U.S. Environmental Protection Agency
National Water Program
2012 Strategy:

Response to Climate Change

Public Comment Summary

Final
December 2012

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EPA National Water Program 2012 Strategy: Response to Climate Change

Public Comment Summary

This document summarizes the public comments submitted to the US
Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) regarding the EPA's National Water
Program 2012 Strategy: Response to Climate Change. It follows the general
outline of the EPA Strategy and provides references to specific commenters,
comment numbers, and page numbers within those comments. Responses are
provided following each comment. Commenters can locate the NWP's response to
their comments by doing a search for the commenter number (provided in
Appendix A) or by organization name.

I. EXECUTIVE SUMMARY	4

INTRODUCTION	7

1.	2008 Strategy vs. 2012 Strategy	7

2.	Relationship to Other Planning Activities	8

3.	Impacts of Climate Change on Water Resources	11

FRAMEWORK	13

1.	Economics of Adaptation	13

2.	Guiding Principles	18

3.	Integrated Water Resources Management	21

PROGRAMMATIC VISIONS, GOALS AND STRATEGIC ACTIONS	23

1.	Infrastructure	23

General Comments	23

Goal #1	26

Goal #2	32

2.	Watersheds and Wetlands	37

General Comments	38

Goal #3	39

Goal #4	40

Goal #5	41

Wetlands General Comments	43

Goal #6	46

Goal #7	48

3.	Coastal and Ocean Waters	49

General Comments	49

Goal #8	51

Goal #9	51

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Goal #10	52

Goal #11	53

4.	Water Quality	55

General Comments	55

Goal #12	56

Goal #13	66

Goal #14	69

5.	Working with Tribes	70

Goal #15	70

GEOGRAPHIC CLIMATE REGIONS	71

Introduction	71

Northeast Region	72

Midwest Region	72

Great Plains Region	73

Southwest Region	73

Pacific Northwest Region	74

Montane Region	74

Alaska Region	74

CROSS-CUTTING PROGRAM SUPPORT	75

Goal #17	75

Goal #18	76

Goal #19	77

APPENDIX A: Commenters by Document Number	81

APPENDIX B. References Cited By Commenters	83

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This document provides a bulleted summary of comments submitted to the US
Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) regarding the EPA's National Water
Program 2012 Strategy: Response to Climate Change. Overall, there were forty-
four sets of comments representing various federal, state and local agencies, state
drinking water agencies, professional societies, national and local non-
governmental organizations, the regulated community (agricultural, development
and resource extraction) and private citizens.

I. Executive Summary

Seven comment letters referenced the Executive Summary. Half the letters were
from non-governmental organizations, representing either the water sector or the
regulated community. The remaining three letters were received from a federal
government agency, a state/tribal government agency, and a general private citizen.

• The U.S. Geological Survey (Doc. #31, p. 1) offers the following comments:
o "Page 1 - Maybe indicate on the title page that this plan covers 2012-
2020 or the next 'three to eight years' as stated on page 3. The word
'transformative' is used three times on the first page to describe EPA's
approach. It would be good to explain what is meant by
'transformation' in this context and why it is needed."
o "Page 2 - Excellent summary of climate change impacts on water
resources."

o "Page 3 - The ten guiding principles make sense, but it might be good to
reword the ones entitled 'water-energy nexus' and 'costs of inaction',
because those are program emphases not principles per se."
o "Pages 6-9 - This table of goals and actions in the Executive Summary
are a nice way to summarize the entire strategic plan. It also prompts the
question of partnerships with others. Many of the strategic actions and
goals in this table are commonly shared with agencies such as the
USGS, NOAA and DOE. You mention the importance of such partners
on the prior pages but it would be good to insert a sentence in the
'Conclusions' that appear right before the table stating that many of the
goals and actions will be achieved through partnerships with others."
o The map of geographic climate regions corresponds with the map used
by the USGCRP for the using the climate regions map established by the
U.S. Global Change Research Program for the 2013 National Climate
Assessment. This map accounts for political boundaries and therefore
no longer splits Texas and Colorado between climatic regions.

Response: Thank you for your careful review. We have incorporated most of
the edits you suggest except that we are not adopting the 2013 National Climate
Assessment map at this time as it is not yet final. We will adopt the updated
map in the future.

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•	The Association of State Drinking Water Administrators (ASDWA; Doc. #40,
p. 3) recommends:

o "EPA include drinking water and public health in the first paragraph on
page 1 so as to prominently highlight their importance in this Strategy."
o "Provide explanations for each of the table inserts for context as to why

they are being included and located where they are."
o "The 'National Goal' and 'EPA Vision' inserts at the very beginning are
not connected to the text on this page. We suggest either moving them to
page 3, somewhere under 'B. Programmatic Visions, Goals and
Strategic Actions,' or again providing some explanation up front."
o "The location of the paragraph on page 1, 'Table ES-1, below,

summarizes the Visions, Goals and Strategic Actions described in this
2012 Strategy...' seems randomly placed here with unassociated text."
o "On page 3, the 'Ten Guiding Principles' insert has no context. Please

provide an explanation for this box and why it is located here."
o "On page 5, in the second bullet under 'Tracking Progress and

Measures,' please change this to a plural so that the text does not sound
like EPA will be developing a rulemaking specific to climate change as
follows:

'The NWP will incorporate climate change considerations in the
development and implementation of-a rulemakings by 2015.

Response: Thank you for your careful review. We have incorporated most of
the edits you suggest except the last one; the goal to incorporate climate change
considerations into five rulemakings or policies by 2015 is an EPA-wide goal,
of which the NWP is only committed to one. Further, to clarify, this is not a
statement that we intend to promulgate a rulemaking or policy requiring all
Office of Water rulemakings to consider climate change, but rather that climate
will be a factor in the analysis of one rule or policy that is being undertaken.
That said, we have removed this chart from the Executive Summary to allay
confusion.

•	The National Ground Water Association (Doc. #44, p. 1) suggests:

o The executive summary should include diagrams and quotes from
the text.

o The Strategy should include a scientific analysis of the evidence for
climate change.

Response: After consideration, the NWP elected to retain the current discussion
of the science of climate change, referring the reader to other authoritative
discussions of the evidence for climate change. We did include more explicit
reference to those materials.

•	The American Petroleum Institute (Doc. #46, p. 2) stresses that EPA needs to
include timeframes for its strategic actions and should incorporate new climate
information on a continuous basis into its adaptive approach. Also, the Institute

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feels that any actions taken must be clearly authorized by the Clean Water Act
and existing regulations.

Response: The 2012 Strategy is a planning strategy, providing directional intent
over the long term, and rather than listing commitments for particular actions by
particular dates, it suggests that we hope to achieve the Strategic Actions over
the course of the next approximately eight years, dependent upon resources.
Further, we recognize that as knowledge grows, including updated science,
strategies too may change, consistent with an adaptive management approach.
Needless to say, all actions taken will be consistent with our statutory
authorities and in accordance with the Administrative Procedures Act.

• The Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation (Doc. #39) voices that:
o "While EPA states that the Strategy is not a rule or regulation and will
not impose any 'legally binding requirements,' (p. iii), the Strategy in
fact provides a 'response' to climate change."
o "EPA states the National Water Programs (NWPs) 'will' implement
strategic actions or goals. EPA also states (p. 1) that the strategy
'addresses climate change in the context of our water programs' and that
'climate change poses such significant challenges to the nation's water
resources that more transformative approaches will be necessary.... The
implementation of the guidance will have legal consequences, and
therefore the Strategy constitutes final agency action."
o "The Strategy sets a goal (p. 7) to '[incorporate climate change

considerations into the CWA 404 regulatory program as they relate to
permit reviews and compensatory mitigation.' EPA should clearly
indicate where application of the Strategy can be expected to interplay
with other regulatory processes, such as the 404 permitting process
implemented by the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers (Corps)."
o "[E]PA should also embark on a rulemaking to amend those other
affected regulatory processes. For these reasons, the Strategy should he
subject to formal rulemaking."

Response: The NWP strategy is not the consummation of the agency's thinking
or decisionmaking on adapting to climate change; nor does it determine rights
or obligations from which legal consequences will flow. Accordingly, we
disagree with the commenter that it is a "final agency action." Nor is the
strategy a rule or regulation. Indeed, in the body of the final document, we are
inserting additional language reminding readers that nothing in this 2012
Strategy is binding or imposes any new requirements. Rather, it is a description
of programmatic goals and strategic actions that we at the present time intend to
pursue, subject to a variety of factors such as the availability of resources and
evolving scientific knowledge. As we take actions described in the strategy, we
will abide by requirements of the Administrative Procedures Act wherever
necessary and appropriate.

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•	The National Mining Association (Doc. #37, p. 2) states that "It is impossible to
predict the types of outcomes and effects the Draft 2012 Strategy contemplates
integrating into CWA permitting decisions with the certainty that could justify
the time and expense federal agencies will be expected to undergo. It is
therefore disconcerting that EPA is seeking to 'revise data collection, analytical
methods, and even regulatory practices that have been developed over the past
40 years since passage of the CWA and the Safe Drinking Water Act' based on
such unsure science." The Association points out that, in its opinion, this could
lead to permitting delays and litigation.

Response: It is not the intent of this strategy, nor do we expect it to be the
strategy's outcome, to increase federal agency time and expense or permitting
delays and litigation; instead it is hoped that steps taken pursuant to the strategy
will minimize time and expense by reducing adverse consequences of impacts
due to a changing climate.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p. 1) states that "With respect to the
National Goal, suggest the inclusion of businesses, in addition to government
agencies and citizens, as they are important partners in carrying out climate
change adaptation actions."

Response: Thank you for the suggestion; we have added text to underscore that
the private sector is an important partner in all our actions.

Introduction

Overall, 13 comment letters discuss the Introduction. Seven are from national non-
governmental organizations (NGOs), including four environmental NGOs. Three
commenters are associated with the regulated community (agriculture, fertilizer,
and mining), one is a multi-sector trade organization, one is a federal agency, and
one is a local government agency.

1.	2008 Strategy vs. 2012 Strategy

•	The Water Environmental Federation (Doc. #14) commends EPA in developing
a comprehensive strategy that builds and expands upon the 2008 Strategy.

Response: The NWP thanks WEF for their support and we look forward to
working with the Association and other stakeholders in the future.

•	The Amigos Bravos Friends of the Wild Rivers (Doc. #15) contends that the
2012 Strategy does not go far enough to address the threat of climate change. It
makes the point that EPA needs to develop "strong regulations and guidance,
adequate enforcement of regulations, and funding" and urges EPA to
incorporate stronger action items that are both voluntary and mandatory and can
be used by local and state regulatory agencies. The letter indicates that it

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provided the same critiques to the 2008 Strategy. "Here we are 4 years later,
and this report is still lacking the appropriate sense of urgency and desperately
needed bold actions with associated enforcement and funding mechanisms."

Response: EPA appreciates the commenter's concern; we share the concern
that climate change poses urgent challenges to society and that action must be
taken now to avoid consequences in the future. We are working with the larger
federal and science community to understand the nature of changes and to
create the tools that will enable water resource managers to make informed
decisions. We hope that Amigos Bravos will continue to provide perspective to
inform future decisions.

•	The Western Business Roundtable (Doc. #23, p. 7) states that the 2012 Strategy
lays out an unclear approach and contends that "the Administration needs to
expose its extremely expansive climate adaptation agenda to the rigors of the
formal public notice comment rulemaking process."

Response: While this 2012 Strategy is not binding and not a rule, we
understand the importance of the matter and have therefore provided an
opportunity for public notice and comment, as is evidenced by the process
through which the Western Business Roundtable submitted their comment.
Should any actions be taken that involve rulemaking, we will follow the public
notice and comment process established by the Administrative Procedures Act.

•	The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41) comments that it previously commented
on the 2008 Strategy and suggested that stronger, regulatory actions need to be
taken by EPA. It believes that the 2012 Strategy details only voluntary
measures and recommends a more comprehensive approach, including
regulatory programs with teeth to achieve real change.

Response: EPA appreciates the commenter's concern; we share the concern
that climate change poses urgent challenges to society and that action must be
taken now to avoid consequences in the future. We are working with the larger
federal and science community to understand the nature of changes and to
create the tools that will enable water resource managers to make informed
decisions. We hope that the Clean Water Network will continue to provide
perspective to inform future decisions.

Relationship to Other Planning Activities

•	The Fertilizer Institute (Doc. #17, p. 3) asks that clarification be provided
regarding the five major scientific models and/or decision-support tools, five
rulemaking processes, and five major grant, loan, contract, or technical
assistance programs identified on page 11 of the Strategy.

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Response: EPA's 2011-2015 Strategic Plan includes three Agency-wide
measures for climate change adaptation and one for reducing GHGs. The three
adaptation measures noted by the commenter were developed by a cross-
Agency workgroup, and are intended to prompt EPA program offices to begin
to evaluate, understand and factor in potential impacts of climate change in the
conduct of our business. The EPA offices involved include the Offices of
Water, Air and Radiation, Solid Waste and Emergency Response, Pollution
Prevention and Toxic Substances, Research and Development, and Policy.

Each Office will decide how and when to do so. As for OW, we are developing
tools such as the CREAT tool to assist water managers in their infrastructure
planning and design, and we are working with our National Estuary Program to
factor climate change into their funding. As for a rulemaking, at this time EPA
is primarily focused on developing tools to help local decision makers evaluate
efficacy of their decisions as they implement different aspects of the CWA
program under a changing climate. As use of climate change information is
evaluated in EPA rulemakings, EPA will follow the appropriate rulemaking
processes, including public notice and comment.

• The Los Angeles County Department of Public Works Flood Control District
(Doc. #16) suggests that the Strategy could have implications on the National
Environmental Policy Act (NEPA) and asks if EPA intends to incorporate
climate change into NEPA requirements.

Response: OW's Strategy is not intended to guide EPA or Executive Branch
policy on the application of NEPA. EPA's own water programs are generally
exempt from NEPA under section 511(c) of the CWA. However, where NEPA
does apply, such as to EPA issuance of new source NPDES permits, EPA
NEPA reviews consider climate change issues, as appropriate. Where EPA
assists other federal agencies in complying with NEPA, EPA also works to
foster consideration of climate change impacts, mitigation, and adaptation
issues, as appropriate.

The Western Business Roundtable (Doc. #23, p.2) provides recommendations
based on the organizations "common sense climate principles" that "provide a
recommended framework for policymakers to use in fashioning public policies
associated with climate change." In summary, recommendations listed in the
comment letter focus on how federal action that aims to reduce greenhouse
gases (GHGs) should incorporate economic growth and job creation, awareness
of economic impacts, and public-private partnerships, among others. Federal
action should also, among other recommendations, "recognize that climate
change is a global phenomenon that requires comprehensive, long-term and
coordinated worldwide responses" and "that the time frame for implementation
of any GHG emission reduction requirements must be tied to technology
availability, reliability and economic feasibility in order to avoid unacceptable
impacts on consumers/electricity grids" (Doc. #23, p. 3). Finally, revenues
generated by climate change programs should be invested in development and

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implementation of technology that captures and stores GHGs, assist consumers
in dealing with high energy costs, and "to reasonable climate mitigation
initiatives".

Response: Thank you for your comment. EPA is committed to supporting
development of jobs, and the NWP too promotes the economic opportunities
that water technologies, such as Green Infrastructure, WaterSense, and new
energy efficient water treatment technologies can bring to the 'green economy'.
This 2012 Strategy does not address trading or other market methods of
reducing GHGs.

•	The City of Aurora, CO (Doc. #30) indicates that these are complicated issues
that bear further exploration and more in depth analysis before the comment
period is closed.

Response: Thank you for your comment. It is the case that these are
complicated issues, and that is why our general approach is one of collaborative
learning and adaptive management. We are not extending the comment period.

•	The American Petroleum Institute (Doc. #46) strongly supports coordination
among Federal agencies that deal with water resource issues utilized by EPA in
the development of the Draft 2012 Strategy. The Institute also acknowledges
the Draft 2012 Strategy references a "number of planned activities that involve
coordination with not only other Federal agencies, but also states and public
stakeholders" and asks that "this coordination be open and continuous with
emphasis on including non-governmental input during the planning process and
not after decisions have been made with respect to government activities and
actions."

Response: The NWP agrees with the commenter. We have added text in the
Coastal and Oceans section to reflect EPA's anticipated actions under the new
National Ocean Policy Implementation Plan. The Fish, Wildlife and Plants
Strategy does not articulate specific Agency commitments, but the NWP
strategy is consistent with the Fish, Wildlife, and Plants strategy. We aim to
ensure transparency through our public communication media, such as our new
website, among other means.

Environmental Justice

•	A private citizen (Doc. #7) raises the issue of environmental justice and asks if
"there will be adequate protection for our ecosystem against waste facilities and
fossil fuel missions even in impoverished neighborhoods" and whether the plan
will "provide adequate sustainability in water and energy efficiency."

Response: The NWP appreciates the commenter's view. The NWP embraces
the principle of prioritizing the most vulnerable - including the most vulnerable
populations such as the elderly, children, tribes, and low income communities,

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as well as the most vulnerable places such as coastal communities or those
facing severe drought.

•	Another private citizen (Doc. #8) feels Goal 12 should be emphasized because it
will "focus primarily on community efforts, and pertain to the majority of
people who may not be as informed as the government agencies and scientists
involved in the matter." This commenter also identified concerns that
sustainability needs to be emphasized in low-income areas, since these
populations often lack the resources to incorporate climate change
considerations into water quality planning.

Response: The NWP embraces the principle of prioritizing the most vulnerable
- including the most vulnerable populations such as the elderly, children, tribes,
and low income communities, as well as the most vulnerable places such as
coastal communities or those facing severe drought. This includes improved
outreach and education. The NWP agrees that it is important to include this
principle as we implement the Strategic Actions under Goal 12, Water Quality.

3.	Impacts of Climate Change on Water Resources

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (Doc. #33, p. 11) commends EPA for
developing the Strategy, but points out that, as written, it is too general and
should contain more specifically defined steps to address the impact of climate
change on water resources. It is of the opinion that Goals 2 and 3 are
meaningless because they are so vague. Additionally, it offers several
suggestions on how to strengthen the document:

Response: It is the intention of this Strategy to indicate overall direction by the
National Water Program, not to specify details of how climate change and its
effects will be incorporated into NPDES permitting, development of TMDLs,
implementation of other EPA regulations, or the relationship between Federal,
State, Tribal, and local governments. Use of climate information in these
decisions will be evaluated and implemented through appropriate procedures on
a case-by-case basis.

•	NRDC (Doc. #33) cites the US Global Change Research Program's (USGCRP)
observed changes to the water cycle from warmer temperatures. The letter
discusses the impacts of these observed changes on water resources as
atmospheric greenhouse gas levels increase and temperatures continue to rise.

Response: The NWP appreciates NRDC's comments.

•	The National Mining Association (NMA) (Doc. #37, p.3) contends that EPA
does not recognize that there will be both winners and losers associated with the
impacts of climate change. They indicate that the Strategy is "uniformly
negative." The National Mining Association asserts that "EPA does not offer an

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explanation as to why preservation of a static biological community is always
desirable, and NMA is concerned with EPA's application of that concept."

Response: The NMA misunderstands the purpose of the NWP strategy. It is
not to identify or predict "winners and losers." Nor does it assert that
"preservation of a static biological community is always desirable." Such terms
and ideas imply value judgments the Strategy does not intend to make. The
Strategy instead attempts to identify the range of challenges posed to built and
natural systems by changing hydrometeorological background conditions and
anticipate potential response actions to minimize detrimental effects to those
systems. Moreover, the draft 2012 Strategy stated on page 14, "not all near
term impacts of climate change will necessarily be disruptive, and could, in
some cases provide benefits. For example, increased precipitation could
improve flows supporting aquatic ecosystem health in some areas, and changing
sea levels could aid submerged aquatic vegetation. However, on balance the
range of challenges posed by the interface between built and natural systems
and the changing hydrometeorological background conditions is likely to
require response actions in order to minimize detrimental effects to current built
and natural systems. The impacts listed here refer to the general risks to water
resources posed by climate change, but whether and to what degree these risks
are likely to be realized in specific locations will require local assessment. That
said, where benefits can be realized, the NWP intends to evaluate and take
advantage of those opportunities.

• The City of San Diego (Doc. #38, p. 1) pointed out that the 2012 Strategy has a
default assumption that alteration due to climate change is a degradation and/or
impairment, although in some cases such changes may be ecologically neutral.

Response: The draft 2012 Strategy stated, "not all near term impacts of climate
change will necessarily be disruptive, and could, in some cases provide benefits.
For example, increased precipitation could improve flows supporting aquatic
ecosystem health in some areas, and changing sea levels could aid submerged
aquatic vegetation. However, on balance the range of challenges posed by the
interface between built and natural systems and the changing
hydrometeorological background conditions is likely to require response actions
in order to minimize detrimental effects to current built and natural systems.
The impacts listed here refer to the general risks to water resources posed by
climate change, but whether and to what degree these risks are likely to be
realized in specific locations will require local assessment." That said, where
benefits can be realized, the NWP intends to evaluate and take advantage of
those opportunities.

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Framework

A total of nine comment letters addressing the Framework for a Climate Ready
National Water Program were submitted. Of the nine comment letters, two were
submitted by federal government agencies, two were submitted by local
government agencies, three were submitted by national NGOs, one was submitted
by a State/Tribal government agency/elected official, and one was submitted by the
regulated community. Most of the comments from this group are positive, and
complimentary toward EPA for developing the Strategy. For example, the
Groundwater Protection Council (GWPC) (Doc. #25, p. 2) introduces their letter by
stating, "GWPC commends the USEPA Water programs on the use of integrated
water resource management (IWRM) throughout the draft strategy." Among the
comment letters addressing the Framework, three touched on both Section A.
Guiding Principles and Section B. Integrated Water Resources Management
(IWRM), while three spoke only to Guiding Principles, and two discussed only
IWRM.

1. Economics of Adaptation

•	Various comments concerning adequacy of funding

Response: It is not the intent of this 2012 Strategy to increase costs of
implementing water programs, however, climate change itself could incur
additional costs. Planning ahead helps managers to find best solutions to avoid
costs, where possible. Further, while EPA sees value in all elements of the
Strategy, we recognize that resources are limited. This Strategy does not impose
legally binding requirements on EPA, States, the public, or the regulated
community. EPA will attempt to provide resources where possible and will
provide technical guidance to help implement Strategic Actions. EPA looks
forward to working with partners and stakeholders to implement these actions
over the long term.

•	WUCA (Doc. #24) suggests that EPA create "an economics team specializing in
water-pricing strategies that could be called upon by those entities that want
advice about how to incorporate more of the cost of water in their planning and
actions."

Response: Thank you for the suggestion, however, the NWP leaves the issue of
pricing to local communities. We will take the suggestion to create an
economics team under advisement.

•	While WUCA is supportive of water pricing to control demand, they comment
that "EPA's role regarding pricing should be limited to education and public
outreach" (Doc. #24, p. 6) because pricing structures are location-specific and
address local need, such as low-income residents and other considerations.

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Response: EPA agrees that pricing is a local decision, but will continue to
promote and educate on the need for appropriate pricing structures that better
reflect the costs of providing service while meeting affordability needs.

•	Additionally, WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 8) raises a concern with the tone of the
statement under Coastal and Ocean Waters: "In the context of coastal change
and sea level rise, decision must be made about whether some environmental
restoration efforts, particularly for coastal marshes, are realistic or practical"
(Strategic Action #27, p. 45). WUCA believes the tone "should not be to
undermine the reality or practicality of coastal marsh restoration. Rather,
decisions about coastal marsh investment should consider long-term viability
and replenishment costs".

Response: The language in question has been edited to read as follows: "/« the
context of coastal change and sea level rise, decisions about coastal marshes
may need to consider long term viability and replenishment costs''

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27) suggests that the NWP "make adherence to EPA's
full lifecycle analysis guidance a requirement for infrastructure projects that
receive Clean Water Act (CWA) permits" (Doc. #27, p. 2).

Response: The NWP promotes effective utility management, including energy
and water efficiency, and will continue to work with States and utilities to
develop tools to aid in decision making. It is unclear what guidance the
commenter is referring to, however, it is not feasible to make such guidance a
requirement for CWA permitting.

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (NRDC) (Doc. #33, p. 12) suggests
"EPA should develop a program to document the national benefits of improved
water efficiency, both in terms of water conserved and the impact on energy
systems and greenhouse gas emissions. More data documenting the impact of
water efficiency (and energy efficiency) on the water-energy nexus would help
EPA's partners advocate for better practices.

Response: Thank you for this comment. The NWP does document the water,
energy and GHG savings resulting from the WaterSense program. We will
continue to work to educate the public on the energy and GHG footprint of
water and the water footprint of energy.

•	Regarding Strategic Action 27 (coastal environments), the City of San Diego
(Doc. #38, p. 7) stated that "at present, there are no criteria for determining
realism or practicality, or guidelines for the type and degree of compensation or
mitigation required" and "depending on how these are formulated they could
dramatically increase project costs."

Response: The NWP appreciates the comment. This is the type of information

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it is hoped that water resource managers would develop over time.

•	The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41): EPA needs to assess funding
commitments for monitoring and assessment of impacts, adaptation of
infrastructure, and protective measures for wetlands and aquatic habitat. The
Strategy needs on-the-ground funding and resources to implement the plan, not
a 'report' (need for funding is also directed at the Administration).

Response: The NWP supports the activities described in the 2012 Strategy
subject to the availability of resources.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p. 2) states "We believe that the costs of
climate change related actions mentioned would be more useful and
understandable if they were expressed over a specific timeframe. For example,
"$30 million per year," or "$30 million over five years," would mean more to
the strategy's audience than just providing "$30 million to manage low DO
levels due to warmer waters."

Response: Thank you for the comment; we will edit the Strategy with available
information.

Infrastructure Funding

•	NACWA (Doc. #43) states that EPA must recognize that significant funding
will be needed to help POTWs with adaptation and energy efficiency measures.
EPA should consider more carefully the financial resource that utilities will
need to meet the Agency's climate change goals in addition to existing water
infrastructure needs.

Response: See the first response at the beginning of the economics section of
this response to comments document.

•	AWWA (Doc. #21, p. 2) suggests that "NWP should acknowledge the unmet
financial needs for infrastructure maintenance and renewal, and should commit
to working with other government agencies and water industry associations to
address water infrastructure needs, both for maintaining current service and for
climate change adaptations. It will not be a question of one or another, but
rather of accomplishing both goals."

Response: The NWP appreciates the comment. We have inserted an edit in the
infrastructure discussion to acknowledge the challenges utilities face concerning
availability of infrastructure funding.

•	WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 5) states that "these cost considerations should be
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revolving funds. Specifically, utilities need flexibility to determine risk
management strategies that determine how best to invest capital dollars to
manage competing pressures, including climate change."

Response: As the Agency moves forward with responding to climate change,
we will consider where statutes allow for regulatory flexibility in adjusting to
shifting conditions.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27, p. 8) recommends that EPA "must recognize that
current federal funding is insufficient to provide for the needed infrastructure
upgrades. According to the American Society of Civil Engineers, our drinking
water systems face an annual shortfall of at least $11 billion to replace aging
facilities that are near the end of their useful lives and to comply with existing
and future federal water regulations."

Response: The NWP appreciates the comment. We have inserted an edit in the
infrastructure discussion to acknowledge the challenges utilities face concerning
availability of infrastructure funding.

•	The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41): Energy efficiency in wastewater
treatment and compliance with CWA §313(b) and §304(d)(3) should be
conditions to receiving CWSRF monies for wastewater treatment plants.

Response: The NWP encourages the use of funding for water and energy
efficiency as allowable under federal law, e.g., using the SRF Green Reserve.
EPA will continue to work closely with States to facilitate their decision making
process and ensure they have the tools needed to make appropriate decisions.

Watersheds and Wetlands

•	The New England Interstate Water Pollution Control Commission (NEIWPCC;
Doc. #35, p. 2) writes that the role of Section 319 of the Clean Water Act should
be explored as a tool to maintain watershed health, saying it is a "cost effective
response to both current conditions and changes to the climate." and that future
Section 319 guidance should be crafted to optimize the ability to use 319 for
healthy watersheds.

Response: The NWP agrees with the commenter that the Section 319 program
is an excellent tool in EPA's effort to maintain watershed health. SA 10 (healthy
watersheds) already implies the use of Section 319 grants in the discussion of
"funding and technical assistance programs." However, specific reference to
CWA Section 319 has been inserted into SA12 (watershed restoration and
floodplain management) and SA 33 (water quality planning).

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•	The Association of State Drinking Water Administrators (ASDWA; Doc. #40,
p. 4) also suggests that specific references to Section 319 should be included in
the discussion of protecting healthy watersheds.

Response: SA 10 (healthy watersheds) already implies the use of Section 319
grants in the discussion of "funding and technical assistance programs."

Specific reference to CWA Section 319 has been inserted into SA12 (watershed
restoration and floodplain management) and SA 33 (water quality planning).

•	The National Ground Water Association (NGWA) (Doc. #44, p. 2) comments
on the value of source water protection planning and states that "Action to
update delineations, assessments or protection plans may not happen without
federal funding to the states or local government," and also suggests that
managed aquifer recharge projects be included as eligible water infrastructure
projects for federal financial support (Doc. #44, p. 1). In addition, NGWA
suggests that Strategic Action 32 (water quality planning) may not happen
without federal funding (Doc. #44, p. 2).

Response: States may fund aspects of aquifer recharge from the CWSRF if the
project is connected to a publicly owned treatment works (POTW) e.g., the
CWSRF may fund the treatment of wastewater for aquifer recharge or the
conveyance of recycled water from a treatment plant to the site for aquifer
recharge. Note that DWSRF funding for ASR projects that are essentially
underground reservoirs is prohibited by regulation (40 CFR 35.3520(e)(3)).

•	The National Farms Union (Doc. #19, p. 2) notes that financial and technical
assistance from federal, state and local government sources to help farmers and
ranchers address nonpoint source pollutions are not always coordinated for
maximum benefit. NFU encourages EPA to utilize the successful model under
CWA Section 319 to establish partnerships and coordinate efforts in addressing
NPS and climate adaptation. They further encourage EPA to seek market-based
solutions to leverage private resources to enhance public investment in
adaptation strategies.

Response: The CWA Section 319 program is indeed a model of successful
partnerships achieving results, examples of which can be found on the EPA web
site athttp://water.epa.gov/polwaste/nps/success319/. EPA will look for
opportunities to extend these partnerships to address issues related to the
impacts of climate change. SA 10 (healthy watersheds) implies the use of
Section 319 grants in the discussion of "funding and technical assistance
programs." In addition, specific reference to CWA Section 319 has been
inserted into SA12 (watershed restoration and floodplain management) and SA
33 (water quality planning).

The City of San Diego Transportation and Stormwater Department (Doc. #38,
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implementation can be problematic in that funding for acquisition of riparian
buffers and lands could be limited, and buying and managing land will require
greater fiscal budget, but Public Utilities, are economically challenged.

Response: The NWP acknowledges this challenge.

•	ASDWA (Doc. #40, pp. 4-5) believes the updating of source water assessments
and protection plans under Strategic Action 14 is important, but are "concerned
about the lack of resources dedicated to undertake this activity at the national
level."

Response: The NWP acknowledges this challenge.

Monitoring

•	The Ground Water Protection Council (GWPC) (Doc. #25) supports Goal 14,
specifically Strategic Action 42, and suggests the text be revised to incorporate
"an expanded acknowledgement that the state groundwater-related projects are
eligible for funding under §319 Nonpoint Source Management Programs, §106
Grants for Pollution Control Program, and §305 Water Quality Inventory
Grants" and that the CWA definition of Waters of the U.S. doesn't preclude
funding of groundwater-related monitoring. In addition, the GWPC also
indicates the Strategy is missing an important interagency monitoring network
under development by the Advisory Committee on Water Information (ACWI)
Subcommittee on Ground Water's (SOGW) National Ground Water Monitoring
Network (NGWMN) which is "a nationwide database that will provide long
term groundwater quantity and quality monitoring that would provide necessary
information for the planning, management, and development of groundwater
supplies to meet current and future water needs, and ecosystems requirements."
OGWDW should be included in Strategic Action 42 in a supporting role (Doc.
#25, p. 2).

Response: Thank you for your comments. We agree that the ACWI
Subcommittee on Ground Water's (SOGW) National Ground Water Monitoring
Network (NGWMN) is an important partnership with whom we will continue to
collaborate. Regarding eligibility of state groundwater-related projects for
funding, the NWP will produce an informational brief on this subject and post it
to our web site. We have added OGWDW to SA 42.

2. Guiding Principles

•	Aurora Water (Doc. #30, p.2) suggests that "The Six Step Approach to Climate
Change Adaptation Planning on Page 18 should be changed. The top step - 'Set
Mandate' is indicative of a top down command strategy and is contrary to the
stated goals of a collaborative approach that is stated elsewhere in the
document."

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Response: The phrase 'set mandate' appears in a schematic developed by CEQ
outlining a generic six-step approach; inclusion of the chart in the NWP
Strategy does not mean the NWP is 'setting a mandate' or that the NWP intends
to undertake a top down command strategy. The Strategic Action 52 discussion
makes it clear that the NWP proposes to adopt a phased approach that uses
indicators of progress which emphasizes peer-to-peer learning rather than a top-
down mandate. Indeed, throughout the 2012 Strategy, we underscore the
importance of partnerships and collaborative learning to increase the nation's
resilience to future impacts of a changing climate.

•	The United States Geological Survey (USGS) (Doc. #31, p. 3) recommends
specific modifications to the Guiding Principles text, including revising the
statement on page 18 that currently states, "Uncertainty is not necessarily a
reason to defer decisions" to "convey that decisions about the future are
commonly made under some conditions of uncertainty." The USGS also
suggests labeling Guiding Principle 7 as "Accounting for the costs of inaction."

Response: Edit adopted. Thank you.

•	ASDWA (Doc. #40, p. 5) suggests moving the EPA vision on page 18 to
Section IV. Programmatic Visions, Goals, and Strategic Actions. ASDWA also
mentions that it "supports the guiding principles of the draft Strategy, and
particularly, the inclusion of integrated water resources management (IWRM),
adaptive management, and collaborative learning and capacity development."

Response: Edit adopted. Thank you.

•	WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 5) supports the Guiding Principles, especially the
Adaptive Management principle which "acknowledges uncertainty as a context
of decision making and building flexibility into policy and decision-making to
manage risk and to allow for new knowledge input." WUCA also supports the
energy-water nexus issue.

Response: As the Agency moves forward with responding to climate change,
we will consider where statutes allow for regulatory flexibility in adjusting to
shifting conditions.

•	Regarding Guiding Principle 5, the Water Energy Nexus, WUCA (Doc. #24, p.
5) supports this issue and encourages EPA to support adoption of federal
appliance efficiency standards.

Response: Thank you for your support.

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•	The NRDC (Doc. #33, p. 4) identifies, "The use of energy should have the
smallest possible impact on water resources. However, the Draft Strategy fails
to address this important component of the water-energy nexus."

Response: Thank you for pointing this out. It was our intention that Goal 13
covered the energy impact on water resources. We have edit Goal 13 and added
a new Strategic Action to clarify this issue. The Strategy now reads:

GOAL 13: As the nation makes decisions to reduce greenhouse gas
emissions and develop alternative sources of energy andfuel, the NWP
will work to protect water resources from unintended adverse
consequences.

Just as it takes energy to treat and distribute water supplies, it takes water
to generate and produce energy andfuels. Well-designed or rehabilitated
water infrastructure can reduce energy demand and careful energy planning
can reduce water demand. Using a systems approach, consolidated water
infrastructure, energy and transportation planning can directly and
indirectly reduce the demandfor both water and energy. While Goals 1 and
2 in the Infrastructure section of this 2012 Strategy discuss improving the
energy profile of water infrastructure, this goal identifies actions to reduce
the adverse effects of new energy technologies on water resources.

Strategic Action 39: The NWP will continue to provide perspective on the
water resource implications of new energy technologies.

Production of energy andfuel rely on access to water, and may in turn
contribute to water quantity and quality problems. Further, while
alternative sources of energy andfuel are important for reducing emissions
of GHGs and offer a number of win-win energy choices, they too bring
water resource challenges. As technologies go through the regulatory
cycle, it is the NWP's responsibility to provide perspective on how the
nation's energy choices affect water resources.

•	ASDWA (Doc. #40, p. 5) recommends providing an explanation about the text
box and referenced appendix, and asks, "Does the appendix come from a
separate document and why is it an appendix, rather than included in the text
like IWRM?"

Response: Edits added. The Energy-Water principles are in an appendix
because there are specific goals and actions addressing this, whereas IWRM is
an approach rather than a specific action. We added edits in the document to
cross-reference these principles, including under Infrastructure (Goals 1 and 2)
and Water Quality (Goal 13).

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•	The City of San Diego (Doc. #38) is concerned that, without clear guidelines,
both regulatory agencies and municipalities run the risk of expending
substantial resources in fruitless efforts and that legal actions by third parties
could prompt regulatory actions to comply with the letter of the law in ways that
are counterproductive. The City suggests that a more productive methodology
would emphasize the education of upland land managers about overuse of
fertilizers and pesticide on water supplies and water quality in the face of
climate change, and suggests EPA bring agricultural interests to the table when
implementing IWRM.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have incorporated the important
role of agriculture in the discussion of IWRM.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p. 1) states that "We are glad to see the use
of several different partnerships, many of which already exist, in carrying out
strategic actions. This draft strategy seems to include more partnerships than
the 2008 strategy. Federal, state, tribal, municipal and other types of
partnerships are mentioned. We appreciate the inclusion of the State-Tribal
Climate Change Council (STC3), which has strong state association
involvement. One important partner not mentioned, except with respect to the
IWRM guiding principle, is interstates. Interstate organizations should be
mentioned when the draft strategy lists federal, state, tribal and local partners.
Inclusion of interstates is especially important in the sections that address
watersheds and wetlands, IWRM, and outreach."

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have incorporated the important
role of interstates in the lists of partnerships discussed throughout the 2012
Strategy.

3.	Integrated Water Resources Management

•	The National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (Doc. #9) comments
that "This is a good beginning. I would prefer EPA take a more proactive
position and promote IWRM via policy and where ever possible, promote
IWRM through active public education."

Response: Thank you for your comment and support.

•	The County of Los Angeles Department of Public Works (Doc. #16, p. 2)
recommends, "Flood protection should be mentioned in the document as being
inherent with the commitment to taking an integrated water resources
management approach as stated in the 2012 strategy."

Response: Thank you; we have edited the IWRM discussion to include its
important role for flood protection.

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•	When performing integrated planning, the American Water Works Association
(AWW A) (Doc. #21, p. 4) notes that the drinking water community has found
EPA generally unwilling to include drinking water utilities in integrated
planning, and recommends that EPA include drinking water utilities in addition
to wastewater and storm water, since "the actions of each type of water utility
affect the others."

Response: The NWP agrees with the statement that "the actions of each type of
water utility affect the others" and will encourage inclusion of drinking water
utilities in integrated planning.

•	The Groundwater Protection Council (Doc. #25, p. 1) commends the USEPA
Water programs on the use of IWRM throughout the draft strategy.
Collaboration among all stakeholders is key, and GWPC is pleased that NWP
acknowledges the need to address quality and quantity of sustainable water
resources within the full hydrologic cycle, including interactions between
surface water, shallow groundwater, and underlying fresh, brackish, and saline
aquifers.

Response: The NWP looks forward to working with GWPC and other
stakeholders in the future on this important issue.

•	The National Farmers Union (Doc. #19, p. 2) is encouraged by the Strategy in
that it recognizes the need to work with the agricultural community to promote
water management. It feels that the Strategy accurately assesses that there is an
increasingly limited water supply and it will be further stressed by rising
temperatures.

Response: The NWP looks forward to working with NFU and other
stakeholders on these important issues.

•	The American Petroleum Institute (API) (Doc. #46, p. 4) recommends that the
IWRM effort include non-governmental participants in addition to the
mentioned public stakeholders.

Response: Thank you for your suggestion; non-governmental and private sector
partners are now included in lists of partners throughout the 2012 Strategy. The
NWP looks forward to working with API and other stakeholders on these
important issues.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48), indicates support for "the guiding principles
set forth in the draft strategy, including the inclusion and emphasis placed on
integrated water resources management (IWRM). We recognize the importance
of employing a holistic, watershed approach to resource management, taking
into account water supply and quality, as well as all types of water resources -
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relevant stakeholders involved in the process. We have already seen several
states begin to incorporate IWRM into their water programs, as well as to
integrate climate change considerations into their strategies."

Response: The NWP looks forward to working with States and other
stakeholders on these important issues.

Programmatic Visions, Goals and Strategic Actions

1. Infrastructure

The 17 comment letters addressing infrastructure were submitted from a wide
variety of commenters, from State agencies to national associations and NGOs, as
well as private citizens. Most commenters are either supportive or commending of
EPA's efforts, and many approve of EPA's Climate Ready Water Utilities (CRWU)
Program, which they see as a valuable tool for assisting utilities. These commenters
provide suggestions on how to further improve the National Water Program (NWP).

General Comments

•	Various Comments concerning funding

Response: In response to several comments concerned with the adequacy of
funding for infrastructure in particular and water programs in general, it is not
the intent of this 2012 Strategy to increase costs, however, climate change itself
could incur additional costs. Planning ahead helps managers to find best
solutions to minimize costs, where possible. Further, while EPA would like to
see all elements of the Strategy go forward, we recognize that resources are
limited. This Strategy does not impose legally binding requirements on EPA,
States, the public, or the regulated community. EPA will attempt to provide
resources where possible and will provide technical guidance to help implement
these Strategic Actions. EPA looks forward to working with partners and
stakeholders to implement these actions over the long term.

•	LA DPW and LA Co. Flood Control District stated that while current findings
on climate change may be useful for planning purposes, it may be in some cases
pre-mature to use them to design near term water projects. The 2012 Strategy
should put more emphasis on research to adequately quantify its impact on
hydrologic events and to develop methodologies to analyze non-stationary
samples of hydrologic data.

Response: EPA agrees that emphasis is needed on developing non-stationary
hydrologic data and is actively working in this area.

•	After providing cost estimates, the American Water Works Association

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financial needs for infrastructure maintenance and renewal, and should commit
to working with other government agencies and water industry associations to
address water infrastructure needs, both for maintaining current service and for
climate change adaptations. It will not be a question of one or another, but
rather of accomplishing both goals."

Response: EPA has added this acknowledgement to the Strategy.

•	After providing cost estimates for replacement of existing infrastructure, and
addressing climate variability, the Water Utility Climate Alliance (WUCA)
(Doc. #24, p. 5) states that "these cost considerations should be incorporated in
the regulatory process as well as the state CWA and SDWA revolving funds.
Specifically, utilities need flexibility to determine risk management strategies
that determine how best to invest capital dollars to manage competing pressures,
including climate change."

Response: As the Agency moves forward with responding to climate change,
we will collaborate with utilities to help factor risk management into capital
investment decisions, and will work to consider where statutes allow for
regulatory flexibility in adjusting to shifting conditions.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27, p. 8) recommends that EPA "must recognize that
current federal funding is insufficient to provide for the needed infrastructure
upgrades. According to the American Society of Civil Engineers, our drinking
water systems face an annual shortfall of at least $11 billion to replace aging
facilities that are near the end of their useful lives and to comply with existing
and future federal water regulations."

Response: EPA has added this acknowledgement to the Strategy.

•	Various Comments concerning conditions for receipt of federal funding

Response: In response to several comments concerned with the adequacy of
funding for infrastructure in particular and water programs in general, it is not
the intent of this 2012 Strategy to increase costs, however, climate change itself
could incur additional costs. Planning ahead helps managers to find best
solutions to minimize costs, where possible. Further, while EPA would like to
see all elements of the Strategy go forward, we recognize that resources are
limited. This Strategy does not impose legally binding requirements on EPA,
States, the public, or the regulated community. EPA will attempt to provide
resources where possible and will provide technical guidance to help implement
these Strategic Actions. EPA looks forward to working with partners and
stakeholders to implement these actions over the long term.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27) provides the following general infrastructure-
related recommendations, which is echoed in a joint letter from American

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Rivers, Cahaba Riverkeeper, Clean Water Action, Clean Water Network,
National Wildlife Federation, Oregon Environmental Council and South
Carolina Coastal Conservation League (Doc. #36, p. 2):

o "As a condition for approval of Municipal Separate Stormwater (MS4)
permits, Combined Sewer Overflow (CSO) long term control plans, and
State Revolving Fund (SRF) awards, require a thorough assessment of
and maximum use of green infrastructure" (Doc. #27, p. 2).
o "Make adherence to EPA's full lifecycle analysis guidance a

requirement for infrastructure projects that receive Clean Water Act
(CWA) permits" (Doc. #27, p. 2).
o "Continue to support designated infrastructure funding for green
infrastructure and water and energy efficiency within the State
Revolving Funds, and work with states to update state ranking criteria to
provide full evaluation of climate resilient infrastructure" (Doc. #27, p.

2).

Response: The NWP encourages water and energy efficiency as allowable
under federal law, including the use of funding, e.g., using the SRF Green
Reserve. EPA will continue to work closely with States to facilitate their
decision making process and ensure they have the tools needed to make
appropriate decisions.

•	A joint letter from American Rivers, (Doc. #27) Cahaba Riverkeeper, Clean
Water Action, Clean Water Network, National Wildlife Federation, Oregon
Environmental Council and South Carolina Coastal Conservation League also
recommends:

o Issue performance-based standards for stormwater management
o Require climate change planning as a prerequisite for approval of any
CSO long term control plan, Clean Water SRF awards or stormwater
permits.

Response: EPA is exploring potential options to adopt performance-based
standards for stormwater management and would encourage further comment
on this issue. Over the long term, EPA will evaluate the appropriate uses of its
authorities and will attempt to provide resources and technical guidance
wherever possible to implement these Strategic Actions. Meanwhile, The NWP
encourages water and energy efficiency as allowable under federal law,
including the use of funding, e.g., using the SRF Green Reserve. EPA will
continue to work closely with States to facilitate their decision making process
and ensure they have the tools needed to make appropriate decisions.

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (Doc. #33, p. 11) offers suggests
adding the phrase "and using those projections as the basis for assessing
compliance of LTCPs with the specific control requirements of the CSO policy"
at the end of the first goal.

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Response: EPA is exploring potential options to adopt performance-based
standards for stormwater management and would encourage further comment on
this issue. Over the long term, EPA will evaluate the appropriate uses of its
authorities and will attempt to provide resources and technical guidance wherever
possible to implement these Strategic Actions.

•	The Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation (AK DEC) (Doc. #39,
p. 3) comments that this section include language to promote the use of
"Current Best Practices" to adapt infrastructure while the nation develops and
implements climate change strategies. In addition, AK DEC states that, apart
from Strategic Action 3, the infrastructure section appears "tailored to public
utilities in the contiguous United States" and recommends that "a note be added
to this section, in coordination with the State, to develop an appropriate
infrastructure strategy for Alaska."

Response: The concept of using current best practices is inherent in an adaptive
management approach. Regarding the comment specific to Alaska, please see the
Alaska section of the Strategy and this response to comment document.

Goal #1

•	A number of commenters applaud the CRWU, including the following:

o The Water Environment Federation (WEF) (Doc. #14, p. 1) commends
EPA for "undertaking the CRWU effort and incorporating its results into
their 2012 strategy."
o AWWA thanks EPA for acknowledging the role of water industry

associations in collaborating with the NWP and looks forward to further
collaborating with them and others; AWWA comments that "the
questions and concepts presented in the Climate Ready Water Utilities
(CRWU) program provide a reasoned and accessible starting point for
many utility managers to begin evaluating climate change strategies"
(Doc. #21, p. 1-2).
o AWWA also applauds EPA for acknowledging water infrastructure
concerns but that Strategy should note that climate related infrastructure
expenses are in addition to costs and challenges to maintain current
levels of service, and that EPA should commit to work with others to
address unmet financial needs. (Doc. #21, p. 1)
o American Rivers commends "the EPA for their Climate Ready Water
Utilities (CRWU) initiative" (Doc. #27, p. 2).

Response: The NWP is glad that the commenters find the CRWU to be an
important program; we look forward to working with the water resource
community to expand tools to help address the challenges posed by a changing
climate.

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Strategic Action 1

•	AWWA (Doc. #21, p. 2) comments that the current version (1.0) of Climate
Resilience Education and Awareness Tool (CREAT) tool "requires very labor-
intensive data entry but renders relatively generic recommendations", and points
to several other tools already developed by the federal government, including
"FEMA's HAZUS tool," "NOAA's Sea Level Rise and Coastal Flooding
Impacts Viewer," and "USGS's programs to project long-term flood, landslide,
earthquake, and tsunami risks" as well as others under development by the
private and non-profit sectors (Doc. #21, p. 3). In addition, they recommend the
"development of scenario planning tools that could evolve over time using
adaptive management" and provide a number of suggested scenarios while
noting that scenario planning is appropriate for planning but not for regulatory
issues (Doc. #21, p. 2-3).

Response: Thank you for your comments. We hope that you will find that
CREAT 2.0 is more user friendly, including a scenario-based approach. We
will include information on the tools you have identified on our updated water
and climate change web site. The NWP and the CRWU program look forward
to working with AWWA and other stakeholders to ensure that the tools we
develop are useful and effective. See also the response to NEIWPCC (Doc.
#35), below.

•	WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 5) also recommends improvements to the CREAT tool
"by simplifying the front end data input section, and adding an option to assess
impacts and develop adaptation options using simple scenarios", and suggests
that EPA expand "utility outreach and direct assistance in the use of CREAT
and any other developed support tools." WUCA provides the example of
"regional workshops to provide training in the developed tools" as an outreach
method.

Response: WUCA's suggestions are noted. The NWP looks forward to
continued collaboration with WUCA to improve the CRWU tools and to design
and deliver training useful for utilities. In the coming years, we intend to
expand training and outreach. See also the response to NEIWPCC, Doc. #35,
below.

•	The Natural Resource Defense Council (NRDC) (Doc. #33, p. 4) makes a
similar point regarding outreach by commenting that "these tools and resources
will only be effective in enabling utilities to adequately prepare for climate
change if they are both widely disseminated and utilized". Their comment
applies to CREAT as well as other tools, and they recommend working with
states on promoting these resources because "State agencies are many times the
only entity that many utilities, particularly those that are limited in capacity,
have direct and regular contact with on water resource-related issues."

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Response: The NWP looks forward to continued collaboration with NRDC and
others to improve tools and to design and deliver training useful for water
resource managers. In the coming years, we intend to expand training and
outreach. See also the response to NEIWPCC, Doc. #35, below.

• The New England Interstate Water Pollution Control Commission (NEIWPCC)
(Doc. #35, p. 1) indicates that it is critical that the CREAT documentation stress
the importance of helping guide users and front-line facility operators and
managers about how to use hydrologic science and tools, including to
communicate, explain and offer consensus on impacts on infrastructure.
NEIWPCC recommends adding "a component (whether in CREAT or
elsewhere) that allows users (non-scientists) to frame such information for
public consumption and for governmental forums".

Response: The Agency appreciates the positive feedback on our Climate
Ready Water Utilities (CRWU) initiative. As in the past, we will continue to
work with stakeholders to build on our climate ready efforts that assist drinking
water, wastewater, and storm water utility owners and operators better
understand and assess climate change impacts to their utilities.

The Climate Resilience Evaluation and Awareness Tool (CREAT), pronounced
"create," assists users in conducting climate change risk assessments and
promotes general awareness of climate change impacts for utility owners and
operators. This tool represents the first effort to provide practical, easy-to-use
software that translates the most recent climate change science into actionable
information for drinking water, wastewater and storm water systems. To
introduce utilities to the software and demonstrate how to use the tool, we have
developed self-guided training modules on CREAT 1.0. These modules assist
water sector utility owners and operators with inputting data to identify and
assess threats, identifying adaptation options, and developing an implementation
plan.

We are working on version 2.0 of CREAT which will feature improved
scenario-based planning, extreme events data, and energy management
capabilities. Utilities can also conduct analysis comparison scenarios for
different time periods. Utilities in Oakland, California and Wilmington,
Delaware have participated in pilots for CREAT 2.0, we expect to release
version 2.0 in late 2012. In coordination with our partners, after the release of
the software, EPA will outreach to the sector educate and provide training on
this tool.

For more information on CRWU and CREAT, please visit
www.epa.gov/climatereadvutilities.

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Strategic Action 2

•	The National Association of Clean Water Agencies (NACWA) (Doc. #43, p. 2)
provides a number of arguments in support of biosolids and recommends that
"EPA and other federal agencies better promote biosolids as a renewable
resource". In addition, they recommend that EPA "consider its GHG
regulations, such as the deferral of biogenic GHG."

Response: While this comment is outside the scope of the NWP 2012 Strategy,
EPA's Office of Air and Radiation supplied the following information in
response to this request. Biogenic C02 is released during the combustion of
biogenic feedstocks, including biosolids and biogas. In July 2011, EPA
finalized the Deferral for C02 Emissions From Bioenergy and Other Biogenic
Sources Under the Prevention of Significant Deterioration (PSD) and Title V
Programs, which deferred for three years (until July 2014) the CAA permitting
requirements for biogenic C02 emissions from stationary sources (July 20,
2011, 76 FR 43490). EPA is using the three-year deferral period to conduct a
detailed examination of the science associated with biogenic C02 emissions,
and in September 2011 EPA submitted the draft Accounting Framework for
Biogenic C02 Emissions from Stationary Sources to the Science Advisory
Board (SAB) for review. The purpose of this study is to explore the scientific
and technical issues associated with biogenic C02 emitted from stationary
sources and to present an accounting framework for estimating biogenic C02
emissions on the basis of information about the carbon cycle. The SAB has
undertaken a thorough scientific and technical review of the study including one
in-person meeting and four teleconferences, and is expected to release its
recommendations later in 2012. Based on the feedback from the scientific and
technical review, EPA intends to follow notice-and-comment rulemaking
procedures to determine how biogenic C02 emissions should be accounted for
in Clean Air Act permitting.

•	The NRDC recommends integrating climate change factors into "federal loan
and grant funding criteria and decision-making" (Doc. #33, p. 4) and giving
"preference to projects that save energy and reduce greenhouse gas emissions"
as a demonstration of the "federal government's commitment to sustainable
infrastructure and operations." They suggest that these criteria "include energy
and water efficiency as well as potential climate change impacts to the design
and siting of proposed projects."

Response: The NWP encourages the use of funding for water and energy
efficiency as allowable under federal law, e.g., using the SRF Green Reserve.
EPA will continue to work closely with States to facilitate their decision making
process and ensure they have the tools needed to make appropriate decisions.

•	While the City of San Diego (Doc. #38, Appendix A, p. 1) is supportive of tools
that help reduce energy, they urge caution about mandatory use because specific

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scenarios will not always produce a reduction in energy use since there is no
one-size fits all solution".

Response: The NWP encourages and supports energy efficiency as a way to
achieve sustainability while also reducing GHGs. We will continue to work
with States and utilities to develop tools for effective decision making.

•	The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41, p. 4) states that energy efficiency in
wastewater treatment and compliance with CWA §313(b) and §304(d)(3)
should be conditions to receiving Clean Water State Revolving Fund (SRF)
monies for wastewater treatment plants.

Response: The NWP encourages water and energy efficiency as allowable
under federal law, including the use of funding, e.g., using the SRF Green
Reserve. EPA will continue to work closely with States to facilitate their
decision making process and ensure they have the tools needed to make
appropriate decisions.

Strategic Action 3

•	NRDC (Doc. #33, p. 5) is particularly supportive of this strategic action, as it
describes the challenges for small utilities with limited resources to comply with
regulatory requirements and prepare for climate change.

Response: Thank you for your support.

•	NEIWPCC and the Association of State Drinking Water Administrators
(ASDWA) recommend rewording the strategic action as follows.

o NEIWPCC: "The NWP will work with the States and public water
systems to identify and plan for climate change challenges to drinking
water safety and to assist in meeting health-based drinking water
standards" (Doc. #35, p. 2).
o ASDWA: "The NWP will continue working to enhance partnerships
with states and others to improve water sector understanding of climate
change adaptation options and ..." (Doc. #40, p. 4).

Response: The suggestions have been adopted; Strategic Action 3 now reads:
"The NWP will enhance partnerships with States, inter states, tribes, and public
water systems to understand and plan for climate change challenges to drinking
water safety and to assist in meeting health-based drinking water standards."

•	The City of San Diego (Doc. #38, Appendix A p. 1) wishes to be involved in
identifying technical assistance activities because "if these technical activities
are enforced, we want to ensure the cost-effectiveness and feasibility of the
activities within our jurisdiction".

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Response: The NWP looks forward to working with the City of San Diego and
other stakeholders in developing decision support tools.

Strategic Action 4

•	WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 6) recommends adding funding to the strategic actions
under this goal, and suggests that this be done by expanding Strategic Action 4
to read '"Promote and fund' or 'Promote and incentivize' via Federal grants or
some other financial mechanism".

Response: The NWP supports these activities within its available resources.

•	The City of San Diego (Doc. #38, Appendix A, p. 1) comments that "a
disruption of locally implemented rate structuring could undermine visions and
goals of local entities" and that the strategy is not robust because it is based on a
handbook that is still under development. They recommend finalizing the
handbook through public comment "before a strategic action can be based on its
foundations."

Response: The NWP has completed Planning for Sustainability: A Handbook
for Water and Wastewater Utilities which provides a series of steps OW to help
utilities voluntarily incorporate sustainability considerations into their planning.

Other Strategic Actions

•	The Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources (DNR) (Doc. #32, p. 1)
recommends adding a "Strategic Action related to developing new non-
stationary floodplain mapping concepts into water and wastewater facility
design and public water system sanitary survey inspection criteria".

Response: This concept is already incorporated in the 2012 Strategy, in
Strategic Actions 1 (infrastructure) and 51 (research), and in other SAs that state
that we will work with partners to develop this type of information.

•	WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 6) urges "EPA to include a Strategic Action which
provides a funding vehicle not only for the design of sustainable systems, but
also to offset the cost of modifications to existing infrastructure or for new
sustainable infrastructure."

Response: The NWP will support the activities in the 2012 Strategy within
available resources.

•	The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41, p. 4) comments on energy efficiency in
wastewater treatment, and suggests that compliance with §313(b) of the CWA
and §304(d)(3) be conditions to receiving Clean Water State Revolving Fund
(SRF) monies for wastewater treatment plants.

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Response: The NWP encourages water and energy efficiency as allowable
under federal law, including the use of funding, e.g., using the SRF Green
Reserve. EPA will continue to work closely with States to facilitate their
decision making process and ensure they have the tools needed to make
appropriate decisions.

Goal #2

•	The National Farms Union (Doc. #19, p. 1) is encouraged that the 2012 Strategy
recognizes the need to work with the agriculture community to promote water
management. NFU indicates that conservation-based management strategies
such as agriculture drainage management can provide a two-pronged strategy to
improve water-use efficiency and reduce water quality impacts. NFU
encourages EPA to continue collaborating with USD A NRCS, and to support
delivery technical and financial assistance necessary to work with the
agriculture community.

Response: Thank you for your support; we look forward to working with NFU
on these important issues.

•	While the American Rivers (Doc. #27, p. 6) letter is supportive of many of the
actions in the Strategy, the comments includes extensive discussion on ideas for
moving the nation towards a more sustainable future, and makes the point that
the NWP fails to address many comprehensive policy changes that are needed.

Response: Thank you for your support; it is not the strategy's goal to address
and provide answers for all policy issues associated with climate change;
addressing such issues is an iterative and adaptive process and EPA looks
forward to working with all stakeholders, including American Rivers, to make
sure important policy issues are not overlooked.

•	WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 6) identifies Strategic Actions 5 and 6 as "no-regret
strategies" that should be priority actions "because they make the utility more
resilient to a number of challenges facing the water sector, in addition to climate
change impacts, such as minimizing the challenges associated with meeting
demands with limited water supplies and growing populations"

Response: An edit was made to acknowledge that many of the actions in those
strategic actions can be considered no-regrets activities.

Strategic Action 5

•	While supportive of Aquifer Storage and Recovery (ASR) projects, the Ground
Water Protection Council (GWPC) (Doc. #25, p. 1) emphasizes the need to
protect underground sources of drinking water from contamination, and

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cautions "the NWP in the use of ASR and other green infrastructure as a process
of storing water underground for future use when applied to stormwater".

GWPC recommends "guidance and rules associated with the upcoming revised
stormwater regulations that are not only protective of surface water quality, but
also protective of groundwater quality" and is proposing to work with EPA to
identify viable solutions.

Response: The NWP looks forward to working with GWPC and other
stakeholders on this issue.

•	An employee of the City of Aurora (Doc. #30, p. 1) states that as population
continues to grow in the West while less water becomes available, increased
demands on water providers must be addressed and the debate about additional
storage must be started.

Response: The NWP will engage in this issue as appropriate.

•	The National Ground Water Association (NGWA) (Doc. #44, p. 1) recommends
that:

o "These sections need to mention the nexus among artificial groundwater
recharge and conservation, reuse and water quality protection.
Groundwater banking is an underutilized mechanism in which artificial
recharge is directly linked to responsible reuse and market based
allocation"

o "Clarifying that ASR is 'one technique for managed aquifer recharge'
among others"

o "Managed aquifer recharge projects should be included as eligible water
infrastructure projects for federal financial support."

Response: Edit made to indicate that ASR is one type of managed underground
injection, and that all types of underground injection must not endanger
USDWs.

•	The Wisconsin DNR (Doc. #32, p. 1) recommends the following additional
research and outreach be performed related to water recharge and reuse:

o "Research and an implementation strategy for seepage cells or

infiltration galleries in the Midwest to be used to mitigate groundwater
depletion from intensive uses."

o "Research on satellite wastewater systems in the Midwest that could be
used to extract water from sewer flows to be infiltrated on-site as a way
to replenish groundwater supplies."

o "An outreach and education strategy for public acceptance of wastewater
reuse."

Response: We can take these under consideration as we work on issues,
although we would want to ensure that any activities related to infiltration not

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endanger underground sources of drinking water. However, we do not believe
the specific activities need to be added to the Climate Strategy document.

•	NRDC (Doc. #33, p. 5) provides a number of facts and statistics to illustrate the
importance of water loss control and to suggest that EPA "should be
aggressively promoting water loss control programs". NRDC also describes
ongoing efforts in California to emphasize that "EPA should work with water
agencies to ensure these types of clear, mandated water loss control
requirements are undertaken outside of California as well." They identify the
A WW A's Manual M-36, Water Audits and Loss Control Programs as free
software that could be beneficial to utilities.

Response: EPA agrees that utilities should address the issue of water loss and,
when working with the regulated community, recommends use of the
IWA/AWWA methodology for conducting water audits (see
http://water.epa.gov/infrastructure/sustain/wec wp.cfm). There are many
activities that EPA is carrying out to support the overall sustainability of water
systems. The Climate Strategy is intended to communicate broader directions
rather than the specific activities that would be carried out under each
goal/strategic action area.

•	Rather than monitor research development for desalination, AWWA (Doc. #21,
p. 3) suggests that the "NWP should commit to actively seeking to drive down
the energy intensity of desalination, recognizing that in some instances
desalination may be the best technology available to meet the drinking water
needs of coastal residents (or of residents in areas with saline ground water)"

Response: We intend to collaborate with the research community and
communicate relevant findings to water utilities, in cooperation with the
associations which represent them.

Strategic Action 6

•	The US Geological Survey (USGS) (Doc. #31, p. 2) comments that on page 28,
"the wrong reference is given for the water shortages map on this page. While
this map did appear in a USGCRP report, the source was cited in that report as
follows: U.S. Bureau of Reclamation, 2005: Water 2025: Preventing Crises and
Conflict in the West. U.S. Bureau of Reclamation, Washington, DC, 32 pp.
Updated from USBR http://www.usbr. gov/uc/crsp/GetSitelnfo"

Response: Correction made.

•	The Wisconsin DNR (Doc. #32, p. 1) recommends the following research
activities related to metering:

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o "Research and development of systems to process real-time customer
water use data to deliver useful information to customers for them to
make informed water use decisions,
o Research the effectiveness of real-time water use information to change
customer behavior."

Response: We appreciate the comment. EPA agrees that this type of
information, which can be made available to customers through automatic
metering systems, could be useful.

•	NRDC (Doc. #33, p. 6) provides the following recommendations regarding
metering:

o "EPA should strongly encourage and work with water utilities to first
ensure that the utility is metering all service connections, and using
metered water for billing purposes (exceptions may be made for the
smallest systems, provided the exceptions are reviewed periodically to
account for current information on the technology and economics of
metering and billing systems)."
o "EPA should continue its work with plumbing and building codes to
encourage the installation of meters on all new homes, on multi-family
individual units, and on commercial buildings so water use can be
measured and billed accordingly."
o It also discusses the conservation benefits of multifamily sub-metering
for apartments and condominiums.

Response: EPA is actively supporting these types of activities within its
authority and resources.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27, p. 6) makes the point that efficiency and
conservation may be a better way forward than large-scale engineering projects
and recommends additional EPA effort "to require water and wastewater
utilities to meet standards for efficiency, leak detection and conservation pricing
through permit requirements and as a condition of receiving SRF funding."

Response: The NWP encourages water and energy efficiency as allowable under
federal law, including the use of funding, e.g., using the SRF Green Reserve.
EPA will continue to work closely with States to facilitate their decision making
process and ensure they have the tools needed to make appropriate decisions.
We look forward to working with America Rivers and other stakeholders on this
important issue.

•	Regarding WaterSense, NRDC (Doc. #33, p. 6) appreciates EPA's efforts, and
recommends that EPA continue to "update the WaterSense standards for all
fixtures and appliances and promoting the incorporation of those standards into
an update of national minimum water efficiency standards."

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Response: EPA is actively supporting these types of activities within its authority

and resources.

•	The Clean Water Network (CWN) (Doc. #41, p. 4) recommends the following
actions related to water conservation:

o "Allocate significant resources for the WaterSense program."
o "Allocate serious resources for state and local governments as well as
for local watershed and community civic groups for water conservation
program grants."

o "Encourage water utilities to offer their customers incentives to practice

water conservation."
o "Work with states to ensure that new development has adequate water

supply to avoid unsustainable development."
o "Actively implement Executive Order 13421 Section 2(c), which
requires Federal facilities to reduce water consumption."

Response: EPA is actively supporting these types of activities within its
authority and resources.

•	AWWA (Doc. #21, p. 3) is very supportive of EPA's efforts related to pricing
that reflects the true cost of water, and recommends that this be taken "a step
further" by coordinating with other EPA Offices, other parts of the government,
and with water industry associations to promote the true cost concept".

Response: As AWWA knows, EPA has been promoting the practice of full cost
pricing for several years. However, because rate-making is a local utility
decision, the Agency is eager to continue working with its stakeholders to
educate local officials and the public on the need to better price water to reflect
the costs of providing service.

•	While WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 6) is supportive of water pricing to control
demand, they comment that "EPA's role regarding pricing should be limited to
education and public outreach" because pricing structures are location-specific
and address local need, such as low-income residents and other considerations.
They also suggest that EPA create "an economics team specializing in water-
pricing strategies that could be called upon by those entities that want advice
about how to incorporate more of the cost of water in their planning and
actions."

Response: EPA agrees that pricing is a local decision, but will continue to
promote and educate on the need for appropriate pricing structures that better
reflect the costs of providing service while meeting affordability needs. We will
take the suggestion to create an economics team under advisement.

•	NRDC (Doc. #33, p. 6) recommends that EPA "support conservation pricing,
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provide concrete examples of tiered pricing strategies successful at reducing
consumption, as well as a number of arguments to substantiate their
recommendation. NRDC suggests "including these types of water conservation
measures in NPDES permits for POTWs administered by EPA, and ensuring
that states that administer NPDES permits follow suit."

Response: EPA is actively supporting these types of activities within its
authority and resources.

•	The City of San Diego (Doc. #38, Appendix A, p. 2) comments that it is not
EPA's role to be involved in local water rates, and that EPA should instead
focus their efforts on researching "more innovative ways of infrastructure
operations, maintenance and rehabilitation or working more efficiently under
constrained costs."

Response: EPA is actively supporting these types of activities within its
authority and resources.

•	NRDC (Doc. #33) references an EPA document related to water-efficient
landscaping to point to the lack of recommendations related to this topic in the
NWP. NRDC recommends that EPA do the following:

o "Develop model ordinances that municipalities can adopt that ensure
efficient landscapes in new developments and reduce water waste in
existing landscapes."
o Encourage and incentivize businesses and institutions "to replace turf
with low-water use vegetation, and invest in innovative devices such as
smart controllers and moisture sensors."
o Encourage and incentivize farmers "to take full advantage of measures
such as modest crop shifting, smart irrigation scheduling, advanced
irrigation management, and efficient irrigation technology."

Response: EPA is actively supporting these types of activities within its
authority and resources.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p. 1) seeks clarification as to how the
WaterSense Program will actually reduce greenhouse gas emissions.

Response: It takes energy to move, treat and use water. By reducing water use,
less energy will be used, thereby reducing GHGs. WaterSense labeled fixtures
help residential water users to use less water.

2.	Watersheds and Wetlands

A total of nineteen comment letters were received that provided input on this
section of the Strategy. Comments were received from local government agencies,
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NGOs. Comments were received regarding this topic in general and in specific
regard to Goals #3-7. Approximately half the commenters provided feedback on
the recommendations to incorporate climate change considerations in the Clean
Water Act (CWA) Section 404 program.

General Comments

•	The Louisiana Environmental Action Network (Doc. #20, p. 1) supports the
goal of promoting healthy watersheds, saying this is important to improving
conditions within the Gulf of Mexico.

Response: Thank you for your support. The NWP looks forward to
collaborating with LEAN on this important issue.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27, p.4) states their support of this goal saying that
healthy watersheds are "critical to reducing the impacts of climate change."

Response: Thank you for your support. The NWP looks forward to
collaborating with American Rivers and other stakeholders on this important
issue.

•	The Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources' Water Division (Doc. #32,

p. 1) asks that consideration be given to allowing flexibility in implementing the
goals in the Watershed and Wetland portion of the strategy from state to state or
region to region. While the report does a good job discussing collaboration with
terrestrial system, the discussion should be expanded to "address how changes
in climate may shift agricultural production and cropping systems," including
how warmer temperatures may breakdown residue faster reducing protection
against erosion. They further state that there is a need to better define what the
change in watersheds will be prior to knowing how to design for it.

Response: As the Agency moves forward with responding to climate change,
we will consider where statutes allow for regulatory flexibility in adjusting to
shifting conditions. Regarding agricultural systems and changes in watersheds,
these are the types of issues that are expected to be addressed over time.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p.2) is in favor of the draft Strategy's
increased focus on the importance of protecting healthy
waters/watersheds/wetlands in Section IV, Subsection B, and states "The draft
strategy notes that EPA will work to integrate protection of healthy watersheds
throughout NWP core programs. This is very much in line with other ongoing
EPA initiatives, including the Clean Water Act (CWA) Section 303(d) 10-Year
Vision and Section 319 Reform efforts."

Response: Thank you for your support. The NWP looks forward to
collaborating with our partners on this important issue.

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Goal #3

•	The Los Angeles Department of Public Works and Los Angeles County Flood
Control District (Doc. #16, p. 2) comment on the importance of the U.S. Forest
Service (USFS) in maintaining healthy watersheds in the Los Angeles area and
states that "added significance to the USFS mission in this area should be
recognized through expanded funding commensurate with the increased risk of
wildfire and other factors .. .as a result of climate change".

Response: The NWP agrees that the role of the USFS is critical to maintaining
a healthy watershed, and the NWP intends to continue to collaborate with them
on these issues.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27, p. 11) supports EPA's healthy watershed goal, and
says that "EPA must restore the traditional scope of Clean Water Act protection
intended by Congress" and that EPA should complete the rulemaking process
and increase wetland jurisdiction to protect small streams and wetlands.

Response: EPA thanks the commenter for its support of EPA's healthy
watersheds goal but notes that the aspect of the comment dealing with CWA
jurisdiction is outside the scope of this Strategy.

•	The U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service (Doc. #34, p.l) writes that the Strategy
could be "enhanced by a more thorough discussion of how a variety of agencies
could collaborate at the landscape scale to build climate-resilient wetlands and
watersheds." (USFWS makes this same comment under Goal #4.) It also states
that the National Fish Habitat Action Plan is mis-characterized and they provide
specific text edits to that language under Goal #3 in the Strategy to correct this
issue (Doc. #34, p. 3).

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have inserted a text box listing the
goals of the Draft Fish, Wildlife and Plants Adaptation Strategy and
underscored our commitment to work with participating partners to achieve the
goals. The suggested edits regarding the NFHAP are accepted.

•	The New England Interstate Water Pollution Control Commission (NEIWPCC;
Doc. #35, p. 2) writes that the role of Section 319 of the Clean Water Act should
be explored as a tool to maintain watershed health, saying it is a "cost effective
response to both current conditions and changes to the climate." and that future
Section 319 guidance should be crafted to optimize the ability to use 319 for
healthy watersheds.

Response: The NWP agrees with the commenter that the Section 319 program
is a cost effective tool in EPA's effort to maintain watershed health. SA 10
(healthy watersheds) already implies the use of Section 319 grants in the

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discussion of "funding and technical assistance programs." However, specific
reference to CWA Section 319 has been inserted into SA12 (watershed
restoration and floodplain management) and SA 33 (water quality planning).

•	The Association of State Drinking Water Administrators (ASDWA; Doc. #40,
p. 4) also suggests that specific references to Section 319 should be included in
the discussion of this goal.

Response: SA 10 (healthy watersheds) already implies the use of Section 319
grants in the discussion of "funding and technical assistance programs."
However, specific reference to CWA Section 319 has been inserted into SA12
(watershed restoration and floodplain management) and SA 33 (water quality
planning).

•	The City of San Diego Transportation and Stormwater Department (Doc. #38,
p. 5) comments on the recommendation to encourage the use of green
infrastructure through stormwater permits, stating "the cost/benefit ratio of any
such requirements would depend on how they are implemented." The City
would like to take advantage of opportunities to engage in the USEPA/state
continuing planning process.

Response: The NWP looks forward to engaging with the City of San Diego and
other stakeholders on this issue.

Goal #4

•	The U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service (Doc. #34, p.l) writes that the Strategy
could be "enhanced by a more thorough discussion of how a variety of agencies
could collaborate at the landscape scale to build climate-resilient wetlands and
watersheds." Please note they make this same comment under Goal #3.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have inserted a text box under
Goal 3 listing the goals of the Draft Fish, Wildlife and Plants Adaptation
Strategy and underscored our intention to work with participating partners to
achieve the goals. This applies to Goal 4 and other aspects of the 2012 Strategy
s well.

•	The City of San Diego Transportation and Stormwater Department (Doc. #38,
p. 3) supports Strategic Action 13 under Goal #4, but notes that the practical
implementation can be problematic in that funding for acquisition of riparian
buffers and lands could be limited, and buying and managing land will require
greater fiscal budget, but Public Utilities, are economically challenged.

•

Response: The NWP acknowledges this challenge.

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•	NEIWPCC (Doc. #35, p.2) writes of the importance of the recognition of the
riparian zone and floodplain management. It states that "structural and non-
structural floodplain and riparian zone decisions can assist in reducing the
impact of severe storms; and intact and well-managed watersheds can absorb
impacts and help balance flows over time." It requests that this be specifically
identified in the Strategic Actions section in the Strategy.

Response: EPA appreciates this comment and has inserted an additional
revision to place more emphasis on floodplain management.

•	Another State Commenter (Doc. #48, p.2) comments under Goal 4, Strategic
Action 13, "federal agencies could do a better job of protecting and enhancing
naturalized riparian buffers if they work together to address the multiple
benefits of riparian areas, including habitat, flood reduction, nutrient reduction,
recreation and base flow enhancement. We would also like to note that in that
same strategic action, we support the emphasis placed on non-structural
solutions."

Response: Thank you for your comment; the NWP intends to work with other
federal agencies to achieve this Goal.

Goal #5

•	The Los Angeles Department of Public Works and Los Angeles County Flood
Control District (Doc. #16, p. 3) discuss the concern about rising sea level as it
relates to their injection well system that is used to provide a salt water intrusion
barrier to protect drinking water aquifers. They indicate that more research is
needed to define probabilistically the magnitude of sea level rise, and encourage
"more research and welcome technical assistance from the various Federal
agencies that could assist in projected possible needs to guard against the effects
of sea level rise...."

Response: EPA agrees that research is needed in this area and is collaborating
with others on this issue.

•	The Water Utility Climate Alliance (WUCA) (Doc. #24, p. 7) raises an issue
regarding the stated concerns about warmer water temperature fostering
pathogen growth, and increased precipitation causing elevated pollutant loads in
surface water reservoirs and streams used for public water supply. It agrees that
these conditions can lead to increased treatment requirements, and suggests
"placing the emphasis of the two situations on the increased financial burden to
utilities which will have to do additional treatment, rather than on the reliability
of treatment." The WUCA also "supports EPA's decision to foster increased
collaboration at the local and watershed or aquifer scale."

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Response: An edit has been inserted adding the text, "and potentially
increasing costs."

•	The Ground Water Protection Council (GWPC) (Doc. #25, p. 2) supports the
goal of continued stakeholder collaboration to promote source water protection
awareness, as well as the action to encourage the inclusion of source water
protection areas in local climate change adaptation initiatives discussed in
Strategic Action 15.

Response: The NWP looks forward to working with GWPC and other
stakeholders on these important issues.

•	The National Association of Homebuilders (NAHB) (Doc. #26, p. 8) raises an
issue about Strategic Action 14 concerning source water delineations, and states
that the Strategy has not done enough to incorporate recommendations by the
stakeholders most impacted. NAHB indicates there are multiple agencies
working to address climate change through changes in local planning and code
requirements, including EPA, DOT and HUD via the Partnership for
Sustainable Communities Initiative. It suggests that these be evaluated by the
NWP to avoid a duplication of effort and duplication in requirements for
compliance.

Response: The NWP appreciates the NAHB's comment, and will ensure that
we continue to coordinate with the Partnership for Sustainable Communities
Initiative on these issues.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27) and a joint letter from American Rivers, Cahaba
Riverkeeper, Clean Water Action, Clean Water Network, National Wildlife
Federation, Oregon Environmental Council and South Carolina Coastal
Conservation League (Doc. #36, p. 2): suggest that EPA "Strengthen source
water protection" (Doc. #27, p. 8).

Response: The NWP looks forward to working with American Rivers and other
stakeholders on these important issues.

•	ASDWA (Doc. #40, pp. 4-5) asks that groundwater be more prominent by
adding the following words to the last sentence on page 33: ".. .where
groundwater withdrawals are outstripping recharge; increased pressure head
from a higher sea-level worsens this problem." It also believes the updating of
source water assessments and protection plans under Strategic Action 14 is
important, but are "concerned about the lack of resources dedicated to undertake
this activity at the national level."

Response: Edit accepted. The NWP acknowledges the economic challenge.

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•	The National Ground Water Association (NGWA) (Doc. #44, p. 2) comments
on the value of source water protection planning and states that "Action to
update delineations, assessments or protection plans may not happen without
federal funding to the states or local government."

Response: The NWP acknowledges this challenge.

Wetlands General Comments

•	Several Comments

Response: A number of commenters, itemized below, raised legal concerns
regarding Strategy Goals 6 and 7 (CWA 404 and EPA's wetlands program.) In
particular, commenters said that (1) EPA does not have the authority to
superimpose additional climate change analyses on the CWA 404 program
generally and, in particular, when determining pursuant to the 1992 Section
404(q) Memorandum of Agreement (MO A) whether there would be a
"substantial and unacceptable" effect to an Aquatic Resource of National
Importance (ARNI); (2) any new substantive climate-related CWA 404
permitting criteria must pass through the APA rulemaking process; (3) any
climate change effects on the CWA 404 program should only be analyzed after
EPA issues a wetlands jurisdictional rule based on an appropriate reading of its
statutory authority; and (4) EPA should avoid any arbitrary definition of
"natural" states of wetland diversity.

With regard to comments that EPA does not have authority to superimpose
additional climate change analysis on the CWA 404 program, EPA responds
that, as Strategic Action 16 states, EPA will consider the effects of climate
change only as appropriate when making determinations or taking action under
CWA 404. "As appropriate" would include as consistent with applicable
statutory and regulatory authority. Moreover, Strategic Action 16 states that
EPA will coordinate with US ACE regarding "if/how" consideration of climate
change could be incorporated into CWA 404 decision processes. EPA will also
consider the role of States and Tribes through programmatic assumption, state
programmatic general permits and/ water quality certification. EPA intends to
carefully analyze its legal authority to consider the effects of climate change on
any regulatory or permitting action it takes pursuant to CWA section 404,
including determining if there would be a "substantial and unacceptable" impact
to ARNI. This analysis would include whether it is necessary to undertake APA
rulemaking. EPA considers it beyond the scope of this Strategy and comment
response exercise to respond to comments regarding the development of CWA
404 jurisdictional guidance. Lastly, EPA intends to avoid taking any action
pursuant to this Strategy that could be characterized as "arbitrary," including the
adoption of an arbitrary definition of "natural" states of wetland diversity.

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•	The Western Business Roundtable (Doc. #23, p. 11) comments on the
integration of the Strategy into the CWA and states that "We are particularly
concerned by the combined implications of this expansive and vaguely defined
climate initiative and the Agency's proposed expansion of its authority under
the CWA." They also state their opposition to the recent "Draft Guidance in
Identifying Waters Protected by the Clean Water Act" and give a number of
reasons for this opposition. It asks that the comments it filed on the draft
guidance be incorporated by reference into its comments on the Strategy.

Response: See the first response in this section on Wetlands General
Comments. As in that response, EPA notes that it is beyond the scope of this
Strategy and comment response exercise to respond to comments regarding the
development of CWA 404 jurisdictional guidance.

•	NAHB (Doc. #26, pp. 3-7) provides significant discussion on the CWA Section
404 program, including a summary of recent court decisions and EPA guidance
documents related to permitting of Waters of the United States. In this context,
it expresses a concern about the increased requirements proposed under Goal #6
in the Strategy and states they are "based on subjective interpretations of
climate change impacts and mitigation strategies that will undoubtedly add to
already cumbersome, confusing and complicated wetlands permitting program."
It states that "Changing the requirements of the Section 404 program to address
the effects of climate change require a rulemaking to implement" and "Prior to
adding new layers of compliance requirements, the EPA must instead address
existing issues with the Section 404 program."

Response: See the first response in this section on Wetlands General
Comments. As in that response, EPA notes that it is beyond the scope of this
Strategy and comment response exercise to respond to comments regarding the
development of CWA 404 jurisdictional guidance. EPA disagrees that it cannot
simultaneously address climate adaptation concerns and other "existing issues"
related to the CWA 404 program.

•	The National Mining Association (Doc. #37, pp. 1, 3-4) express concerns about
potential expansion of authority under Section 404 of the CWA and states that it
is concerned that the Strategy will "result in further delays and complications in
already cumbersome permitting processes with few or no corresponding
benefits." It specifically mentions that the Strategy discusses CWA Section
404(q) with regards to ARNI's and says that this section of the Act does not
mention ANRI's or "permit EPA to further delay the permitting process to
purportedly account for nearly impossible-to-predict climate change scenarios."
It also raises a similar concern regarding the consideration of climate change
impacts by NPDES permitting authorities.

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Response: See the first response in this section on Wetlands General
Comments. EPA disagrees with the comment that anticipating issues presented
by climate change will delay or complicate the CWA 404 permitting process.

•	Consol Energy (Doc. #42, pp. 1-2) raises similar issues with potential changes
to the Section 404 program as described by the National Mining Association,
and writes that it supports the Association's concern that "EPA is using the
Strategy to expand its own authority without statutory justification and infuse
the entire Section 404 permitting regime with questionable science that is
subject to frequent change." It further writes that "This Strategy threatens to
unravel the CWA regulatory scheme, increase cost, add unforeseeable delays to
the permitting process, and open the door for costly litigation."

Response: See the first response in this section on Wetlands General
Comments. Moreover, EPA disagrees with the comment that this Strategy
"threatens to unravel the CWA regulatory scheme, increase cost, add
unforeseeable delays to the permitting process, and open the door for costly
litigation."

•	The American Petroleum Institute (Doc. #46, p. 5) states that the proposal to
determine how wetlands under changing climate conditions will differ from
their natural state is an unachievable objective. It says that "EPA must be
careful to ensure that all wetlands determinations are made based solely on the
statutory limits of EPA's jurisdictional authority, as intended by Congress." It
questions whether it is possible to identify natural wetland conditions as well as
appropriate indicators of climate change. It also says "there is no guarantee that
the 'natural' state of a particular wetland community has a greater ecological
value than an altered state resulting from changes in its water balance and
ambient temperature regime." It recommends that EPA focus on wetland
mapping goals instead of looking at changes in the natural state of wetlands.

Response: See the first response in this section on Wetlands General
Comments.

•	The Association of State Wetland Managers (ASWM) (Doc. #28, p. 2) requests
that EPA add an additional goal encouraging "sustainable wetland restoration
and long term planning and priority setting for wetland restoration projects
which takes into account the potential added benefits for climate change
mitigation and adaptation." Strategic actions could address (1) consideration of
likely climate impacts on hydrology in restoration design and management; (2)
encouraging agencies and organizations to restore and preserve wetlands to
prepare for climate change when setting priorities, and (3) research to clarify the
conditions under which restored or preserved wetlands can serve as carbon
sinks, and to estimate the potential scope of potential carbon sequestration,
including actions to maximize carbon sequestration.

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Response: EPA thanks ASWM for this suggestion and agrees that the 2012
Strategy should address long term planning for wetland restoration. Rather
than add a new Goal, this concept will be merged with the existing Goal 7,
giving it a broader focus. The new Goal and Strategic Actions will read:

Goal 7: EPA improves baseline information on wetland extent,
condition and performance to inform sustainable wetland restoration,
long term planning, and priority setting that takes into account the
potential added benefits for climate change adaptation and carbon
sequestration.

Strategic Action 20: The NWP intends to work with partners and
stakeholders to develop information and tools to support long term
planning and priority setting for wetland restoration projects.

Wetlands have the potential to provide added benefits for climate
change adaptation as well the potential to sequester carbon. The
NWP intends to work with partners and stakeholders, encouraging
them to consider climate change when setting priorities, including to
protect wetlands from impacts as well as to maximize carbon
sequestration.

Goal #6

•	The Los Angeles Department of Public Works and Los Angeles County Flood
Control District (Doc. #16, p. 4) is concerned that U.S.ACE would add more
permitting and mitigation requirements on proposed projects, affecting
regulatory agencies' ability to process permits in a timely manner due to
additional work. EPA should be expected to develop any such changes to the
404 regulatory program through a formal rulemaking process.

Response: EPA will carefully consider application of the Administrative
Procedures Act or rulemaking processes, including notice and comment, should
it consider or make changes to the CWA 404 regulatory program.

•	WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 7) supports the CWA 404 program and urges "EPA to
take a regional or local level stance when considering the effects of climate
change on CWA Section 404 Wetlands permitting and enforcement programs"
as discussed in Strategic Action 16. It also "would like further clarification as
to how the EPA Section 404 permit review process would determine if there
would be a 'substantial and unacceptable' impact to Aquatic Resources of
National Importance (ARNI)."

Response: The Goals and Strategic Actions discussed in the Strategy identify
areas of intended, future focus and are not intended to describe in detail the
nature of future actions that may be undertaken. The intent is to work with

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partners and stakeholders to figure out if and how to factor climate change into
future actions.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27, p. 11) is concerned that EPA's commitment to
evaluating the 404 program are "far too timid and do not represent the overhaul
that is necessary to correct the significant failings of the Section 404 program."
Further, it writes that "the Agency should be more proactive in and develop
detailed and binding guidance on the steps that must be undertaken by an
applicant for a Clean Water Act Section 404 permit."

Response: EPA notes that the commenters broadly expressed concerns about
the existing Section 404 program generally, or permitting in particular, are
beyond the scope of this 2012 Strategy.

•	ASWM (Doc. #28. p. 1) states that the discussion regarding this goal focuses on
federal agencies, while "many states and tribes play a major role through
program assumption, state programmatic and general permits, and/or Section
404 water quality certification." It recommends that EPA recognize the need to
collaborate with states and tribes during the evaluation of the 404 program and
that "state/tribal wetland permit programs also be addressed by this goal" as
states and tribes are both affected by changes to the 404 program.

Response: The NWP agrees, and it is our intent to work with all relevant
parties.

•	The U.S. Geological Survey (Doc. #31, p. 2) recognizes the challenge in
implementing this strategic action yet recognizes "this is an important action
because IPCC and many others have listed wetlands among the most highly
vulnerable ecosystems to the effects of climate change."

Response: The NWP thanks the USGS for its support and collaboration.

•	A joint letter from American Rivers, Cahaba Riverkeeper, Clean Water Action,
Clean Water Network, National Wildlife Federation, Oregon Environmental
Council and South Carolina Coastal Conservation League (Doc. #36, p. 2)
suggests:

o that the NWP work with EPA Regions to set water conservation and
efficiency standards and metrics for the 404 permitting process,
similar to Region 4's current standards;
o that the effects of climate change be considered when making

practicable alternatives and significant degradation determinations in
the Section 404 program;
o give real meaning to avoidance under Section 404 sequencing by
elevating the importance of preserving intact systems; and

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o evaluate with the US ACE how wetland and stream compensation
projects could be selected, designed, and sited to aid in reducing the
effects of climate change.

Response: The NWP appreciates the commenters' letter, and welcomes their
ongoing input as the NWP works to address these important issues in the future.

•	The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41, p. 6) stated that EPA should work with
the USGS and US ACE and other agencies to reinvigorate efforts to protect all
existing wetlands, focusing on wetlands that must be off limits to new
development due to climate change considerations.

Response: The NWP appreciates the commenter's letter, and welcomes the
Clean Water Network's ongoing input as the NWP works to address these
important issues in the future.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p.2) suggests with respect to the wetlands-
related strategic actions, "it should be clarified whether we should also assess
those wetlands that will not be able to accrete at a pace that is fast enough to
keep up with sea level rise. We suggest that the protection of wetlands that can
survive sea level rise be prioritized to ensure we are acting in a cost effective
manner. In addition, it would be helpful for the final strategy to set forth
examples of wetlands adaptation."

Response: Thank you for your comment. We have edited Goal 7 and added a
new Strategic Action to include the need to prioritize efforts:

Goal 7: EPA improves baseline information on wetland extent,
condition and performance to inform sustainable wetland restoration,
long term planning, and priority setting that takes into account the
potential added benefits for climate change adaptation and carbon
sequestration.

Strategic Action 20: The NWP intends to work with partners and
stakeholders to develop information and tools to support long term
planning and priority setting for wetland restoration projects.

Goal #7

•	WUCA (Doc. #24, p. 7) believes "EPA should prioritize initial efforts to focus
on SA 18 and commit funding and training to complete wetland mapping,
especially in the arid West." Based on stakeholder monitoring and assessment
projects conducted to date in Nevada, it recommends that EPA survey
stakeholders to share available data.

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Response: Thank you for your comment. The NWP supports these efforts
within available resources.

•	The NAHB (Doc. #26, pp. 3-7) states, with regard to the recommendation to
update wetlands mapping, that "Prior to adding new layers of compliance
requirements, the EPA must instead address existing issues with the Section 404
program."

Response: Thank you for your comment. EPA notes that this strategy does not
add "new layers of compliance" and, in any event, disagrees that it cannot
simultaneously address climate adaptation concerns and other "existing issues"
related to the CWA 404 program.

•	ASWM (Doc. #28, p. 2) recognizes the value of a national assessment of
wetlands, but that states and tribes also monitor wetland extent and condition
(e.g., Great Lakes) and indicates that State and regional data will be important
in planning for and evaluating climate impacts, and evaluating the success of
adaptation actions.

Response: The NWP agrees with the comment.

3.	Coastal and Ocean Waters

Ten comment letters were submitted on this section of the Strategy from a wide

range of entities including professional societies, federal, state, and local

government agencies, regulated communities, and national environmental NGOs.

These comments are generally in support of this section of the National Water

Program (NWP), and offer suggestions of further inclusions and expansions.

General Comments

•	The Fertilizer Institute (TFI) has two major comments related to the Coastal and
Ocean Waters section regarding duplication of existing intergovernmental
activities and clarifications of the CWA authority over greenhouse gases.

TFI (Doc. #17, p.2) states that there must exist a "structure with the formal
standing to coordinate among existing intergovernmental bodies involved in
existing activities" to avoid "overlapping and duplicative efforts". For example,
TFI cites four "broad-based, budget-intensive watershed protection efforts... for
several major water bodies" that will be readdressed by the 2012 Strategy. TFI
would like to see a proposal for how the existing intergovernmental bodies will
be integrated into a single Task Force whenever possible.

Response: Thank you for the comment about how the proliferation of
strategies and adaptation plans throughout the federal government may be
confusing, especially since, at the time of issuance of the draft 2012 Strategy,

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the National Ocean Policy and the Fish, Wildlife and Plants Strategy were still
under development (and have not yet been issued in final form). We are
working to ensure that the plans avoid contradictions or duplication, and that
they promote coordination. As such, the actions in the Coastal and Ocean
Waters section of our strategic plan are closely tied to these other federal
strategic plans for addressing climate change (including the National Ocean
Policy implementation). Strategic Action 31 specifically says that EPA intends
to work for interagency implementation of federal strategies. Now that the NOP
implementation plan is nearing final issuance, we are incorporating edits in the
final 2012 Strategy to ensure consistency.

The Fertilizer Institute further states that EPA Must Clarify Clean Water Act
(CWA) Authority over Greenhouse Gases. TFI states that air pollutants have
historically been regulated under the Clean Air Act (CCA). Additionally, "there
are many unknowns to the process of regulating GHGs under the CWA that
must first be explored, discussed and evaluated before proceeding" (Doc. #17,
p.3). Before EPA regulates GHGs under the CWA, TFI would like to see a
"legal analysis of its authority to do so, the structure regulating GHGs under the
CWA, and how those regulations would intersect with CCA regulations" (Doc.
#17, p.3). Time for public review and comment should also be provided.

Response: In the 2012 Strategy EPA is not proposing to use the Clean Water
Act to regulate greenhouse gases. References to greenhouse gases in the
Coastal and Ocean Waters section are merely in the context of explaining that
any actions taken by the U.S. to address greenhouse gases are intended to be
protective of water quality.

•	The Louisiana Environmental Action Network (LEAN) (Doc. #20-1, p.2)
praises EPA for continuing "to attempt to work with state and local
governments" and encourages EPA to "not back down in [its] efforts to develop
national level responses to the pressing problem of climate change." LEAN
recognizes that the reduction of greenhouse gases should be a "key component
of the water response strategy for climate change," especially considering the
region's "vulnerability to hurricanes and extreme weather events".

Response: EPA appreciates the commenter's support.

•	When performing integrated planning, the American Water Works Association
(AWW A) (Doc. #21, p.4) notes that the drinking water community has found
EPA generally unwilling to include drinking water utilities in integrated
planning, and recommends that EPA include them in addition to wastewater and
storm water, since "the actions of each type of water utility affect the others."
AWWA later states, "EPA should acknowledge the potential for climate change
impacts on source waters," which may cause changes in baseline conditions. As

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a result of this, "some flexibility in future regulations and actions may be
necessary".

Response: EPA understands the comment about the potential for climate
change to affect source water and it is our intention to work with both the
drinking water and wastewater communities to build resilience. As the Agency
moves forward, we will consider the extent to which regulatory or other
flexibility may be necessary and appropriate.

Goal #8

• Regarding Strategic Action 21, the Natural Resources Defense Council
(NRDC) (Doc. #33, p.9) suggests that the National Water Program (NWP)
could "assist in monitoring efforts by assuring that NPDES permits and
other EPA programs include requirements to monitor for important
pollutants like pH, dissolved inorganic carbon, alkalinity, nutrients, and
sediments" and "critical biological indicators (e.g., coral reefs and shellfish
resources)".

Response: Strategic Action 21 says that the NWP intends to work within EPA
and with other federal, tribal, and state agencies to be sure that knowledge and
information to protect ocean and coastal areas is collected, produced, analyzed,
formatted, and easily available. EPA intends to consider the extent to which
NPDES permitting and other EPA program monitoring can assist in this effort.
In addition, Strategic Action 42 in the section on Water Quality describes
general monitoring for both inland and coastal surface and ground waters,
including pH. Please see the response to comments in that section. When
impacts such as eutrophication effects on pH are identified, this strategy
assumes they will be handled through existing mechanisms.

Goal #9

• The Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation (Doc. #39, p.3)

suggests, "EPA should expand the section to include discussion on partnerships
pertinent to Alaska," since "Alaska is not currently represented in the NEP,
LAE, or Great Waterbodies organizations mentioned." Alaska is of particular
importance because "it comprises more coastline of the United State than the
coastline of the other 49 states combined".

Response: The National Estuary Program, Climate Ready Estuaries, and the
Council of Large Aquatic Ecosystems strive to produce examples, case studies,
and recommended best practices, for the use of all coastal managers. These
place-based programs are not found in every state, and even where a NEP may
exist, large expanses of the state's coastal zone may still be outside NEP study
areas. However, we have also committed to work with state partners on coastal
and ocean issues, and having an established place-based program is not a

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condition for cooperation. The Alaska Region section of the strategy lists some
coastal strategies that Region 10 has identified. We also note EPA's interest in
working with the regional planning bodies established in the National Ocean
Policy implementation.

Goal #10

•	The County of L.A. Department of Public Works and L.A. Co. Flood Control
District (Doc. #16, p. 3) indicate that, based on some projections for sea level
rise, many flood control channels, levees, and storm drains in L.A. County
could become inadequate and large areas would have to be remapped as flood
zones; further, seawater rise may increase saltwater intrusion into coastal
aquifers; and requests that more research be done to define sea level rise
probabilistically.

Response: Thank you for your comment.

•	In reference to Strategic Action #26, the Alaska Department of Environmental
Protection (Doc. #39, p. 4) suggests, "EPA should consider augmenting the
Strategy, again with State involvement, with a more comprehensive discussion
of considerations and strategies for community relocation efforts, which may be
required due to increases in erosion in coastal areas or loss of permafrost".

Response: Please see response in the section on Alaska.

•	The Water Utility Climate Alliance (WUCA) (Doc. #24, p.8) would also like to
see some expansion of Strategic Action #26 to include non-coastal water
entities. WUCA reiterates its point that while "WUCA supports the Coastal and
Ocean Waters strategic actions 20 through 31," WUCA would like to see "EPA
have an equivalent funding mechanism similar to SA 25 and 26 for non-coastal
water entities engaged in improving utility resistance, adaptation planning, and
minimizing risks to climate change impacts" (Doc. #24, p.7). Additionally,
WUCA raises a concern with the tone of the statement: "In the context of
coastal change and sea level rise, decisions must be made about whether some
environmental restoration efforts, particularly for coastal marshes, are realistic
or practical" (Strategic Action #27, p. 45). WUCA believes the tone "should
not be to undermine the reality or practicality of coastal marsh restoration.
Rather, decisions about coastal marsh investment should consider long-term
viability and replenishment costs".

Response: EPA disagrees that the statement in the strategy "undermines the
reality or practicality of coastal marsh restoration." Nevertheless, to avoid
misunderstanding, Strategic Action 27 has been edited to read: "In the context
of coastal change and sea level rise, decisions about restoration efforts for
coastal marshes should consider long-term viability."

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•	Regarding Strategic Action 27 (Doc. #38, p. 7), the City of San Diego stated
that "at present, there are no criteria for determining realism or practicality, or
guidelines for the type and degree of compensation or mitigation required" and
"depending on how these are formulated they could dramatically increase
project costs".

Response: The NWP appreciates the comment. This is the type of information
that water resource managers would develop over time.

Goal #11

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (NRDC) (Doc. #33) suggests that the
National Water Program (NWP) could "assist in monitoring efforts by assuring
that NPDES permits and other EPA programs include requirements to monitor
for important pollutants like pH, dissolved inorganic carbon, alkalinity,
nutrients, and sediments" and "critical biological indicators (e.g., coral reefs and
shellfish resources)" The NRDC also recommends that in Strategic Action #28,
the NWP "explicitly should consider the interrelationship between acidification
and nutrient pollution" (Doc. #33, p. 9), and cites several recent scientific
studies that "have identified enhanced acidification of marine waters due to
eutrophication." NRDC attached Table 1 which includes existing federal
authorities who can oversee ocean acidification monitoring (Doc. #33, p. 13).

Response: See Response to NRDC comment re: In Goal 8, Strategic Action 21
re: Goal 8, Strategic Action 21. We further state that, as more monitoring and
assessment data become available over time including for impacts such as
eutrophi cation effects on pH, we will respond to that information using
available tools and mechanisms.

•	The National Mining Association (NMA) (Doc. #37, p. 6) objects "to the use of
the CWA to address ocean acidification. The CWA only regulates point source
discharges into waters of the United States." NMA states that CO2 emissions
"do not constitute point source discharges of the type covered under CWA" and
"CO2 emissions are global in nature and there are many uncertainties
concerning their effects". NMA raises the points that "changes in the pH of
ocean waters are not related to atmospheric levels of CO2 alone, but... are
affected by water chemistry, temperature and biological processes," and
"scientists are debating whether the effects of ocean acidification on marine
organisms will be beneficial or detrimental" (Doc. #37, p. 5). NMA suggests
that before the incorporation of ocean acidification into management plans,
"research should be conducted to help understand impacts to biological
processes, particularly marine calcification, and environmental monitoring
should include oceanographic parameters such as temperature, irradiance,
hydrodynamics, nutrients and atmospheric parameters such as surface winds
and pressures" (Doc. #37, p. 5-6). NMA further states that CWA already
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that such discharges are failing to meet water quality standards for pH or are
causing any adverse impacts as to ocean acidification" (Doc. #37, p. 6).

Response: See next response, Consol Energy.

•	CONSOL Energy Inc. (Doc. #42, p. 3) agrees that there is a need "to further
study the potential impacts of climate change, ocean acidification and
interacting stressors on ecological systems". Similar to NMA, CONSOL also
believes that "a better understanding of the causes of ocean acidification and its
affects are required before agencies can incorporate these concerns into
management plans". CONSOL makes the same point that as a non-point
discharge, CO2 should not be regulated by the CWA.

Response: In response to both NMA and Consol Energy, please note that this
strategy does not propose any new uses of the CWA to address ocean
acidification. It is not our intent to imply in this 2012 Strategy that the National
Water Program is proposing to regulate CO2 emissions using the Clean Water
Act. Further, we state our intention to work with USGCRP and other partners
to develop needed information, including for ocean acidification and that, as
more monitoring and assessment data become available over time including for
impacts such as eutrophication effects on pH, we will respond to that
information using available tools and mechanisms.

•	The City of San Diego (Doc. #38, p. 7) is also concerned about the listing of
ocean acidification and other impacts being regulated by the CWA. The City of
San Diego states that "while USEPA is deferring establishing TMDLs related to
ocean acidification until more information is available, listings could have
important near-term implications for the City in terms of requirements for
participating in monitoring networks for pH, dissolved gases, nutrient loadings,
and CO2 emissions". The City raises the concern that due to the global nature
and irreversibility of ocean acidification, "the key issue for the City will be the
TMDL targets, how realistic and feasible they are, and the role of individual
permittees in meeting the targets".

Response: See response to previous comment. EPA further notes that
acidification in coastal waters can be influenced by many different factors,
including ocean acidification from the uptake of anthropogenic atmospheric
carbon dioxide and eutrophi cation-related acidification in coastal waters from
nutrient pollution, which differ in their geographic extent (global versus local,
respectively). In regards to the commenter's concern about TMDLs, EPA does
recognize the complex nature of these different sources of acidification, and will
take the City of San Diego's comments into account in any additional guidance
related to addressing acidification in coastal waters through the 303(d) listing
and TMDL programs. In reference to the existing EPA November 2010 policy
memo on the Clean Water Act Sections 303(d), 305(b), and 314 integrated
reporting and listing decisions related to ocean acidification cited by the City of

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San Diego, EPA reaffirms that States must list waters not meeting any
applicable water quality standard, where data and assessment methods are
available, using the current 303(d) listing framework. For instance, if there is
existing and readily available data and/or information demonstrating non-
attainment of the State's current marine pH criteria and/or aquatic life
designated uses, then that State should list the water, regardless of the source.
However, since sources of such impairments in coastal waters may be related to
ocean and eutrophication-related acidification, EPA encourages States to begin
developing methodologies to identify acidification impacts in their coastal
waters

4.	Water Quality

A total of twenty-one comment letters addressing Water Quality and the three goals
covered within the topic area were received. Of the twenty-one comment letters,
two were submitted by Federal government agencies, four were submitted by
State/Tribal government agencies/elected officials, two were submitted by national
environmental NGOs, four were submitted by national NGOs, one was submitted
by a local government agency, two were submitted by professional societies, three
were submitted by the regulated community, and three were submitted by private
citizens. Most of the comments from this group are positive, and supportive of
EPA's development of the Strategy. All but a few of the comments have provided
recommendations to improve the document.

General Comments

•	Louisiana Environmental Action Network (Doc. #13) indicates "It is not clear if
EPA is willing to adjust program/performance activity measures (e.g. PAMS)
across all water quality programs in addition to drafting new measures for the
Climate Change Strategy".

Response: Performance Activity Measures (i.e., PAMS) are annual program
management measures. While this strategy does not contemplate adjusting
existing PAMs, we do intend to implement a process for tracking progress for
adaptation and mitigation. See Goal 18.

•	One private citizen (Doc. #29, p. 1-2) comments "aspects of water quality are
being addressed as a priority without the solid science to substantiate a
measurement of the negative effect of pollution. The Clean Water Act is failing
to establish a baseline that is a true indication of impairment," and suggests that
EPA establish baselines for each specific ecosystem with data, research, goals,
measurements and monitoring realistic reductions, and that exchanges via a
credit system be avoided. In addition, the commenter feels the Federal
government is creating a ministerial approach which negates State and
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current plans; the commenter asks if there are legal obligations for monitoring,
measurement and/or maintenance (i.e. California Environmental Quality Act).

Response: Thank you for your comment. It is the intention, described
throughout this 2012 Strategy, to work with federal, State, tribal, interstate,
local, nongovernmental, and private sector partners and stakeholders to address
the risks and challenges posed by a changing climate. Moreover, EPA does not
intend that these issues be addressed in a manner that negates State and
municipal discretionary action.

•	The Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources Water Division (Doc. #32, p.
2) offers general comments on Water Quality: WIDNR would like to see
flexibility in implementing the goals from state to state or region to region; and
suggests prioritizing action items (e.g., cannot factor climate into TMDLs until
methods for rainfall duration and frequency can be addressed).

Response: As the Agency moves forward with responding to climate change,
we will consider where statutes allow for regulatory flexibility in adjusting to
shifting conditions. The NWP agrees that certain actions may need to be done
first, such as building the needed information for factoring climate change into
many of our programs. The NWP is, and will continue, to undertake research
and projects to build information and tools to support integration of climate
change factors into our programs.

•	The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41) assumes that the discussion of revising
water quality standards means that the NWP intends to strengthen standards to
prevent deterioration. If so, CWN supports this Strategic Action.

Response: Strategic Actions 37 and 38 articulate the NWP's intent to identify
and work to protect "at risk" designated uses and clarify in a subsequent
"informational document" how States can update their criteria using the best and
most accurate science and data in an effort to protect aquatic life from impacts
from climate change. Where possible, this is a correct assumption.

Goal #12

•	Various Comments on the use of CWA

Response: The objective of Goal 12 is to build the understanding, information,
and tools that will enable the NWP and its partners and stakeholders to use
climate information appropriately as we carry out our mission to protect water
resources and human health. As that body of information is developed, any
CWA or other regulatory decision taken will be evaluated and implemented in
accordance with law and through appropriate administrative procedures. Again,
nothing in this 2012 Strategy imposes any requirements or conditions; rather, it
indicates areas in which the NWP intends to work to ensure we continue to

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achieve our mission in the face of a changing climate. Further, as EPA moves
forward with responding to climate change, we will consider where statutes
allow for regulatory flexibility in adjusting to shifting conditions and to enable
the use of risk management as well as adaptive management.

•	One private citizen (Doc. #5) calls for the inclusion of the treatment of polluted
waters or the containment of pollutants, stating that "with flooding becoming
more widespread, it is crucial that the EPA explore how climate change will
affect the natural flow of water bodies and use these findings to discuss methods
of containing pollution and preventing widespread contamination of drinking
water sources".

Response: EPA agrees with this concern. Greater emphasis on flooding and
management of floodplains has been added to the final 2012 Strategy.

•	Another private citizen (Doc. #8) feels Goal 12 should be emphasized because it
will "focus primarily on community efforts, and pertain to the majority of
people who may not be as informed as the government agencies and scientists
involved in the matter." This commenter also identified concerns that
sustainability needs to be emphasized in low-income areas, since these
populations often lack the resources to incorporate climate change
considerations into water quality planning.

Response: The NWP embraces the principle of prioritizing the most vulnerable
- including the most vulnerable populations such as the elderly, children, tribes,
and low income communities, as well as the most vulnerable places such as
coastal communities or those facing severe drought. This includes improved
outreach and education.

•	The Amigos Bravos Friends of the Wild Rivers (Doc. #15) discusses NPDES
and Water Quality Standards, stating we are beyond the 'evaluating' stage and
guidance documents. The commenter states that EPA should develop
requirements for NPDES programs and start implementing them in non-
delegated States such as New Mexico, including requirements to calculate
permit limits based on low flow conditions, and include margins of safety to
account for uncertainty. The commenter further states that EPA should
disapprove WQS that categorize climate change as a background or natural
condition; and indicates that antidegradation should protect against less
stringent criteria for increasingly hard water in rivers and streams as more water
is return flows from wastewater and less is rainfall or snowmelt. Finally, the
commenter indicated that, as more rivers have flows that are near or below
critical low flows, precautions must be taken to ensure they are protected.

Response: The NWP appreciates the commenters' thoughts, and has
incorporated an edit to clarify that we are not, in this document, defining climate
change as a natural background condition. Further, we agree that lower low

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flows as a result of climate change is a matter of concern. The commenters'
specific recommendations about implementing the water quality standards and
permit programs are beyond the scope of this strategy document.

•	The County of Los Angeles Department of Public Works and L.A. Co. Flood
Control District (Doc. #16, p. 3) state that any recommendations to alter
permitting requirements for stormwater systems to increase watershed resilience
"should not result in increased permitting costs or approval timelines and should
strive to streamline the process".

Response: The intention is not to increase costs or to complicate the permitting
process; rather, the intention is to work with water program managers to
anticipate risk and provide the tools needed to build resilience and avoid costs
of climate impacts, where possible.

•	The National Farms Union (Doc. #19, p. 2) notes that financial and technical
assistance from federal, state and local government sources to help farmers and
ranchers address nonpoint source pollutions are not always coordinated for
maximum benefit. NFU encourages EPA to utilize the successful model under
CWA Section 319 to establish partnerships and coordinate efforts in addressing
NPS and climate adaptation. They further encourage EPA to seek market-based
solutions to leverage private resources to enhance public investment in
adaptation strategies.

Response: The NWP agrees that the CWA Section 319 program is a successful
model and will work to incorporate climate change considerations in that
program, as appropriate.

•	The American Water Works Association (AWW A) (Doc. #21, p. 5) identifies
Strategic Action 35 as inconsistent with the rest of the Strategy, as it over
simplifies climate change by indicating that adding an additional margin of
safety will be sufficient, stating "The NWP should acknowledge that
sophisticated climate change planning using the best available information
should be incorporated into the TMDL process, and that TMDLs may need to
be reassessed with changing climate conditions".

Response: The NWP agrees with the comment and has revised Strategic Action
35 accordingly. EPA intends to work with TMDL developers to explore through
pilot projects and related partnership opportunities appropriate places in the
TMDL process to incorporate climate change.

•	The Water Utility Climate Alliance (WUCA) (Doc. #24, p. 8) encourages non-
regulatory controls promoting Green Infrastructure (GI) and low impact
development (LID) strategies. However, WUCA requests additional specific
clarification on how regulatory controls may be modified to address climate
change issues, asking for an explanation as to "what is meant by incorporating

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climate change considerations in calculations to support National Pollutant
Discharge Elimination System (NPDES) permits and Total Maximum Daily
Loads (TMDLs)".

Response: The NWP appreciates WUCA's comment. To reiterate, the
objective of Goal 12 is to build the understanding, information, and tools that
will enable the NWP and its partners and stakeholders to use climate
information appropriately as we carry out our mission to protect water resources
and human health. The Strategic Actions are indication of areas in which the
NWP intends to work over the long term to ensure we continue to achieve our
mission in the face of a changing climate. EPA looks forward to working
closely with WUCA and other stakeholders to develop the most effective means
of doing so.

•	The National Association of Homebuilders (NAHB) (Doc. #26) discusses the
private sectors voluntary measures to promote green buildings and LID, and
recommends that EPA further develop and support voluntary mitigation
programs in the regulated sector. NAHB notes WaterSense, Energy Star, and
the National Green Building Standard and notes that a 2012 McGraw-Hill Smart
Market Report found that since 2005 seventeen percent of new residential
construction is dominated by green construction projects. NAHB further states
that the Strategy fails to address existing issues in several EPA permitting
programs, particularly the Section 404 and NPDES programs (Doc. #26, p. 10).
NAHB states that EPA should rethink the existing regulatory framework and
strongly urges EPA to consider the benefits associated with integrating and
streamlining programs; consider incentives and market based initiatives to
promote practices such as LID; and consider funding pilot projects to promote
LID adaptation projects to build resilience, especially for higher risk projects
both financially and environmentally (Doc. #26, p. 9).

Response: Thank you for your comment. Voluntary partnership and incentive
programs play a critically important part in achieving the national goal of
protecting the nation's waters and public health and safety. The NWP intends
to continue to work in these areas, and looks forward to continuing to work with
NAHB and others on understanding and evaluating climate change impacts and
appropriate response actions.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27) strongly supports EPA's expanded efforts to meet
current water quality standards and to protect designated uses or water quality
criteria at risk, in light of climate change and states: "It is critical that EPA
guards against Use Attainability Analyses (UAAs) to downgrade uses" (Doc.
#27, p. 8). American Rivers also supports EPA's efforts to adapt the NPDES
program to changing conditions, however, it urges EPA to "make this
recommendation more robust by ensuring that climate models are incorporated
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changing flow conditions throughout the entire year to achieve water quality
standards" (Doc. #27, p. 9).

Response: EPA appreciates the commenters' support and expression of
concern. EPA will take the commenters' suggestions under advisement as it
moves forward in this area.

•	Other State Commenter suggests that the strategic action mention TMDL
alternatives, in an effort to be consistent with other agency initiatives (e.g.,
Section 303(d) 10-Year Vision).

Response: Thank you for your comment. We will take this under advisement
as we implement the Strategy.

•	The Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources Water Division (Doc. #32, p.
2). offers several specific comments on Goal 12:

o Feels the permitting section is vague and is not sure how watershed

permitting can help address climate change;
o While the idea of accounting for climate change in the TMDL margin of
safety is a good one, this cannot be done until there is sufficient
information to perform the analysis;
o monitoring for climate change and adjusting or re-evaluating designated

uses seems difficult at best, especially from a political standpoint; and
o Strategic Actions 34 (NPDES) and 35 (TMDL) require technical
guidance.

Response: It is the intention of this Strategy to indicate overall direction by the
National Water Program, not to specify details of how climate change and its
effects will be incorporated into NPDES permitting, development of TMDLs,
implementation of other EPA regulations, or the relationship between Federal,
State, Tribal, and local governments. Use of climate information for these types
of decisions will be evaluated, vetted, and implemented through appropriate
procedures, including technical guidance and information to support State, tribal
and local program managers. Regarding the comment on using the TMDL
margin of safety, EPA received several comments on this issue and has revised
Strategic Action 35 to reflect more sophisticated treatment of this issue.

•	Regarding Strategic Action 34, the National Association of Home Builders
(NAHB) (Doc. #26, p. 9) cautions EPA's focus on allocating more resource to
programs already fully addressing climate change impact, such as the
construction industry through the NPDES stormwater program. EPA should
focus on developing appropriate modeling tools rather than changing existing
programs that would negatively complicate the existing regulatory scheme
already developed.

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scheme but to build the understanding, information, and tools that will enable
the appropriate use of climate information. The NWP intends to work with
partners and stakeholders to build that body of information. Any CWA or other
regulatory decision taken will be evaluated and implemented in accordance with
the relevant legal requirements and through appropriate administrative
procedures. Again, nothing in this 2012 Strategy imposes any requirements or
conditions; rather, it is an indication of areas in which the NWP intends to work
to ensure we continue to achieve our mission in the face of a changing climate.

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (NRDC) (Doc. #33) agrees with EPA's
recognized importance of green infrastructure (GI) and low impact development
(LID) in protecting water quality and maintaining watersheds' resilience.
However, it believes that EPA's new rules must adopt objective performance
requirements for control of runoff volume from new development and
redeveloped sites, in addition to requiring retrofits in existing public and private
developed areas (Doc. #33, p. 9). Also, NRDC comments "where TMDLs are
re-opened or re-examined for other purposes, EPA should encourage and
support the consideration of climate change as part of that process, and, in those
circumstances where climate change likely will implicate the ability of an
existing TMDL to attain applicable water quality standards, the TMDL or its
implementation plan should be revisited so as to incorporate relevant climate
change information" (Doc. #33, p. 10).

Response: The NWP welcomes NRDC's input on rulemakings. Regarding
TMDLs, Strategic Action 36 (formerly 35) has been edited to remove the word
"future" and the discussion has been revised. The Strategic Action now reads:

The NWP intends to encourage water quality authorities to consider
climate change impacts when developing waste load and load
allocations in TMDLs where appropriate.

•	The City of San Diego Transportation and Storm Water Department (Doc. #38,
p. 6) comments that Goal 12 "highlights a wide range of possible direct and
indirect impacts on ecosystems, emphasizing the importance of regional,
watershed-scale monitoring and assessment programs that can accurately
capture spatial patterns and temporal trends in ecosystem indicators, along with
their relationship to stressors".

Response: Thank you for your comment.

•	The City of San Diego (Doc. #38) also comments on several SAs under Goal
12:

o Strategic Action 32 (planning) may require the City to increase staff time or
expertise, gather data, and participate in partnerships and networks
described in the Strategy.

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o Strategic Action 33 (GI/LID) states that GI and LID may produce benefits
that offset costs of increased costs resulting from new permitting and
planning. A key issue will be the type and amount of infrastructure required
in permits and the rationale for the requirements,
o Strategic Action 34 (NPDES) will require the City to improve its technical
capabilities to deal with more complex permitting processes. A key issue
will be the type and quality of guidance provided to permit writers,
o Regarding Strategic Action 35 (TMDLs), the City comments that "climate
change impacts may create new waste load allocations or cause existing
allocations to increase or decrease, depending on the TMDL. It will be
important for the City to understand the basis for such calculations as well
as any models used to determine margin of safety" (Doc. #38, p. 7);
o Regarding Strategic Action 36 (antidegradation), the commenter states that
climate change will impact existing beneficial uses; the requirement to
conduct a UAA for each instance could create a large burden on permittees
unless there are provisions for conducting aggregate analyses at the regional
or statewide scales. Lags in revising beneficial uses could expose
permittees to legal action from third parties where such uses are no longer
viable due to climate change. Further, the commenter states that beneficial
uses will shift nonlinearly over time, requiring flexibility in the 303(d)
listing process. Further, it is not clear to the commenter how existing uses
will be maintained in the face of fundamental and irreversible change
processes, and the antidegradation statement contradicts other statements in
this Strategic Action. The last sentence about working with stakeholders is
vague.

o The commenter states that Strategic Action 37 (WQ criteria) is admirable
but the Strategy provides no detail on the process or guidelines for
evaluating new criteria. In addition, the emphasis on protecting aquatic life
from impacts may work at cross purposes with the Strategy's earlier
emphasis on adaptation.

Response: Thank you for your thorough and thoughtful comments. The NWP
will consider your views as we evaluate how to incorporate climate change into
our core programs. We look forward to working with you and other
stakeholders to avoid negative consequences, such as unnecessarily increasing
costs, while ensuring that we achieve our common goal to build resilience in the
face of climate change.

• The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41, p. 6) makes the following
recommendations relative to water quality:

o use Clean Air Act authority to regulate direct and indirect GHG
emissions at the time of NPDES permit issuance; EPA needs to look
at regulation through a multi-media lens;
o use Clean Air Act authority to regulate direct and indirect GHG
emissions at the time of required permitting for Concentrated Animal
Feeding Operations (CAFOs);

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o require states to include climate change assessments in their biennial

National Water Quality Inventory Reports (305b);
o revise TMDL regulations and guidance to require states to provide
adaptation and mitigation strategies to climate change for waters that
are impaired by pollutants; and
o develop concrete NPDES Permit requirements that must be
incorporated into all NPDES permit programs.

Response: EPA has not previously considered regulating GHG emissions under
the CAA at the same time as NPDES permit issuance, but appreciates the multi-
media comment and will take this under advisement. Regarding the other
aspects of the CWA program, we reiterate that it is the intention of this Strategy
to indicate overall direction by the National Water Program, not to specify
details of how climate change will be incorporated into elements of the CWA
program. Use of climate information in these decisions will be evaluated and
implemented through appropriate procedures. Regarding the 305(b) report,
please note that the EPA database known as ATTAINS

(http://water.epa.gov/lawsregs/guidance/cwa/305b/index.cfm) displays current
information provided by the States in their 305(b) biennial integrated water
quality assessment reports.

•	The Clean Water Network (Doc. #41, p.5) also provides a number of
recommendations relative to Strategic Action 33, to promote green building
design and smart growth, including:

o Aggressively fund green infrastructure including use of STAG

($ IB/year would be a fifth of the federal share needed);
o Require green building and green infrastructure in stormwater and
construction NPDES permits, as well as in effluent limits for post-
construction runoff;
o Develop comprehensive action for the agriculture sector and other
nonpoint sources by providing adequate funding for AGstar and
other partnership programs; provide tax incentives to agricultural
facilities to protect water quality and reduce releases of methane
while generating electric power.

Response: EPA is actively supporting these types of activities within its
authority and resources.

•	The National Association of Clean Water Agencies (NACWA) (Doc. #43, p.2)
comments that while the Strategy seeks to promote a holistic watershed
approach, combining Strategic Actions 33 and 34 with a comprehensive
evaluation of Clean Water Act regulations to determine how they can be better
implemented, will improve their efficacy. Regarding SA 34 (NPDES),
NACWA further states that while low flows will likely change due to climate
shifts, EPA should be looking at better, more appropriate ways to protect water
quality in both wet and dry weather periods

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Response: The NWP appreciates NACWA's comment about taking a holistic
watershed approach, and we are working to integrate a variety of approaches.
The NWP thanks NACWA for raising awareness on incorporating green
infrastructure into NPDES program, including into CSO consent decrees. NWP
also appreciates the comment on using other ways besides NPDES to address
both wet and dry weather periods. It is the intent of the Strategy, as a whole, to
convey this message that water resource protection will require a variety of
ways to build resilience to both dry weather and wet weather impacts. As a side
note, NPDES permit writers do calculate permit limits based on critical
conditions of the effluent and receiving water. For more information, please see
the NPDES permit writers Manual (available at:

http://cfpub.epa.gov/npdes/writermanual.cfm7program id=45) at section 6.2.4,
which contains information on how climate change impacts potentially could be
incorporated into modeling interactions between effluent discharge and a river
or stream.

•	The National Ground Water Association (Doc. #44, p. 2) comments that while
the multi-pronged approach to working with Tribal, State and Local
governments in mitigating climate change impacts to water supply is a good
beginning, the Strategy fails to provide the mechanics on how the federal
government will work cooperatively with these entities' established regulatory
networks. Inclusion of hypothetical decision process diagrams/case studies
might be considered; the regional collaborations described in the Geographic
Regions section are a good start. In addition, NGWA suggests that Strategic
Action 32 (water quality planning) may not happen without federal funding.

Response: It is the intention of this Strategy to indicate overall direction by the
National Water Program, not to specify details of how climate change and its
effects will be incorporated into elements of the CWA program. However, the
Strategy does emphasize that understanding impacts and building needed tools
will require collaborative learning. We intend to evaluate and implement use of
climate information in the NWP through appropriate procedures. Meanwhile,
we look forward to working with NGWA and other stakeholders as we develop
information to help local decision makers.

•	The Texas Commission on Environmental Quality (TCEQ) (Doc. #45) states
concerns that "EPA in the future may attempt to compel compliance with the
NWP by withholding funds for water quality management if a State does not
implement some of the Strategic Actions identified in the Strategy, and strongly
requests that EPA not move forward with this document" (Doc. #45, p. 2).

Also, TCEQ comments that Strategic Actions 34 and 35, intended to incorporate
climate change evaluations in specific activities of water quality management,
should be eliminated from the Strategy (Doc. #45, p. 3). Further, "Strategic
Actions 32 through 37, and the non-regulatory controls identified potentially
infringe on the primary right of states preserved by the CWA "to plan the

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development and use.. .of land and water resources" (Doc. #45, p. 4). "TCEQ
strongly requests that the sections on SAs 32 through 37 be revised to clarify
that EPA will not use the NWP 2012 Strategy to interfere in states' efforts to
promulgate water quality standards and develop TMDLs."

Response: It is not EPA's intention to state or imply that funding may be
withheld form States for not complying with the Strategic Actions in this
Strategy, or to imply that the Strategy will interfere with States' roles with
regard to their program implementation. While the disclaimer on the inside
cover of the Draft 2012 Strategy says exactly that, EPA has incorporated the
following additional text in the introduction to Section II. Programmatic
Visions, Goals and Strategic Actions, underscoring that this Strategy does not
constitute any requirement on State water programs:

It is important to underscore that this 2012 Strategy does not impose
any requirements on State, Tribal or local water programs. Rather, it
provides a comprehensive discussion of the elements of the NWP into
which EPA intends, over the long term, to incorporate climate change
considerations as appropriate and in accordance with applicable legal
authorities and the best available science and information. This
document discusses areas in which the NWP intends to work with
stakeholders and partners to account for and respond to the potential
and actual impacts of climate change.

• The American Petroleum Institute (API) (Doc. #46, p. 2) comments that a
number of the proposed Strategic Actions suggest problematic changes to
regulatory programs: Strategic Action 34, is inappropriate if EPA solely relies
on models to characterize climate change effects; and Strategic Action 35, must
be based on measured climate effects and should directly alter point and non-
point load allocations, not be hidden in a reserved margin of safety. API
believes that Strategic Action 37 is out of place as it is unclear that such criteria
require updating and that EPA's current approach for providing stakeholder
input during the process should not be cut short for any perceived need that is
unjustified in the absence of new data on the effects of pollutants on aquatic life.

Response: While the disclaimer on the inside cover of the Draft 2012 Strategy
says exactly that, EPA has incorporated the following additional text in the
introduction to Section II. Programmatic Visions, Goals and Strategic Actions,
underscoring that this Strategy does not constitute any requirement on State
water programs:

It is important to underscore that this 2012 Strategy does not impose
any requirements on State, Tribal or local water programs. Rather, it
provides a comprehensive discussion of the elements of the NWP that
should, over the long term, incorporate climate change considerations
as appropriate and in accordance with applicable legal authorities

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and the best available science and information. This document
represents areas in which the NWP intends to work with stakeholders
and partners to account for and respond to the potential and actual
impacts of climate change

Models are developed using calibration from observed data and well understand
system dynamics. EPA uses modeling as a tool in many contexts, which are
applied in situations where little or no measured data is available. While
observed conditions are utilized when available, projections may need to be
employed when forecasting future conditions, such as the impact of climate
change on water resources.

Regarding Strategic Action 35 (now SA 36) addressing TMDLs, we have
revised the action as follows: The NWP intends to encourage water quality
authorities to consider climate change impacts when developing wasteload and
load allocations in TMDLs where appropriate. We have removed reference to
the margin of safety, and instead describe our intent to: explore the use of tools
such as models to help states evaluate pollutant load impacts under a range of
projected climatic shifts. This would be done in a way that takes into account
the best available data as well as any uncertainties in the models or data. EPA
intends to work with TMDL developers to explore through pilot projects and
related partnership opportunities appropriate places in the TMDL process to
incorporate climate change.

Regarding Strategic Action 37 (now SA 38), the NWP does not intend to cut
short opportunity for stakeholder input or to take action in absence of justifiable
data.

• Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p. 2) is in favor that the draft Strategy notes
that states would not be expected to reopen TMDLs to incorporate these
considerations, and adds "We would like to note, however, that if it is expected
that states, going forward, will take into account potential climate change
impacts when developing TMDLs, EPA should develop guidance on the
matter. In addition, we suggest that this strategic action also mention TMDL
alternatives, in an effort to be consistent with other agency initiatives (e.g.,
Section 303(d) 10-Year Vision)."

Response: The NWP appreciates the commenter's suggestion and verifies that
our intent is not to reopen TMDLs expressly for the purpose of evaluating
climate change considerations. EPA will consider developing guidance in the
future on how to evaluate climate change when developing new or revised
TMDLs.

Goal #13

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• The Fertilizer Institute (TFI) (Doc. #17, p. 4) questions whether the Clean Water
Act (CWA) grants EPA the authority to promulgate rules pertaining to air
emissions, stating "If EPA intends to regulate GHGs under the CWA, TFI first
requests EPA provide a legal analysis of its authority to do so, the structure of
regulating GHGs under the CWA, and how those regulations would intersect
with CAA regulations. EPA should also provide the public with the opportunity
to review and provide comment on the Agency's analysis".

Response: It is not the intent of the 2012 Strategy to suggest that EPA is
proposing to use the Clean Water Act to regulate GHG air emissions. Goal 13
was intended merely to convey the NWP's intention to fulfill its role with
regards to protecting water quality under the CWA. That is, as energy policy
decisions are made to mitigate GHGs, and as new energy technologies are
developed, the EPA and States are responsible for evaluating how they affect
water resources. The final Strategy will clarify its intention by editing Goal 13.
In addition, the commenter may want to note that the final 2012 Strategy
amends Goal 13 and adds a new Strategic Action:

GOAL 13: As the nation makes decisions to reduce greenhouse gas
emissions and develop alternative sources of energy and fuel, the
NWP intends to work to protect water resources from unintended
adverse consequences.

Just as it takes energy to treat and distribute water supplies, it takes
water to generate and produce energy and fuels. Well-designed or
rehabilitated water infrastructure can reduce energy demand and
careful energy planning can reduce water demand. Using a systems
approach, consolidated water infrastructure, energy and
transportation planning can directly and indirectly reduce the
demand for both water and energy. While Goals 1 and 2 in the
Infrastructure section of this 2012 Strategy discuss improving the
energy profile of water infrastructure, this goal identifies actions to
reduce the adverse effects of new energy technologies on water
resources, consistent with the recently published Principles for an
Energy-Water Future (see Appendix B).

Strategic Action 39: The NWP will continue to provide perspective
on the water resource implications of new energy technologies.

Production of energy andfuel rely on access to water, and may in
turn contribute to water quantity and quality problems. Further,
while alternative sources of energy andfuel are important for
reducing emissions of GHGs and offer a number of win-win energy
choices, they too bring water resource challenges. As technologies
go through the regulatory cycle, it is the NWP's responsibility under

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the CWA to provide perspective on how the nation's energy choices
affect water resources.

•	The Alliance for Affordable Energy (Doc. #18) notes that the system of
pumping stations to protect the city of New Orleans against floods are
responsible for 50% of the city government's energy use. AAE supports the
integration of energy issues with water concerns in the Strategy, particularly the
importance of energy efficiency as a means to reduce greenhouse gas emissions
as water planning is implemented. It also acknowledges EPA's leadership and
courage on this issue.

Response: Thank you for this comment. The NWP looks forward to
collaborating with AAE and other stakeholders on this issue.

•	The American Water Works Association (AWW A) (Doc. #21, p. 4) strongly
supports Goal 13 and the protection of water resources from adverse
consequences of alternative sources of energy and fuel. However, AWWA also
states concern that the Strategy does not specifically address hydraulic
fracturing, and the broader issue of oil and gas development, possibly as a
separate Strategic Action. While AWWA also expresses support for EPA's
efforts on the Class VI Underground Injection Control (UIC) regulation for
Carbon Capture and Storage (CCS), AWWA cautions EPA to review their
previous concerns and recommendations on its implementation and all actions
related to CCS must acknowledge that protection of underground sources of
drinking water is the top priority. EPA should also work with other agencies
and associations to further research and regulation of CCS activities.

Response: Thank you for your support of this Goal. While the 2012 Strategy
does not specifically address hydraulic fracturing, Goal 13 was intended to
convey the NWP's intention to carry out its statutory role under the CWA with
regards to both conventional and alternative energy development activities to
evaluate how they might affect water resources. The final Strategy will clarify
its intention by editing Goal 13 and adding a new Strategic Action. (See
response to The Fertilizer Institute, Doc. #17, above.)

•	The U.S. Department of the Interior, Bureau of Reclamation (Doc. #22, p. 1)
asks that EPA clarify Strategic Action 41 by replacing 'Bureau of Reclamation'
with 'Department of Interior' as one of the signatories to the Federal
Hydropower Memorandum of Understanding.

Response: Edit adopted.

•	The Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources Water Division (Doc. #32, p.
2) comments on Goal 13 that EPA should examine the impact of alternative fuel
options like ethanol production on water quality, both surface and groundwater.

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Response: The NWP agrees with the comment.

Goal #14

•	The Ground Water Protection Council (GWPC) (Doc. #25, p. 2) supports Goal
14, specifically Strategic Action 42, and suggests the text be revised to
incorporate "an expanded acknowledgement that the state groundwater-related
projects are eligible for funding under §319 Nonpoint Source Management
Programs, §106 Grants for Pollution Control Program, and §305 Water Quality
Inventory Grants" and that the CWA definition of Waters of the U.S. doesn't
preclude funding of groundwater-related monitoring.

In addition, the GWPC also indicates the Strategy is missing an important
interagency monitoring network under development by the Advisory Committee
on Water Information (ACWI) Subcommittee on Ground Water's (SOGW)
National Ground Water Monitoring Network (NGWMN) which is "a
nationwide database that will provide long term groundwater quantity and
quality monitoring that would provide necessary information for the planning,
management, and development of groundwater supplies to meet current and
future water needs, and ecosystems requirements." Finally, GWPC suggests
that OGWDW be included in Strategic Action 42 in a supporting role.

Response: Regarding eligibility of state groundwater-related projects for
funding, the NWP will produce an informational brief on this subject and post it
to our web site. In addition, we accepted the suggestion to list OGWDW in a
supporting role for Strategic Action 42, and we emphasized that ACWI is an
important partner in developing groundwater monitoring networks.

•	The Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources Water Division (Doc. #32, p.
2) indicates that Strategic Action 42 (long term monitoring) requires financial
support.

Response: EPA is actively supporting this type of activities within its authority
and resources.

•	The American Petroleum Institute (API) (Doc. #46, p. 2) comments that a
number of the proposed Strategic Actions suggest problematic changes to
regulatory programs: Strategic Action 43, should not pre-empt the use of field
measurements of such effects, nor encourage the use of such models in lieu of
measured data in regulatory decision-making.

Response: Models are developed using calibration from observed data and well
understand system dynamics. EPA uses modeling as a tool in many contexts,
which are applied in situations where little or no measured data is available.
While observed conditions are utilized when available, projections may need to
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change on water resources. However, the intent of Strategic Action 43 is to
ensure that sound science is used to support water management programs.

5.	Working with Tribes

A single comment letter was received that discussed this section of the Strategy.

The State of Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation appears to be

generally supportive of the Strategy and has provided comments on Goal #15.

Goal #15

•	The State of Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation (AK DEC)
(Doc. #39, p. 4) has concerns regarding Tribal Science Council's (TSC) ability
to "adequately inform and recommend the climate change concerns of Alaska
tribes." It feels it would be worthwhile to consider additional opportunities to
express the concerns of the Alaska tribes and request additional seat(s) on the
TSC.

Response: The NWP will forward your request to the EPA Office of Research
and Development that manages the TSC. However, the NWP runs the State-
Tribal Climate Change Council and we would welcome Alaska DEC's active
engagement.

•	AK DEC (Doc. #39, p. 4) also points out the frequent mention of working with
and involving tribes, but also states there is no discussion as to how this will
occur. They ask, "will the involvement in watershed-based strategies and
integrated resource management and participation in the development of
strategies for addressing climate change occur through the single TSC
representative or through some other mechanism?"

Response: Engagement with tribes will occur in several venues. The NWP
engages with tribes directly via both the National Tribal Water Council and the
State-Tribal Climate Change Council. We also work closely with the TSC run
by the Office of Research and Development, to coordinate pursuit of science
and research relevant to tribes. Third, the EPA American Indian Environmental
Office is working to coordinate EPA's efforts related to climate change and
tribes, including engagement with the National Tribal Council and the National
Tribal Operations Council. We are clarifying these avenues in the final NWP
Climate Strategy.

•	AK DEC (Doc. #39, p.4) comments on Strategic Action 46, concerning
guidance on the use of funding programs for mitigation and adaptation planning
and implementations, and suggests that "EPA make these activities 'voluntary'
on the part of the states so that states do not need to decrease core clean water
programs to fund new EPA initiatives". AK DEC supports and looks forward to

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guidance on funding programs, and would like to be kept apprised of tribal
funding opportunities in order to collaborate with tribes.

Response: Nothing in this 2012 Strategy imposes any changes to guidance or
requirements for funding or other programs.

Geographic Climate Regions

Ten comment letters addressing Geographic Climate Regions were received. Of the
ten comment letters, three were submitted by Federal Government Agencies, three
were submitted by State/Tribal and Local Agencies, three were submitted by the
Regulated Community, and one was submitted by a National Environmental NGO.
They are all are either generally supportive of the Strategy or do not offer a clear
position. Commenters offer recommendations and suggest specific language to
clarify and strengthen the document both in the introduction section as well as the
specific climate region sections.

Introduction

•	The United States Department of the Interior, Bureau of Reclamation (Doc. #22,
p. 1) suggests including language to require collaboration with the Department's
Landscape Conservation Cooperatives and Climate Science Centers throughout
the document.

Response: While the NWP does not require such collaboration, EPA Regions
are eager to work with the LCCs and CSCs on these complex issues.

•	The National Mining Association (Doc. #37, p. 4) recommends adding the
works "in support of after DOI's in the first two bullets on page 60.

Response: Edits accepted.

•	The Water Utility Climate Alliance (Doc. #24, p. 4) comments that they "would
like to urge EPA that consideration of climate change in any regulatory
framework take into account the spatial variability of projected climate
impacts."

Response: Text has been inserted to acknowledge the importance of doing so.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p. 2) notes that "there are six interstate
organizations that receive CWA Section 106 funding from EPA, which are
clustered in three of EPA's designated climate regions - Northeast, Southeast
and Midwest. These organizations should be included in the discussions on
these regions."

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Response: Thank you for your comment. We have added the notion of working
with interstates throughout the final 2012 Strategy, and have added text and a
text box listing the six interstates receiving CWA 106 funds in Section V
Geographic Climate Regions, Subsection B, Ongoing Programs.

Northeast Region

•	NEIWPCC (Doc. #35, p.2) writes of the importance of the recognition of the
riparian zone and floodplain management. It states that "structural and non-
structural floodplain and riparian zone decisions can assist in reducing the
impact of severe storms; and intact and well-managed watersheds can absorb
impacts and help balance flows over time." It requests that this be specifically
identified in the Strategic Actions section in the Strategy.

Response: EPA appreciates this comment and has inserted an additional
Strategic Action: Promote structural and non-structural floodplain and
riparian zone management strategies that recognize that intact and well-
managed watersheds are more resilient to severe storms, and absorb impacts
and help balance flows over time.

Midwest Region

•	The Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources (Doc. #32, p.2) appreciates the
work EPA has done on the important issue of climate change. It is of the
opinion that "States need support from EPA to gain more regulatory power over
nonpoint sources of pollutants."

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (Doc. #33, p. 11) offers several
suggestions specific to the Midwest Region:

o Add the phrase "and using those projections as the basis for assessing
compliance of LTCPs with the specific control requirements of the CSO
policy" at the end of the first goal,
o Mention the invasive species threat, specifically zebra and quagga

mussels, to the Great Lakes in the strategic issues section,
o Make reference to the Great Lakes-St. Lawrence River Basin Water

Resources Compact in the strategic issues section,
o Address the interface with nutrient issues in the third bullet under the

strategic issues section,
o Strengthen the language of the strategic action that discusses working
with the agricultural community, pointing out the well documented
interaction between fertilizer run-off and presence of algal blooms.

Response: EPA appreciates the constructive suggestions posed by the
commenter and has incorporated two of the five suggestions. We added
reference to zebra and quagga mussels; we included reference to nutrient issues
and working with the agricultural community. We did not add your suggested

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phrase on assessing compliance with LTCPs. Further, it is not appropriate for
the NWP climate strategy to specifically reference the Great Lakes Water
Resource Compact. EPA has no role with this state-driven tool to manage or
control potential water diversions.

Great Plains Region

•	The National Mining Association (Doc. #37, p. 6) notes that the mining
community is not specifically identified in the goals section as a group that EPA
should work with. It proclaims that "Mining companies can and should play an
important role in seeking solutions to complicated environmental issues." This
comment is also echoed by CONSOL Energy, Inc. (Doc. #42, p. 2).

Response: Thank you for your comment. We have added the mining sector to
the list of stakeholders with whom we intend to work.

Southwest Region

•	The United States Geological Survey, Climate and Land Use Change (Doc. #31,
p. 2) recommends that the nearly completed 2013 National Climate Assessment
regional reports could be used in the Strategy to enhance the regional analyses
on pages 69 to 79.

Response: Thank you for your comment. We noted in the final 2012 Strategy
the importance of doing so.

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (Doc. #33, p. 11) writes that the water
resources of Southwest will be one of the areas that will be greatly impacted by
climate change. It points out that the Strategic Actions are vague and not
adequate. It recommends that EPA outline more specific measures and ensure
that they are implemented in this section.

Response: Thank you for pointing this out to us. We have revised the Goals
and added a new Strategic Action as follows:

Goals:

o Increase the number of communities and utilities conducting
climate change vulnerability assessments and implementing the
resulting recommendations;

o Work with partners and stakeholders to evaluate and reduce the
impacts of future drought and flooding on surface and ground
water resources;

o Protect water quality and quantity to reduce stress on ecosystems;

o Address sea level rise by working with coastal states, tribes,
counties, cities, and federal partners to enhance adoption of

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adaptive measures to lessen or avoid significant adverse effects
and to increase resiliency.

Strategic Action:

o Work with States and local governments to expand water sources,
storage and recovery options (e.g., aquifer storage and recharge,
water re-use, desalination, etc.) for areas experiencing snow pack
loss, and drought.

Pacific Northwest Region

•	The U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service (Doc. #34, p. 4) recommends removing
word "DOI's" from the first bullet under "Collaboration".

Response: Accepted.

Montane Region

•	The U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service (Doc. #34, p. 4) requests that states, tribes,
and others involved in LCCs, be included in the list of groups to collaborate
with EPA.

Response: Accepted.

Alaska Region

•	The U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service (Doc. #34, p. 4) requests a more detailed
description of the challenges that the native community will face, and
recommends that specific language be added to the Strategy.

Response: Thank you for your suggested edits; we did not incorporate them as
it would be disproportionate to the other regional sections in this chapter.
However, we do refer readers to additional sources of information.

•	The State of Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation (Doc. #39, p.
4) suggests adding a reference to the first paragraph for the statement
"increasing acidification of Alaskan waters." AK DEC states that the Strategic
Actions in this section do not fully address or consider the Strategic Issues.

Response: The statement on acidification comes from USGCRP, 2009. We
recognize that our Strategic Actions may not cover all the issues facing each
Region. The 2012 Strategy describes how we must work with others to address
the larger issues, with EPA contributing according to its role, authority and
resources.

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Cross-Cutting Program Support

A total of ten comment letters addressing Cross Cutting Program Support and the
three goals covered within were received. Of the ten comment letters, one was
submitted by a Federal government agency, two were submitted by national
environmental NGOs, one was submitted by a national NGO, two were submitted
by professional societies, two were submitted by the regulated community, one was
submitted by a State/Tribal government agencies/elected official, and one was
submitted by a private citizen. Most of the comments from this group are positive,
and supportive of EPA's development of the Strategy. Some feel this section is the
strongest and most important section of the Strategy (API, Doc. #46).

Goal #17

•	One private citizen (Doc. #8) feels Goal 17: "Communicate, Collaborate, and
Train" should be emphasized because it will "focus primarily on community
efforts, and pertain to the majority of people who may not be as informed as the
government agencies and scientists involved in the matter." This commenter
also identified concerns that sustainability needs to be emphasized in low-
income areas, since these populations often lack the resources to incorporate
climate change considerations into water quality planning.

Response: The NWP embraces the principle of prioritizing the most vulnerable
- including the most vulnerable populations such as the elderly, children, tribes,
and low income communities, as well as the most vulnerable places such as
coastal communities or those facing severe drought. This includes improved
outreach and education.

•	The NAHB (Doc. #26, p. 8) points out that EPA fails to develop goals for
building partnerships with the private sector and appropriate adaptation toolkits
should be developed, including a one-stop shop of all Agency initiatives, noting
the popular Corporate Responsibility and Sustainability Reporting.

Response: Thank you for your comment. We have added the private sector to
the list of partners that are important for success.

•	The Water Utility Climate Alliance (WUCA) (Doc. #24, p. 8) fully supports the
strategy to "Communicate, Collaborate, and Train" and "urges EPA to consider
relocating this goal to the beginning of the document, perhaps after Chapter II
on the Evolving Context". In addition, WUCA requests clarification on how
NWP plans to engage stakeholders if the regulatory framework is revisited to
include climate change, as this is one of the most important stages in which
continuous dialogue is key.

Response: While we appreciate that 'Communicate, Collaborate, and Train' is
an extremely important goal, we have not accepted the commenter's suggestion.

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Further, stakeholder engagement with regard to any regulatory action would be
in conformance with all EPA policies and legal requirements to engage the
public, including conformance with the Administrative Procedures Act. In
addition, this 2012 Strategy is predicated on the basis that climate adaptation
requires collaborative learning and capacity development, and as such it is the
NWP's intent to engage stakeholders throughout our activities.

•	The U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service (Doc. #34, p. 4) request the following
revision to the second bullet under Decision Support "Federal partners are
building regional capabilities, such as the National Integrated Drought
Information System (NIDIS), NOAA RISAs, and the LCCs and CSCs launched
by DOI".

Response: Accepted.

•	The National Ground Water Association (Doc. #44, p. 1) suggests that an FAQ
on the Strategy would be beneficial. Further, there is a need to balance
economic growth with a responsible approach to natural resource consumption.
This reconciliation can partly be achieved through public outreach programs.

Response: The NWP will work to develop an FAQ to accompany the 2012
Strategy

Goal #18

•	The Water Utility Climate Alliance (WUCA) (Doc. #24, p. 8) feels that
"Tracking Progress/Measuring Outcomes" is an important goal, but advises the
agency to spend time developing specific criteria based on outcomes rather than
number of regulations (per the 2011-2105 Agency Strategy); the emphasis
should be on the Phases Approach described in Table 3 which describes NWP
specific programmatic progress towards Adaptive Management rather than
Table 2 listed quantitative goals. WUCA offers to work with the NWP to
develop an improved method for tracking progress. Further, WUCA suggests
removing this table as it is confusing to the reader. WUCA states that they
would be willing to work with the NWP in developing alternative metrics, based
on specific criteria, for measuring NWP success.

Response: Thank you for your comment. We have deleted the 2011-2015
Agency Strategy goals from the Executive Summary, and shifted its location in
Goal 18, SA50, in order to reduce the appearance that this was the main focus of
our intent to track progress. In addition, the NWP would like to take you up on
your offer to help us develop improved metrics.

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (NRDC) (Doc. #33, page 3) suggests
that "success will be difficult to measure" under the current approach for
Principle 2, Adaptive Management, and that "goals and actions should be

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specific and quantifiable." NRDC goes on to state that "when measureable
goals and actions are articulated, they often lack ambitious targets."

Response: Thank you for your comment. The NWP intends to work to develop
better methods to measure progress.

•	The Natural Resources Defense Council (NRDC) (Doc. #33, p. 12) suggests
"EPA should develop a program to document the national benefits of improved
water efficiency, both in terms of water conserved and the impact on energy
systems and greenhouse gas emissions. More data documenting the impact of
water efficiency (and energy efficiency) on the water-energy nexus would help
EPA's partners advocate for better practices".

Response: Thank you for this comment. The NWP does document the water,
energy and GHG savings resulting from the WaterSense program. We intend to
continue to work to educate the public on the energy and GHG footprint of
water and the water footprint of energy.

•	Other State Commenter (Doc. #48, p. 2) supports "EPA's proposed phased
approach for tracking progress, as well as the emphasis the draft Strategy places
on examining outcomes rather than outputs. Again, this is in line with other
EPA initiatives and how they intend to measure progress and success (e.g.,
Section 303(d) 10-Year Vision). We also appreciate the inclusion in the draft
strategy of language indicating that EPA will collaborate with the STC3 as it
works to refine its proposed approach. It is important to keep the states
involved throughout the entire process of defining measures."

Response: Thank you for your support and we look forward to working with
the STC3 and other stakeholders to further refine these kinds of measures of
progress.

Goal #19

•	A citizen (Doc. #11) stated that there should be more emphasis on rapidly
changing science, and that the Strategy should be as dynamic and adaptable at
its core as is climate change science.

Response: The NWP has emphasized this point in the 2012 Strategy.

•	The Los Angeles Co. Department of Public Works and Los Angeles County
Flood Control District (Doc. #16, p. 3) indicate that more research is needed to
define probabilistically the magnitude of sea water rise both to evaluate the
effects on salt water intrusion into aquifers as well as on the potential for
inundation of LACFCD facilities and impacts to operations.

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others to develop.

•	Los Angeles Co. Department of Public Works and Los Angeles County Flood
Control District (Doc. #16, p. 2) suggests that "the 2012 Strategy should put
more emphasis on climate change research to adequately quantify its impact on
hydrologic events and to develop methodologies to analyze non-stationary
samples of hydrologic data."

Response: The NWP agrees and intends to do so.

•	The American Water Works Association (AWW A) (Doc. #21, p. 5) states it is
important that the NWP acknowledge that changing regulations will affect the
design and operations of water utilities, thus, the energy intensity and total
energy utilized for treatment. AWWA suggests including a commitment to
supporting research that will reduce the energy intensity of drinking water
production.

Response: We intend to collaborate with the research community and
communicate relevant findings to water utilities, in cooperation with the
associations which represent them.

•	AWWA (Doc. #21, p. 4) also states that EPA should also work with other
agencies and associations to further research and regulation of CCS activities.

Response: The NWP intends to do so.

•	The Water Utility Climate Alliance (WUCA) (Doc. #24, p. 9) supports
prioritizing Strategic Action 51 as it is a new arena for many water sector
managers. Emphasis on this area will "help water managers integrate research
needs into planning, operations and decision-making, such as improved
statistical products and interpretation of historical observations as well as
projections of downscaled climate data and decision support".

Response: The NWP agrees and appreciates the efforts of WUCA.

•	The Ground Water Protection Council (GWPC) (Doc. #25, p. 2) supports
research to support watersheds and wetlands under Hydrology, yet cautions
"many states administer their own programs to protect the quality and quantity
of water within their boundaries, including the protection of groundwater. State
experiences with regional conditions and protection of their water resources
should be consulted. We suggest that you consider, as part of your research, the
potential decline in wetlands due to coastal surface subsidence and/or decreased
groundwater discharge from declining water tables due to increased pumping of
groundwater to supply increased demands due to climate change".

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Response: Thank you for your comment, we have inserted, ", including from
increased groundwater pumping" so that the research priority on hydrology
now includes a sentence that reads: Model potential changes to flood
regulation, ground water recharge, and surface water base flow given scenarios
of wetlands loss, including from increased groundwater pumping.

In addition, the following research priority has been added: Develop tools for
prioritizing response actions that take into account potential for both
adaptation and GHG mitigation, especially for wetlands protection and
restoration.

•	American Rivers (Doc. #27, p. 9) supports flow and TMDLs as a potential
water quality research area, and states "it is critical for EPA to include low flow
as initiator for a TMDL, and further requests EPA affirm with regional and state
regulators that flow and water quantity are legitimate bases of NPDES permits
and TMDLs and work with local universities to further document the
relationship in specific river basins".

Response: Thank you for your comment. We will take it under advisement.

•	The Association of State Wetland Managers (ASWM) (Doc. #28, p. 2) requests
that EPA add an additional goal encouraging plus 3 SAs, including: (3)
research to clarify the conditions under which restored or preserved wetlands
can serve as carbon, and to estimate the potential scope of potential carbon
sequestration, including actions to maximize carbon sequestration.

Response: The following research priority has been added: Develop tools for
prioritizing response actions that take into account potential for both
adaptation and GHG mitigation, especially for wetlands protection and
restoration.

•	The Wisconsin DNR (Doc. #32, p. 1) recommends the following additional
research and outreach be performed related to water recharge and reuse:

o "Research and an implementation strategy for seepage cells or

infiltration galleries in the Midwest to be used to mitigate groundwater
depletion from intensive uses."
o "Research on satellite wastewater systems in the Midwest that could be
used to extract water from sewer flows to be infiltrated on-site as a way
to replenish groundwater supplies."
o "An outreach and education strategy for public acceptance of wastewater
reuse."

o "Research and development of systems to process real-time customer
water use data to deliver useful information to customers for them to
make informed water use decisions,
o Research the effectiveness of real-time water use information to change
customer behavior."

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Response: Thank you for your comment. These suggestions will be considered.

•	NMA (Doc. #37, p. 5-6) suggests that before the incorporation of ocean
acidification into management plans, "research should be conducted to help
understand impacts to biological processes, particularly marine calcification,
and environmental monitoring should include oceanographic parameters such as
temperature, irradiance, hydrodynamics, nutrients and atmospheric parameters
such as surface winds and pressures".

Response: Thank you for your comment. The suggestion will be considered.

•	The City of San Diego (Doc. #38, Appendix A, p. 2) comments that it is not
EPA's role to be involved in local water rates, and that EPA should instead
focus their efforts on researching "more innovative ways of infrastructure
operations, maintenance and rehabilitation or working more efficiently under
constrained costs."

Response: The NWP agrees that setting water rates is a local issue. We are
working to provide information and tools to support local decision making.

•	The American Petroleum Institute (API) (Doc. #46, p. 8) comments that the
"Cross Cutting Program Support Section is one of the strongest and most
important sections of the Draft 2012 Strategy. Goal 19 is an essential
component of the adaptive approach to addressing water resource issues, both
from climate change and other natural and anthropogenic influences." API
urges EPA to focus efforts on the goals within this section.

Response: Thank you for your support. The NWP agrees that this is a critically
important Goal.

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Appendices

APPENDIX A: Commenters by Document Number

Organization Name

Document
Number

Private Citizen

3

Private Citizen

4

Private Citizen

5

Private Citizen

6

Private Citizen

7

Private Citizen

8

National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration

9

Private Citizen

11

Private Citizen

12

Louisiana Dept. of Environmental Quality

13

Water Environment Federation

14

Amigos Bravos Friends of the Wild Rivers

15

Los Angeles County Dept. for Public Works/Flood Control District

16

The Fertilizer Institute

17

Alliance for Affordable Energy

18

National Farmers Union

19

Louisiana Environmental Action Network/Lower Mississippi
Riverkeeper

20

American Water Works Association

21

U.S. DOI, Bureau of Reclamation

22

Western Business Roundtable

23

Water Utility Climate Alliance

24

Ground Water Protection Council

25

American Rivers

26

National Association of Home Builders

27

Association of State Wetland Managers, Inc.

28

Private Citizen

29

Private Citizen

30

USGS Climate and Land Use Change

31

Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources

32

Natural Resources Defense Council

33

U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service

34

New England Interstate Water Pollution Control Commission

35

American Rivers, Cahaba Riverkeeper, Clean Water Action, Clean Water



Network, National Wildlife Federation, Oregon Environmental Council,



South Carolina Coastal Conservation League

36

National Mining Association

37

San Diego Transportation and Storm Water Department

38

Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation

39

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Association of State Drinking Water Administrators

40

Clean Water Network

41

CONSOL Energy Inc.

42

National Association of Clean Water Agencies

43

National Ground Water Association

44

Texas Commission on Environmental Quality

45

American Petroleum Institute

46

State/Tribal Government Agency/Elected Official

48

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APPENDIX B. References Cited By Commenters

Citations that are referenced in the 2012 Strategy are omitted from this summary.

Allen, Jason, et al. 2005. Potential Effects of Climate Change on New Mexico. Agency
Technical Work Group State of New Mexico. Available online at:
http://www.nmenv.state.nm.us/aqb/cc/Potential Effects Climate Change NM.pdf

American Society of Civil Engineers. 2009. Report Cardfor America's Infrastructure:
2009. Available online at:

http://www.infrastructurereportcard.org/sites/default/files/RC2009 full report.pdf.

American Society of Civil Engineers. 2009. Report Cardfor America's Infrastructure:
2009 - Drinking Water Fact Sheet. Available online at:

http://www.infrastructurereportcard.org/sites/default/files/RC2009 drinkwater.pdf.

American Water Works Association. 2012. Buried No Longer. Available online at:

http://www.awwa.org/files/GovtPublicAffairs/GADocuments/BuriedNoLongerComplet

eFinal.pdf

Andreen, William L., Jones, Shana C. 2008. The Clean Water Act, A Blueprint for
Reform. Draft. Center for Progressive Reform. White Paper #802. Available online at:
http://www.progressivereform.org/articles/CW Blueprint 802.pdf

Association of Metropolitan Water Agencies, National Association of Clean Water
Agencies. 2009. Confronting Climate Change: An Early Analysis of Water and
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