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EPA    Report of the Indoor
       Air Quality/Total
       Human Exposure
       Committee (IAQTHE)
       Review of the EPA
       Indoor Air Quality
       Implementation Plan

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            UNITED STATES ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION AGENCY
                        WASHINGTON, D C. 20460


                         December 15,  198S


 The Honorable Lee.  M.  Thomas                         T^e ^''i.'U
 Administrator
'U.S. Environmental  Protection
    Agency
 401 M Street, S.W.
 Washington, DC  20460
                               SEi   Report on the SPA Indoor
                                   Air Quality  Implementation
                                   Plan
 Dear.Kr  Thomas:

      I am  pleased  to  transmit via  this letter  the final
 report of  the Science Advisory  Board1s (SAB)  indoor  Air
 Quality and  Total  Human  Exposure Committee  (IAQTHE)  on its
 review of  the  "EPA Indoor Air Quality Implementation Plan"
 as required under Sections 403(c)  and (d) of Title IV of the
 Superfund Amendments and  Reauthorizatlon Act  of 1987 (P.L,
 99-499).   This same report is also being transmitted to the
 Congress  under separate  cover  as  required  under   Section
 403(d)  of the Act.

      The  Committee  found the Implementation   Plan  and its
 Appendices  to  be useful  and well done.     It  is clear  that
 the Agency has identified in a rather comprehensive manner
 the level of our knowledge concerning indoor air pollution.
 Nevertheless,    the   Committee   was   concerned   that
 recommendations of  earlier  SAB  review panels who provided
 advice on the  total human exposure  program  in 1985  and the
 indoor  air  program  in  1986  have  not been  addressed,
 particularly with regard to  program  management and strategic
 planning.   These  earlier recommendations  and how they relate
 to the present review  are discussed  in the attached report.

      The  major  conclusions and  recommendations  of  the
 Committee  concerning  the  Implementation Plan include the
 need for:  development  of  criteria for establishing research
 priorities; a full  time Director with expertise,  authority,
 and direction to  set-up an adequate  program;  adequate
 funding to  support  an  effective  indoor air  quality program;
 coordination of research with other  agencies;  increasing the
 role of research on the  sick building  syndrome (SBS) and
 building  related  illnesses (BRI); more emphasis on strategic
 planning  to  address both long  and short term goals;  and,
 wide dissemination  of  EPA's  research findings.

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Letter to Mr. Thomas	Page
     The Committee  appreciates this  opportunity to  review
and present  our views  on the Agency's  Indoor Air  Quality
Implementation Flan.
                               Sincerely,
                                         fy^ -- '
                               Morton Lippmann,  Ph.D.
                               Chairman
                               Indoor Air Quality and Total
                                 Human Exposure Committee
     Don Barnes
     Erich Iretthauer
     Eileen Claussen
     Don Clay
     Ray Loehr

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           THS SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD
   INDOOR AIR QUALITY AHD TOTAL HUHAN EXPOSURE
                    COMMITTEE
                  REPORT OH THE
     INDOOR AIR QUALITY IMPLEMENTATION PLAN
(As  required by Section 403(d)  of the Radon Gas
  and Indoor Air Quality Research Act of 1936)
                December IS, 19SS
             SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD
      U.S. ENVIlQNUtiTAI, PROT1CTI01I AGENCY
                 WASHINGTON, DC

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                            'ABSTRACT


     Under the provisions of Title IV of the Superfimd Amendments
arid  Reauthorization Act  of 1987  (P.L. 99-499), the  Science
Advisory  Board  of- the U.S.  Environmental  Protection Agency has
established the Indoor Air Quality/Total Human Exposure Committee
(IAQTHE) to review the Agency's Indoor Air Quality Implementation
Plan  and  to provide  continuing  advice to  the Administrator  on
indoor  air  issues.   This  is the  Conumittett's   first  report,
reflecting its views on the  Imp lenient at ion Plan forwarded to the
Congress in 1987.  The Committee's major  recommendations  include
the  need  for?  criteria for  establishing  research priorities?  a
full-time Director  with expertise,  authority,  and direction  to
set-up  an adequate program?  adequate funding  to support  an
effective  indoor air  quality program,'coordination  of  research
with other agencies? increasing the role of  research on  the  sick
building syndrome and  building related illnesses; more  emphasis
on strategic planning to address both  long and  short term goals;
and wide dissemination of EPA's research findings.
Key Wordaj.  Indoor Air Quality, Radon

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              U.S.  Environmental Protection Agency

                             KQTICE


     This  report  has been written  as  part of the  activities of
tne  Science Advisory  Board,  a  public advisory  group providina
**tra*ural scientific information and advice to th*  Administrate?
and other  officials of  the Environmental  Protection Agency   The
Board  is  structured to  provide  a balanced expert  assessment of
scientific matters  related to  problems facing the  Agency.   This
report has not been  reviewed  for  approval  by the  Agency?  and,
hence, the contents of  this  report do  not necessarily represent
the views  and policies  of  the  Environmental  Protection Agency or
other agencies in the Federal Government.  Mention of trade names
or commercial  products  do not  constitute a  recommendation  for
X1S6 *

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              U.S. ENVIROrotENTAL PROTECTION AGENCY
                     SCIENCE ADVISORY BOARD
                        WASHINGTON, D.C,
        Indoor Air Quality/Total  Human Exposure Committee

Chairman

Dr.  Morton  Lippmann,  Professor,  Institute  of  Environmental
     Medicine,  New York University Medical  Center, Tuxedo
     NY

Vice-chairaan

Dr. Jan A.J. Stolwijk, Chairman,  Department of  Epidemiology  and
     Public Health, School of Medicine,  Yale university, New
   •  fiav-an, CT
Or. Joan Daisey, Indoor Environment Program,  Lawrence Berkeley
     Laboratory, Berkeley,* CA

Ms, Mary Ellen Fise, Product Safety Director, Consular Federation
     of America, Washington, DC

Mr. Seymour Jablon, Bethesda, MD

Dr. Victor G. Latle», Professor of toxicology, Environmental
     Health Sciences C»nt»rf University  of Rochester Medical
     Center, Rochester, NY

Dr. Jonathan  X. Samet,  Professor o£ Medicine,  N*w Mexico Ttimor
     Registry,  University  of  H«w  Mexico   Medical center,
     Albuquerque, NX

Dr. Keith J.  Sehiager,  Director,  Radiological Health Department,
     University of Utah, Salt LaXe city, UT

Dr. Jerome J. Wwoloimki, Chief,  Air and Industrial Hygiene
     Laboratory, California Department of Health, Berkeley, CA

or. Jam«« I. Wood*, Senior  Engineering Manager,  Honeywell
              Controls  Division,  Golden  Valley,  MK
science Advisory  Board s.taff

Mr. A. Robert  Flaak,  Executive Secretary and Environmental
     scientist, Science Advisory Board (A-101F) , U.S.
     Environmental  Protection Agency, 401 X Street, SW,
     Washington,  DC

Ms. Carolyn  Osbome,  Staff Secretary, Science Advisory Board
      (A-101F) ,  U.S.  Environmental Protection  Agency,  401 M
     Street,  SW,  Washington, DC

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                        TABLE OF CONTENTS



     1.0  EXECUTIVE SUMMARY ................   1

     2,0  INTRODUCTION  .............*..*.   2

          2.1  Background .*..*...*..,.,...   2
          2.2  Charge to Committee  .......  4  ....   3
          2.3  Previous Recommendations of Science
                 Advisory Board Committees and Panels .  .  .   3
          2.4  Format of this Report  ...........   5

     3,0  POLICY OBJECTIVES AND RESEARCH STRATEGIES . ,  ,  .   5

     4,0  PROGRAM MANAGEMENT AND COORDINATION .,..,,.   5

         4.1  Internal Management 	 ......   5
         4.2  Interageney Coordination  	  .  .   6
         4.3  Budgetary Constraints ,	   6

     5.0  GENERAL COMMENTS ON THE IMPLEMENTATION PLAN ...   7

         5.1  Radon Gas ............,»*...   ?
         S.2  Other Indoor Pollutants ..... 	   7
         5,3  Sick BtiiMinf Syndrome and Building
                Related Illnesses .............   3
         5.4  Workshop on Strategy	* *   8
APPENDICES
         A.  Specific Comments on the Implementation Plan
             and its Appendices.

         a.  Report of the Radiation Advisory Committee  to  the
             Indoor Air Quality  and Total Human  Exposure
             Committee

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      EXECUTIVE
  (SAB) Was established under Sectio? 403 ^ t/ iSf A^vj"sory B«ard
  indoor Air Qualify S.«rSh A?? a? 1995 ^ Thi«^Rafn GaS  and
  the Committee concerns its  review of thl" ..pp* T /  * -r<5port of
  Implementation Plan- (EPA ?™7* ^ Quality
  its assoli^d1 ^ndi^'tfL^? f** ^fle^^ation Plan and


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Related  IlInmsBmm (HI)  m incrwlngly  bLiag1  nwoaniMd  a!
                  2? ^oor air «^i"i                 "
                  «xi»tinf res*arcsh effort.
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           o   Of "^ us"* Ea* »  Ct  di«cted  the
 establish  a  research ^ oroa™ Tn !J?ental  Protec*i<»» Agency  to
 research progru ^tas to bl S.JSJ5 ?^* Pj**  Poll«tantS. J The
 in  order  to bStef understtnd thf  hl^f^^ data »«I«i«ition
 gas  and other  inIOolSr^iiu^^lth  ^f^^tions  of radon
 state,  I0cal,  HI prive                          of
             of
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envxronaental  and health  ri«t*  ™  4at H  8.  to  mitigate




submitted in July 1987.             revised and expanded  version


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orally at the meeting  with  individual written  comments provided
by committee members  following the meeting.    Initially, the
Committee planned  to  submit  its  comments  to  Congress  on the
Implementation Plan after the committee completed, its review of
the report required under Section 403(e) of  the Act.  Since this
latter report has not  been  made  available for  Committee  review,
it is  not  now possible  to  complete  the Committee review  until
early  1989,  therefore,  the  Committee   has  finalized its
recommendations  concerning the Implementation Plan in the  interim
in this report.



     Under the provisions of Sections 403(c)  and (d)  of  the Radon
Gas and  indoor Air  Quality  Act  of 1986, the Committee has been
charged with the following responsibilities*

          a)   To assist  the Administrator  in  carrying  out the
research program for  radon  gas  and indoor  air quality   [Section
403(C)].

          b)   Review the plan for implementation of  the  research
program on indoor air quality and submit its comments on  the plan
to Congress [Section 403(d)j.

     The Committee has taken this charge broadly.  Under Section
403 (e)  of  the Act,  the  Administrator  must  submit  a  report  to
Congress which details his  activities under Section 403,  making
recommendations   as  appropriate.    At its  November  l§-20, 1987
meeting,  the  Committee  provided the Agency  with  its   comments
regarding the preliminary outline  of this report.   Although not
specifically mandated  to review this   particular document, the
Committee  recommended  that  under the provisions of  Section
403 (c),  the  Agency  provide  them with the opportunity  to  review
the  report  and make  appropriate  suggestions prior   to its
submission to Congress.   The Committee asked for the opportunity
to review this report prior  to its submission to  Congress.

     The  Committee views  its   charge to include  providing
continuing scientific  advice  to both the Administrator  and the
Congress, as appropriate.

     2,3    Previous Recommendations bv Science Advisory  Board
              Committees and Panels

     On  September  3-4,  1986,   the SAB's  Indoor  Air   Quality
Research Review Panel publically reviewed the Agency's  indoor air
quality  research program as part of the SAB's continuing series
of research reviews designed to  examine the research programs  of
the  Agency's Office   of  Research and  Development  (ORD).   The
purpose of these reviews was to provide the IPA Administrator and
the  Assistant Administrator  of  ORD with  insight  as   to their
research programs.    specifically,  the  SAB  reviews were  to
identify  whether research  was   being  don*  in  a  scientifically
sound manner, and whether the research was appropriately targeted

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to  regulatory needs  of the  Agency.   The  present  Committee
(IAQTHE)  is,  in part, a successor to that earlier research review
panel.   With many  of the  foirmer members serving on the present
Committee  an excellent  link to  previous SAB experience  and
deliberations concerning indoor air quality has  been established.

     The indoor  Air Quality  Research  Review  Panel  reached a
number of pertinent conclusions that are appropriate to mention
here since they are closely tied  to  the efforts  of the present
Committee.   Their major conclusions include the  following:

          a)   The Agency  should  develop  and adopt a clear policy
statement that indoor air quality is an important  and  essential
part of its responsibility.  This statement should  clearly define
the  policy  and  program goals toward  which  the research is
directed*

          b)   Responsibility for the indoor  air quality program
should be assigned to an individual  of  strong,  proven leadership
who has appropriate scientific stature and specific experience in
this area, who would devote full time attention to this program
and to the implementation, of a research  needs assessment.

          c)   An effective indoor air  quality program must toe
multi-disciplinary with clearly  recognizable goals.

          d)   The Agency  should  carefully articulate how it plans
to  integrate work carried  out by  other public agencies  and
private organizations into  its own research program.

     It appears that although much progress  has been made,   some
of  the previous  concerns of  the  SAB have  yet to be  fully
addressed.    Through its implementation plan  and  supporting
documents EPA has  articulated policy objectives for its approach
to  characterize and understand  human health  risks from exposure
to  pollutions in  indoor  environments.    Nevertheless,  a  strong
program of  research must emerge,  not just a  collection of
competent research that is not always linked  together.

     The Agency has attempted to provide sound  leadership for its
indoor  air  research  efforts,  but  still  has  not identified a
single,  well qualified  individual  to   lead the   program.   The
several  managers who have  been shepherding the program thus far
are capabl*  and are doing  commendable jobs,  however,  the program
would be  better  served  by a full-time  manager  who  is  not
splitting ti»* with other major responsibilities.

     Effort* have  been made to provide  adequate interdisciplinary
links  within  the  Agency   to  foster  indoor   air  research.
Nevertheless, a stronger programmatic strategy is needed to  focus
it.   such  a strategy  is only now coming  about.   Interagency
coordination has  developed considerably  »ino* the P^ous
review,  with member agencies  of the CIAQ participating more, and
with the EPA representative  to that group being  a senior manager
in  the  indoor air  program  area  within EPA.

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     2.4    Format of this Report

     This report links earlier activities of the Science Advisory
Board  to the  present effort  in reviewing  indoor air  quality
research programs.   This  report  contains three  sections  which
are:   Policy  Objectives  and Research  Strategies,   Program
Management   and coordination,  and  General  Comments  on  the
Implementation  Plan.   Detailed,  specific comments  from  several
Committee members concerning  the  reviewed documents are contained
in Appendix A.

     Since  the  SAB  his  a  permanent standing  committee  on
radiation -  the  Radiation  Advisory  Committee  (RAC)  -  it decided
that the RAC should  perform  the  review of the radon gas portion
of the Implementation Plan and provide its comments to the IAQTHE
Committee.    Three members  of the  RAC were appointed to serve on
the IAQTHE Committee to  provide  a bridge.   The general  comments
and conclusions of the RAC have been  integrated into the present
report, however, their complete report is  included as Appendix B.

     This report constitutes  the  formal  report  of  the Science
Advisory Board's Indoor  Air Quality  and Total  Human  Exposure
Committee  to  Congress  and  to the Administrator of  the U.S.
Environmental  Protection Agency  on ita review  of the  Agency's
Indoor Air  Quality  Implementation  Plan as  required  by Section
403 (d) of the  Radon Gas and  Indoor Air Quality Research Act of
1986,


3,0  POLICY OBJECTIVES AND RESEARCH STRATEGIES

     Although  not specifically  charged  with responsibility to
regulate indoor air  pollutants,  EPA is still  the Federal  agency
for which indoor air quality is closest to  its  central  mission.
The Agency does regulate some indoor air pollutants through other
means.  For example, household pesticides are regulated under the
Federal  Insecticide,  Fungicide  and  Rodentieide  Act,  and  toxic
chemicals undar thm Toxic Substances Control  Act.   While  this
creates some degree  of control over indoor  pollutants,  it  is not
an integrated  approach to the problem.   The  ability  to enforce
regulation of  indoor exposures is  severely  limited by physical,
fiscal, and  political  constraints*   Therefore, alternatives such
as education and licensing (or authorization or certification) of
those  responsible for providing indoor air quality should also be
considered.


4,0    PROGRAM MANAGEMENT AND COORDINATION


     4.1   Internal Management

     The U.S.   Environmental Protection  Agency  has  completed a
fairly comprehensive review of th*  status of  our knowledge  of
indoor air  pollution,   identifying a  number of research  needs

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               ?' U
             and  design a  research  stratgy which  will

             0?* tei? L9°alS*  The current S^rch program  s  one
                ^« ."»  JdMt*^**™*l™4y Siting Unel
             .   There are  few  clear  directions  for  the future  in
  the  existing  program.   Although many of  the ongoing  research
  projects address important indoor air quality problems,  therl  are
  also  instances in which  projects or lomponLts of projects  are
  rather peripheral and/or repeat work which has already bet n done?
«*^™  i!  J^i!:10**1 to  the succes*  o* the  indoor  air quality
progran  that  the Agency  appoint a  full-tine Director  for the

  ^      th   CCif
                                                                e
              ?PCCif i? e*P*rtise in i«to«r air qualiy  and that he
 «f    • *   given •*•«?»*•  authority and  control  If  budget to
 establish  research  priorities,  and  to  design and
                              ,                                 a
strong research program.   The fact that the Agency  Ms not ye?
designated a single director suggests a half-hlarted coUittmint
                                                               n
              *hich Con9^s clearly views as important.   Because
        limited resources which will be available to this  oroaram
       :.hc1next11fesr  y*ars'  this  Doctor must  also be  abT? ?o
 effectively collaborate with  other  agencies  through the  CIAQ in
 order to  stretch resources  to meet  stated  goals.   Although a
 single,  senior Director is  needed to focus the  indoor air  ouality
 progran,  we must compliment  th« current managers for  navincr
 accomplished as  much as they have  with such  a  fragmented and
 poorly supported effort.                                «nte« ana

      4-2    Interaaencv
 _   Xt is lilwly that  some of the  research  being performed at
 other agencies can help to meet national and EPA research needs.
 Good communications  and  relations  between  agencies will be
 essential  in  this effort,   it would be desirable if other members
 of the CIAQ  provided  a listing  of  indoor  air quality research
 projects  for each of  their agencies, much like EPA  has done in
 Appendix  B of the June  1587  Implementation  Plan.   This would be
 useful  to  EPA in avoiding  duplication of research efforts.

      4.3    Budgetary Constraints

      The   EPA indoor ait-  quality budget  i*  simply inadequate to
 meet  the n«*d» of thm  progran as stated by the Agency,  even  with
 its present narrow focus.   This is a problem that can  be traced
 to  inadequate  funding  from Congress  as well  as  a  less   than
 aggressive approach from  EPA in seeking expanded  funding.   For
 example, in FY88 th« budget  allocated to th» Office of Research
 and Development  was  $2.3 million, with an additional  $o.3 million
going to the  Offic* of Air  and Radiation.    This issu«* requires
 further attention fron both  Congress  and 1PA.

     A  possible  mechanism  of  funding  that  has  not  been
sufficiently  utilized  is  the  EPA's  Extramural  Exploratory
Research Crants  Program.   For FY 88  and  FY  89, this program has
about an  $8 million budget, reduced  from  about $11 million in

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              eary      .i,,                  the  I98i
          towards innovae rsercn



  5'°  SEVERAL COMMENTS QH THE IMPUm^TATT



      5. 1  Radon
 of the  IAB-S siai,^ ^  t«  »•  Present

                                                          °
 survey be supported and carried out as soon asossible.
           lad^tail"d COBdnents *^« contained in th«  report of the
           Advisory Committee to  th« IAQTHE  Committee  - See
        «d                            -                  Taon
are included in Appendix A (see pages A-4  through A-6)

     5-2   Other Indoor
            lan1e  of Govern is  still biased heavily  toward
            environments  rather  than a dual  approach that also

ST "JSST »u™%r'Cial  I1?  .PUbAic »^^/public access holdings?
we  were  surprised  that  the   document  contained  no  risk
                                                 assessments for
populations are not presently pos«4ble.   Although we agree that
          S8m«*?  are ?"««»«r they  are not impossible  as
          by EPA's Scoping Study on Indoor Air Quality  (prepared

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by-,t»eJ?f£!Ce of Pro
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SPECIFIC COMMENTS ON THE IMPLEMENT.ATION.


             AND ITS  APPENDICIES
        Dr.  Joan Dmiscy          A-l
        Mr.  Seymour Jablon       A-3
        Dr.  Vic Latiea           A-3
        Dr.  Jon Samet            A-4
        Dr.  Jerome Wesolowski    A-6

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  C.0HMENTS  FROM DR. JOAN DAISEY

  Appendix  At

  p.  1-7:   Some  relative  risk estimation is  feasible  at present
  e.g.,  radon,  VQC.

  p.  2-5,  Table 2-1:    This  type of information can be helpful  in
,  establishing  research  priorities.    The  figure  of   4%  of  the
  population  exposed  to  gas phase' organics,  in the table,  is
  ridiculous*   The T1AM (Total Exposure Assessment Methology)  study
  as well as others have demonstrated that this figure is more like
  100%!

  p. 2-29:  The last sentences of paragraph 2 and: 3 contradict each
  other.

  p. 2-noffj   The whole issue of samplers for VQC needs a critical
  look.  sampler development must be well  integrated  with overall
  EPA  research  objectives.   The qannister  sampler has  been very
  strongly  pushed for  VQC despite  the success  of the adsorbent
  sampling method used  for the TEAM study,   the cannister samplers
 were originally designed to take grab sampels in remote locations
 where levels  are low.  They are very bulky to handle and ship and
  require expensive  controls  in order to  be used  to  obtain  an
  integrated sample.    The Tenax adsorbent  sampler also  has some
  limitations with respect to the compounds which  it  can collect.
 However,  there  are commercially available multi-sorbent samplers
 which can be  used to  extend the range of  compounds sampled.  The
 multi-sorbent  sampler has  been used  at  LBL  (Lawrence Berkeley
 Laboratory)  for indoor  air studies and  shown to have very high
 accuracy and  precision.  It is quit*  feasible to develop sorbent
 samplers for  more reactive  and/or polar compounds  for  use in field
 studies.   Project 13  in  the Research Program  (Appendix B)  is an
 Assessment of Screening (Sampling,  presumably)  Techniques  for
 Indoor Air Pollutants*    A  very  critical  look at  the  cost-
 effectiveness of the various  sampling devices  available,  their
 specific  applications, the need for each application and at their
 acceptability to th* public since  they must  be used in homes,
 buildings, etc., is needed.  It is  not clear why a field test is
 needed in this  project  since most of  the  devices mentioned have
 already b««n  widely used in the field.

 Appendix  Bi

 Project 14 - Why ar« ther* plans to develop a method for nicotine?
 Or. Hammond has developed a  very good  sampling and analysis method
 for this compound.
Project 15  - Are there plans to couple a micro-processor with the


                                A-l
realtime NOZ monitor?

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  Section  I. A. a. a.  The  strategy for this needs to be discussed
  Section  I.B.  Item number 1 should be "Scope of the Problem.11
 COMMENTS gggKLMH. SEYHOUH JABLQJT

 Implementation Plan:

      Page  5:   The very  first item under the general  heading of
. 'Indoor Air Policy Objectives and Strategy'  refers to the intent
 to  "...refine  its assessment of the nature  and  magnitude o^ the
 health  ... problems  posed  by individual air pollutants...11.  This
 general intention is specified with respect to radon on page 15 of
 Appendix C. 'EPA  Radon Program.'  There,  the  first item under the
 heading 'Radon Exposure  and  Health Risk'  is: ''Conduct a National
 Assessment  of Representative Structure  Types   and  Geographical
 Locations."

      The EPA  clearly realizes that the  data presently available
 concerning  the  distribution  of  radon  levels  in  residences,
 workplaces, schools and other public buildings is  inadequate: there
 are  available surveys  in particular  places,  often  relying  on
 volunteers, using a variety of measurement devices. Something like
 ten percent of  the housing  stock of  the country  may  exceed the
 recommended guideline of  4 pCi/1 for radon. As the experience with
 the Reading Prong made  plain, there can  be large  areas where,
 unsuspected,   residents  may  be exposed  to  high,  and  dangerous,
 levels of  radon.   The proposed assessment is, therefore, not onlY
 highly desirable but needed  urgently,   in the  face of this need,
 which is recognized by EPA, it is  disturbing  to learn that despite
 the fact that  the proposed  survey has  been in  the  planning and
 review process for yeacs, there are no  funds in the FY as budget
 for the survey.  I would point out that the  Plan,  as reported to
 the Congress,  is apparently not supported by  the  intention to act,
 at least not this  year.   I regard  this as very unfortunate, to say
 the least.                                                       *

 Preliminary Outline?

      To my untutored eye,  the Outline  seems quit*  thorough and
 complete.  I presume that the  Radon Measurement Proficiency Program
 would come  under Volume  II,  lv.,B.,l,   "Radon Exposure and Health
 Risks".  Thi»  is an  important program,  especially since it seems
 quite pos«ibl«  that  EPA will one day be  mandated  to  certify
 organization*  that  offer measurement  services  and having  this
program in place,  with the , kinks worked out,  will be very helpful.

COMMENTS FROM  DR.  VIC LATIES

Implementation Plan;   objectives and Strategy section  fpgs 5-71 i

1.   The  section  seems  too  focussed upon  EPA 'a  own intramural
activities.     Nowhere does   it  ncognize  efforts  within  the

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  environmental health sciences by other parts of the Agency itself
  or by other parts of the Federal government. For instance take the
  first point:   "The Agency will conduct  research  and  analysis to
  further  refine  its assessment	»   This statement,  coupled with
  the appendix outlining what intramural work  is being done  pays no
  attention  to EPA's  Extramural Exploratory  Research Grants  and
  Centers  program,  which can  support  research at  universities on
  questions of interest to EPA.  I have been sensitized to the role
  2£ 5 «t  ef.fort  bv  service  on one  of  its  study  sections  and think
  that EPA gives it too little support.   This report  ignores its role
  in generating the  interest of  the larger university  community in
  problems associated  with  indoor  air guality.   EPA's  intramural
  scientists however worthy simply can't solve all the many problems
  in this vast area by themselves.

  2.   Emphasis on  improving exposure  data and  on modeling  seems
 excessive to me.  These are important topics but our knowledge of
 health effects remains weak  for many of  the substances  important
 for indoor air quality.  No  other agency has either  the enduring
 interest in air quality or  the  in-house expertise  to run a program
 in that area.  EPA .should  support research  on  the health effects
 of air quality,  if it does not, the whole area is  likely to wither
 COMMENTS FROM DR.  JON SAMET

      With regard  to  the "1PA  Indoor Air Quality  Implementation
 Plan",  I have only  brief comments to  offer.   I concur with  the
 overall  objectives, but have some concerns about the approach that
 will   be   taken   to   meet    the    first   objective,   "Problem
 Characterization,"  The  strategies  listed are largely directed at
 describing  the overall extent of the indoor  air  quality  problem
 largely   by  combining  a  description   of  exposures  with  risk
 assessment   methodology.     Does  this   strategy  represent  the
 appropriate basis  for  problem-solving  or  merely  provide  more
 elegant  descriptions of  problems that we already know about?   He
 need  strategies  for identifying those  individuals  placed  at high
 risk  by  their  individual  exposures;  without  this  capability,
 interventions  to reduce  health  effects  will  be unsoundly  based.

      I   see   the  work  scopes    described   under   "Problem
 characterization"  as not appropriately balanced between studies of
 exposure and of health effects.  Inevitably, a risk projection model
 will  indicate health effects for many exposures that are likely to
 be measured in U.S.  homes.   However, these  risk  assessments will
 be   subject   to  substantial   uncertainty   unless   appropriate
 laboratory, clinical,  and epidemiological studies are planned and
performed.

     With regard to  Appendix  c "EPA  Radon Profraii,"  I think that
the committee  should  have access to  materials that are mentioned
 in the document to  fully  understand the  current radon program.  The

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 strikingly different froa the information already available;
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           ,   ,   -       	  so  that such fundamental differences
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             of  the Syndrome, the  sym,  the      i  facor!









      Although  the authors  state  that EPA  is  *dtina a  «<9,,»iii
               -    H^/?- t 5MV
             sources.  Thus,  it  does not  in fact  reflect a  55S?
 SPP*«C!i'. i**}" thia COUM bc  remedied  by a  thorough
 on SBS and by improving the "Building Syste»«» chaptll.
                             s a US«^1 start in assessing current
 Specific
        i"l*   *lthou9h "Estimation of health hazards  from  specific
        situations or  sources  nay be nore  useful  than trying to
       ^             in  specific  risk  nwnbcrs) ,     However  risk
                            *  in  "^  to
                          lS * «-*««tiS fas, n nonco^uslon gal!
      ±  £5 orfanj-c, and a non-coabustion organic.  To denonst?ate
      JS f8 1   °onfuillon 'I «ot« the awkward sentence on p.  2-123,
     noneonfcustion gaa-plia»« organic compound is formaldehyde which
  «!°«.4* prCKillcJ: °f conbustion".  A better definition might be
 Combustion  product*   can  be  divid*d  into  inorganic   ams**.
principally nitrogen diojcid*, carbon monoxide and sulfur dioxide »
P^r^iCiegf and organic compoundqf including PAH and  formaldehyde" .


i.   «P^ l~7 ***•*>  1st  sentence,  insert the article "as"  before
"an 8 -hour day",
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                       tV°
  not cpl:            V° •«t«i<». of th. first paragraph are
                    have
                                   ba
does £TS,   pPAiances contribute to far larger
                                                       than
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                                                                -
      p. 1-12.
Radon is also actively monitored.


         ™ "2l.u220ir"-*t*t" V--i««^idi»l pollutants from such
            * «eaaur«d and  correlated with  source  presence or use

                              are not measured. "  Wilt is meant

                                                not
 ™  .              *
that.                 heir eraissions  quantified,  they should  say
a  verv c«i*?* Sj*0" ?ate "•••«»« usually the emission,  of
               ?i Bixtur*  of  organic and  inorganic  gaseous  and

         ro»Pini±fV'    Zf  «*Iitl«>*  ^*  <"»apl«* mixture  that
           3 incomplete combustion can contain a variety


    usa of t*11*'  *1**   * ™«**1** chemical
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      p.  1-12.    The  authors  should  refrain  from  using  such
 Mass-media jargon as  "formaldehyde is a suspected actor in the sick
 building syndrome," Further, why single out formaldehyde as one of
 the factors in SBS?

      p, 1-18.  There are typographical  errors in the last three
 columns of the E.T.s. section  of  the Table,

      p. 2-1.  Again, one doesn't normally refer to  noncombustion
 and   combustion    particles   but   rather   to   particles   and
 combustion-generated particles.   Likewise one does not'normally
 refer to noncombustion fas-phase  organic compounds but to organic
 compounds and combustion-generated  organic compounds.

      p. 2-2.   The authors bring  out  the  important difference
 between_exposure, concentration  and dose.  However, they use two
 erpre&aions for exposure,  viz, "nominal  exposure11  and  "exposure."
 They never  state  the difference  between  exposure  and nominal
 exposure.

      p. 2-4.   The authors state the lower tail of distribution can
 identify especially sensitive  populations."   It is not  clear how
 an  exposure distribution  will  identify who  is sensitive in the
 population.

      p,  2-4.   The authors state risk  estimates  for  populations
 exposed to indoor air pollutants  are therefore premature.1*  Refer
 to  an earlier  general comment on  this issue.

      p,  2-41*    The  section  on  Sulfur  Dioxide  is  structured
 differently  than  those on  Carbon Monoxide  and Nitrogen Dioxide,
 specifically exposure and conclusions are missing, as  well as the
 opening paragraph describing the compound. Furthermore,  the first
 paragraph  on monitoring discusses particulate matter, not sulfur
 dioxide*

      p,  2-6.   Nitrogen  dioxide  and  sulfur  dioxide  are indeed
 products  of  complete  combustion,   certainly not of  incomplete
 combustion.

      p. 2-8.  I suspect that the statement that most American hones
 use natural  gas and that  most do  not vent the combustion products
 outdoors i»  in error.'  It likely true for gas ranges and ovens  but
 is  not  tru* for  water  heaters, wall space heaters  and  furnaces.
A reference  is needed.

     p. 2-9.   The GEOMET  Technologies,  Inc.  reference that burner
design  does  not influence emissions is out of  date.   Research by
the  Gas Research Institute has  produced  a  burner  design  that
appears to reduce N02 emissions.  Research by LBL  for the us  CPSC
showed  substantial  differences  in  NO,  emissions  for  unvented
gas-fired space heaters even after adjustment  for heat output which
was attributed to differences  in  burner design,
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      p.  29.   Last paragraph: 500 and 600 hours should be 500 and
 soo homes.

      p.  2-14.   Traynor conducted a study measuring the emissions
 of  NO, NQ2,  CO,  and C02 from several wood stoves. This study should
 be  referenced.

      p.  2-16.   "The absence of reliable emission factors from the
 indoor sources makes it impossible to establish a relative ranking
 between.."  This statement is simply not true.  The emission rates
 illustrated in Table 2-6 vary for well known reasons: 1) the rates
 listed are  for  appliances  with different combustion rates, e.g.,
 the emission  rates for the gas  space heaters  were obtained from
 heaters whose inputs ranged from 12,000  BTO/H to 40,000 BTU/H, and
 2)  contrary to the statement  on p.  2-9  burner design does affect
 emission  rates.   Moschandreas has conducted and reported upon an
 extensive study of the various  test methods and  showed that the
 various  methods  generally gave comparable  results within  the
 experimental errors produced  by  state-of-the-art instrumentation.

     p.  2-17.    What  are  the authors  referring  to  as unburned
 benzene hydrocarbons?   What  is  a benzene hydrocarbon?  How is  it
 different from benzene?  Do they mean aromatic hydrocarbons?  Are
 they  referring  to PAH?  If so,  strictly speaking, they probably
 should not  be referred to as unburned  since  they are formed  in
 flames and  are  in  a sense  combustion generated.

     p. 2-17.  Emission rates from combustion  appliances are. well
 known with  the exception of  SVOC.   It  has not been demonstrated
 that these are produced in  sufficient quantity to warrant extensive
 study to obtain these  rates.

     p.  2-26,   In contrast to what  is  implied,  cigarettes are  a
minor source  of NOj  On* could  not  measure the rise in N02 in  a
 room where  a  cigarette is  smoked (see for example, Good, Eviron.
 Int. S, 1982).

     p. 2-29.   Systems designed  for  monitoring N02  in ambient air
have been employed to monitor it  in indoor environments in many
studies.  Improvements would be very welcome  but it is not true
that the system* are too large and complex to be used indoors. It's
been done frequently.

     p. 2-30*   It is unlikely that H02 is absorbed by  materials:
it  is adsorbed.    In  addition,  there are   studies  which have
guantitated this effect for various materials. These results  and
references  should  be added to this report.

     p. 2-31.  How do  you  "roughly assume"?

     p.  2-41.   The authors  have  offered  no  proof that,  NO,  is
likely to have either an additive or synergistic effects with other

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        pollutants.11  In fact,  the statement contradicts the one on
 p. 2 -31 which  states  "Thus  we have  no  significant knowledge  of
 additivity,  synergism,  or  antagonism  associated  with  NO   in
 mixtures with other combustion products, Much  less with the Zf«ll
 range of indoor air chemicals,1*

      p. 2-110.   The discussion regarding the variation of emission
 rates  from adhesives  is  somewhat  naive,  indicates  a  lack  of
 knowledge of the studies in the Table, and the authors  implication
 that there is a right answer is incorrect.   Certainly  temperature
 is important.   For "wet" building materials such as adhesives the
 age( of the material is very important.   The relative humidity may
 be important for certain products because of the specific chemistry
 involved, e.g.,  formaldehyde from urea-formaldehyde remains  because
 of ^ hydrolysis,"  product loading may also  be important  for products
 which contain  the chemical  as  a bulk  constituent,  e.g..  again
 formaldehyde in urea-formaldehyde resins and p-dichlorobenzene in
 moth crystals; air exchange rate, per se. is probably not important
 but the local velocity of the air stream near • the  boundary layer
 may be very important. Unfortunately the report  misses  the major
 surprise _of Table  2-23'; the rates listed are amazingly similar when
 one  considers  that l)  the ages of the adhesives  range  from 0.5 h
 to 14 days:  2) the chamber volumes ranged from 3,8 L to 1000 Lj 3}
 air  exchange  rates varied  from 0.04  h-1  to  14  h-lf  and  most
 importantly, 4)  it is highly probable that none of thai, researchers
      testing the same adhesive from the same manufacturer with the
 same  formulation.   Why would anyone  expect  to measure the  same
 emission  rate from  different products?   Presumably some of  the
 adhesives  even cane from different continents.  One of  the  major
 points  of  the study cited  which examined 15  different  adhesives
 (Girman et al.,  1984b)  was that there were large  variations  in
 organic emissions from different adhesives,  even those with  the
 same nominal application  (and this from a study that used the same
 methodology  in determining  rates so  that the comparison  should be
 valid) .

     p.  2-42.    The  authors  state  that" . . . particulate matter
 consists of  liquids, aerosols or solid particles  ...*,   Aerosols
 are not a  type of particulate matter.   An aerosol  is a gas system
 with solid and/or liquid  particles dispersed in it.

     p.  2-47,    Tli*  reference  to  Sexton  and  Repetto  (1982)
 concerning the mutag*nic  density for cooking stoves and  cigarette
 smoke is incorrect.  The correct reference is Sexton et al.,  1984.

     p. 2-50.  The authors state that human exposures to inhalable
particulate  . . ,  probably has increased due to  concentrations of
 fine aerosols or ultra-fin*  particulars generated within homes and
offices."  What  is the  evidence  for  this increase?

     p. 2 -61.   Chang* PNA  to PAH.


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     p»2-63.  The authors state that "...  nonpolar fraction.,-only
accounts  for  about  one-third  of  the  mutagenicity*..".  Because
one-third i*  larger than usually  reported,  a reference here  is
important.

     p.2-64.  The last sentence of 2.3*7  and the first  of  2.3.7.1
are almost identical.

     p.2-64, Sec. 2.3.7,1  In their article, Pandy, et.al.  did not
say the dwellings were "unventilated11 tout only »fillventilated*< cf.
(p,414 of Vol. 4 of Stockholm conference).

     p.2-122.   A Bore recent paper on the "BaJce-Out11 procedure is:
Girman, J., Alevantis, L*, Kulasingham,  G.,  Petreas, and  Webber,
L.(1987) "A Bake-Out of an  Office  Building" proceedings of the 4th
International Conference  on Indoor Air Quality and climate,  Berlin.

     Table 2-39.  A more recent paper which demonstrated irritant
effects to be associated  with HCHQ exposure  in a state-wide random
survey of mobile homes is:  Liu, Kai-Shem Huang,  Fan-Yen? Hayward,
S.8.,  and  Wesolowsfci,  J.J.   (1987).     "Irritant  Effects  of
Formaldehyde In Mobile Homes", proceedings of the 4th International
Conference on Indoor Air Quality  and Climate, Berlin.

     p. 2-95.   Top  of page -it  might  be worth  noting that the
araphiboles  are  also more  resistant  to  acid  than is  chrysotile.
This is especially true of crocidolite.

     p. 2-95.  One of the more  important  uses of asbestos  has been
in spray-on fireproofing and acoustical  insulation.
                   • ;* •( ,, ,
     p.  2-96.   Many  of the  studies mentioned in thiys  report
measured  concentrations of, airborne  asbestos  in ng/m^.   Such
measurements  involve to* use  of  indirect preparation, including
ashing and sonic  dispersion.   This means that the results_are  not
interpretable in terms of  fiber concentration or fiber size. _  in
most of these studies this  is not  a serious flaw, as long as fairly
high concentrations are detected.  However, the Sebastian  study on
floor tile  should have been repeated using direct  methods.   This
is because  it is not  elear how iiuch the  fiber* were bound in a
vinyl matrix, which would have  been oxidized and removed by ashing,
thus fiber* might have been counted which may or may not have been
biologically  relevant.

     p. 2-97.   Top of page- Most fibers are not too  short to be
detected  In the optical  microscope.  They are simply too thin.

     p. 2-97,  Bottom - chrysotile identification by morphologytis
not  enough.   Electron  diffraction  is  required  for  positive
identification.
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     p  2-99.   The relationship  300 ng/m3 - 10,000 fibers/in3 seems
rather high.   A reference is needed.  Our work would  indicate^ that
10,000 fibers /m3  usually equals approximately 0.1 to 1 ng/m .

     p.  2-103.    A  discussion  of  asbestos  in  homes  would be
appropriate,

     p  2-130.  Polonium 214 decays to  lead-21Q  with  a  half-life
of 164 microseconds,  rather  than  22  years.   It  is  lead-210  that
has a half- life of 22 years.

     D  2-131.  The text states  that radon decay products are very
small  particles which agglomerate rapidly and readily  attach  to
surfaces.  Of course  atoms can be considered  particles in  the
Save-plrticle quality sense.  However, it would be more informative
just  to say  Sat the  decay product  atoms are solids at  room
temperature;  so that when  they are produced by  the decay  of the
radon gas atoms,  they readily agglomerate or attach to surfaces.

     p  2-131.   Bottom of the page- The lower limit of detection
for  radon  in air is  listed  as  SOO pci/»f<0.5 pCi/D -   Since the
report  lists  levels  measured in outdoor air which are lower than
500 pCi//, this is clearly not a lower Unit of  detection for some
methods    Even for  methods  typically used  in  indoor air , lower
limits of detection are commonly achieved using  longer integration
times.

     p.  2-132.   Bottom of the  page-  "The radon is released  from
the  water at elevated temperature*,  and when  the water  is. ..
should read  "Radon release from the water  increases  as  the  water
temperature  increases,  or  when  the water is...

     u  2-134.   Mow could comparison to the National Ambient  Air
Quality Standard  for particular matter be illuminating in any way?

      D  2-137, 2-138,  It does not make sense  to  state that the
link between a given air concentration  of radon  and the consequent
ration dosage involve* the ratio of indoor radon  levels to
outdoor level*.

      p, 2-146, second to last sentence.  "Typo  on knowledge".

p  2-146.   This section  should briefly discuss the , measurement
Snits that  are often  used,  viz., cfm/m3.    Th* Pfe^saA|^t?v
 should  disc**, typical V*!UM found,  i *  well y the generally
 accepted "consensus" standard of  about 1000 cfm/m  .
      p,  2-li3.    The author*  state  that  "Biologically '  «£j™5
 exposures  to  electric  and magnetic  fields  ... are  widespread.
• ThEgiv* ^ definition of "biologically ^ relevant",   if, ai i  I
 suspect, they are referring to heaitH  endpoints  studied  in the
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 theiwcfda3C^eri«entS *iac%ss*d subsequantly, then they should change

 (p.2-167), "There are data consistent with a ofiSSifele^v emphasis?
 connection between exposure,.,.».                       «uu«i«.t&j

 h* in£lJli;<  od°rs  is discussed  in  the welfare section.  It would
 be interesting to state  why here  instead of in the health section
 say under a comfort heading,

      p.4-22.   First paragraph,  second sentence.  Delete "in" 1

      p.5-1, last  sentence  of Introduction. Insert the word "to"
 before w a source	".

      p.5-11,   The authors state  that  "...the problems  are caused
 by a mixture of pollutants and by  the interaction of these mixtures
 with  *h« building system."  Although this may  be true  in many
 cases,  there are  others wh*re  the problem is caused by  a single
 parameter,  e.g.  excess CO,   Further,,  the interaction can be with
 more  than  ]ust  the  system,  e.g. it  can  be with  psychological
 psychosocial  factors, etc.

     p»5-l.   It  is not clear what ttie difference is between two of
 the six categories,  "building system source and sink  effects" and
 effects of sources  and sinks".   Further, an  important  research
 need  is missing,  viz.  research  in  areas such as  psychological,
 psychosocial, mass hysteria, etc.   Occupants and their behavior can
 be  considered part of the building  "system".   Although these are
 difficult  research  areas,  the  SBS  problem will  never be  fully
 understood unless  ±hey are  taken  into account.  The author's lacjc
 of  discussion of these topics in  this document  is conspicuous.

 Appendix E-
This is a useful reference base.   It would be  much more useful if
it could also be categorized according to subject matter,  i would
also recommend a clear statement on tfce first page indicating where
abstracts and papers could be sent by author* in order to minimize
emissions in subsefuent updates.'   It also would be very useful if
this data base  could be put  on floppies  (in. ASCII)  and  made
available on reque*t to authors and researchers in IAQ.
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        OF THE RADIATION ADVISQRV




                   TO THg




IMPOQR AIR QUALITY. AND  TOTAL. HOMAM

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                                                          RAC
                                                   Radiological Assessments Corporation
 November 13, 1987

 Dr. Morton Lippmann, Chairman
 Indoor Air Quality/Total Human Exposure Subcommittee
 Science Advisory Board
 U.S. Environmental Protection Agency
 Room 1145 W, Waterside Mall
 401 M Street SW
 Washington, D.C 20460

 Dear Dr, Lippmann:
   The Radiation Advisory Committee has reviewed the "EPA Indoor Air
 Quality Implementation Plan-A Report to Congress Under Title IV of the
 Superfund Amendments and Reauthorization Act of 1986;Radon Gas and
 Indoor Air Quality Research." In order to keep in mind the objectives of the
 Report to Congress, I have restated Congressional expectations as they were
 presented to us earlier this summer.

   "...The Report is to describe the state of knowledge concerning risks to
   human health of indoor  air pollutants; the locations and amounts of
   indoor air pollutants in structures through the country; existing
   standards for indoor air pollutants suggested by Federal and Slate
   governments or scientific organizations and the risk to health
   associated with such standards; research needs and the relative priority
   of these needs; and the effectiveness of possible government actions to
   mitigate health risks associated with indoor air quality problems."

The Committee kept this charge in mind as we performed our review.  It is
noted, however, that we focused on those sections dealing with radon (the
main report and Appendix C).  Our comments are summarized in the
information  that follows.
                                       Radiological Assessments Corporation

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Dr. Morton Uppmarut
                                          ,                       Page!
   General Comments
   In general, the plan is satisfactory and should meet the expectations of
   Congress.  The summary should be carefully edited and Appendix C
   should be updated to include recent date that have been published on
   radon.                                             r

   The Committee is concerned, however, with recent information
   regarding the status of the National Radon Survey, which Is included
   as a part of the plan and which has been specifically mandated by
   Congress. It was pointed out to the Committee at its last meeting, that
   funding for the National Radon Survey has been eliminated in  the
   budget plan for FY 1988,  The Committee can understand that faced
   with limited funds and unlimited demand, it might be decided that
   this  relatively expensive project should be deferred or even cancelled
   all together.  We find this troublesome, however, since without this
   authoritative survey, it is going to be very, difficult to decide how to
   attack the indoor radon problem. It is certainly recognized that risk
   from radon in indoor air ranks highly  among total airborne
   constituents known to be present in  most buildings.

  As one of its responsibilities recently, the Radiation Advisory
  Committee established a Subcommittee to review Agency plans  for
  the National Radon survey. Consequently, the Committee made
  recommendations' for what is considered a scientifically satisfactory
  study for the frequency distribution of  radon exposures nationwide.
  The study might nol answer all questions raised about factors
  influencing the radon levels, since  it was realized that some of these
  answers would require a much larger study. Nevertheless, the
  National Survey would  answer key questions related to radon in
  indoor air and assist greatly in putting exposure to radon and progeny
  in better perspective.

  The Committee believes that it is essential to obtain a reasonable fix
  on th* magnitude of the indoor air radon problem. This step can best
  be taken with the proposed National Survey on radon. It is therefore
  strongly recommended that this survey be supported and carried out
  as soon as possible.
                                     Radiological Assessments Corporation

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Dr. Morton Lippmann
Comments on The Reeort to Con
   Specific Commenfc on the Report to
   Summary
   Pagel
   The summary deals with generalities and lacks specific tangibles  The
   Committee believes that Congress will find it difficult to understand
   what is being proposed as a plan based on the summary alone
   Effective summaries are difficult to write, of course, but this one could
   have been much more specific about the general types of pollutants to
   be looked and how the relative importance of each will be addressed
   As it is currently written, the summary does not do justice to the rest
   of the document,

   As a minor point, HUD is not mentioned here.  It's role is given on
   page 21 and the planned coordination with HUD throughout seems
   much less than we would have expected, given that HUD has been
   involved in substantial research in this area and presumably has a
   continuing interest, especially, as specifications for new houses are
   involved.

   Pages 7-10, Activities and Accomplishments to Date
   This section contains a lot of specifics and is generally good and
   informative. However, there is nothing here at all about progress that
   EPA has already made on radon. More information should be
   included here on what has been accomplished to date.

   Pages 10-17, Near Term Implementation Plan
  This section is also good where it is specific, however, much of the
  material contains generalities.  Again there is nothing presented on
  radon and a cross reference to Appendix C as a minimum would be
  helpful. Note that in the table on page 24 under radon in the right
  hand column on health effects, the end product should not be
  "cancer" which implies cancer in general, but "lung cancer" since this
  is the only type of cancer which radon induces.
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Comments on The Report to Congress                                      paS° 4
   Appendix C
   Since pages Ml are missing, the reader might wonder why these pages
   were omitted.  'As a minimum, some statement about their content
   and why they were not included should be added.

   page 12, lines 1-4
   It is true that radon comes from radium but the radium comes from
   uranium, and  it is the distribution of uranium in soil that begins the
   decay chain. We recommend adding to the first sentence".,.and is
   itself a decay product of uranium."

   page 14, Implementation Plan
   We recommend separating radon exposure and health risk since they
   are quite distinct and health risk dtsewes its own bullet.

   page 17, (d)
   This section points to a highly desirable need to ensure sound
   measurement methods. However, it also brings up the question of
   how all the measurements made by commercial firms could be
   utilized.  For example, for epidemiologkal purposes, lor contributing
   to our^ knowledge of a national average background level, etc  Perhaps
   such firms could be required to publish their results or submit them to
   EPA in a form that would make them useful.

   pagt 17, (e)
   Health risks should have its own section and tht information could be
  expanded. Reviewing the miner studies is still an important thing to
  do and information on them keeps accruing. This fact is somewhat
  buried ill the last paragraph-

  page 18, paragraph 1
  Isn't NCI (Boicef also conducting or collaborating in some studies in
  New Jersey, Stockholm, and China?

  page 18, paragraph 2
  The BUR IV Report being referred to as published in 1987 has not yet
  been released.
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  Comments on The Report to Congress
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     page 19, paragraph 1
     Among these four mitigation techniques there is no discussion of
           lT°' VTiah°n' *hrouShou* P^s 19-21 even though it is
           that simple basement exhaust fans are very effective I some
               &* *?"' t appears ** ^
     expanded based on the recent work by OEET,
     page 20
     It seems that greater involvement with HUD could have been
     expected in (c) and (d).

     page 24, Public Information
     EPA deserves credit for getting something done here. The brochures
     produced by the Agency are very good,                  wocnures
     page 25, line 1
     "A copy of DOE's Radon Research Program Plan is attached as
     Appendix E  the plan is not attached.  Appendix E is a bibliography.

                                            review.  Please contact me if
           comments will 1
can be of further assistance.
Sincerely,
          ., Ph.D.
         airman
copy to;     Members, Radiation Advisory Commitej
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