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Drsil't Chiirge to Kxlernjil Rexieweis for the IRIS Toxicologic*!!! Rexiew of I re;i, .lime 2010
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Organization Department ol'Defense
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Questions
Question #1
Add some adjective or adverb, as appropriate, to
evaluate the scientific accuracy of the analysis, i.e.,
the equivalent of "scientifically justified" in the
questions in the other sections.
In addition to "logical, clear and concise" add
"accurate". In addition to "clearly
synthesized" add "and accurately."
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