ms_sions and Concentrations of  Trace Biases

     As in Chapter 3, a central case for the growth of  C02 and other

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greenhouse gases.may project a misleading  impression of current ability


to predict the future evolution of 'atmospheric conditions,  The EPA


responded bo the Suhceranittee's suggestion to explore a set of scenarios
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and a range of plausible future conditions.  However, insights on the

potential role of fossil fuel uses, changes in deforestation, and other


factors underlying changes  in greenhouse gas levels should be described.


Uncertainty on non-anthropogenic emissions and resulting uncertainties in


the trends for 0*4 and N^O  should be discussed further,  This chapter could


benefit frcm extensive rewriting and reorganization.


     Chapter Ss Assessment  o|_ the Risk of  Stratospheric Ozone Modification

     The discussion of one  dimensional tl-D) models should be condensed, while


more discussion of two dimensional (3-D) models and perhaps three dimensional


(3-D) modeling approaches would be useful  in explaining the current under-


standing of the complex set of relationships determining ozone levels and


climate changes.  It is crucial to communicate the extent of predictive


power of current models.  We recognize 'the need for improved models that


can describe seasonal and regional" changes in ozone abundance and the


resulting climatic changes.


     The Monte Carlo analysis'Of Stolarski-'and Douglas  indicates that


screening sets of variables to combinations that are reasonably consistent


with available atmospheric  measurement data changes the character of the


results as stated in the ;*:xecutive Summary and the findings of Chapter  5.


The discussion on pages 5--JH ,ind 5-93 with, Figures -S-57 and 5-58 should


became the basis for r^vi^inq the scateinent of these results.  The choice


of material for the chrtp*vr summary should be  iirproved,  The  chapter


Could benefit by extent ;•••-.  .-cniing and rewriting.

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     Chapter 6: Climate Change

     The Subcommittee judged this to be one of  the better written chapters,

providing a balanced sunraary of the" available scientific information on

climate change.  However* the focus of the chapter should be the contribution
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of changes in ozone concentration from clinate modification, rather than

a review of all the radiatively-active gases that affect climate.  The

chapter should place more enphasis on stratospheric, rather than tropospheric

processes.  Linkages between ozone concentration charges and climate change

should be highlighted, and more attention paid  to the effect of changes

in the vertical distribution of ozone to climate impacts.  A separation

of direct and indirect effects would be useful.  The chapter should focus

on the direct effects of ozone on climate, and  briefly sumnarize the

indirect effects of trace gases tfhose concentrations affect both ozone  '

concentration and climate.

     The document should define the eddy diffusion roefficient.  The

discussion of the importance of cloud cover in determining heat balance

should be expanded to at least half a page.  More discussion of sensitivity

analysis and comparison of 1-D and 2-D model results would be appropriate,

and some discussion of further research using 2-D models to explore

sensitivity issues would be a useful addition to the chapter.  Ocean

thermal lag is another irrportant issue for determining climate response

and could use more discussion.  Absolute concentration information should

be added to exhibit 6-3.

     Chapter 7j^ Nonmelanorna jSkjin Cancer

     The Subcommittee >"Vir.'»lly agrees that this chapter is concise,

comprehensive, and well written.  No deficiencies were noted in the

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breadth of the material reviewed in this chapter.  The Subcoroiittee concurs

that considerable evidence supports the conclusion that increased UVB

would increase the incidence and niSrtality of riSrroalanama skin cancer.

Specific encore in the text were noted and discussed with appropriate
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staff members.

     Points requiring revision or remaining to be addressed in the body

of the text are the following:

     1.  There needs to be a clear statement of the potential impact of

increased UVB radiation on mortality from basal cell carcinoma and squamcus

cell carcinomai

     2.  The document should present a discussion of the validity of

existing mortality data for nonmelanma skin cancer and justification for

not basing predictions on these data.

     3.  The action spectra discussed in the chapter should be presented

diagrammatically.  These Include the action spectra for CNA, the modified

DMA action spectrum corrected Eor skin transmission, the FB meter action

spectrum/ the cutaneous edema action spectrum* and the ereythema action

spectrum.

     4,  The chapter should justifiy the selection of the action spectra

used in the calculations.

     5.  The major problem with this chapter concerns the translation of

information within the chapter into statements concerning the expected

numbers of additional cancer cases 'and additional cancer deaths.  The Sub-

committee requested an -vidtsnrlupi that contains1 a list of the assumptions

underlyirxj the calculated increases in cancer incidence and mortality and

some indication of the uncertainties contained within tKese predictions.

This addendum was received, and information frcm it needs to be  incorporated

into the chapter.  The addendum itself should be included in the appendix.

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      6,  Ttie Subcommittee earlier suggested  that  a  range  of  values  for

 incidence and mortality be utilized  that would  reflect  predicted  upper

 and  lower li«lta of  increased UVB expbsure, rather than using the central

 case values.  The staff have adopted this suggestion in the revised
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 Executive Sunraryj it needs to be incorporated  in  Chapter  7.

     Chapter 8 i_jtej.ancnva

     In general, the Subcommittee agrees that this chapter provides  a

 conprehensive analysis of the evidence  for and  against  the role of sunlight

 and  UVB radiation as a contributing  factor in the  development of  cutaneous

 melanow in humans.  Although there  are still many uncertainties  concerning

 the  relationship between UVB and melancwa, the  weight of current  evidence,

 especially that provided by recent epidemiologic studies,  favors  the

 conclusion that increased UVB radiation is likely  to increase the incidence

 and mortality of cutaneous melanoma  in  humans.

     The points remaining to be addressed in  this  chapter  are the following;

     1*  The staff has provided a statement of  the issuin>tions underlying

 the  calculated increases in the incidence and mortality of melanoma  to

 the  Subcommittee, along with justifications for the  choice of critical

 assumptions.  This information needs to be incorporated into  the  chapter.

     2,  Two concepts need to be addressed in a revised chapter*  The

 first is that UVB radiation could contribute  to the  incidence and mortality

of melanoma without being a direct,  causative agent  responsible for  the

 transformation of normal melanocytes into cancer cells.  The  chapter

presently considers only the likelihood that  UVB is  a direct, causative

agent that induces eutarwous nelanona (See Figure  1).   Second, the

chapter should emphasize (-.hat r.he tern  "roelanoma"  may actually encottpass

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 FIGURE 1:

Solar Ultraviolet and Malignant Melanoma of the Skin*
Solar UVR
       \
          Initiator
                       Inability to tan
                       (Skin types I &
                       Normal melanocyte
       Promoter
?Systemic alteration
conducive to MM growth
(Rosdahl Effect)
                                     Transformed cell
                                      Melanoma cell
*in the white population
                                                       Clark's (dyspJaslic)
                                                       melanocytic nevus

                                                       Common acquired
                                                       melanocytic nevus
Altered
melanocyte
                                                                  " Defective DNA repair
                                                                   (e.g. Xeroderma
                                                                   pjgmentosum)
                                                                  Defective immunologic
                                                                  surveillance
                                                                  (e.g. following
                                                                  renal transplant)
                                                                          T.B FiUpairick

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a heterogeneous group of disease entities.  The possibility that there


may be subsets of cutaneous melanoma that ace caused, exacerbated or


completely unrelated to UVB should be raised in seeking explanations
                                   • *•»

for the oteoare relationship between sunlight exposure and melanoma


incidence.  ,


     3.  Material included in this chapter as background information {pp,


8-7 to 8-13) also applies to chapter 7 and should be moved to the beginning


of chapter 7 and integrated with the information on action spectra.


     4.  The statements on the evidence supporting the conclusion that


solar radiation is one cause of melanoma (p. 8-4) need to be revised to


reflect more accurately the available scientific information.


     Chapter 9 i Intnune System


     The Subcommittee concurs with the general sunraary and conclusions


reached in this chapter.  Specifically, there is reason to believe that


UVB radiation has the potential to modify untune responses in humans and


that such nodifieations could conceivably increase the incidence or


severity of some infectious diseases.


     In general, the chapter is not ^ell written or well organized, and


the Subcommittee made nany detailed suggestions concerning appropriate


revision of the material to increase both its accuracy and its clarity.


However, the suggested revisions would not alter the general conclusions.


     The Subcommittee notes several deficiencies in the presentation of


the wDrk that require revision.  They include;


     1.  The chapter dors not clarify the fact that several different


Lmmunologic consequence ot f/VB irradiation occur, each of which nay have


a different action s^vcr.r^p.  The available action spectra should be


illustrated in a fiurn.

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      2.  The document should state that UVB exposure produces systemic
     •  .                        '   -.v,
 iimunologie Ganges, as well as local changes within irradiated skin,

 Restricting consideration to cutaneous infections may represent too narrow

 a view of the potential consequences of increased UVB irradi4tion.

     3.  This chapter should state that, although UVB induced effects

 on the inwune system might contribute to the induction and pathogenesis

 of skin cancers, this fact is not likely to increase the predicted

 estimates of increases in skin cancer incidence and mortality.

     4.  A point needing further emphasis is that most imnunologic studies

 to date have not assessed the effects of long-terrof chronic UVB irradiation,

 but have concentrated on acute effects.

     Chapter 10; Cataracts

     The chapter on cataracts and other eye disorders is comprehensive and

extremely well written.  The Subcommittee does not believe that any major

study has been omitted in .-the bibliography, and EPVs assessment of each

paper appears to .be accurate and balanced.

     The findings are accurately stated and succinctly express the

legitimate concern that an increase in the flux of the UVB radiation may

lead to an increase in cataract incidence around the world.  The Subcommittee

agrees with these findings,and with the Agency's method of presenting them-

     Near the end of the chapter, the document emphasizes the effect of

UVB radiation pn the DNA content of lens cells.  This .represents an

 important point that is well treated in the chapter.  Researchers have

emphasized the effect of 'irradiation on lens protein, and there has been

relatively little discussion of, the'impact of UVB radiation on lens DNA,

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     The selection of epidemiologic studies relevant to this issue  is


correct and well presented.  A major*limitation which EPA staff may wish to


address is that all of the studies are handicapped by the lack of an
           
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radiation, and  interactions with other environmental factors such as
                                  •«».,
drought and carbon dioxide enhancement are discussed.  Interpretation of

the data and caveats concerning limitations in drawing conclusions frcro

these data are  offered.

     Overall, the text, considering the  length allotted, is reasonably

eoitfjlete and balanced.  On the other hand* the summary tends to accentuate

results supporting the detrimental effects of ozone reduction.  Ihis

results in a statement of findings and a summary which are much less

balanced than the text itself.

     Chapter 12L Aquatic Effects

     this is a  very thorough, well written chapter.  It accurately conveys

the extant information on the effects of solar ultraviolet radiation on

aquatic systems and explains the difficulties in extending these data to

an assessment of the effects of stratospheric ozone reduction.  Itiere are

a few passages  describing laboratory experiments where it is not clear

whether the ultraviolet radiation simulating a certain ozone reduction

is calculated as that striking the water surface or at seme depth in the

water.  Occasionally, experimental results are not always clearly

distinguished from calculated impacts.  We believe the issue of large

migrations of aquatic populations, e.g.  30° latitude, while illustrative,

are unrealistic and could he misleading.  These could be eliminated

without detracting from the content of the chapter.

     As with Chapter 11, assessing the impacts of stratospheric ozone

reduction on conrruniti^s ana pcosysterns  has received less attention and

research than issues, such'.33 skin cancer.  The Subcommittee believes the

potential impacts on A;IMCic ^nd terrestrial food chains, and  the potential

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effects on the equilibrium of plant and animal assemblages, are just as
                                  • ••..,
unportant aft the more  intensively studied human effects,  This inportance

needs to be^conveyed not only in Chapters 11 and 12 but also  in the summaries

of these chapters and  in the Executive Summary.

     Chapter 13; Polymers

     The economic analysis on polymer damages is based on the assumption

of a small increase in the destruction rate of the polymer material

multiplied by a large value for the inventory of material in  place.  The

assumptions of the analysis should be stated more clearly, and the

uncertainities in this economic analysis should be highlighted.  Discounting

future damages should be discussed.

     The rate of polymer degradation depends on the actual action spectrum,

which is undoubtedly different for each Kind of polymer.  These spectra

should be measured experimentally before any confidence can be placed  in

the predictions.  In many cases, it would be expected that UVB contributes

only a small fraction of the total rate and, therefore, the rate would

be very insensitive to changes in stratospheric ozone.

     The estimates presented by EPA are reasonable in the absence of real

data, but the required measurements are not difficult and should be made.

     Chapter 14; Potential Effects on Tropospheric Ozone

     The document should present a more extensive introduction to the

discussion of health and welfare effects of troposphetic ozone.  The

modeling discussion no** found on page 14-11 should be expanded and placed

near the front of the chapter.  The material on page 9 should be shown as

a graph.  Ml three ci'.-.^z should be shown in the figure, page  14-12.

The word "snog" is col!'^;uial and should be avoided-  The discussion of

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the spectral resolution of UV needed for photochemistry should be strengthened.


The question of what happens to global tropospherlc ozone as UVB increases
                                  • •.*.,,

needs expanding (seme discussion of this issue is found in Chapter 5)*


The limitations of the analysis in this chapter should be stressed more.


The effect of CFC emissions reductions on tropospheric ozone .should be


discussed.  Discussion of mass flux and other interactions between the


troposphere and stratosphere should be added.


     Chapter, I5t_ Seajjevel Rise


     The Subcommittee reached a consensus that this chapter adequately covers


the subject material.  However, additional (jualifying statements need to be


added to the summary statements,


     This chapter requires more careful caveats in the suntnary and findings


and references to raajor reports on sea level rise.  Assumptions should be


clearly stated.  The range of 50-200 on, o£ sea level rise seems narrow  in


view of the many uncertainties on climate change, and the basis for


calculating this range should be made explicit•  The implications for loss


of land of a I meter rise night be stated.


     More discussion of the economic aspects of sea level rise would be


desirable.


     Chapter I6_and_ appendix B; Impacts of Climate Change


     The. discussion focuses mainly on North America and Europe.  The Subcom-


mittee encourages the staff to present rnore  information on the  rice crop


and other aspects of agriculture  in the developing world.  The  document


should emphasize that nnvf-rta.inf.y in the regional effects  is  substantial.


Catastrophic episodes RUO^ as floods, droughts, and severe storms nay


cause much of the damage, ir,d these episodes cannot be reliably predicted.

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     This chapter represents a compilation of potential consequences of global



warming.  These synoposes address potential changes  in forest and other



vegetation distributions, agricultural implications, hydrological cycles



and weather effects on morbidity and mortality.  This collection of



vignettes is, of course, one of only many possible compilations since



global warming can have many ramifications.



     Chapters17 and 18; Integrating Model and Results



     The objective of the integrating model is to provide a framework



within which the implications of alternative assumptions and policies can



be identified.  The Subcommittee finds this objective commendable and



supports EPA's effort to make the assumptions and the logic used in the



risk assessment explicit and readily avail-able to interested members of



the public.  The integrating model appears to be a good vehicle for



summarizing the assumptions and calculations described in previous chapters



of the risk, assessment.  An integrating model such as this represents an



excellent tool for examining the implications of alternative assumptions—



"what if" scenarios—and for investigating the importance of uncertainties



in different areas ot science for policy and research conclusions.



     The logic and implementation of the integrating model as a computer



code were the subject of a factfinding meeting of four members of the Sub-



committee on January 14, that also included John Hoffman of EPA, and



representatives frctn EPA's contractor, 1CF.  Prior to the meeting, these



Subcommittee members received a listing of input files and the FORTRAN



computer code for the model.  Other technical documentation for the model



does not exist at this t-. i-^v.  Rased on the written material in Chapter  17



and the discussion at this meeting, the Subcommittee believes that the model,



and the results of the rv
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reasonable.  However, the model has not undergone detailed review outside



of the EPA/ICF team that developed-it, and it has not been documented and



placed in a form accessible to outside parties*



     The material in Chapters 17 and 18 will need substantial revision as



the analysis with the integrating nodel is revised to meet reccronendations



from the Subccmnittee regarding the Executive Sunmary and the other



chapters.  The revised versions of Chapter It and 18 should stress the



structure of the model and the insights obtained from the analysis that



has been carried out using the model, including: what issues were addressed



and not addressed in the model, and how issues not included in the



integrating nodel could affect overall conclusions.  The sensitivity analysis



and the interpretation of the sensitivity analysis should be expanded, and



conclusions on the importance of uncertainty in various areas of science



made more explicit,  what areas of science are most significant for policy



conclusions and as targets for future research? As one exanple, the Sub-



cownittee judged that impacts on plants and aquatic organisms are among



the most important potential effects of ozone depletion* yet these impacts



are included in the tnodel only by considering changes in one cropf soybeans,



and one species of aquatic organisms, anchovies.  More conprehensive quanti-



tative assessment of potential impacts on plants and aquatic organisms should



be identified as a target for further research and analysis as the risk



assessment methodology is further refined.  As another exai^ple, the



integrating model does not include mechanisms  relating to the recent



observations of ozone depletion over Antarctica.  As a result, it would



be inappropriate to cite the results of the model as indicating that



changes exceeding a few percent  in stratospheric ozone concentration will



not take place until well into the next century.

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     The integrating model should Have extensive""additional technical

documentation.  A listing of the FORTRAN code  is inadequate as a basis  for
            <\
communicating the details of the model.  Many parties  interested in

stratospheric ozone risk assessnent may find it valuable to have access

to the integrating model in order to carry out analyses of the inpacts  of

CFC emissions on ozone and climate change.  The Subconmittee  recommends

that EPA provide adequate technical documentation of the integrating

model in the focm of appendices to the risk assessmentr and that EPA

include in its future plans the development of a "user-friendly" version

of the integrating model that can be placed in the public domain for use

by others.

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