Dcpiirlmenl of Defense C omments 011 the Drsil't Chiirge to Kxlernjil Rexieweis for the IRIS Toxicologic*!!! Rexiew of I re;i, .lime 2010 ( ommcnls suhni 1 lied li\ ( hcmical Material Risk Management Directorate Organization Department ol'Defense Dale Submitted 2 J11 In 2d|ii *( onimenl categories. Science or methods (S): 1 Editorial. grammar spell mil: . clan Ileal ions needed (1.). or Oilier (()) Also please indicate il' Major 1 e. al'lecls I he oulcome. conclusions or implementation of llie assessment Comment No. Section l\lgC £ I'iimgmph (enter "(Jlohsil" if report section- wide) Comment Suggested Action, Re\ision ;tnd References (if necessary) C iitegorv 1 General Charge Questions Question #1 Add some adjective or adverb, as appropriate, to evaluate the scientific accuracy of the analysis, i.e., the equivalent of "scientifically justified" in the questions in the other sections. In addition to "logical, clear and concise" add "accurate". In addition to "clearly synthesized" add "and accurately." S Page 1 of 1 ------- |